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Crest - Alive ~ Alone

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happy30
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zondag 18 april 2021 at 22:22:27

Artist: Crest
Title: Alive ~ Alone
Tags: yurika yurica Hanatan crest core seafh c79 comiket 79 pop japanese jpop j-pop rock jrock j-rock poprock pop-rock 花たん ユリカ jeetsingh track 8 #8 2010 クレスト
BPM: 98
Filesize: 8264kb
Play Time: 05:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,9 stars, 896 notes)


Download: Crest - Alive ~ Alone
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2012 Mapping!
For rank in 2021 thanks to VINXIS <3

bg by 瓶賀/seafh
Natteke


Also I think hitsounds are a bit too loud :C
Verdisphena
pro happy o:
tieff
Can I make a diff?
Topic Starter
happy30
yes you can
Insane is done
Fiya
This is the most amazing/fun/mindblowing map I have played so far on osu.

Edit: Also can I make a taiko for this? What I've mapped so far is turning out pretty decent.

Edit2: added diff here so I don't double post :P

Download: Hanatan - Alive ~ Alone (happy30) [Fiya's Taiko Oni].osu
Jenny
I blame Gladi for getting me here
GladiOol
you better ungrave this ;~;

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/347466 - could've been 600+ combo if I didn't make that stupid miss at 248 combo.
Natteke
1rd and 8st
Topic Starter
happy30
0rd and 9rd
Natteke
H P
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Nyquill
MY BODY IS READY

ITS FUCKING HAPPENING
yeahyeahyeahhh
01:27:793 (2) - Maybe new combo here instead of on 1, so people don't think it's a jump from 1 -> 2 (new pattern/rhythm w/e)
01:30:034 (1) - I think this could also continue the rhythmn/pattern like 1 note into 1/2 slider. Don't really hear a longer slider
02:40:205 (2) - Same thing as suggested @ 01:27:793 (2)
02:42:446 (1) - Same thing as suggested @ 01:30:034 (1), but these feel continuous
03:52:964 - The spacing between the notes feel a bit unnatural during this part. Sliders go fast but the notes are spaced really close (the .6 feels too low). Feels like they should be a bit further.
Topic Starter
happy30
thank you! it helped a lot
yeahyeahyeahhh
You're welcome
Yoeri
happy30cm

[Insane]
00:14:112 (4) - Try catching the vocals at 00:14:418 as well.
00:18:398 (2,3) - This doesn't really make sense. I'd say at least have an object start at 00:18:704.
00:28:075 (6,1) - Increase distance to match the others.
00:28:484 (1) - Symmetry pls.
00:38:827 (3) - Replace by two circles or make (2) a return slider and put a cirle after it.
00:43:827 (2) - ^
00:54:172 (1) - ^
00:56:241 (1) - ^
00:57:448 - For these slow parts I would suggest increasing the distances just enough so that the objects don't overlap. It looks better and helps with flow.
00:58:483 (4) - Symmetry pls.
00:59:172 (6) - ^
01:00:896 (3) - Flip this vertically? (Also symmetry)
01:07:448 (7) - Symmetry
01:08:828 (4) - Okay I'm done pointing these out already
01:17:448 (6) - Replace by a circle or silence the slider end.
01:23:138 (1) - Replace by two circles.
01:27:276 (3) - ^
01:38:827 (1) - Put a circle before this spinner.
01:41:931 (5,1) - Increase distance or stack (or a happy30™ Antijump™)?
01:59:517 (1) - This SV change is a bit extreme.
02:07:447 (3) - Same as 00:38:827.
02:29:860 (6) - Same as 01:17:448.
02:35:550 (1) - Replace by two circles.
02:36:412 (3,1) - Curve the other way.
02:39:688 (1) - Replace by two circles.
03:11:929 (1) - Put a circle in front of the spinner.
03:28:309 (6) - Replace by two circles.
03:30:722 (2,3) - Switch these around.
04:10:722 (3) - Two circles here as well.
04:18:653 (2,3) - Switch these around.
04:26:929 (2,3) - ^
04:28:998 (2,3) - ^
04:39:343 (3,4,5) - The distance isn't equal.
04:47:274 (2,3,4) - Put the circle first and then the sliders.
04:54:516 (2,3,4) - ^
04:55:895 (2,3) - Again, switch these around.
04:58:998 (2,3) - ^
05:01:585 (1) - Put a circle in front of this.
Kyubey
Hi, mod because your map is sexy. Maybe some stuff will be nazi, because there's almost nothing to catch
[Easy]
00:58:483 (4) - how about bending the other way for better flow and looking with 00:57:793 (2) - ? like this
01:21:758 (1,2,1) - how about making a perfect triangle?
01:24:689 (2) - Ctrl+G?
01:36:414 (1) - remove NC and add it 01:36:758 (3) - here because same colours used here 01:34:345 (3,4,1) -
01:41:931 (5,1) - how about stack?
03:02:964 (2,3,4) - make spacing same?
03:41:585 (1,2,1) - perfect triangle?
04:58:136 (3) - Ctrl+G?

Awww, sorry, i really don't know how2mod good maps :(
Have my star instead.
lightlance7
00:22:378 (1) - circle before this?
01:17:965 (1) - this feels really awkward
02:30:377 (1) - ^
03:50:033 (2) - feels like it would be better if moved 2 1/4s to the left
03:51:067 (4) - ^
03:52:102 (2) - ^
Kiai time is long, shouldn't it be better to shorten it?
Don
blablabla m4m

Might be a good idea to redo your sliders. They're using the old algorhythm!

Diff
AR 8.5-9, the current AR feels a little low. Maybe try a custom normal-hitwhistle, the default one makes my ears bleed
00:25:532 (5,6) - These notes' timing sounds a little off
00:35:380 (2,3,4) - Keep spacing here consistent! Try two 2.7 jumps and two 3.7 jumps perhaps?
00:40:551 (4) - The anti-jump here feels a little unnecessary
01:47:103 (1,2,3) - This combo doesn't really make sense spacing-wise. Try to be a little bit more consistent
01:55:379 (1,2,3) - ^
01:59:517 (1) - Up the spacing on this note a bit
03:04:689 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing in this combo seems weirdly low. It doesn't seem to be mapped on any sort of musical cues, might want to up the spacing a bit
03:16:412 (2) - Get the spacing here consistent!
03:30:378 (1,2,3) - Up the spacing here a little bit
04:15:550 (4) - Up the spacing a bit here
04:58:136 (3) - Control + G?
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