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Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Vicho
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 26 de marzo de 2012 at 17:15:21

Artist: Kitamura Eri
Title: marshmallow justice (TV Size)
Source: Nisemonogatari
Tags: Araragi Karen Bee MONACA Kousaki Kotoru meg rock opening Netsukawa climbb65588 0OoMickeyoO0
BPM: 176
Filesize: 14416kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. 0OoMickeyoO0's Easy (1,84 stars, 94 notes)
  2. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4,83 stars, 459 notes)
  3. Hard (4,94 stars, 288 notes)
  4. Net's Insane (5 stars, 305 notes)
  5. Normal (4,3 stars, 160 notes)
Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size)
Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Love this song. DAT PONYTAIL!!!

Mapset:
0OoMickeyoO0's Easy: Done
Normal: Done
Hard: Done
Net's Insane: Done
Climbb's Taiko Oni: Done

Special thanks to Netsukawa for the mp3 and video owo and more things... blablabla
climbb65588
Fumika
add tags : climbb65588 in all diff and delete .osb in folder and full submit

Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [Net's Insane].osu
Mikkuri

Netsukawa wrote:

add tags : climbb65588 in all diff
and add 0OoMickeyoO0 in all diff too :D

Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [0OoMickeyoO0's Easy].osu
YTYuyu
oh my is nisemonogatari really that good? oh i found this on #modreqs

General:
CLEAR!

0OoMickeyoO0's Easy:
00:17:032 (1,1) - i really like these sliders i really do, but it's look a lot better if the second (1) looks the same as the other (1). players might expect that these 2 sliders are the same and it looks a lot nicer. it should look like this.
00:48:395 (5,1) - hmm fix this minor spacing error. it's at 1.13 and the default DS is at 1.20
00:57:941 (1) - maybe end this till 00:59:645 to follow the trumpet?
01:03:736 (6) - hmm replace the 2nd repeat and the end for another 1/1 slider? i think beginners might let go after the 2nd repeat.
01:09:873 (2) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow vocals.

Normal:
00:20:100 (4) - maybe a NC here because it follows the instrumental while (1-3) is following vocals.
00:28:793 (3) - remove the clap here. it ruins the consistency you're following and it sounds weird.
00:43:452 (2) - same as above but the reason is that it doesn't go in sync with the trumpet? suggest that you replace it for a whistle. it sounds a lot better than the clap IMO
01:08:168 (4,5,6) - replace this for a 1/1 slider to follow vocals accurately.
01:25:213 (1) - end the spinner till 01:27:941 like the easy diff.

Hard:
00:01:691 (4,5) - move the clap from (5) to (4) because adding the clap at (5) ruins the consistency.
01:25:299 (1) - same as normal

Net's Insane:
00:05:782 (1) - just make this a proper curved slider. personally i don't like that bottom part of the slidder at all.
00:37:998 (1,2) - to make this less confusing how about replacing this for 3 stacked circles?
01:00:327 (2) - ooh idk. personally i don't like the look of this slider mainly because of this part. it'd look better if this is straight.
01:25:299 (1) - same as normal.

This is the best I can do. GL :D
Mikkuri
Topic Starter
Vicho
almost all fixed :D thank you
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Baka Vicho ~ :)

Mod time for PM - In game ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove Letterbox during breaks,because have video.
  2. 01:00:668 - Unsnap KIAI time line.
  3. 01:10:895 - ^
  4. 01:11:577 - ^
  5. 01:19:844 - ^

[Net's Insane]


  1. Maybe AR-1 fine to this song.
  2. 00:37:145 (6) - Maybe add new combo?
  3. 00:37:998 (1,2,3) - Try like this part.
  4. 00:49:248 (2) - Add new combo,vocal start to here and Remove 00:49:077 (1).
  5. 01:20:952 (5) - ^01:21:634 (1).

[Hard]


  1. 00:16:605 (4) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset.

Good luck ~
No_Gu
request from in-game PM

[easy]
00:26:577 (4) - sounds a little sudden.remove clap?
01:17:032 (1,2) - 1/2 is hard for new players
01:22:998 (1,2,3) - I think most new players will regard the spinner's end as the diff's end..maybe these 3 notes are hard for them to catch
01:25:213 (1) - silence this end?

[normal]
00:05:749 (7) - move to next time section?
00:57:259 (4,5,1) - I think flow the drums here is better...at least add a note with clap at 00:57:600
01:11:407 (1) - clap in the end?..much better imo

[hard]
00:19:759 (5) - really noisy..remove it or turn down the volume
01:17:032 (3,4,5,2,3,4) - use default normal-hitnormal..much better imo

[insane]
01:17:032 (4,5,6,3,4,5) - use default normal-hitnormal..much better imo
01:25:299 (1) - end this at 01:27:941 like other diffs?
orz about this AR9...I think it's too hard..maybe change to 8?I can read the rhythm clearly by AR8..and I even can FC it.you know my bad playing skill /.\

Ok that's all orz
☆.love Kitamura Eri and Karen and this song <3
Fumika
Fixed some ~

0oOo0oOoMickey !!!!!!!!

Nice diff XD

Vicho-kun wrote:

Special thanks to Netsukawa for the mp3 and video owo
SPOILER
mp3 video BPM offset and custom-hitsound << wwwwwww

Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [Net's Insane].osu
Mikkuri

No_Gu wrote:

request from in-game PM

[easy]
00:26:577 (4) - sounds a little sudden.remove clap? no~
01:17:032 (1,2) - 1/2 is hard for new players I don't know :o
01:22:998 (1,2,3) - I think most new players will regard the spinner's end as the diff's end..maybe these 3 notes are hard for them to catch I pick up 2-3 newbie to play test, no one can miss this lol
01:25:213 (1) - silence this end? nope, but move to 01:27:770 and add clap
resnap kiai time & remove Letterbox during breaks too
thx for modding~

Netsukawa wrote:

0oOo0oOoMickey !!!!!!!! WTF owo

Nice diff XD You too :3
Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [0OoMickeyoO0's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Vicho
some fixed, thanks Rika and No_Gu :3
Yasora
hi~ owo

General
  1. Storyboarding Setting: Disable "LetterboxInBreaks"? Mickey's diff is already do that
Easy
  1. 00:17:032 (1) - add finish in slider's beginning is better instead the whistle imo, if you think that too noisy, lower the volume is ok
  2. 00:22:486 (1) - mm, I think finish in here too noisy, I think change with whistle is better, or lower the volume :3
Normal
  1. 00:16:520 (3) - I felt weird with this note when I test, maybe change this with one slider until 00:16:861 (4), or remove the clap
  2. 00:19:759 (2) - remove this finish? I think not fit with the sound song because that too noisy or if you won't you can lower the volume plz
  3. 00:21:975 (1) - same as above
  4. 00:36:123 (1) - for combo pattern: remove this new combo, and then add new combo in the next note (2), the last, remove new combo in 00:37:657 (1)
  5. 00:41:918 (2) - I think add whistle in here isn't bad too, since too empty in there
  6. 00:46:009 (2) - ^
  7. 00:47:373 (1) - ^
  8. 01:25:213 (1) - end this spinner at 01:27:770 because other difficulty are end in there and that more accurate following the sound
  9. I think this normal is too hard imo
Hard
  1. Difficulty Setting: increase the OD -1?
  2. 00:43:452 (2) - same as 00:41:918 (2) in Normal difficulty
  3. 00:43:623 (3) - remove finish sound? weird to heard imo
  4. 01:25:299 (1) - same as Normal difficulty
Insane
  1. Difficulty Setting: Increase AR -1? I think that too fast to catch >.<
  2. 00:38:765 (4) - (nazi) not stacked properly with (3)'s tail?
  3. 01:00:157 (1) - I think remove this note is more better, and add new combo in 01:00:327 (2) for effect when kiai is begin
  4. 01:00:838 (x) - add note in here? more better when play imo
That's all
Good luck (:
Mikkuri

Yasora-chan wrote:

Easy
  1. 00:17:032 (1) - add finish in slider's beginning is better instead the whistle imo, if you think that too noisy, lower the volume is ok ok
  2. 00:22:486 (1) - mm, I think finish in here too noisy, I think change with whistle is better, or lower the volume :3 ah, no :3
thanks~

Download: Kitamura Eri - marshmallow justice (TV Size) (Vicho-kun) [0OoMickeyoO0's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Vicho
some fixed, thanks Yosora-chan :3
Kenezz
EcchiVicho!!! :D
Kenezz's Bakamod~

General
  1. Uhmm siento que el color azul y morado no encajan con el video y el bg, quizás deberias cambiarlos por un gris y un rojo.
    SPOILER

    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,226,28
    Combo2 : 49,251,49
    Combo3 : 128,128,128
    Combo4 : 255,40,40
    Combo5 : 255,150,0


0OoMickeyoO0's Easy
  1. 01:22:998 (1,2) - Maybe make a slider instead this circles because after the spinner are more hard to the rookie players read a circles and additionally in red ticks, imo a slider is most easier to read for the rookie players and this is my suggestion. http://puu.sh/lWQ4 or http://puu.sh/lWQj
Normal
  1. 00:13:623 (1) - Veo un tanto innecesario este new combo, considera eliminarlo.
  2. 00:29:134 (1) - Lo mismo aquí, si no quieres que se prolongue tanto puedes acortarlo agregando new combo aquí 00:30:668 (7) y eliminándolo de la siguiente nota, al final si lo cambias se vería similar a este 00:33:395 (1).
  3. 00:43:282 (1) - Okay lo mismo, soy consciente de que tus combos son cortos pero algunos realmente lo son demasiado o son un tanto innecesarios.
  4. 00:51:463 (1) - Same, lo seee cambia el ritmo pero es demasiado corto ademas parte de la voz se continua oyendo.
  5. Buen trabajo!
Climbb's Taiko Oni
  1. Remove the video of the .osu http://puu.sh/lWZe
Net's Insane
  1. 00:16:605 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo, now is a bit short.
  2. 00:48:736 (1) - Same as before, is a bit needless here.
  3. 01:05:612 (1) - Well here the same.
  4. 01:14:304 (1) - Move the slider to a place more visible, this could be are confusing.
  5. 01:25:213 (1) - And remove this new combo is totally needless.
Okay es todo, espero que te ayude y buena suerte!
Mikkuri
Shana Aisaka
Hi !! ;) Just some random mod ~ >w<"
Here is just some suggestion?

[General]
All seems fine.. maybe.. >.<"

[Normal]

Map/Song Setup :
Aren't this diff a bit too hard??? Redused some of the Circle size. >.<"
00:16:776(4) = I think this note doesn't needed. delete it.
01:00:157(1,2) = I think this note doesn't fit as well.. You should delete it.
01:00:668(x) = add note here.

[Net's Insane]

Timing :
00:05:782 = I think this timing doesn't needed.
01:00:327 = ^
01:00:668 = ^

well.. that is just a suggestion though..

Okay~ That's all ~ Good luck!!
Ps: I love all of your map/song Vicho-kun!! >w<"
Topic Starter
Vicho
Thank Shana but so sorry, I think no change >.< but thank you so much take part of your map to map it :3
Kenezz
Bubbies!!
Spread Wings_old
l-lol bubble so fast...
Fumika
Vicho !!!



Hope you change it if possible orz
Kenezz
Re bubbies~~
Andrea
Did some IRC Modding.

SPOILER
22:02 <osuplayer111> : irc mod? owo
22:03 <Vicho-kun> : sure owo if it's easier for you~
22:03 <osuplayer111> : on easy
22:03 <osuplayer111> : 01:22:998 (1) - this is missing a new combo
22:05 <Vicho-kun> : ok fixed
22:09 <osuplayer111> : on Insane I'll reduce AR by 1 tick
22:09 <Vicho-kun> : ok
22:10 <Vicho-kun> : fixed
22:10 <osuplayer111> : 00:36:975 (4) - new combo
22:10 <osuplayer111> : 00:42:600 (4,5,6,7) - this sudden spacing change is confusing imo D:
22:11 <osuplayer111> : 00:41:918 (2,3,4,5) - if you see spacing is equal but different on the timeline
22:11 <osuplayer111> : and that's wrong
22:13 <osuplayer111> : aaaand nothing else
22:14 <Vicho-kun> : http://puu.sh/mvLs :s?
22:14 <Vicho-kun> : it's ok?
22:14 <osuplayer111> : that's better
22:14 <Vicho-kun> : ok, I will update
22:14 <osuplayer111> : alright~

Ranked~
Kawayi Rika
Baka Omedeto ~
Spread Wings_old
Ranked so fast...ok Vicho, after this you have my respect, awesome map :D
No_Gu
owo congratulations
YTYuyu
oh damn that was quick. gratz on the rank :D
Suzully
grats~
Fumika
Gratz Vicho owo hope you like my insane forever <3
B2IN
gratz~ !
Akemi_Homura
Congratz~!
phonic
Congrats >w<
emonite
Congratulations...!
joro_old
Congrats :)
AIR315
Congratz~

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