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Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thanks for your MOD!

3er123 wrote:

EASY
00:37:556 (6) - i think not good looks here
01:18:698 (3) - maybe make wavy? done

Normal
00:09:785 (4) - spacing done
01:03:555 (4) - 1grid up

Hard
00:25:728 (6) - NC?
00:29:842 (6) - looks ugly here correct
00:38:928 (5) - and there correct
00:40:299 (9) - NC?
00:58:698 (2) - ugly here
01:19:841 (5) - nc
01:31:968 (5,7,3) - ugly here
01:37:454 (1,2,5) - ^
01:25:797 (1,5,6,3,4,7,1,5,4) - ><
01:37:968 (2,2) - maybe just make waavy sliders
correct sliders ><
BeatofIke
[General]
Good

[Easy]
Good

[Normal]
Good

[Hard]
-OD+1?
-Some of the sliders are a bit ugly on kiai time.

Good Map. Go! Akari-Chan! :)
SkyDevil
uu~~

Easy
00:15:613 A little bit farther from the last slider x3
00:26:585 Grab the beginning of the slider and put it one grid to the left
01:01:555 I think you meant to make the slider 1/4 longer xD

Normal
00:08:756 I think this is kinda some big spacing compared to the other circles

Hard
00:08:756 Le huge spacing while this is still a hard diff >w<
00:39:613 Maybe too difficult for a hard diff?
01:59:397 ^
I somehow think this should be insane and insane should be Yuri xD

Insane
00:41:670 Please do not stack these sliders >w<
00:43:042 ^
01:02:270 Instead of stacking 10 and 11 on the same place, why not put 11 on the 12th place and 12 on 11th place? x3

Le Star because 01:20:698 gave me goosebumps x3
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thanks for your MODs!

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]
Good

[Easy]
Good

[Normal]
Good

[Hard]
-OD+1? done
-Some of the sliders are a bit ugly on kiai time.

Good Map. Go! Akari-Chan! :) thanks!

SkyDevil wrote:

uu~~

Easy
00:15:613 A little bit farther from the last slider x3
00:26:585 Grab the beginning of the slider and put it one grid to the left done
01:01:555 I think you meant to make the slider 1/4 longer xD done

Normal
00:08:756 I think this is kinda some big spacing compared to the other circles umm...correct

Hard
00:08:756 Le huge spacing while this is still a hard diff >w<
00:39:613 Maybe too difficult for a hard diff?
01:59:397 ^
I somehow think this should be insane and insane should be Yuri xD OK, I change diff-name

Insane
00:41:670 Please do not stack these sliders >w< correct
00:43:042 ^ correct
01:02:270 Instead of stacking 10 and 11 on the same place, why not put 11 on the 12th place and 12 on 11th place? x3 remap here

Le Star because 01:20:698 gave me goosebumps x3 thanks for your STAR!!
rickyboi
You should add a hard difficulty now since it's not good to skip a map set's difficulty from Normal -> Insane.
I personally think you should rename it back to the way it was if you don't want to add more difficulties in your map set.

Anyways I'm going to mod this for free once you fix your difficulties. Nice map ;)
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w

rickyboi wrote:

You should add a hard difficulty now since it's not good to skip a map set's difficulty from Normal -> Insane.
I personally think you should rename it back to the way it was if you don't want to add more difficulties in your map set.

Anyways I'm going to mod this for free once you fix your difficulties. Nice map ;)
I made hard-diff!
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ eg91022a71w ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 1st KIAI time should start to here 01:26:482.

[Y*R*Y*R]


  1. 00:27:956 (5) - Add new combo,jump to here.
  2. 00:32:928 (5) - ^
  3. 00:38:585 (6) - ^
  4. 00:40:299 (9) - ^
  5. 01:02:127 (9) - ^
  6. 01:15:841 (5) - ^
  7. 01:17:555 (5) - ^

[Insane]


  1. 01:20:841 (8) - Move 1 grid left.

[Hard]


  1. 01:50:997 - Remove too short break time.

[Normal]


  1. 01:04:841 (7) - This note confused with beginner,try unstack.

[Easy]


  1. 00:25:213 (4) - Add new combo,long combo hard for beginner.
  2. 00:36:185 (4) - ^
  3. 01:45:682 (5) - ^

That's all ~

Good luck ~
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thanks for your MOD!!!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ eg91022a71w ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 1st KIAI time should start to here 01:26:482. done

[Y*R*Y*R]


  1. 00:27:956 (5) - Add new combo,jump to here. done
  2. 00:32:928 (5) - ^ done
  3. 00:38:585 (6) - ^ done
  4. 00:40:299 (9) - ^ done
  5. 01:02:127 (9) - ^ done
  6. 01:15:841 (5) - ^ done
  7. 01:17:555 (5) - ^ done

[Insane]


  1. 01:20:841 (8) - Move 1 grid left. done

[Hard]


  1. 01:50:997 - Remove too short break time. done

[Normal]


  1. 01:04:841 (7) - This note confused with beginner,try unstack. done

[Easy]


  1. 00:25:213 (4) - Add new combo,long combo hard for beginner. done
  2. 00:36:185 (4) - ^ done
  3. 01:45:682 (5) - ^ done

That's all ~

Good luck ~ Thank you~
rickyboi
Hello here's a mod I promised. Just because I really like this map ;)

[General]
Your "Y*R* Y*R" difficulty has 4 combo colours and the others only have 2, All difficulties should have same number of colours. Also Combo 3 is kinda dark. Try using a brighter red.
All difficulties should end at the same timeline. I'm gonna suggest at 02:03:511
I'm gonna suggest you put KIAI from 00:53:555 to 01:11:841. Remove KIAI from 01:52:540 to 02:00:768
Put a red line at 00:44:413 with 105 BPM. This is important because this will affect where your spinner is going to end.

[Easy]
00:27:956 - Add finish.
00:38:928 (1) - I wouldn't really suggest using 2 repeats. How about ending it at 00:40:299? Then add a note at 00:40:985.
00:41:670 (3) - Add new combo.
00:44:242 (1) - Adjust this spinner to 00:44:413. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM.
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish.
00:55:841 (1) - ^ same.
00:58:127 (1) - ^ same.
01:00:412 (1) - ^ same.
01:01:555 (2) - This rythm is kinda confusing. How about this? http://puu.sh/ktQ2
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish.
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same.
01:11:841 (1) - ^ same
01:16:412 (1) - ^ same.
01:18:698 (3) - Add new combo and finish. The slider doesn't really look good. Also end the slider at 01:20:984 with Finish?
01:25:797 (2) - Remove new combo.
01:26:482 (1) - Add new combo.
01:55:282 (1) - Add finish.

[Normal]
00:33:442 (1) - Add finish.
00:38:585 (1) - Doesn't really fit the song. How about changing it to 2 stacked notes?
00:38:928 - Add Finish.
00:44:328 (1) - BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM.
00:53:555 (1) - Add Finish? The whistle alone doesn't really give me a contented feeling. But it's up to you if you want to add it or not.
00:55:841 (1) - ^ same.
00:58:127 (1) - ^ same.
01:02:698 (1) - ^ same.
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same.
01:11:841 (1) - Add Whistle
01:16:412 (1) - Add Whistle
00:59:984 (4) - This one is kind of surprising. How about adjusting it to 01:00:127 then put finish at 1:00:412?
01:19:841 (5) - End repeat at 1:20:984 with finish?
1:31:968 - Add Finish.
01:36:425 (5) - Add new combo.
01:36:768 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:42:254 (5) - Snap this at 1/3. http://puu.sh/ku1X
01:48:425 (1) - Add finish.
01:49:111 (2) - ^ same.
01:49:797 (3) - ^ same.
01:53:911 (2) - Add Whistle.
01:56:654 - Add Finish.
01:57:340 (2) - ^ same.
01:58:025 (1) - ^ same.
02:00:768 - ^ same.
02:00:854 (1) - ^ same.
If you could possibly reduce the difficulty of this please do. I still think this one is a little bit hard for a normal.

[Hard]
00:06:013 (1) - Add finish.
00:07:385 (3) - New combo. Add finish.
00:08:756 (1) - Add finish.
00:09:442 (3) - ^ same.
00:10:128 (5) - New combo.
00:15:613 (4) - New combo.
00:16:985 (1) - Add finish.
00:21:099 (6) - Add new combo.
00:22:128 (1) - Add finish.
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same.
00:23:156 (5) - New combo?
00:28:642 (3) - ^ same.
00:32:928 (7) - ^ same.
00:32:070 (3,4,5) - Add whistle.
00:33:442 (1) - Add finish.
00:38:928 - ^ same.
00:41:670 (1) - ^ same.
00:43:042 (3) - ^ same.
00:43:556 (4) - New combo.
00:44:413 (1) - - BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM.
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish?
00:58:127 - ^ same.
00:59:841 (5) - Add one repeat ending at 01:00:270?
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish.
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same.
01:08:412 (3) - Add whistle.
01:16:127 - Remove finish.
01:16:412 (1) - Add finish.
01:17:555 (1) - ^ same.
01:18:698 (1) - End this spinner at 1:20:984 with finish?
01:26:482 (2) - New combo. Add finish.
01:31:968 - ^ same.
01:40:882 (3) - Add whistle or finish.
01:42:254 (7) - Snap this at 1/3 just like in Normal.
01:42:940 (1) - Add finish
01:49:797 (2,3,4) - Remove finish.
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle?
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish.
01:55:282 (1) - ^ same.
01:56:654 (4) - ^ same.
01:57:340 - ^ same.
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish.

[Insane]
00:06:014 (1) - Add finish
00:07:385 (4) - New combo. Add finish.
00:08:757 (1) - Add finish.
00:09:442 (3) - ^ same.
00:11:499 (1) - ^ same.
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same.
00:23:156 (1) - New combo
00:26:242 (7) - ^ same.
00:29:328 (5) - ^ same.
00:31:899 (1) - ^ same.
00:33:442 (6) - Add finish.
00:38:928 (5) - ^ same.
00:40:299 (9) - New combo.
00:44:328 - Add note
00:44:413 - Delete spinner. Add note.
00:44:499 (1) - Put spinner in here. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM.
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish.
00:55:841 - ^ same.
00:58:127 - ^ same.
01:00:412 - ^ same.
01:00:984 (2) - ^ same.
01:01:555 (5) - New combo.
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish.
01:07:270 - Add note with finish and new combo.
01:07:412 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:11:841 - Add finish
01:20:984 - Add note with finish?
01:25:111 (5,6,7) - Add whistle. New combo at 5.
01:26:482 (2) - New combo.
01:31:968 (5) - Add finish.
01:37:454 (1) - ^ same.
01:37:968 (2) - ^ same.
01:38:825 (5) - New combo. Add finish.
01:39:340 (6) - Add finish.
01:40:882 - ^ same.
01:42:254 (7) - Snap this at 1/3 just like in Normal.
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle?
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish.
01:53:911 (2) - New combo.
01:55:282 (1) - Add finish.
01:56:654 (4) - New combo. Add finish.
01:57:340 - Add finish.
01:58:025 - ^ same.
02:00:082 (9) - New combo.
02:00:768 (17) - Add finish.
02:02:825 - Add note with clap? just like in hard?
02:02:997 (2,3) - Add clap. Remove finish.
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish.

[Y*R* Y*R]
Would be better to just name this difficulty "Extra" or "Yuru Yuri". It's up to you.
00:06:013 (1) - Add finish.
00:07:385 (1) - ^ same.
00:08:756 (1) - ^ same.
00:09:442 (5) - ^ same.
00:11:499 (1) - ^ same.
00:16:985 (1) - ^ same.
00:22:128 (1) - ^ same.
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same.
00:26:242 (5) - New combo.
00:27:956 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is kinda hard to read and doesn't really play that smooth really well in my opnion. You could try doing something else.
00:30:699 (1,2,1,2) - ^ same with this.
00:38:585 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:928 (5) - Add new combo.
00:39:613 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:328 - Add note
00:44:413 - Delete spinner. Add note.
00:44:499 (1) - Put spinner in here. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM.
00:54:698 (5) - New Combo.
00:55:841 - Add finish.
00:56:555 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:58:12 - Add finish.
01:00:412 (7) - ^ same.
01:00:984 (3) - ^ same.
01:02:412 (3) - Add whistle.
01:06:127 (4) - New Combo.
01:07:270 - Add finsih.
01:12:127(1) to 01:15:056 (8) - - These doubles are really a pressure with these kind of spacing and jump distance. It's not really that smooth to play in my opinion. I suggest you stack the doubles.
01:15:056 (8) - Delete this note? Nothing is really in the music at this timeline.
01:26:482 (1) - Add finish.
01:30:768 (5) - New combo.
01:31:111 (7) - This slider doesn't really look good.
01:35:740 (5) - New combo.
01:37:454 (1) - Add finish.
01:38:825 (1) - ^ same.
01:42:940 (1) - ^ same.
01:48:425 (1) - Add finish.
01:50:482 (1,1,2,3) - Add whistle?
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish.
01:56:654 (5) - ^ same.
01:57:340 - ^ same.
02:00:768 (9) - ^ same.
02:00:854 (1) - Add note with clap? just like in hard?
02:02:997 (2,3) - Add clap. Remove finish.
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish.

All in all great map set ;) It actually took me 3 hours to mod this and probably my longest one lol.
You just need to fix that normal.
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thank you for your long MOD!

rickyboi wrote:

Hello here's a mod I promised. Just because I really like this map ;)

[General]
Your "Y*R* Y*R" difficulty has 4 combo colours and the others only have 2, All difficulties should have same number of colours. Also Combo 3 is kinda dark. Try using a brighter red. done
All difficulties should end at the same timeline. I'm gonna suggest at 02:03:511
I'm gonna suggest you put KIAI from 00:53:555 to 01:11:841. Remove KIAI from 01:52:540 to 02:00:768
Put a red line at 00:44:413 with 105 BPM. This is important because this will affect where your spinner is going to end. fixed

[Easy]
00:27:956 - Add finish. done
00:38:928 (1) - I wouldn't really suggest using 2 repeats. How about ending it at 00:40:299? Then add a note at 00:40:985. done
00:41:670 (3) - Add new combo. done
00:44:242 (1) - Adjust this spinner to 00:44:413. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM. fixed
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish. done
00:55:841 (1) - ^ same. done
00:58:127 (1) - ^ same. done
01:00:412 (1) - ^ same. done
01:01:555 (2) - This rythm is kinda confusing. How about this? http://puu.sh/ktQ2
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish. done
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same. done
01:11:841 (1) - ^ same done
01:16:412 (1) - ^ same. done
01:18:698 (3) - Add new combo and finish. The slider doesn't really look good. Also end the slider at 01:20:984 with Finish?
01:25:797 (2) - Remove new combo. done
01:26:482 (1) - Add new combo. done
01:55:282 (1) - Add finish. done

[Normal]
00:33:442 (1) - Add finish. done
00:38:585 (1) - Doesn't really fit the song. How about changing it to 2 stacked notes? fixed
00:38:928 - Add Finish. done
00:44:328 (1) - BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM. done
00:53:555 (1) - Add Finish? The whistle alone doesn't really give me a contented feeling. But it's up to you if you want to add it or not. done
00:55:841 (1) - ^ same. done
00:58:127 (1) - ^ same. done
01:02:698 (1) - ^ same. done
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same. done
01:11:841 (1) - Add Whistle done
01:16:412 (1) - Add Whistle done
00:59:984 (4) - This one is kind of surprising. How about adjusting it to 01:00:127 then put finish at 1:00:412?
01:19:841 (5) - End repeat at 1:20:984 with finish? done
1:31:968 - Add Finish. done
01:36:425 (5) - Add new combo. done
01:36:768 (1) - Remove new combo. done
01:42:254 (5) - Snap this at 1/3. http://puu.sh/ku1X
01:48:425 (1) - Add finish. done
01:49:111 (2) - ^ same. done
01:49:797 (3) - ^ same. done
01:53:911 (2) - Add Whistle. done
01:56:654 - Add Finish. done
01:57:340 (2) - ^ same. done
01:58:025 (1) - ^ same. done
02:00:768 - ^ same. done
02:00:854 (1) - ^ same. done
If you could possibly reduce the difficulty of this please do. I still think this one is a little bit hard for a normal.

[Hard]
00:06:013 (1) - Add finish. done
00:07:385 (3) - New combo. Add finish. done
00:08:756 (1) - Add finish. done
00:09:442 (3) - ^ same. done
00:10:128 (5) - New combo. done
00:15:613 (4) - New combo. done
00:16:985 (1) - Add finish. done
00:21:099 (6) - Add new combo. done
00:22:128 (1) - Add finish. done
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same. done
00:23:156 (5) - New combo? done
00:28:642 (3) - ^ same. done
00:32:928 (7) - ^ same. done
00:32:070 (3,4,5) - Add whistle. done
00:33:442 (1) - Add finish. done
00:38:928 - ^ same. done
00:41:670 (1) - ^ same. done
00:43:042 (3) - ^ same. done
00:43:556 (4) - New combo. done
00:44:413 (1) - - BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM. done
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish? done
00:58:127 - ^ same. done
00:59:841 (5) - Add one repeat ending at 01:00:270? done
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish. done
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same. done
01:08:412 (3) - Add whistle. done
01:16:127 - Remove finish. done
01:16:412 (1) - Add finish. done
01:17:555 (1) - ^ same. done
01:18:698 (1) - End this spinner at 1:20:984 with finish?
01:26:482 (2) - New combo. Add finish. done
01:31:968 - ^ same. done
01:40:882 (3) - Add whistle or finish. done
01:42:254 (7) - Snap this at 1/3 just like in Normal.
01:42:940 (1) - Add finish done
01:49:797 (2,3,4) - Remove finish. done
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle? done
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish. done
01:55:282 (1) - ^ same. done
01:56:654 (4) - ^ same. done
01:57:340 - ^ same. done
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish. done

[Insane]
00:06:014 (1) - Add finish done
00:07:385 (4) - New combo. Add finish. done
00:08:757 (1) - Add finish. done
00:09:442 (3) - ^ same. done
00:11:499 (1) - ^ same. done
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same. done
00:23:156 (1) - New combo done
00:26:242 (7) - ^ same. done
00:29:328 (5) - ^ same. done
00:31:899 (1) - ^ same. done
00:33:442 (6) - Add finish. done
00:38:928 (5) - ^ same. done
00:40:299 (9) - New combo. done
00:44:328 - Add note done
00:44:413 - Delete spinner. Add note. done
00:44:499 (1) - Put spinner in here. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM. done
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish. done
00:55:841 - ^ same. done
00:58:127 - ^ same. done
01:00:412 - ^ same. done
01:00:984 (2) - ^ same. done
01:01:555 (5) - New combo. done
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish. done
01:07:270 - Add note with finish and new combo. done
01:07:412 (1) - Remove new combo. done
01:11:841 - Add finish done
01:20:984 - Add note with finish?
01:25:111 (5,6,7) - Add whistle. New combo at 5. done
01:26:482 (2) - New combo. done
01:31:968 (5) - Add finish. done
01:37:454 (1) - ^ same. done
01:37:968 (2) - ^ same. done
01:38:825 (5) - New combo. Add finish. done
01:39:340 (6) - Add finish. done
01:40:882 - ^ same. done
01:42:254 (7) - Snap this at 1/3 just like in Normal.
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle? done
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish. done
01:53:911 (2) - New combo. done
01:55:282 (1) - Add finish. done
01:56:654 (4) - New combo. Add finish. done
01:57:340 - Add finish. done
01:58:025 - ^ same. done
02:00:082 (9) - New combo. done
02:00:768 (17) - Add finish. done
02:02:825 - Add note with clap? just like in hard? done
02:02:997 (2,3) - Add clap. Remove finish. done
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish. done

[Y*R* Y*R]
Would be better to just name this difficulty "Extra" or "Yuru Yuri". It's up to you. fixed
00:06:013 (1) - Add finish. done
00:07:385 (1) - ^ same. done
00:08:756 (1) - ^ same. done
00:09:442 (5) - ^ same. done
00:11:499 (1) - ^ same. done
00:16:985 (1) - ^ same. done
00:22:128 (1) - ^ same done
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same. done
00:26:242 (5) - New combo. done
00:27:956 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is kinda hard to read and doesn't really play that smooth really well in my opnion. You could try doing something else.
00:30:699 (1,2,1,2) - ^ same with this.
00:38:585 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:928 (5) - Add new combo.
00:39:613 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:328 - Add note
00:44:413 - Delete spinner. Add note.
00:44:499 (1) - Put spinner in here. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM.
00:54:698 (5) - New Combo. done
00:55:841 - Add finish. done
00:56:555 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:58:12 - Add finish. done
01:00:412 (7) - ^ same. done
01:00:984 (3) - ^ same. done
01:02:412 (3) - Add whistle. done
01:06:127 (4) - New Combo. done
01:07:270 - Add finsih. done
01:12:127(1) to 01:15:056 (8) - - These doubles are really a pressure with these kind of spacing and jump distance. It's not really that smooth to play in my opinion. I suggest you stack the doubles. fixed
01:15:056 (8) - Delete this note? Nothing is really in the music at this timeline.
01:26:482 (1) - Add finish. done done
01:30:768 (5) - New combo. done
01:31:111 (7) - This slider doesn't really look good. fixed?
01:35:740 (5) - New combo. done
01:37:454 (1) - Add finish. done
01:38:825 (1) - ^ same. done
01:42:940 (1) - ^ same. done
01:48:425 (1) - Add finish. done
01:50:482 (1,1,2,3) - Add whistle? done
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish. done
01:56:654 (5) - ^ same. done
01:57:340 - ^ same. done
02:00:768 (9) - ^ same. done
02:00:854 (1) - Add note with clap? just like in hard? done
02:02:997 (2,3) - Add clap. Remove finish. done
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish. done

All in all great map set ;) It actually took me 3 hours to mod this and probably my longest one lol.
You just need to fix that normal.
confeito14
全部提案程度。自由に変更無視して

[Easy]

00:53:841 00:54:412 Easyだけど音が欲しいかも(1,2)をスライダーに変えるかサークル追加か
01:34:368 (1) - 音追加? http://puu.sh/p29P

[Normal]

問題ないと思うけど若干難しいかも。スライダーの後ろのサークルとかキックスライダーとかいうやつがややこしい
01:09:698 ここに音が欲しい気もするけどごちゃごちゃする。こんな感じに? http://puu.sh/p2fm
01:53:911 (2) - Ctrl+Hで右に配置

[Hard]

00:18:356 (4) - (3)の後ろに接した方が曲に合う?他にも00:36:185(1)とか変更する気があったらで。egスタイルとして全部残してもいいと思う
01:42:768 (x) - clap 削除
01:54:597 (4) - リターン+1
01:56:482 (3) - (1,2)と比べるとスペーシングがよろしくない

[Insane]

00:44:156 (5) - 削除
01:20:555 (6-12) - ストリーム?

[YRYR]

クリアぎりぎりだから他の人にも聞いて欲しい
00:25:556 (x) - あってない気がするのでここにサークル追加してみた http://puu.sh/p22a

全難易度で言えることだけど音量が一定なのがもったいない
00:22:128 音量を下げたり
01:11:555-01:20:841 狂気に合わせて音量を上げてみたり
01:50:482-01:52:540 Softを使うとか
ランクド狙うなら細部もこだわってほしい
SBも黒くする時に左右に0.1ミリ漏れているのも修正した方がいいと思う

GOOD MORNING!!上げたらもっと応援するよ
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
ありがとう!!!

confeito14 wrote:

全部提案程度。自由に変更無視して

[Easy]

00:53:841 00:54:412 Easyだけど音が欲しいかも(1,2)をスライダーに変えるかサークル追加か 難しくなっちゃうと思うなぁ
01:34:368 (1) - 音追加? http://puu.sh/p29P スライダー追加

[Normal]

問題ないと思うけど若干難しいかも。スライダーの後ろのサークルとかキックスライダーとかいうやつがややこしい
01:09:698 ここに音が欲しい気もするけどごちゃごちゃする。こんな感じに? http://puu.sh/p2fm
01:53:911 (2) - Ctrl+Hで右に配置 修正

[Hard]

00:18:356 (4) - (3)の後ろに接した方が曲に合う?他にも00:36:185(1)とか変更する気があったらで。egスタイルとして全部残してもいいと思う
01:42:768 (x) - clap 削除 修正
01:54:597 (4) - リターン+1
01:56:482 (3) - (1,2)と比べるとスペーシングがよろしくない 修正

[Insane]

00:44:156 (5) - 削除
01:20:555 (6-12) - ストリーム?

[YRYR]

クリアぎりぎりだから他の人にも聞いて欲しい
00:25:556 (x) - あってない気がするのでここにサークル追加してみた http://puu.sh/p22a

全難易度で言えることだけど音量が一定なのがもったいない
00:22:128 音量を下げたり
01:11:555-01:20:841 狂気に合わせて音量を上げてみたり
01:50:482-01:52:540 Softを使うとか
ランクド狙うなら細部もこだわってほしい
SBも黒くする時に左右に0.1ミリ漏れているのも修正した方がいいと思う そこ直そうとするととどうしてもずれちゃうのよ…

GOOD MORNING!!上げたらもっと応援するよ あんなもん今更晒せるようなシロモノじゃあないお・・・
confeito14
クーモニオハヨーキョーニオハヨー ドゥルドゥドゥルドゥ
最初これでストリーム練習してたから残念。リメイクする機会がったら頼むお


Hitsound and combo were very good!! Nice Hardwork rickyboi ;)
wcx19911123
from my queue
Yuru Yuri >3<

[General]
cancel letterbox during breaks plz, or sb looks weird when break
why not use silenced sliderslide hitsound file?
#1 kiai time end at 01:50:482 - in YRYR diff, it's different from other diffs

[Easy]
HD/OD+1 plz
01:17:555 (2,3) - not overlap?
01:29:225 (5) - plz try to move this slider up a bit, it's nearly out of the screen

[Normal]
AR+1
00:39:613 (3) - plz change to 1/2 slider, this is hard to read when it end as a Normal diff
00:53:555 (1,2) - I suggest change to slider, 4 circles in a row is kinda hard to play as Normal diff
01:01:555 (3) - I suggest change to 1/2 slider and 1/2 repeat sldier, or it is hard to know when it end
01:02:698 (1,2) - change to slider
01:18:698 (1,2) - ^
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - use 1.2x spacing is enough, 1.5x is toooo huge
01:55:282 (1,2,1) - plz make the spacing the same
02:00:082 (5,6) - change to 1 slider? I don't hear anything at 02:00:254 -

[Hard]
AR+1 or CS+1 plz, the setting now is low
00:59:841 (5) - I suggest change to a repeat sldier and a circle, cuz all repeat sliders before this one repeat only 1 time, and this one repeat 2 times, it's kinda confusing, kinda hard to read when it end
01:16:412 (1) - plz make this slider shape longer, the slow down is hard to read now
01:17:555 (1) - ^
01:50:997 - add note?
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - why not jump? maybe use 1.5x spacing?

[Insane]
OD+1
01:20:841 - here need a note

[YRYR]
why not change diff name to Yuru Yuri?
OD+1
02:02:140 - spinner end at here plz

nice sb
I really want to bubble this, but YRYR diff is totally overmapped
plz make it easier at 00:11:499 - 00:21:099 - , 01:01:555 - 01:20:841 -
mainly remove some streams if it don't fit the song, and reduce spacing in some huge jumps
when YRYR isn't overmapped, I'm glad to come back
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thanks for your MOD!

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue
Yuru Yuri >3<

[General]color]
why not use silenced sliderslide hitsound file? OK, I use it.
cancel letterbox during breaks plz, or sb looks weird when break done
#1 kiai time end at 01:50:482 - in YRYR diff, it's different from other diffs corrected

[Easy]
HD/OD+1 plz done
01:17:555 (2,3) - not overlap? corrected
01:29:225 (5) - plz try to move this slider up a bit, it's nearly out of the screen corrected

[Normal]
AR+1
00:39:613 (3) - plz change to 1/2 slider, this is hard to read when it end as a Normal diff corrected
00:53:555 (1,2) - I suggest change to slider, 4 circles in a row is kinda hard to play as Normal diff corrected
01:01:555 (3) - I suggest change to 1/2 slider and 1/2 repeat sldier, or it is hard to know when it end corrected?
01:02:698 (1,2) - change to slider corrected
01:18:698 (1,2) - ^ corrected
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - use 1.2x spacing is enough, 1.5x is toooo huge corrected
01:55:282 (1,2,1) - plz make the spacing the same corrected
02:00:082 (5,6) - change to 1 slider? I don't hear anything at 02:00:254 - corrected

[Hard]
AR+1 or CS+1 plz, the setting now is low AR+1 corrected
00:59:841 (5) - I suggest change to a repeat sldier and a circle, cuz all repeat sliders before this one repeat only 1 time, and this one repeat 2 times, it's kinda confusing, kinda hard to read when it end corrected
01:16:412 (1) - plz make this slider shape longer, the slow down is hard to read now corrected
01:17:555 (1) - ^ corrected
01:50:997 - add note? corrected
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - why not jump? maybe use 1.5x spacing? corrected

[Insane]
OD+1 corrected
01:20:841 - here need a note corrected

[YRYR]
why not change diff name to Yuru Yuri? OK, I changed.
OD+1 corrected
02:02:140 - spinner end at here plz corrected

nice sb
I really want to bubble this, but YRYR diff is totally overmapped
plz make it easier at 00:11:499 - 00:21:099 - , 01:01:555 - 01:20:841 -
mainly remove some streams if it don't fit the song, and reduce spacing in some huge jumps
when YRYR isn't overmapped, I'm glad to come back
OK, I remapped at 00:11:499 - 00:21:099 and became easier at01:01:555 - 01:20:841.
Please recheck.
YunBora
I love this song ♥♥♥
rickyboi

confeito14 wrote:

Hitsound and combo were very good!! Nice Hardwork rickyboi ;)
Hitsounds are my specialty ;)

Hope this map gets a bubble already, it's really good :D
wcx19911123
recheck
NO KD PLZ

[Normal]
00:39:613 (3) - really need to change to 1/2 slider here
01:19:841 (3) - repeat 1 more time

[YuRuYuRi]
are you sure diff name is YuRuYuRi not YuruYuri? I'm not sure..
02:00:854 (1) - add newcombo

call be back after this :3
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thanks to re-check! All fixed!

wcx19911123 wrote:

recheck
NO KD PLZ

[Normal]
00:39:613 (3) - really need to change to 1/2 slider here
01:19:841 (3) - repeat 1 more time

[YuRuYuRi]
are you sure diff name is YuRuYuRi not YuruYuri? I'm not sure..
02:00:854 (1) - add newcombo

call be back after this :3
[/quote]
wcx19911123
this is nice as first map, but don't stop improving mapping skills in your future maps :3
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w

wcx19911123 wrote:

this is nice as first map, but don't stop improving mapping skills in your future maps :3
Thanks! I'll do my best!
Weez
2 things I noticed:

1. There is an issue with the sb which makes it look all weird during play.


Look at the left side. The dark side doesn't reach until the end.

Also from 01:58:025 till 02:03:168
The white part doesn't really go out all the way. Should reach her hair.


2. The Artists should be the voice actors for Akari & Chinatsu. So Shiori Mikami & Rumi Okubo

that's it
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thanks for your advice! but...

Weezy wrote:

2 things I noticed:

1.
SPOILER
There is an issue with the sb which makes it look all weird during play.


Look at the left side. The dark side doesn't reach until the end.
I noticed it. But, If it corrects, a picture will be out of position...

Also from 01:58:025 till 02:03:168
The white part doesn't really go out all the way. Should reach her hair.

What is a problem?


2.
SPOILER
The Artists should be the voice actors for Akari & Chinatsu. So Shiori Mikami & Rumi Okubo
"Akari & Chinatsu" is name of this unit.

There is no inner person!

that's it
Weez
Fixed the sb. Just scaled some images up by a bit.

As for the title, its like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34835 Taiga and Ami are singing it in the show but its really the voice actors. If I'm correct Akari and Chinatsu are chacater name correct? If so it should be changed to their voice actors, if i'm wrong then ignore.

Download: Akari & Chinatsu - Onna to Onna no Yuri-Game (Short ver.) (eg91022a71w).osb
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w

Weezy wrote:

Fixed the sb. Just scaled some images up by a bit.

As for the title, its like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34835 Taiga and Ami are singing it in the show but its really the voice actors. If I'm correct Akari and Chinatsu are chacater name correct? If so it should be changed to their voice actors, if i'm wrong then ignore.
I wait for directions of BAT or MAT about this affair.
Because this is already bubbled.
Elly-chan
Another Thing; Silly Mistakes!

Capitalize the V in ver. It may not seem important, but it's definately a bubble-pop. Contact a MAT to re-check over this map when you fix the title, and perhaps the artist/SB if i read correctly?
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thanks for your advice. correct it.

Elly-chan wrote:

Another Thing; Silly Mistakes!

Capitalize the V in ver. It may not seem important, but it's definately a bubble-pop. Contact a MAT to re-check over this map when you fix the title, and perhaps the artist/SB if i read correctly?
wcx19911123
map looks fine now
but sorry I can't find the artist/title information on this song..
are you sure this is right? hope you can give some proof
and plz fix the title of the thread
just call me back when you are sure the artist is right
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w

wcx19911123 wrote:

map looks fine now
but sorry I can't find the artist/title information on this song..
are you sure this is right? hope you can give some proof
and plz fix the title of the thread
just call me back when you are sure the artist is right
OK, I gave up.
I changed the artist name into the voice actor name.
And Tags and thread's title were also corrected according to it.
wcx19911123
yep, the artist is right now, it should be voice actors
others are fine, so bubble fixed
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w

wcx19911123 wrote:

yep, the artist is right now, it should be voice actors
others are fine, so bubble fixed
Thanks!
inchanpiyu
;)
wcx19911123
sorry but here's some stuffs need to discuss..

NewRulerNA wrote:

The picture currently used for some SB is large.

"1440x810" and "1024x768" and "1920x1080".
I'm not sure about this, I'll find some people's opinions about this
if it's confirmed, we need to pop this and fix the problem
just saying here

edit: ok, it's confirmed. plz fix all images, make them same as or under 800x600, and change the code.
better to find a sb mod after fixing them, and call me back, I'll rebubble assp
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
OK, SB was resized to 800*600.
However, since the pictures for changing BG will slip if size is changed, they remain as it is.

SB of 1920x1080 is carrying out usage which becomes large gradually, it is using all resolution.
wcx19911123
my sb is really poor, but let me help you with it..

change the 1024x768 bgs to 800x 600, and fix the code like " S,0,27613,,0.625" to " S,0,27613,,0.8"
change the china.png to 800x450, and fix the code like ^, too

the quality of the images won't be too much difference after fixed this
I think this is the way to fix the sb(I'm not a sb pro so I'm not 100% sure)
anyway it still need some more work, call me back after this
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
OK,OK, What was said was done.
All your hope is my commands.
wcx19911123
ok, sb is fine now
rebubbled
seems it's the last time that I can bubble this, good luck
Topic Starter
eg91022a71w
Thanks!
rickyboi
Someone rank this already!
Shohei Ohtani
175 BPM
2.1 SV
Uses 1.8 section to make SV 3.78

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