Woah woah woah. CS +2 PLEASE. PLEASE. AR -A FEW TOO.
Anyway, it's nice... the streams need work, the patterning is okayyy, same with the hitsounds. Some of the streams are way out of place, and the whole thing should be a bit neater.
Another thing is I'm not sure if you're ready for an approval map yet, you should only really try an approval map after you have a few ranked maps and you're experienced at mapping. This is coming from personal experience, lol.
Good luck anyway,
-SMIC