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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
做了一半的diff, 先放上来了 orz

Download: By2 - Da Mao Xian(Big Adventure) (popner) [Ar3's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

做了一半的diff, 先放上来了 orz
开始时间不需要这么早吧。。
Loneight
Request from my modding queue.
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[General]
osb.檔案沒要做SB可以刪掉 OAO
03:02:792~03:18:035加個kiai time ?!

[Easy]
好像沒什麼音效?!OTZ

note沒什麼問題~

[Normal]
00:31:322的綠線是不是多出來的?!

00:20:630 (1,2,3) - add finish and (3) at top ?!
01:28:089 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]
02:03:116的綠線好像多了?~

00:09:603 (4,3) - 讓(3)疊在(4)吧?
00:28:414 (1) - finish at top ?
01:07:008 (1) - ^ at end ?
02:52:414 (6) - NC

[Insane]
00:14:954,00:15:279多餘的綠線

00:20:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這裡感覺有點單調 只是一直線的往下而已?!(個人感覺)
00:43:008 (1) - RNC
00:46:576 (1,2) - 把(2)跟(1)對稱吧?
00:48:846 (1) - RNC
00:58:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這裡...額...讓我感覺有幻影 lol
01:01:333 (1) - RNC
01:52:738 (1,2) - 好像沒對稱到
01:54:035 (1,2) - ^
01:55:008 (1) - RNC
02:20:630 (1,1) - ^
02:42:198 (1,1) - ^
02:44:792 (1,1) - ^
03:23:549 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡...額...眼花了

我差點在mod中死亡 (原因:萌死)
Good song and map~
Topic Starter
popner
感謝mod. :) update

l1106188 wrote:

Request from my modding queue.
以下只是建議~不喜歡可以略過 OAO

[General]
osb.檔案沒要做SB可以刪掉 OAO 之前刪過一次怎麼又跑出來了= =
03:02:792~03:18:035加個kiai time ?! ok

[Easy]
好像沒什麼音效?!OTZ Easy的音效實在不會放。。

note沒什麼問題~

[Normal]
00:31:322的綠線是不是多出來的?! 是前面少放了一條綠線,ok

00:20:630 (1,2,3) - add finish and (3) at top ?! ok
01:28:089 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]
02:03:116的綠線好像多了?~

00:09:603 (4,3) - 讓(3)疊在(4)吧? ok
00:28:414 (1) - finish at top ? 加了normal的finish
01:07:008 (1) - ^ at end ? ^
02:52:414 (6) - NC ok

[Insane]
00:14:954,00:15:279多餘的綠線 去掉了,本來是音量加強

00:20:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 這裡感覺有點單調 只是一直線的往下而已?!(個人感覺) 改成放射狀了
00:43:008 (1) - RNC ok
00:46:576 (1,2) - 把(2)跟(1)對稱吧? ok
00:48:846 (1) - RNC ok
00:58:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這裡...額...讓我感覺有幻影 lol 我打著感覺ok~
01:01:333 (1) - RNC ok
01:52:738 (1,2) - 好像沒對稱到 真仔細
01:54:035 (1,2) - ^ 這個不用對稱了吧。。
01:55:008 (1) - RNC ok
02:20:630 (1,1) - ^
02:42:198 (1,1) - ^
02:44:792 (1,1) - ^
03:23:549 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡...額...眼花了 也是打著感覺ok~

Good song and map~
eg91022a71w
Fight! I love YUruyuri

Here is my poor MOD

[Insane]
00:08:306~00:08:792 - spacing
00:36:198~00:38:630 - These are not suitable for the rhythm. You should move the Slider's starting points starting point to a red line, and remap the point of a clap.

[Hard]
There are too many breaktime...
00:17:549(6) - add clap
00:20:143(6) - ^
01:25:008(6) - ^
01:27:603(6) - ^
01:30:035 - remove NC
01:30:846 - add NC
03:12:846 - add NC
03:13:170 - remove NC
03:20:468(4) - add clap
03:23:062(6) - ^
L_P
azuuunyan
喜欢
有video吗?找了一下发现youtube没有,title是不是错了哦?好像是majokko mirakurun比较正确吧

general
insane 的 break的分布似乎不大平均
最后一段建议放个kiai,详情看insane的mod

normal跟easy感觉很赞,比很多刚刚rank map的mapper都好,真的花了心思,只是normal的spacing略大
slider似乎拉的不是很美观

hard
00:11:711 (4) - 最后一个repeat开始一个slider,拉到下个note去?
01:01:657 (1,2,3) - 当我还是一个沙包的时候看到这个我马上fail...以hard来说这个不是不可以,只是在ar低的情况之下感觉别扭,以这个01:12:035 (1) - 来说我觉得更适合
01:49:170 (7,8) - slider?降低难度
02:09:116 (1,2,3) -
02:24:846 (1) - 最后的头finish
02:27:765 (5) - 第一个头finish

Insane
00:07:981 (4) - stack?或者antijump?这里vocal给我的感觉是这样
00:15:116 (8) - 这个可以试试看用快的slider velocity
00:58:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 试试看旋转一些吗?现在有些单调的说
01:10:576 (3,4,5,6) - 不用antijump吗
01:46:252 (1) - stack在01:45:279 (3) - 之上对我来说比较整齐
02:41:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 可以弄宽一点吗用在ar8之下看起来有一点嚣张夸张
03:02:792 (3) - 忘了放kiai?如果是故意的,强烈建议放一个
03:18:035 - 放了kiai的话这里关
Topic Starter
popner
Thx for your modding.update

eg91022a71w wrote:

Fight! I love YUruyuri

Here is my poor MOD

[Insane]
00:08:306~00:08:792 - spacing no
00:36:198~00:38:630 - These are not suitable for the rhythm. You should move the Slider's starting points starting point to a red line, and remap the point of a clap. no

[Hard]
There are too many breaktime...
00:17:549(6) - add clap ok
00:20:143(6) - ^
01:25:008(6) - ^
01:27:603(6) - ^
01:30:035 - remove NC ok
01:30:846 - add NC ok
03:12:846 - add NC ok
03:13:170 - remove NC ok
03:20:468(4) - add clap ok
03:23:062(6) - ^ok
Topic Starter
popner
感谢mod。update

L_P wrote:

azuuunyan
喜欢
有video吗?找了一下发现youtube没有,title是不是错了哦?好像是majokko mirakurun比较正确吧 角色歌沒有video,title的确有误

general
insane 的 break的分布似乎不大平均
最后一段建议放个kiai,详情看insane的mod

normal跟easy感觉很赞,比很多刚刚rank map的mapper都好,真的花了心思,只是normal的spacing略大 circle调大一号
slider似乎拉的不是很美观

hard
00:11:711 (4) - 最后一个repeat开始一个slider,拉到下个note去? 做了一个勺子形的slider
01:01:657 (1,2,3) - 当我还是一个沙包的时候看到这个我马上fail...以hard来说这个不是不可以,只是在ar低的情况之下感觉别扭,以这个01:12:035 (1) - 来说我觉得更适合 ok
01:49:170 (7,8) - slider?降低难度 ok
02:09:116 (1,2,3) - ok
02:24:846 (1) - 最后的头finish ok
02:27:765 (5) - 第一个头finish ok

Insane
00:07:981 (4) - stack?或者antijump?这里vocal给我的感觉是这样 antijump
00:15:116 (8) - 这个可以试试看用快的slider velocity good idea
00:58:252 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 试试看旋转一些吗?现在有些单调的说 改成旋转拉远
01:10:576 (3,4,5,6) - 不用antijump吗 good idea
01:46:252 (1) - stack在01:45:279 (3) - 之上对我来说比较整齐 ok
02:41:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 可以弄宽一点吗用在ar8之下看起来有一点嚣张夸张 改了个样式
03:02:792 (3) - 忘了放kiai?如果是故意的,强烈建议放一个 放了kiai但是还没有上传。。
03:18:035 - 放了kiai的话这里关
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find

General:
remove "yuruyuri" in the tags because that's the source.

Easy:
00:15:441 (1) - it'd sound nice if you can add a finish at the beginning.
00:27:279 (3,1) - spacing error. follow the DS to make it consistent. move (1) to the left and that should follow the DS from there fix the sliders if you can.
01:03:441 (3) - make this slider look the same as (2). it looks nicer if you do so.
01:08:954 (2) - put this at the other side to make it easier for beginners.
01:47:549 (1) - Ctrl+J for an easier path?
01:55:333 (1) - same as 00:15:441
02:00:522 (5) - a NC here because of new lyrics.
02:10:900 (3) - same as 01:03:441
02:16:414 (2) - same as 01:08:954
02:19:981 (1) - same as 00:15:441
02:30:035 (3) - make this a curved slider and move it here so that it'd look easier for beginners.
02:56:630 - move the break to 02:57:603 because that's where the vocals start.
03:15:765 (5) - same as 02:00:522

Normal:
00:28:414 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. sounds nice IMO
00:31:657 (2) - Ctrl+J so that it'd blanket the previous slider.
01:19:333 (4) - *nazi* move this to the point that there would be a small gap beside (3,5). like this
01:46:252 (2) - same as above but i'm sure you get the idea.
02:00:522 (1) - i think you forgot to add a finish at the beginning. add it to keep consistency.
02:07:333 - remove the break because i think it's unnecessary.
02:56:630 - same as easy.

Hard:
00:10:900 (3,4) - add claps at the end to keep consistency.
01:49:170 (7) - add a clap at the beginning. same reason as above
01:56:630 (7) - same as above but at the end.
02:07:333 - same as normal.
02:56:630 - same as easy.

Insane:
00:09:603 (7) - replace this for a circle because the end isn't following anything.
01:12:522-01:15:116 - is there a reason why is there no clap hitsounds on this part?

this is the best i can do. GL :D
inaba-tan
may i make taiko diff ?
Topic Starter
popner

inaba-tan wrote:

may i make taiko diff ?
yes, thx
Topic Starter
popner
Thanks for your mod. update

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find

General:
remove "yuruyuri" in the tags because that's the source. O

Easy:
00:15:441 (1) - it'd sound nice if you can add a finish at the beginning. O
00:27:279 (3,1) - spacing error. follow the DS to make it consistent. move (1) to the left and that should follow the DS from there fix the sliders if you can. O
01:03:441 (3) - make this slider look the same as (2). it looks nicer if you do so. O
01:08:954 (2) - put this at the other side to make it easier for beginners. O
01:47:549 (1) - Ctrl+J for an easier path? O
01:55:333 (1) - same as 00:15:441 O
02:00:522 (5) - a NC here because of new lyrics. O
02:10:900 (3) - same as 01:03:441 O
02:16:414 (2) - same as 01:08:954 O
02:19:981 (1) - same as 00:15:441 O
02:30:035 (3) - make this a curved slider and move it here so that it'd look easier for beginners. O
02:56:630 - move the break to 02:57:603 because that's where the vocals start. O
03:15:765 (5) - same as 02:00:522 O

Normal:
00:28:414 (1) - add a finish at the beginning. sounds nice IMO O
00:31:657 (2) - Ctrl+J so that it'd blanket the previous slider. O
01:19:333 (4) - *nazi* move this to the point that there would be a small gap beside (3,5). like this O
01:46:252 (2) - same as above but i'm sure you get the idea. O
02:00:522 (1) - i think you forgot to add a finish at the beginning. add it to keep consistency. O
02:07:333 - remove the break because i think it's unnecessary. O
02:56:630 - same as easy. O

Hard:
00:10:900 (3,4) - add claps at the end to keep consistency. O
01:49:170 (7) - add a clap at the beginning. same reason as above O
01:56:630 (7) - same as above but at the end. O
02:07:333 - same as normal. O
02:56:630 - same as easy. O

Insane:
00:09:603 (7) - replace this for a circle because the end isn't following anything. O
01:12:522-01:15:116 - is there a reason why is there no clap hitsounds on this part? Sorry, when I remap this part I forgot to add claps.

this is the best i can do. GL :D
JauiPlaY
Hi
一些建议:

[General]
No tags?
另外osb文件是我就会删掉

[Easy]
00:27:279 (3,1) - 最好再拉开点,现在太近了
00:49:170 (x) - 加个带finish的note?
02:25:170 (1,2,1) - 有点太空了
02:43:333 (1) - 往上拉点
03:22:252 (1) - 去掉nc

[Normal]
00:09:927 (T) - 无用绿线
01:33:441 (1) - 其实可以拉到前面白线
02:11:873 (x) - 加个带clap的note
02:25:819 (3) - 在02:26:306结束

[Hard]
01:33:441 (1) - 其实可以拉到前面白线
别的没什么...combo数控制一下吧比如5-8之类的

[Mirakurun!]
00:27:603 (1) - 拉到前面蓝线
01:11:549 (8,1) - (8)尾去clap,(1)加clap
02:30:360 (x) - 加个带finish的note?
03:23:549 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 矮油,不错哦

恩还不错 不过前面3个难度稍微有点粗糙
Topic Starter
popner
0miss. 感谢。update

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi
一些建议:

[General]
No tags?
另外osb文件是我就会删掉

[Easy]
00:27:279 (3,1) - 最好再拉开点,现在太近了 O
00:49:170 (x) - 加个带finish的note? O
02:25:170 (1,2,1) - 有点太空了 O
02:43:333 (1) - 往上拉点 O
03:22:252 (1) - 去掉nc O

[Normal]
00:09:927 (T) - 无用绿线 O
01:33:441 (1) - 其实可以拉到前面白线 O
02:11:873 (x) - 加个带clap的note O
02:25:819 (3) - 在02:26:306结束 O

[Hard]
01:33:441 (1) - 其实可以拉到前面白线 O
别的没什么...combo数控制一下吧比如5-8之类的 O

[Mirakurun!]
00:27:603 (1) - 拉到前面蓝线 O
01:11:549 (8,1) - (8)尾去clap,(1)加clap O
02:30:360 (x) - 加个带finish的note? O
03:23:549 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 矮油,不错哦

恩还不错 不过前面3个难度稍微有点粗糙
Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request
请回复这个帖子说明你改了哪些没改哪些,如果可以的话最好附上理由,谢谢:)


General:
  1. 没用的osb文件删掉
Easy:
  1. 整体感觉音效下的比较乱……建议重新整理一下吧……
  2. 00:09:927 - 意义不明的绿线
  3. 00:31:981 - 考虑加个note?
  4. 00:28:414 - 从这里开始怎么突然没有音效了?
  5. 01:17:711 (1,2) - 避免在easy难度中出现遮挡
  6. 02:05:711 (1) - 考虑去掉结尾的finish
  7. 02:09:279 (1) - 可以考虑删掉,这个节奏不是很好找
  8. 02:25:170 (1,2) - Kiai段突然变这么空感觉不是很好,做4个1/1吧
  9. 02:27:765 (1,2) - (nazi)不平行
Normal:
  1. 00:09:927 - 继续绿线卖萌
  2. 00:31:657 (2) - ctrl+r?
  3. 00:34:252 (2) - clap?
  4. 00:35:549 (4) - ^
  5. 00:39:441 (2) - ^
  6. 00:42:360 - 加note?
  7. 01:02:792 (3,4) - 我觉得(3)到(4)的开头应该是个slider比较好,然后01:03:279 - 01:03:603 下一个slider
  8. 01:51:441 (3,4) - (nazi)没叠好
  9. 01:54:035 (6,7) - 改成2个1/1的slider吧,感觉会舒服很多
  10. 02:18:684 (3,4) - 这里的节奏也听的别扭,如果不想弄太复杂就用slider吧
  11. 02:47:225 (2,1) - (nazi)不是很好看的遮挡
  12. 03:03:441 (3) - 调整一下形状和(4)的边缘blank更好一点吧
Hard:
  1. AR+1
  2. 00:13:657 - 加个note
  3. 02:13:819 (6,7,8) - 连续3个whistle略吵
  4. 02:53:711 (1,2,3,4) - 这里建议或者缩小间距或者拉大,否则太容易造成读图失误
  5. 03:02:468 (1) - 没必要的NC
Insane:
  1. 00:08:792 (4) - slider几乎完全被分数挡住了
  2. 00:10:900 (4,5,6,7) - 保留白线clap即可
  3. 00:12:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - - 节奏打着很别扭,建议改一下(双白线对准时间点00:13:495 )
  4. 00:17:549 (1,2) - 和背景颜色太接近又被分数挡了。。。。
  5. 00:29:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 调成红线三连,白线三连听着非常生硬
  6. 00:32:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  7. 00:40:738 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^………………后面还有大量的,这曲子我真的看不到用白线三连的理由……改掉吧。至于红线三连的例子。。看这里01:08:143 (6,7,8) -
  8. 00:45:279 (1) - 前后都没有的情况下突如其来的finish...
  9. 00:59:387 - 加个note吧
  10. 01:10:576 (3,4,5,6) - 非常容易导致读图失误的anit-jump,不推荐这么用
  11. 01:32:954 (1) - spinner结尾消声
  12. 01:34:900 - 跳的间距都没变的情况下突然slider速度减半感觉很糟糕
  13. 01:43:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 继续三连问题
  14. 02:41:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 这个串的造型真心不好看……排的更平滑或者对称一些吧
  15. 03:01:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 三连
  16. 03:02:630 (2,3,4) - 1/4不缩间距么?
差不多就这些了,加油~
inaba-tan
Topic Starter
popner
ok, thanks. update
怎么后面的都消失了?我再补上没改的吧

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod for request
请回复这个帖子说明你改了哪些没改哪些,如果可以的话最好附上理由,谢谢:)


General:
  1. 没用的osb文件删掉 删第四次了。。改了下难度名又出来了做了SB
Easy:
  1. 整体感觉音效下的比较乱……建议重新整理一下吧…… need hitsounds help..
  2. 00:09:927 - 意义不明的绿线 删除
  3. 00:31:981 - 考虑加个note? ok
  4. 00:28:414 - 从这里开始 ok

Normal:
  1. 00:09:927 - 继续绿线卖萌 O
  2. 00:31:657 (2) - ctrl+r? O
  3. 00:34:252 (2) - clap? O
  4. 00:35:549 (4) - ^
  5. 00:39:441 (2) - ^
  6. 00:42:360 - 加note? O
  7. 01:02:792 (3,4) - 我觉得(3)到(4)的开头应该是个slider比较好,然后01:03:279 - 01:03:603 下一个slider ok, 还是改了
  8. 01:51:441 (3,4) - (nazi)没叠好 O
  9. 01:54:035 (6,7) - 改成2个1/1的slider吧,感觉会舒服很多 O
  10. 02:18:684 (3,4) - 这里的节奏也听的别扭,如果不想弄太复杂就用slider吧 O
  11. 02:47:225 (2,1) - (nazi)不是很好看的遮挡 O
  12. 03:03:441 (3) - 调整一下形状和(4)的边缘blank更好一点吧 O
Hard:
  1. AR+1 O
  2. 00:13:657 - 加个note O
  3. 02:13:819 (6,7,8) - 连续3个whistle略吵 只保留最后一个
  4. 02:53:711 (1,2,3,4) - 这里建议或者缩小间距或者拉大,否则太容易造成读图失误 O
  5. 03:02:468 (1) - 没必要的NC O
Insane:
  1. 00:08:792 (4) - slider几乎完全被分数挡住了 O
  2. 00:10:900 (4,5,6,7) - 保留白线clap即可 O
  3. 00:12:846 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - - 节奏打着很别扭,建议改一下(双白线对准时间点00:13:495 ) 改了排列
    [attachment=0:b4210]11.jpg[/attachment:b4210]
  4. 00:17:549 (1,2) - 和背景颜色太接近又被分数挡了。。。。 O
  5. 00:29:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 调成红线三连,白线三连听着非常生硬 删掉三连
  6. 00:32:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  7. 00:40:738 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^………………后面还有大量的,这曲子我真的看不到用白线三连的理由……改掉吧。至于红线三连的例子。。看这里01:08:143 (6,7,8) -
  8. 00:45:279 (1) - 前后都没有的情况下突如其来的finish... O
  9. 00:59:387 - 加个note吧 O
  10. 01:10:576 (3,4,5,6) - 非常容易导致读图失误的anit-jump,不推荐这么用 O
  11. 01:32:954 (1) - spinner结尾消声 O
  12. 01:34:900 - 跳的间距都没变的情况下突然slider速度减半感觉很糟糕 O,改间距
  13. 01:43:657 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 继续三连问题 X 这里我跟音乐鼓点
  14. 02:41:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 这个串的造型真心不好看……排的更平滑或者对称一些吧 O
  15. 03:01:495 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 三连 X 跟音乐鼓点
  16. 03:02:630 (2,3,4) - 1/4不缩间距么? O
差不多就这些了,加油~
Saigetsu_old
先mark,歌略长 diff略多,不要抱太大希望
716 Girl
Easy
00:12:846 (1) - looks ugly
00:16:738 (2) - spacing
00:32:306 (3) - ugly
01:44:954 (1) - remake for next slider
02:25:170 (3,4) - make symmetry
03:28:252 (4) - REVERSE LOOK THERE GOOD
03:29:279 - add there note

Normal
02:18:522 (3) - maybe straight
02:42:035 (3,1) - overlap
02:56:306 (5) - lookst there ugly
03:03:441 (3) - ^
03:11:711 (3) - sooooo ugly
03:29:279 - add there note

Hard
00:11:387 (4) - why such slider there
0:27:927 - add there note
00:32:143 (4) - 1 grid right
00:40:089 (3) - add there slider .for a place notes
00:40:738 add note there
00:41:062 (6) - add finish HS there
00:42:684 (3) - ugly there
00:44:630 (2) - 1 grid down
02:19:657 add slider here
02:53:711 (1,2,3,4) - spacing~
03:29:279 - add there note


Good Luck~
Topic Starter
popner
Thx. update

3er123 wrote:

Easy
00:12:846 (1) - looks ugly ok
00:16:738 (2) - spacing fixed
00:32:306 (3) - ugly ok
01:44:954 (1) - remake for next slider ok
02:25:170 (3,4) - make symmetry fixed
03:28:252 (4) - REVERSE LOOK THERE GOOD ok
03:29:279 - add there note no, it's not my style


Normal
02:18:522 (3) - maybe straight ok
02:42:035 (3,1) - overlap fixed
02:56:306 (5) - lookst there ugly ok
03:03:441 (3) - ^ ok
03:11:711 (3) - sooooo ugly ok
03:29:279 - add there note no

Hard
00:11:387 (4) - why such slider there changed
0:27:927 - add there note no
00:32:143 (4) - 1 grid right ok
00:40:089 (3) - add there slider .for a place notes remapped
00:40:738 add note there ^
00:41:062 (6) - add finish HS there no
00:42:684 (3) - ugly there no
00:44:630 (2) - 1 grid down ok
02:19:657 add slider here ok
02:53:711 (1,2,3,4) - spacing~ no
03:29:279 - add there note no


Good Luck~
DerekMcD
~Eazy~

00:07:333 (4) - Nazi: Spacing.
03:03:441 (2) - Unsnapped.
03:07:981 (1) - Fix this slider.
03:09:279 (3) - Spacing and plus, fix the slider.

I'll give you the star.

That's all I can think of.
Good luck.
Topic Starter
popner
Thx for your modding! update


kokoroanime wrote:

~Eazy~

00:07:333 (4) - Nazi: Spacing. fixed
03:03:441 (2) - Unsnapped. I don't think so.
03:07:981 (1) - Fix this slider. I don't see what you mean.
03:09:279 (3) - Spacing and plus, fix the slider. ok

I'll give you the star.

That's all I can think of.
Good luck.
merchat7
I love this song :D
As requested (m4m).

[General]

- Add KayeSara to tags because of skin?

Don't check skin and sb but didn't notice any real problem with them.

[Easy]

-1 od for short spinner like this 01:33:279 (1) ? These spinner are a little too short for an Easy.

00:12:846 (1) - Make the bump a bit more noticeable visual and gameplay wise? http://puu.sh/jNZK
00:18:035 (1) - I think it look nicer if you copy 00:16:738 (2) and make them symmetrical with each other. http://puu.sh/jNZV
00:23:387 (1,2) - These hit circle are very confusing to play because of the sound on the white ticks (00:23:549 & 00:23:873) so just do a slider instead?
00:26:630 (2) - Clap at begin perhaps
00:25:333 (4) - Really short repeating slider instead sound a lot better.
00:44:306 (1,2) - Why hit circles here, this part really doesn't feel like you should do hit circle for me. Only place you should do hit circles like this is for 00:46:576 (1,2). Here you should really consider something else.Just do a slider instead (begin on 1, ends on 2).
01:15:116 (1,2) - Use same slider shape as 01:12:522 (1,2)? I'm not fond of perfectly straight slider.
01:19:008 (2) - Copy 01:17:711 (1) here and ctrl+H then fix spacing? This slider looks really weird and I think (1) look much better.
01:30:846 (4,5,6) - Repeating slider for the same reason as 00:23:387. Alternatively, you can do a slider for (4,5) and keep the hit circle for (6).
01:54:035 (5,6) - The vocal here is different from (4) so I don't think you should do all hit circle. How about repeating slider instead to represent the change in vocal? http://puu.sh/jO3l
02:04:414 (3) - I think it's nicer if you place it here, but fine if not. http://puu.sh/jO3v
02:27:765 (1) - This is not snapped to 1.2x distant snapping. Please fix it. My main problem here is that it overlap with the end of the last slider
02:47:549 (2) - Sound a bit off for me, even through it's easy I think you should lower by 1/2 tick and put it on the red tick http://puu.sh/jO4R.
03:26:306 (1,2) - Same as 00:23:387.
03:28:252 (4) - Finish at end of this slider.

Pretty nice, some sliders I feel could be nicer, but it doesn't affect the map that much and I think some parts were a bit off with clap. It became a lot better at the second half through.

[Normal]

- Please do +1 hp, these setting are quite low for a Normal which is 4 stars and gives a more balanced difficulty spread (Easy is 1, Hard is 5)

00:09:279 (3,4) - (4) just feel weird to hit for me, so change (3) to slider and end it on (4)? Could be just me through.
00:18:035 (1) - Ctrl+J, Ctrl+H, Ctrl+R put back in same spot? Pointing slider to next notes generally gives better flow.
00:23:873 (2) - Move a bit down to avoid overlap
00:26:954 (4,5) - Stack (4) on begin of (5)? Plays better for me
00:33:603 (1) - Consider adding whistle, feel weird to hit a note without hitsound after playing a long slider.
00:36:198 (1,2,3,4) - Looks better to me like this, and if you do this, you can more easily follow the next suggestion (to move note more down so it doesn't touch hp bar) http://puu.sh/jO7W
00:39:441 (6) - Touches hp bar, consider fixing this to make your beatmap looks more polish.
00:43:981 (x) - Weird not to have anything here, how about a slider here and end it where (1) is?
01:15:765 (2) - Not too fond of how you place it, I would do more like this http://puu.sh/jO90
01:25:495 (1) - ^, don't have to follow if you don't want to http://puu.sh/jO9b
01:30:846 (1,2) - Place like this to avoid overlap? Adjust following notes of course http://puu.sh/jO9I
01:46:900 (3) - Unexpected extra repeat, place like this to make more oblivious there is going to be an extra repeat? http://puu.sh/jOaa
01:55:981 (2) - Should curve this slider too, since all the other sliders are curved here.
01:58:576 (2) - ^, this one doesn't annoy me as much.
02:47:225 (2) - Making them perfectly symmetrical looks nicer to me http://puu.sh/jObF

Good again for me.

[Hard]

00:08:306 (2) - Please copy (1) and paste it here the same way as before. http://puu.sh/jOcc
00:15:441 (1) - Make the curve a bit stronger, move the middle anchor point more left http://puu.sh/jOcr
00:16:252 (2) - ^ make the curve balance to above slider.
00:18:846 (2) - ^ make it balance to 00:18:035 (1) http://puu.sh/jOd1
00:41:387 (1,2,3) - 1.5x distant spacing between all note, place something like this and adjust slider shape http://puu.sh/jOe7 Current pattern looks not too good for me .
01:01:657 (1) - Whistle on repeat.
01:05:873 (5) - Overlap just a bit, move a bit so it doesn't for a cleaner looking map?
01:46:900 (5,6) - Curve them? Just seem nicer to me, but if you prefer it straight, it's fine http://puu.sh/jOf3
02:09:116 (1) - Whistle on repeat.
03:28:252 (7) - Finish at end.

No issue again, I think some hit circle pattern could be place in a better way for a smoother gameplay, but it's nothing major.

[Mirakurun!]

I'm not too fond of this diff, I think you should have try to map this in ar 8 and works your pattern this way. Ar 9 fits with some pattern, but for a lot of others, just seem too fast and make parts hard to read. This song isn't that fast so ar 8 should work fine. ar 9 is mainly for for 200 bpm + maps.And some jumps like at the beginning 00:05:711 (5), 00:06:522 (1), 00:09:927 (1), 00:10:900 (4). 00:11:711 (1) , 00:13:495 (1). just seem to be there to add difficulty. It's because of these jumps, that's why ar 9 play better then ar 8, if you remove them, ar 8 will definitely play better. No mod from me for this diff since I believe ar 8 works better, if you're willing to remap a little, would be nice. Could be just me through and I ain't going to force you to do this.

A shame that I didn't like Insane, would have star if I did. Well good luck!
KayeSara
[General]
  1. SliderBorder : 255,191,255
    建议把这个边缘也换成粉红色的,这个代码加到color底下
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,255,0
    Combo2 : 255,128,255
    Combo3 : 64,0,128
    Combo4 : 189,0,0
    SliderBorder : 255,191,255
Easy Normal 没找到什么问题

[Hard]
  1. 02:41:873 (6) - 这个节奏显得太长了,我建议做个来回slider从02:41:873到02:42:522,然后02:42:684放个Note
  2. 02:47:549 (3) - 缩短到02:47:873,02:47:873加Note
[Mirakurun!]
  1. AR建议用8
  2. 00:22:576 (9) - 换成2个Note舒服些
Topic Starter
popner
Thanks for your mod! Done.

merchat7 wrote:

I love this song :D
As requested (m4m).

[General]

- Add KayeSara to tags because of skin? done

Don't check skin and sb but didn't notice any real problem with them.

[Easy]

-1 od for short spinner like this 01:33:279 (1) ? These spinner are a little too short for an Easy.ok

00:12:846 (1) - Make the bump a bit more noticeable visual and gameplay wise? http://puu.sh/jNZK ok
00:18:035 (1) - I think it look nicer if you copy 00:16:738 (2) and make them symmetrical with each other. http://puu.sh/jNZV remap here
00:23:387 (1,2) - These hit circle are very confusing to play because of the sound on the white ticks (00:23:549 & 00:23:873) so just do a slider instead? ok
00:26:630 (2) - Clap at begin perhaps ok
00:25:333 (4) - Really short repeating slider instead sound a lot better. Fine for me.
00:44:306 (1,2) - Why hit circles here, this part really doesn't feel like you should do hit circle for me. Only place you should do hit circles like this is for 00:46:576 (1,2). Here you should really consider something else.Just do a slider instead (begin on 1, ends on 2). fixed
01:15:116 (1,2) - Use same slider shape as 01:12:522 (1,2)? I'm not fond of perfectly straight slider. ok
01:19:008 (2) - Copy 01:17:711 (1) here and ctrl+H then fix spacing? This slider looks really weird and I think (1) look much better. good idea
01:30:846 (4,5,6) - Repeating slider for the same reason as 00:23:387. Alternatively, you can do a slider for (4,5) and keep the hit circle for (6). repeating slider I think
01:54:035 (5,6) - The vocal here is different from (4) so I don't think you should do all hit circle. How about repeating slider instead to represent the change in vocal? http://puu.sh/jO3l replaced by two sliders
02:04:414 (3) - I think it's nicer if you place it here, but fine if not. http://puu.sh/jO3v
02:27:765 (1) - This is not snapped to 1.2x distant snapping. Please fix it. My main problem here is that it overlap with the end of the last slider fixed. It's a mistake made by me when I edit it last time.
02:47:549 (2) - Sound a bit off for me, even through it's easy I think you should lower by 1/2 tick and put it on the red tick http://puu.sh/jO4R. no...sounds strange to me
03:26:306 (1,2) - Same as 00:23:387. ok
03:28:252 (4) - Finish at end of this slider. ok

Pretty nice, some sliders I feel could be nicer, but it doesn't affect the map that much and I think some parts were a bit off with clap. It became a lot better at the second half through.

[Normal]

- Please do +1 hp, these setting are quite low for a Normal which is 4 stars and gives a more balanced difficulty spread (Easy is 1, Hard is 5)

00:09:279 (3,4) - (4) just feel weird to hit for me, so change (3) to slider and end it on (4)? Could be just me through. good idea.
00:18:035 (1) - Ctrl+J, Ctrl+H, Ctrl+R put back in same spot? Pointing slider to next notes generally gives better flow. ok
00:23:873 (2) - Move a bit down to avoid overlap fixed
00:26:954 (4,5) - Stack (4) on begin of (5)? Plays better for me ok
00:33:603 (1) - Consider adding whistle, feel weird to hit a note without hitsound after playing a long slider. remap here.
00:36:198 (1,2,3,4) - Looks better to me like this, and if you do this, you can more easily follow the next suggestion (to move note more down so it doesn't touch hp bar) http://puu.sh/jO7W ok
00:39:441 (6) - Touches hp bar, consider fixing this to make your beatmap looks more polish. fixed
00:43:981 (x) - Weird not to have anything here, how about a slider here and end it where (1) is? remap
01:15:765 (2) - Not too fond of how you place it, I would do more like this http://puu.sh/jO90 ok
01:25:495 (1) - ^, don't have to follow if you don't want to http://puu.sh/jO9b I like my pattern
01:30:846 (1,2) - Place like this to avoid overlap? Adjust following notes of course http://puu.sh/jO9I ok
01:46:900 (3) - Unexpected extra repeat, place like this to make more oblivious there is going to be an extra repeat? http://puu.sh/jOaa remap
01:55:981 (2) - Should curve this slider too, since all the other sliders are curved here. fixed
01:58:576 (2) - ^, this one doesn't annoy me as much. ^
02:47:225 (2) - Making them perfectly symmetrical looks nicer to me http://puu.sh/jObF ok

Good again for me.

[Hard]

00:08:306 (2) - Please copy (1) and paste it here the same way as before. http://puu.sh/jOcc ok
00:15:441 (1) - Make the curve a bit stronger, move the middle anchor point more left http://puu.sh/jOcr
00:16:252 (2) - ^ make the curve balance to above slider. ^
00:18:846 (2) - ^ make it balance to 00:18:035 (1) http://puu.sh/jOd1 ^
00:41:387 (1,2,3) - 1.5x distant spacing between all note, place something like this and adjust slider shape http://puu.sh/jOe7 Current pattern looks not too good for me . done
01:01:657 (1) - Whistle on repeat. ok
01:05:873 (5) - Overlap just a bit, move a bit so it doesn't for a cleaner looking map? fixed
01:46:900 (5,6) - Curve them? Just seem nicer to me, but if you prefer it straight, it's fine http://puu.sh/jOf3 I prefer straight
02:09:116 (1) - Whistle on repeat. ok
03:28:252 (7) - Finish at end. ok

No issue again, I think some hit circle pattern could be place in a better way for a smoother gameplay, but it's nothing major.

[Mirakurun!]

I'm not too fond of this diff, I think you should have try to map this in ar 8 and works your pattern this way. Ar 9 fits with some pattern, but for a lot of others, just seem too fast and make parts hard to read. This song isn't that fast so ar 8 should work fine. ar 9 is mainly for for 200 bpm + maps.And some jumps like at the beginning 00:05:711 (5), 00:06:522 (1), 00:09:927 (1), 00:10:900 (4). 00:11:711 (1) , 00:13:495 (1). just seem to be there to add difficulty. It's because of these jumps, that's why ar 9 play better then ar 8, if you remove them, ar 8 will definitely play better. No mod from me for this diff since I believe ar 8 works better, if you're willing to remap a little, would be nice. Could be just me through and I ain't going to force you to do this.

A shame that I didn't like Insane, would have star if I did. Well good luck! remapped, ar8

KayeSara wrote:

[General]
  1. SliderBorder : 255,191,255
    建议把这个边缘也换成粉红色的,这个代码加到color底下 done,给别人看了下,还是觉得颜色浅
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,255,0
    Combo2 : 255,128,255
    Combo3 : 64,0,128
    Combo4 : 189,0,0
    SliderBorder : 255,191,255
Easy Normal 没找到什么问题

[Hard]
  1. 02:41:873 (6) - 这个节奏显得太长了,我建议做个来回slider从02:41:873到02:42:522,然后02:42:684放个Note ok
  2. 02:47:549 (3) - 缩短到02:47:873,02:47:873加Note 按照^改了
[Mirakurun!]
  1. AR建议用8 改了
  2. 00:22:576 (9) - 换成2个Note舒服些 no..
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

hi miraku

General

  1. 太鼓背景有怎么不用
  2. 啥 spinnerBG图跟yuruyuri有关吗
  3. 感觉字体加投影和外发光效果会好很多
  4. 好长
Easy

00:06:035 (2) - 这个最好删了
02:27:765 (1) - spacing

Normal

00:23:387 (1,2) - 做成斜的
这世界上有种鉴别排版的方式叫全选 你会发现你的蓝色圈 太集中在中间了

Hard

00:13:495 (2,3,4) - 弯曲度太大了 in my opinion


Mirakurun!

好多unsnapped的slider 有什么事情发生了吗

SPOILER
01:45:603 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:46:900 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:47:549 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:50:954 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:09:927 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:10:252 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:10:738 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:11:225 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:11:873 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:13:657 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:14:792 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:16:252 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:16:738 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:17:062 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:18:035 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:19:008 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:21:441 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:21:927 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:22:576 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:22:900 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:23:711 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:24:198 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:26:306 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:27:116 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:27:765 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:41:387 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:45:927 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:46:576 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:46:900 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:47:549 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:48:846 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:50:143 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:51:116 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:51:603 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:52:089 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:52:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:53:062 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:02:143 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:02:792 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:03:116 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:03:441 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:03:927 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:05:711 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:06:035 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:07:008 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:07:495 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:08:306 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:08:630 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:09:116 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:09:603 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:11:711 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:12:035 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:13:819 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:14:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:15:116 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:16:738 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:18:846 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:19:495 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:21:441 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:22:089 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:25:819 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:27:603 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

先这样
Topic Starter
popner
Thx. Done

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

hi miraku

General

  1. 太鼓背景有怎么不用 fixed
  2. 啥 spinnerBG图跟yuruyuri有关吗 是作者随手画的一张图
  3. 感觉字体加投影和外发光效果会好很多 有粉色的外发光
  4. 好长
Easy

00:06:035 (2) - 这个最好删了ok
02:27:765 (1) - spacing fixed

Normal

00:23:387 (1,2) - 做成斜的 ok
这世界上有种鉴别排版的方式叫全选 你会发现你的蓝色圈 太集中在中间了

Hard

00:13:495 (2,3,4) - 弯曲度太大了 in my opinion 改了(这里ds有问题)


Mirakurun!

好多unsnapped的slider 有什么事情发生了吗 当时改了sv,正remap到40%

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01:45:603 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:46:900 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:47:549 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 01:50:954 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:09:927 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:10:252 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:10:738 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:11:225 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:11:873 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:13:657 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:14:792 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:16:252 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:16:738 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:17:062 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:18:035 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:19:008 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:21:441 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:21:927 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:22:576 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:22:900 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:23:711 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:24:198 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:26:306 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:27:116 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:27:765 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:41:387 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:45:927 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:46:576 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:46:900 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:47:549 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:48:846 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:50:143 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:51:116 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:51:603 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:52:089 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:52:738 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 02:53:062 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:02:143 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:02:792 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:03:116 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:03:441 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:03:927 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:05:711 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:06:035 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:07:008 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:07:495 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:08:306 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:08:630 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:09:116 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:09:603 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:11:711 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:12:035 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:13:819 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:14:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:15:116 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:16:738 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:18:846 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:19:495 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:21:441 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:22:089 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:25:819 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end). 03:27:603 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).

先这样
inaba-tan
BG thx ><
Topic Starter
popner

inaba-tan wrote:

BG thx ><
:)
Topic Starter
popner
Done with all mods, thx again! update
Hinsvar
Let's see how I do things here, since there's already a lot of mods... (Cute song, btw.)

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Can I say that everything looks pretty fine? Let's proceed.
>Easy
  1. 00:40:414 (4) - Clap for the entire slider?
  2. 00:59:549 (1) - Clap or Finish?
  3. 02:47:225 (2,1,2) - Clap at the end?
  4. 03:29:306 - Use 1/4 beat snap divisor and then place a note there. If you don't want to keep the divisor because of that one note, though, it's okay; it's a suggestion after all :P
>Normal
  1. 00:24:360 (3,1) - Clap?
  2. 00:59:549 (1) - Same as Easy.
  3. 02:22:252 (5) - Clap?
  4. 02:51:765 (2) - ^
  5. 02:53:062 (4) - ^
  6. 03:27:279 (3) - Clap at the end?
  7. 03:29:306 - Same as Easy. The second sentence still applies.
>Hard
  1. 00:59:549 (1) - Same as Easy.
  2. 01:01:657 (1) - Remove Whistles and add Clap at the end?
  3. 01:28:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I feel weird when I testplayed this section. I can't explain it, it's just... awkward. Still fits the music though; keeping it is fine.
  4. 02:42:846 (8,9,1,2) - Make them look like this? Your pattern looks good, so just take mine as some kind of minor suggestions.
    220,372,162846,1,0
    248,304,163008,1,8
    120,240,163333,5,0
    192,240,163495,1,0
  5. 03:29:306 - Same as Easy. The second sentence still applies.
>Mirakurun!
  1. ~17 millions of maximum score w/o mods. Wow. It's fine, though.
  2. 00:07:657 (3,4,5) - I know the song slowed a bit here, but this spacing looks unfitting.
  3. 00:31:981 (5) - Clap?
  4. 00:47:873 (3,4) - Shorten the jump here, maybe?
  5. 02:03:603 (4,5) - Stacking looks odd here. What about this?
    256,228,123927,1,0
    256,324,124089,1,0
  6. 02:16:738 (9,10,11,12) - ...Make this linear (9,10,11,12 in order)?
  7. 02:39:603 (1) - Whistle?
  8. 02:45:116 (1) - Why is a NC placed here?
  9. 03:23:549 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Cute formation.
  10. 03:29:306 - Same as Easy.
Uh... maybe just that. Hope that helps.

Good luck. I want this beatmap to get ranked ASAP :P
Topic Starter
popner

Hinsvar wrote:

Let's see how I do things here, since there's already a lot of mods... (Cute song, btw.)

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Can I say that everything looks pretty fine? Let's proceed.
>Easy
  1. 00:40:414 (4) - Clap for the entire slider? no..I don't like that
  2. 00:59:549 (1) - Clap or Finish? Add fin here: 01:02:143 (2) begin
  3. 02:47:225 (2,1,2) - Clap at the end? ok
  4. 03:29:306 - Use 1/4 beat snap divisor and then place a note there. If you don't want to keep the divisor because of that one note, though, it's okay; it's a suggestion after all :P There are already two people give me such suggestion, but I still don't want to add it.
>Normal
  1. 00:24:360 (3,1) - Clap? ok
  2. 00:59:549 (1) - Same as Easy.
  3. 02:22:252 (5) - Clap? no change
  4. 02:51:765 (2) - ^ remap and add clap
  5. 02:53:062 (4) - ^ remap and add clap
  6. 03:27:279 (3) - Clap at the end? ok
  7. 03:29:306 - Same as Easy. The second sentence still applies.
>Hard
  1. 00:59:549 (1) - Same as Easy.
  2. 01:01:657 (1) - Remove Whistles and add Clap at the end? Yeah maybe whistles sounds strange here, so I lower the volume
  3. 01:28:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I feel weird when I testplayed this section. I can't explain it, it's just... awkward. Still fits the music though; keeping it is fine. I can't come up with a new pattern so I'll keep it
  4. 02:42:846 (8,9,1,2) - Make them look like this? Your pattern looks good, so just take mine as some kind of minor suggestions. I'll keep mine
    220,372,162846,1,0
    248,304,163008,1,8
    120,240,163333,5,0
    192,240,163495,1,0
  5. 03:29:306 - Same as Easy. The second sentence still applies.
>Mirakurun!
  1. ~17 millions of maximum score w/o mods. Wow. It's fine, though.
  2. 00:07:657 (3,4,5) - I know the song slowed a bit here, but this spacing looks unfitting. Still a anti-jump, but increased ds.
  3. 00:31:981 (5) - Clap? fixed
  4. 00:47:873 (3,4) - Shorten the jump here, maybe? no change..
  5. 02:03:603 (4,5) - Stacking looks odd here. What about this?
    256,228,123927,1,0 [color=#FF0000]no..I like stack, it plays fine for me[/color]
    256,324,124089,1,0
  6. 02:16:738 (9,10,11,12) - ...Make this linear (9,10,11,12 in order)? fixed
  7. 02:39:603 (1) - Whistle? no change
  8. 02:45:116 (1) - Why is a NC placed here? fixed
  9. 03:23:549 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Cute formation. thx
  10. 03:29:306 - Same as Easy.
Uh... maybe just that. Hope that helps.

Good luck. I want this beatmap to get ranked ASAP :P
Thx for your mod! update
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ popner ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Change Title : Majokko Mirakurun(Don't forgot full submit).

[Mirakurun!]


  1. 00:27:522 (1) - Add finish.
  2. 00:38:792 - ^
  3. 01:02:143 - ^
  4. 00:38:306 - Add a note to here,have Drum to here.
  5. 00:53:062 (8) - Add new combo,jump and vocal start to here.
  6. 00:55:657 (5) - ^
  7. 01:46:252 (7) - ^
  8. 01:02:306 (2) - Remove this note sound much better.
  9. 01:03:279 (4,1,2) - Try like this rhythm,much better with me.
  10. 01:19:657 (11) - Add new combo,don't using long combo pls.
  11. 02:13:495 (8) - ^
  12. 02:28:414 (10) - ^
  13. 03:14:792 (10) - ^

[Hard]


  1. 00:13:981 - Add a note to here,have vocal to here.
  2. 00:15:116 - ^
  3. 02:55:008 (5) - Add new combo.

[Normal]


  1. 02:51:116 (5) - Add new combo.

[Easy]


  1. 02:09:603 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.

That's all ~

Good luck ~
Topic Starter
popner

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ popner ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Change Title : Majokko Mirakurun(Don't forgot full submit). fixed

[Mirakurun!]


  1. 00:27:522 (1) - Add finish. ok
  2. 00:38:792 - ^ ok
  3. 01:02:143 - ^ ok
  4. 00:38:306 - Add a note to here,have Drum to here. fixed
  5. 00:53:062 (8) - Add new combo,jump and vocal start to here. fixed
  6. 00:55:657 (5) - ^ fixed
  7. 01:46:252 (7) - ^ fixed
  8. 01:02:306 (2) - Remove this note sound much better. remapped here
  9. 01:03:279 (4,1,2) - Try like this rhythm,much better with me. Add triplet at 01:03:603 (1)
  10. 01:19:657 (11) - Add new combo,don't using long combo pls. fixed
  11. 02:13:495 (8) - ^ fixed
  12. 02:28:414 (10) - ^ fixed
  13. 03:14:792 (10) - ^ fixed

[Hard]


  1. 00:13:981 - Add a note to here,have vocal to here. fixed
  2. 00:15:116 - ^ fixed
  3. 02:55:008 (5) - Add new combo.fixed

[Normal]


  1. 02:51:116 (5) - Add new combo.fixed

[Easy]


  1. 02:09:603 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.fixed

That's all ~

Good luck ~

Ty for mod! update
winber1
Mirakurun!

00:04:738 (2) - may it's just me, but it just feels more correct if you added a clap here.
00:38:143 (7) - i'd add a new combo
01:32:954 (1) - just to be more corrrect, the spinner should probably start at 01:32:792 -
01:34:576 - add note to be more consistent with 00:30:846 (5) - and 00:41:387 (1) - and etc.
01:34:738 - a little empty on hitsounds here..
01:54:035 (1) - remove combo here or add a new combo at 00:47:873 (3) -
02:20:468 - makes more sense to me to add a note here to follow the flow http://puu.sh/kE57 or something

Hard

00:13:981 - add note
00:28:414 (1,2) - too close to each other. THey look as if they are 1/2 tick apart imo.
02:56:306 (5) - makes sense to me to add a new combo here
03:06:522 (3,4) - switch notes around http://puu.sh/kE9m

Normal

00:12:846 (1) - would make a lot more sense imo if you ended at 00:13:495 - idk you could just do something like http://puu.sh/kEaw
00:15:441 (1,2,1,2) - erm just really awkward. Even if they are onthe white beat, I feel beginners still mess this up just because the white ticks feel so awkward to play/. Once a beginner hears the song, they will probably realize how it goes and in fact a rhythm like this will actually be easier than what you have: http://puu.sh/kEbH Do the same thing for 00:18:035 (1,2). Or just do something similar to 01:22:900 (1,2,3,4)
01:15:765 (1) - remove combo... is this just a random mistake? ._.
01:22:900 (1,2,3,4) - could be a little confusing at first i guess. There's definitely a few way sto make this a little simpler.
01:52:738 (4) - new combo
02:56:306 (5) - ^?
03:18:360 (1,2,1,2) - just awkward imo.
03:28:252 (1) - for consistency reasons remove combo, or add a new combo to parts like this in other difficulties.

didn't mod easy because it was going over my 10 minute limit, but it looks fine.

a little late, but anyways, hope this helps a bit :3~~
Topic Starter
popner

winber1 wrote:

Mirakurun!

00:04:738 (2) - may it's just me, but it just feels more correct if you added a clap here. fixed
00:38:143 (7) - i'd add a new combo 00:37:495 (1) NC here
01:32:954 (1) - just to be more corrrect, the spinner should probably start at 01:32:792 - start at 01:33:116 now
01:34:576 - add note to be more consistent with 00:30:846 (5) - and 00:41:387 (1) - and etc. fixed
01:34:738 - a little empty on hitsounds here.. lack of hitsounds. fixed
01:54:035 (1) - remove combo here or add a new combo at 00:47:873 (3) - add a new combo at 00:47:873 (3)
02:20:468 - makes more sense to me to add a note here to follow the flow http://puu.sh/kE57 or something 02:20:306 (3) - change to a slider

Hard

00:13:981 - add note fixed
00:28:414 (1,2) - too close to each other. THey look as if they are 1/2 tick apart imo. a mistake
02:56:306 (5) - makes sense to me to add a new combo here ok, also ds error here..
03:06:522 (3,4) - switch notes around http://puu.sh/kE9m remapped

Normal

00:12:846 (1) - would make a lot more sense imo if you ended at 00:13:495 - idk you could just do something like http://puu.sh/kEaw done, also add a note at 00:13:819 (2) for it is a crescendo section
00:15:441 (1,2,1,2) - erm just really awkward. Even if they are onthe white beat, I feel beginners still mess this up just because the white ticks feel so awkward to play/. Once a beginner hears the song, they will probably realize how it goes and in fact a rhythm like this will actually be easier than what you have: http://puu.sh/kEbH Do the same thing for 00:18:035 (1,2). Or just do something similar to 01:22:900 (1,2,3,4) I think 01:22:900 (1,2,3,4) is the solution
01:15:765 (1) - remove combo... is this just a random mistake? ._. yes..
01:22:900 (1,2,3,4) - could be a little confusing at first i guess. There's definitely a few way sto make this a little simpler. I like this pattern
01:52:738 (4) - new combo fixed
02:56:306 (5) - ^? ok
03:18:360 (1,2,1,2) - just awkward imo.use 01:22:900 (1,2,3,4)
03:28:252 (1) - for consistency reasons remove combo, or add a new combo to parts like this in other difficulties. removed

didn't mod easy because it was going over my 10 minute limit, but it looks fine.

a little late, but anyways, hope this helps a bit :3~~
Ty for mod! update
Neptunus
Hey!
总体:皮肤好赞!

Easy:
01:19:008 (1) - 取消这个newcombo,因为要和前面的保持一致。当然了,01:20:306 (1) - 这个为了好看就加上newcombo吧~

Normal:
00:25:333 (1) - 取消newcombo,因为是一段旋律的~
00:26:143 (2) - 这个加newcombo
Hard:
00:25:333 (1) - 与normal一样
00:29:711 (5) - newcombo
00:30:846 (4) - 换成个note吧,否则这边的pattern会比较乱
同时,在上一个的基础上,在这里加一个note00:31:170 - ,newcombo
02:53:711 (1,2,3,4) - 这个建议再拉开点,不用太大

Mirakuran:
00:07:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nah,这个绝对不行吧= =.......建议换一下排列,用newcombo法貌似解决不了问题
00:43:333 (1) - 去掉newcombo,没必要吧这里
00:47:873 (1,2) - 拉近
00:54:035 (4,1) - 这里提个tip~ 这俩如果重叠在一起的话,更好看,IMO
01:51:765 (3,4,5,6,7) - 由于颜色较浅的关系,这里的排列看不太清,建议调整一下
02:45:116 (9) - 这个为啥不newcombo了?对于这个来说02:42:522 (1) -

好图!加油,good luck on ranking~
:idea:
B2IN
2diff

[hard]

00:15:441 (1) - finish head of slider

[Mirakurun!]

00:15:441 (1) - finish

00:15:116 (8) - nc for fast slider

00:37:495 (1) - delete nc

00:38:143 (3) - nc

01:01:495 (11) - overlap. it's not good

01:12:522 (2) - finish head of slider02:16:738 (9) - nc


gl 8-)
Topic Starter
popner

Neptunus wrote:

Hey!
总体:皮肤好赞!

Easy:
01:19:008 (1) - 取消这个newcombo,因为要和前面的保持一致。当然了,01:20:306 (1) - 这个为了好看就加上newcombo吧~ fixed

Normal:
00:25:333 (1) - 取消newcombo,因为是一段旋律的~ fixed
00:26:143 (2) - 这个加newcombo ^
Hard:
00:25:333 (1) - 与normal一样 fixed
00:29:711 (5) - newcombo ^
00:30:846 (4) - 换成个note吧,否则这边的pattern会比较乱
同时,在上一个的基础上,在这里加一个note00:31:170 - ,newcombo fixed
02:53:711 (1,2,3,4) - 这个建议再拉开点,不用太大 会影响后面anti-jump

Mirakuran:
00:07:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nah,这个绝对不行吧= =.......建议换一下排列,用newcombo法貌似解决不了问题 no change, sorry
00:43:333 (1) - 去掉newcombo,没必要吧这里 为了好读图
00:47:873 (1,2) - 拉近 no change..Insane这样很正常吧..
00:54:035 (4,1) - 这里提个tip~ 这俩如果重叠在一起的话,更好看,IMO 两个梗都是对称的, 不好调, sorry
01:51:765 (3,4,5,6,7) - 由于颜色较浅的关系,这里的排列看不太清,建议调整一下 ok
02:45:116 (9) - 这个为啥不newcombo了?对于这个来说02:42:522 (1) - fixed

好图!加油,good luck on ranking~
:idea:

B2IN wrote:

2diff

[hard]

00:15:441 (1) - finish head of slider fixed


[Mirakurun!]

00:15:441 (1) - finish fixed

00:15:116 (8) - nc for fast slider ok

00:37:495 (1) - delete nc no, for consistent of nc

00:38:143 (3) - nc ^

01:01:495 (11) - overlap. it's not good I intend to overlap them

01:12:522 (2) - finish head of slider fixed

02:16:738 (9) - nc fixed


gl 8-)
Ty for ur mod! update
Verdisphena
Sorry popner but I didn't find anything wrong, you should call a mat to check this.
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