Laurier wrote:

ok

General
guest diffなら大丈夫ですが、そうでないなら全ての難易度でKIAI統一しましょう。

Easy
00:14:242 (3) - slider headはfnishのほうがいいかな? done
00:15:613 (4) - finish on slider end done
00:17:670 (1) - remve finish done
00:32:070 (7) - kick sliderにりばーす連続は初心者に難しいかも　なので提案 http://puu.sh/iYXl 採用させてもらいます
00:44:413 (1) - start at 00:44:242 done
00:55:841 (4) - NC done
01:00:412 (4) - ^ done
01:04:984 (4) - ^ done
01:25:797 (1,2,3) - stackさせないほうがいいでしょう done
01:34:368 (3,4) - リズムの提案 http://puu.sh/iYYq 採用させてもらいます
01:52:540 - なぜブレイク？noteを置くかspin追加 http://puu.sh/iYYH spinなら01:52:540開始でこんな感じ スピン追加
01:58:025 (1) - spin追加した場合はこのサークルを画面の中心のほうへ移動。

Normal
00:11:499 (1) - finish 採用させてもらいます
00:13:728 (4,5) - stackさせないほうがいいかも
00:14:242 (1) - finish done
00:16:985 (1) - ^ done
00:19:213 (4,5) - ここもstackさせないほうがいいです
00:22:470 (1) - finish on head? done
00:36:185 (1) - sliderの下に隠すのはあまりよろしくない。Normalは初心者がプレイする難易度なのでもう少しその辺考えてあげてください。 修正しました
00:39:613 (3) - http://puu.sh/iYZV
00:59:984 (4) - 点数でりばーすあろー隠れちゃうのでstackさせないでずらしましょ 修正しました
01:04:841 (7) - move 01:04:984 ?
01:10:698 (3) - nazi 1grid left done
01:14:127 (5) - NC done
01:18:698 (5) - NC done
01:14:127 (5) - add note ?



Hard
Star late 5??? hardでとおすの難しくないですか。
AR+OD-1 kana 採用しました
hardにしてはSVが速いのとstreamが多いのでたぶんhard作れって言われます
　　　　そうですねぇ、、、考えておきます

Insane
00:18:270 (12) - delete 必要ないかと done
00:30:013 (1,2) - 位置逆にしてみては？
01:12:484 (4) - spacing 01:12:127 (1,2) - のspacingとどちらかに統一しましょう 修正しました
01:13:270 (3,4,5,6) - ^ done
01:51:425 - break 消してもいいかも ノート追加しました
01:58:329 - ^ done

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find.

General:
I see 2 osb files. delete 1 of them and do a full submission. done
I find it odd that the characters are the singers. it'd look better if you can put the VA of Akari and Chinatsu as the singers and Akari and Chinatsu on the tags.

Easy:
00:12:870 (2) - even though it's following the DS it looks clumped to the previous slider. space it out so that it doesn't touch (1) done
00:15:613 (4) - beginners won't know when this slider will end. to make it easier, just make this a slider with no repeats, as in start from the big white tick and end it at the next big white tick. the slider ticks should follow the instrumental. done
00:54:698 (3) - make this a 2/1 slider like at 00:59:270 to make it easier for beginners. done
00:56:984 (3) - ^ done
01:00:412 (1,2) - i think this will be hard for beginners because since this song has a high BPM, they won't have enough time to hit the other slider. to make it easier replace these 2 sliders for 1 whole slider. done
01:14:127 (3) - try to do something easier than this. same as 00:15:613. done
01:18:698 (3) - ^ done
01:36:082 (5) - ^ done
02:00:768 (1) - end the spinner till 02:03:511 to follow the instrumental.
a bit too hard for a normal diff but it's common.

Normal:
00:31:385 (4) - space this out because players might let go after the 1st repeat since it's hidden. done
00:39:613 (3) - Do something easier. you can use this as a reference.
00:43:385 (2) - make this a 1/1 curved slider so that it'd blanket the previous slider. done
00:44:413 (1) - end the spinner at 00:47:156 like the insane diff done
02:00:854 (1) - same as easy. done

Hard:
AR: -1 or -2 is ok for this diff as it's easier to read for this diff done
00:44:413 (1) - same as normal. done
00:57:698 (8) - how about end this slider till 00:57 :984. remember to delete the circle if you do so as it blankets the next note. done
01:25:797 - only speed up this slider for the lyrics. the rest keep the SV multiplier at 1.00 to make it fun and challenging. done
01:37:454 (1,2) - ^
01:38:825 (5,6) - ^
01:51:068 - add circles at the downbeats to follow the instrumental? done
02:01:111 - is there a reason why a break is here? add spinner

Insane:
01:02:555 (12) - how about stacking this on (10) to make it fun and challenging? I use this idea
01:48:425 (1,1,1) - these spinners are unrankable. they have to reach 2000 at least to be a rankable spinner remap here

this is the best i can do. GL

nich95 wrote:

Hi, eg91022a71w

From my modding queue

[Easy]
00:10:128 (5) - Move to up 1 grid, would reduce the problem in distance between notes. done
00:15:613 (4) - Add finish in the end of slider. done

[Normal]
01:37:454 (2,3) - Distance is too far
01:38:825 (1,2) - ^
01:40:197 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:39:613 (1-9) - I think that this all is too hard for Hard diff.

[Insane]
I don't find the problem.

That's all, that I can find them.

Good luck.

3er123 wrote:

EASY
00:37:556 (6) - i think not good looks here
01:18:698 (3) - maybe make wavy? done

Normal
00:09:785 (4) - spacing done
01:03:555 (4) - 1grid up

Hard
00:25:728 (6) - NC?
00:29:842 (6) - looks ugly here correct
00:38:928 (5) - and there correct
00:40:299 (9) - NC?
00:58:698 (2) - ugly here
01:19:841 (5) - nc
01:31:968 (5,7,3) - ugly here
01:37:454 (1,2,5) - ^
01:25:797 (1,5,6,3,4,7,1,5,4) - ><
01:37:968 (2,2) - maybe just make waavy sliders
correct sliders ><

BeatofIke wrote:

[General]
Good

[Easy]
Good

[Normal]
Good

[Hard]
-OD+1? done
-Some of the sliders are a bit ugly on kiai time.

Good Map. Go! Akari-Chan! thanks!

SkyDevil wrote:

uu~~

Easy
00:15:613 A little bit farther from the last slider x3
00:26:585 Grab the beginning of the slider and put it one grid to the left done
01:01:555 I think you meant to make the slider 1/4 longer xD done

Normal
00:08:756 I think this is kinda some big spacing compared to the other circles umm...correct

Hard
00:08:756 Le huge spacing while this is still a hard diff >w<
00:39:613 Maybe too difficult for a hard diff?
01:59:397 ^
I somehow think this should be insane and insane should be Yuri xD OK, I change diff-name

Insane
00:41:670 Please do not stack these sliders >w< correct
00:43:042 ^ correct
01:02:270 Instead of stacking 10 and 11 on the same place, why not put 11 on the 12th place and 12 on 11th place? x3 remap here

Le Star because 01:20:698 gave me goosebumps x3 thanks for your STAR!!

rickyboi wrote:

You should add a hard difficulty now since it's not good to skip a map set's difficulty from Normal -> Insane.
I personally think you should rename it back to the way it was if you don't want to add more difficulties in your map set.

Anyways I'm going to mod this for free once you fix your difficulties. Nice map

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ eg91022a71w ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. 1st KIAI time should start to here 01:26:482. done

[Y*R*Y*R]

1. 00:27:956 (5) - Add new combo,jump to here. done
2. 00:32:928 (5) - ^ done
3. 00:38:585 (6) - ^ done
4. 00:40:299 (9) - ^ done
5. 01:02:127 (9) - ^ done
6. 01:15:841 (5) - ^ done
7. 01:17:555 (5) - ^ done

[Insane]

1. 01:20:841 (8) - Move 1 grid left. done

[Hard]

1. 01:50:997 - Remove too short break time. done

[Normal]

1. 01:04:841 (7) - This note confused with beginner,try unstack. done

[Easy]

1. 00:25:213 (4) - Add new combo,long combo hard for beginner. done
2. 00:36:185 (4) - ^ done
3. 01:45:682 (5) - ^ done

That's all ~

Good luck ~ Thank you~

rickyboi wrote:

Hello here's a mod I promised. Just because I really like this map

[General]
Your "Y*R* Y*R" difficulty has 4 combo colours and the others only have 2, All difficulties should have same number of colours. Also Combo 3 is kinda dark. Try using a brighter red. done
All difficulties should end at the same timeline. I'm gonna suggest at 02:03:511
I'm gonna suggest you put KIAI from 00:53:555 to 01:11:841. Remove KIAI from 01:52:540 to 02:00:768
Put a red line at 00:44:413 with 105 BPM. This is important because this will affect where your spinner is going to end. fixed

[Easy]
00:27:956 - Add finish. done
00:38:928 (1) - I wouldn't really suggest using 2 repeats. How about ending it at 00:40:299? Then add a note at 00:40:985. done
00:41:670 (3) - Add new combo. done
00:44:242 (1) - Adjust this spinner to 00:44:413. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM. fixed
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish. done
00:55:841 (1) - ^ same. done
00:58:127 (1) - ^ same. done
01:00:412 (1) - ^ same. done
01:01:555 (2) - This rythm is kinda confusing. How about this? http://puu.sh/ktQ2
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish. done
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same. done
01:11:841 (1) - ^ same done
01:16:412 (1) - ^ same. done
01:18:698 (3) - Add new combo and finish. The slider doesn't really look good. Also end the slider at 01:20:984 with Finish?
01:25:797 (2) - Remove new combo. done
01:26:482 (1) - Add new combo. done
01:55:282 (1) - Add finish. done

[Normal]
00:33:442 (1) - Add finish. done
00:38:585 (1) - Doesn't really fit the song. How about changing it to 2 stacked notes? fixed
00:38:928 - Add Finish. done
00:44:328 (1) - BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM. done
00:53:555 (1) - Add Finish? The whistle alone doesn't really give me a contented feeling. But it's up to you if you want to add it or not. done
00:55:841 (1) - ^ same. done
00:58:127 (1) - ^ same. done
01:02:698 (1) - ^ same. done
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same. done
01:11:841 (1) - Add Whistle done
01:16:412 (1) - Add Whistle done
00:59:984 (4) - This one is kind of surprising. How about adjusting it to 01:00:127 then put finish at 1:00:412?
01:19:841 (5) - End repeat at 1:20:984 with finish? done
1:31:968 - Add Finish. done
01:36:425 (5) - Add new combo. done
01:36:768 (1) - Remove new combo. done
01:42:254 (5) - Snap this at 1/3. http://puu.sh/ku1X
01:48:425 (1) - Add finish. done
01:49:111 (2) - ^ same. done
01:49:797 (3) - ^ same. done
01:53:911 (2) - Add Whistle. done
01:56:654 - Add Finish. done
01:57:340 (2) - ^ same. done
01:58:025 (1) - ^ same. done
02:00:768 - ^ same. done
02:00:854 (1) - ^ same. done
If you could possibly reduce the difficulty of this please do. I still think this one is a little bit hard for a normal.

[Hard]
00:06:013 (1) - Add finish. done
00:07:385 (3) - New combo. Add finish. done
00:08:756 (1) - Add finish. done
00:09:442 (3) - ^ same. done
00:10:128 (5) - New combo. done
00:15:613 (4) - New combo. done
00:16:985 (1) - Add finish. done
00:21:099 (6) - Add new combo. done
00:22:128 (1) - Add finish. done
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same. done
00:23:156 (5) - New combo? done
00:28:642 (3) - ^ same. done
00:32:928 (7) - ^ same. done
00:32:070 (3,4,5) - Add whistle. done
00:33:442 (1) - Add finish. done
00:38:928 - ^ same. done
00:41:670 (1) - ^ same. done
00:43:042 (3) - ^ same. done
00:43:556 (4) - New combo. done
00:44:413 (1) - - BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM. done
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish? done
00:58:127 - ^ same. done
00:59:841 (5) - Add one repeat ending at 01:00:270? done
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish. done
01:07:270 (1) - ^ same. done
01:08:412 (3) - Add whistle. done
01:16:127 - Remove finish. done
01:16:412 (1) - Add finish. done
01:17:555 (1) - ^ same. done
01:18:698 (1) - End this spinner at 1:20:984 with finish?
01:26:482 (2) - New combo. Add finish. done
01:31:968 - ^ same. done
01:40:882 (3) - Add whistle or finish. done
01:42:254 (7) - Snap this at 1/3 just like in Normal.
01:42:940 (1) - Add finish done
01:49:797 (2,3,4) - Remove finish. done
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle? done
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish. done
01:55:282 (1) - ^ same. done
01:56:654 (4) - ^ same. done
01:57:340 - ^ same. done
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish. done

[Insane]
00:06:014 (1) - Add finish done
00:07:385 (4) - New combo. Add finish. done
00:08:757 (1) - Add finish. done
00:09:442 (3) - ^ same. done
00:11:499 (1) - ^ same. done
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same. done
00:23:156 (1) - New combo done
00:26:242 (7) - ^ same. done
00:29:328 (5) - ^ same. done
00:31:899 (1) - ^ same. done
00:33:442 (6) - Add finish. done
00:38:928 (5) - ^ same. done
00:40:299 (9) - New combo. done
00:44:328 - Add note done
00:44:413 - Delete spinner. Add note. done
00:44:499 (1) - Put spinner in here. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM. done
00:53:555 (1) - Add finish. done
00:55:841 - ^ same. done
00:58:127 - ^ same. done
01:00:412 - ^ same. done
01:00:984 (2) - ^ same. done
01:01:555 (5) - New combo. done
01:02:698 (1) - Add finish. done
01:07:270 - Add note with finish and new combo. done
01:07:412 (1) - Remove new combo. done
01:11:841 - Add finish done
01:20:984 - Add note with finish?
01:25:111 (5,6,7) - Add whistle. New combo at 5. done
01:26:482 (2) - New combo. done
01:31:968 (5) - Add finish. done
01:37:454 (1) - ^ same. done
01:37:968 (2) - ^ same. done
01:38:825 (5) - New combo. Add finish. done
01:39:340 (6) - Add finish. done
01:40:882 - ^ same. done
01:42:254 (7) - Snap this at 1/3 just like in Normal.
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistle? done
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish. done
01:53:911 (2) - New combo. done
01:55:282 (1) - Add finish. done
01:56:654 (4) - New combo. Add finish. done
01:57:340 - Add finish. done
01:58:025 - ^ same. done
02:00:082 (9) - New combo. done
02:00:768 (17) - Add finish. done
02:02:825 - Add note with clap? just like in hard? done
02:02:997 (2,3) - Add clap. Remove finish. done
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish. done

[Y*R* Y*R]
Would be better to just name this difficulty "Extra" or "Yuru Yuri". It's up to you. fixed
00:06:013 (1) - Add finish. done
00:07:385 (1) - ^ same. done
00:08:756 (1) - ^ same. done
00:09:442 (5) - ^ same. done
00:11:499 (1) - ^ same. done
00:16:985 (1) - ^ same. done
00:22:128 (1) - ^ same done
00:22:470 (3) - ^ same. done
00:26:242 (5) - New combo. done
00:27:956 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - This part is kinda hard to read and doesn't really play that smooth really well in my opnion. You could try doing something else.
00:30:699 (1,2,1,2) - ^ same with this.
00:38:585 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:928 (5) - Add new combo.
00:39:613 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:328 - Add note
00:44:413 - Delete spinner. Add note.
00:44:499 (1) - Put spinner in here. BPM definitely changed here. Silence the whole spinner and put a red line with right BPM.
00:54:698 (5) - New Combo. done
00:55:841 - Add finish. done
00:56:555 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:58:12 - Add finish. done
01:00:412 (7) - ^ same. done
01:00:984 (3) - ^ same. done
01:02:412 (3) - Add whistle. done
01:06:127 (4) - New Combo. done
01:07:270 - Add finsih. done
01:12:127(1) to 01:15:056 (8) - - These doubles are really a pressure with these kind of spacing and jump distance. It's not really that smooth to play in my opinion. I suggest you stack the doubles. fixed
01:15:056 (8) - Delete this note? Nothing is really in the music at this timeline.
01:26:482 (1) - Add finish. done done
01:30:768 (5) - New combo. done
01:31:111 (7) - This slider doesn't really look good. fixed?
01:35:740 (5) - New combo. done
01:37:454 (1) - Add finish. done
01:38:825 (1) - ^ same. done
01:42:940 (1) - ^ same. done
01:48:425 (1) - Add finish. done
01:50:482 (1,1,2,3) - Add whistle? done
01:52:540 (1) - Add finish. done
01:56:654 (5) - ^ same. done
01:57:340 - ^ same. done
02:00:768 (9) - ^ same. done
02:00:854 (1) - Add note with clap? just like in hard? done
02:02:997 (2,3) - Add clap. Remove finish. done
02:03:511 - Add a note with finish. done

All in all great map set It actually took me 3 hours to mod this and probably my longest one lol.
You just need to fix that normal.

confeito14 wrote:

全部提案程度。自由に変更無視して

[Easy]

00:53:841 00:54:412 Easyだけど音が欲しいかも(1,2)をスライダーに変えるかサークル追加か　難しくなっちゃうと思うなぁ
01:34:368 (1) - 音追加？ http://puu.sh/p29P　スライダー追加

[Normal]

問題ないと思うけど若干難しいかも。スライダーの後ろのサークルとかキックスライダーとかいうやつがややこしい
01:09:698 ここに音が欲しい気もするけどごちゃごちゃする。こんな感じに？ http://puu.sh/p2fm
01:53:911 (2) - Ctrl+Hで右に配置　修正

[Hard]

00:18:356 (4) - (3)の後ろに接した方が曲に合う？他にも00:36:185(1)とか変更する気があったらで。egスタイルとして全部残してもいいと思う
01:42:768 (x) - clap 削除　修正
01:54:597 (4) - リターン+1
01:56:482 (3) - (1,2)と比べるとスペーシングがよろしくない　修正

[Insane]

00:44:156 (5) - 削除
01:20:555 (6-12) - ストリーム？

[YRYR]

クリアぎりぎりだから他の人にも聞いて欲しい
00:25:556 (x) - あってない気がするのでここにサークル追加してみた http://puu.sh/p22a

全難易度で言えることだけど音量が一定なのがもったいない
00:22:128 音量を下げたり
01:11:555-01:20:841 狂気に合わせて音量を上げてみたり
01:50:482-01:52:540 Softを使うとか
ランクド狙うなら細部もこだわってほしい
SBも黒くする時に左右に0.1ミリ漏れているのも修正した方がいいと思う　そこ直そうとするととどうしてもずれちゃうのよ…

GOOD MORNING!!上げたらもっと応援するよ　あんなもん今更晒せるようなシロモノじゃあないお・・・

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue
Yuru Yuri >3<

[General]color]
why not use silenced sliderslide hitsound file? OK, I use it.
cancel letterbox during breaks plz, or sb looks weird when break done
#1 kiai time end at 01:50:482 - in YRYR diff, it's different from other diffs corrected

[Easy]
HD/OD+1 plz done
01:17:555 (2,3) - not overlap? corrected
01:29:225 (5) - plz try to move this slider up a bit, it's nearly out of the screen corrected

[Normal]
AR+1
00:39:613 (3) - plz change to 1/2 slider, this is hard to read when it end as a Normal diff corrected
00:53:555 (1,2) - I suggest change to slider, 4 circles in a row is kinda hard to play as Normal diff corrected
01:01:555 (3) - I suggest change to 1/2 slider and 1/2 repeat sldier, or it is hard to know when it end corrected?
01:02:698 (1,2) - change to slider corrected
01:18:698 (1,2) - ^ corrected
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - use 1.2x spacing is enough, 1.5x is toooo huge corrected
01:55:282 (1,2,1) - plz make the spacing the same corrected
02:00:082 (5,6) - change to 1 slider? I don't hear anything at 02:00:254 - corrected

[Hard]
AR+1 or CS+1 plz, the setting now is low AR+1 corrected
00:59:841 (5) - I suggest change to a repeat sldier and a circle, cuz all repeat sliders before this one repeat only 1 time, and this one repeat 2 times, it's kinda confusing, kinda hard to read when it end corrected
01:16:412 (1) - plz make this slider shape longer, the slow down is hard to read now corrected
01:17:555 (1) - ^ corrected
01:50:997 - add note? corrected
01:51:168 (1,2,3,4) - why not jump? maybe use 1.5x spacing? corrected

[Insane]
OD+1 corrected
01:20:841 - here need a note corrected

[YRYR]
why not change diff name to Yuru Yuri? OK, I changed.
OD+1 corrected
02:02:140 - spinner end at here plz corrected

nice sb
I really want to bubble this, but YRYR diff is totally overmapped
plz make it easier at 00:11:499 - 00:21:099 - , 01:01:555 - 01:20:841 -
mainly remove some streams if it don't fit the song, and reduce spacing in some huge jumps
when YRYR isn't overmapped, I'm glad to come back
OK, I remapped at 00:11:499 - 00:21:099 and became easier at01:01:555 - 01:20:841.
Please recheck.

confeito14 wrote:

Hitsound and combo were very good!! Nice Hardwork rickyboi

wcx19911123 wrote:

recheck
NO KD PLZ

[Normal]
00:39:613 (3) - really need to change to 1/2 slider here
01:19:841 (3) - repeat 1 more time

[YuRuYuRi]
are you sure diff name is YuRuYuRi not YuruYuri? I'm not sure..
02:00:854 (1) - add newcombo

call be back after this :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

this is nice as first map, but don't stop improving mapping skills in your future maps :3

Weezy wrote:

2 things I noticed:

1.

SPOILER

There is an issue with the sb which makes it look all weird during play.


Look at the left side. The dark side doesn't reach until the end.
I noticed it. But, If it corrects, a picture will be out of position...

Also from 01:58:025 till 02:03:168
The white part doesn't really go out all the way. Should reach her hair.

What is a problem?

2.

SPOILER

The Artists should be the voice actors for Akari & Chinatsu. So Shiori Mikami & Rumi Okubo
"Akari & Chinatsu" is name of this unit.

There is no inner person!

that's it

Weezy wrote:

Fixed the sb. Just scaled some images up by a bit.

As for the title, its like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34835 Taiga and Ami are singing it in the show but its really the voice actors. If I'm correct Akari and Chinatsu are chacater name correct? If so it should be changed to their voice actors, if i'm wrong then ignore.

Elly-chan wrote:

Another Thing; Silly Mistakes!

Capitalize the V in ver. It may not seem important, but it's definately a bubble-pop. Contact a MAT to re-check over this map when you fix the title, and perhaps the artist/SB if i read correctly?

wcx19911123 wrote:

map looks fine now
but sorry I can't find the artist/title information on this song..
are you sure this is right? hope you can give some proof
and plz fix the title of the thread
just call me back when you are sure the artist is right

wcx19911123 wrote:

yep, the artist is right now, it should be voice actors
others are fine, so bubble fixed

NewRulerNA wrote:

The picture currently used for some SB is large.

"1440x810" and "1024x768" and "1920x1080".