Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) · forum

Mikkuri

Joined April 2010

Mikkuri 2012-03-22T02:18:03+00:00

Yasora-chan wrote:
Easy
00:17:032 (1) - add finish in slider's beginning is better instead the whistle imo, if you think that too noisy, lower the volume is ok ok
00:22:486 (1) - mm, I think finish in here too noisy, I think change with whistle is better, or lower the volume :3 ah, no :3

thanks~

Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [0OoMickeyoO0's Easy].osu

Vicho

887 posts

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

Vicho 2012-03-22T02:25:46+00:00

some fixed, thanks Yosora-chan :3

Kenezz

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Joined September 2009

Kenezz 2012-03-23T00:53:23+00:00

~~Ecchi~~Vicho!!!

Kenezz's Bakamod~

General

Uhmm siento que el color azul y morado no encajan con el video y el bg, quizás deberias cambiarlos por un gris y un rojo.
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,226,28
Combo2 : 49,251,49
Combo3 : 128,128,128
Combo4 : 255,40,40
Combo5 : 255,150,0
```

0OoMickeyoO0's Easy

01:22:998 (1,2) - Maybe make a slider instead this circles because after the spinner are more hard to the rookie players read a circles and additionally in red ticks, imo a slider is most easier to read for the rookie players and this is my suggestion. http://puu.sh/lWQ4 or http://puu.sh/lWQj

Normal

00:13:623 (1) - Veo un tanto innecesario este new combo, considera eliminarlo.
00:29:134 (1) - Lo mismo aquí, si no quieres que se prolongue tanto puedes acortarlo agregando new combo aquí 00:30:668 (7) y eliminándolo de la siguiente nota, al final si lo cambias se vería similar a este 00:33:395 (1).
00:43:282 (1) - Okay lo mismo, soy consciente de que tus combos son cortos pero algunos realmente lo son demasiado o son un tanto innecesarios.
00:51:463 (1) - Same, lo seee cambia el ritmo pero es demasiado corto ademas parte de la voz se continua oyendo.
Buen trabajo!

Climbb's Taiko Oni

Remove the video of the .osu http://puu.sh/lWZe

Net's Insane

00:16:605 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo, now is a bit short.
00:48:736 (1) - Same as before, is a bit needless here.
01:05:612 (1) - Well here the same.
01:14:304 (1) - Move the slider to a place more visible, this could be are confusing.
01:25:213 (1) - And remove this new combo is totally needless.

Okay es todo, espero que te ayude y buena suerte!

Mikkuri

823 posts

Joined April 2010

Mikkuri 2012-03-23T01:01:09+00:00

fix like this

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Thanks

Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [0OoMickeyoO0's Easy].osu

Shana Aisaka

467 posts

Joined November 2010

Shana Aisaka 2012-03-23T07:42:27+00:00

Hi !!

Just some random mod ~ >w<"
Here is just some suggestion?

[General]
All seems fine.. maybe.. >.<"

[Normal]

Map/Song Setup :
Aren't this diff a bit too hard??? Redused some of the Circle size. >.<"
00:16:776(4) = I think this note doesn't needed. delete it.
01:00:157(1,2) = I think this note doesn't fit as well.. You should delete it.
01:00:668(x) = add note here.

[Net's Insane]

Timing :
00:05:782 = I think this timing doesn't needed.
01:00:327 = ^
01:00:668 = ^

well.. that is just a suggestion though..

Okay~ That's all ~ Good luck!!
Ps: I love all of your map/song Vicho-kun!! >w<"

Vicho

887 posts

Joined May 2009

Topic Starter

Vicho 2012-03-24T00:53:17+00:00

Thank Shana but so sorry, I think no change >.< but thank you so much take part of your map to map it :3

Kenezz

osu! Alumni

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Joined September 2009

Kenezz 2012-03-24T01:26:34+00:00

Bubbies!!

Spread Wings_old

67 posts

Joined May 2011

Spread Wings_old 2012-03-24T02:35:54+00:00

l-lol bubble so fast...

Fumika

1,425 posts

Joined November 2011

Fumika 2012-03-24T05:26:51+00:00

Vicho !!!

Mistake Jump

It should be like this

Hope you change it if possible orz

Kenezz

osu! Alumni

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Kenezz 2012-03-24T23:36:33+00:00

Re bubbies~~

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Joined August 2008

Andrea 2012-03-26T20:15:20+00:00

Did some IRC Modding.

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22:02 <osuplayer111> : irc mod? owo
22:03 <Vicho-kun> : sure owo if it's easier for you~
22:03 <osuplayer111> : on easy
22:03 <osuplayer111> : 01:22:998 (1) - this is missing a new combo
22:05 <Vicho-kun> : ok fixed
22:09 <osuplayer111> : on Insane I'll reduce AR by 1 tick
22:09 <Vicho-kun> : ok
22:10 <Vicho-kun> : fixed
22:10 <osuplayer111> : 00:36:975 (4) - new combo
22:10 <osuplayer111> : 00:42:600 (4,5,6,7) - this sudden spacing change is confusing imo D:
22:11 <osuplayer111> : 00:41:918 (2,3,4,5) - if you see spacing is equal but different on the timeline
22:11 <osuplayer111> : and that's wrong
22:13 <osuplayer111> : aaaand nothing else
22:14 <Vicho-kun> : http://puu.sh/mvLs :s?
22:14 <Vicho-kun> : it's ok?
22:14 <osuplayer111> : that's better
22:14 <Vicho-kun> : ok, I will update
22:14 <osuplayer111> : alright~