Usatsurai - Tsugai Kogarashi

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Beren
谢谢:D
S h i a
too 2 to do

Edit:Modded in IRC
Kite
[Easy]
00:39:105 (3) - Vocal feels as if this should be new combo to me instead of 00:40:305 (1)
01:15:105 (1,1,1) - Might be a bad idea to use single circles for this hm.. maybe make this 01:15:705 (1) - into a slider ending on the last vocal?
01:52:684 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:57:372 (1) - ^
02:45:184 (1) - ^
02:46:122 (3) - new combo here instead
03:35:578 (5) - Is not snapped to red line
03:34:984 (4,5,6) - Again this case, not sure what you can do here, maybe start spinner 03:34:984 already ?

[Kiiwa]
00:01:305 (1) - x107 y259
00:42:705 (7) - Shorten by 1/4?
00:53:505 (2,1,2) - This layout seems a bit stiff for this part, try this if you like it http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/258552
00:59:505 - add beat at sliderend of 00:58:305 (1) ?
02:04:637 (2) - feels better to remove this beat
02:09:090 - add beat on sliderend 02:08:153 (3) ?
03:04:403 (3) - x301 y289
03:04:168 (2) - 2 grid up 1 left

[S h i a]
02:53:622 (3,4) - this jumps feels a little too much for me, maybe reduce it a bit? something like this feels better for the flow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/258566

[Insane]
00:54:705 (8) - remove?
02:08:622 (1) - extend by 1/4 and respace?

[Overall]
Incredible and amazing mapset... all difficulties were handled, made with care and thought.
The hitsounding is superb and suits the song beautifully... magnificent work especially for S h i a's difficulty.
It's been a long time since I've seen a mapset like this
V a n i l a
i think this song name is tsugai kogarashi
Nymph
Hi Nymph here and request from ingame.

General:
SKIN有cursortrail.png 但是却没有cursor....

sliderfollowcircle-0.png应该是sliderfollowcircle.png因为只有一帧吧.

有hitcitcle的话就得写sliderborder进每个OSU文件 像这样 SliderBorder : 255,255,255 写在combo colour的最下面

目测kiiwa难度的红线与别的难度不同 全部统一一下吧

各难度的stack系数都很低哎o.o 很容易被挑


Easy:
Issues
AR-1吗o.o 上次AR3都有BAT说我高 我气不打一处来

Hitsound
00:39:105 (1) - 这个结尾怎么突然有个whistle呢 很奇怪
00:44:505 (2) - 也是 感觉这whistle并不适合这里 嘛(后面不提啦 我感觉前面音乐都很柔和 不太适合下那种whistle 01:17:997 (1) - 这之后用就合适= =
03:36:318 (1) - 转盘略吵 建议弄静点


Kiiwa:
Issues
掉血略高 建议-1

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:17:429 (1) - 我觉得这个有点难以判断 因为这里变了红线 或许用个slider更好点
01:53:387 (4,1,2) - 1的间距略微妙
03:02:997 (1,3) - 可以叠更好点
03:18:351 (1) - 这也是 变红线了最好不要叠?拿出去更好看清下落外圈 好读点(只是建议 结尾同
03:32:014 (5,6) - 还是间距nazi 5往下一点
这种遮挡作为normal略坑 以后找MATBAT的时候千万别让特别nazi的人看。。要不感觉很危险 我刚被戳过


S h i a:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:13:905 (7,1,2) - 没什么不好但是还是感觉略空虚

Hitsound
03:36:503 (1) - 也是略吵了感觉


Insane:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:01:305 (4) - 像这样的尽量再叠好点么
02:17:176 (1) - 其实我觉得这break的节奏超带感不map可惜了有点= =
03:18:351 (1) - 这个离屏幕中间太远了转盘完了很难够到的。。。

Hitsound
03:36:503 (1) - 还是觉得太吵了


大概就这样
liselisa
[S h i a]
00:48:105 这个来回slider少来回一次
00:52:905 同上
00:57:705 同上,这个改不改听起来感觉差不多
02:02:528 还是同上。。感觉这个地方的时候歌词都是3个字的是不是3下要好听点
02:46:473 3个短slider这里好像不怎么好听...刚才打时候这个地方我印象最深= =!
03:04:872 这个地方貌似可以这样?slider感觉浪费了一段节奏
03:08:622 同上
03:16:122 还是同上。。搞几个远一点的跳估计要爽一点,最后的高潮了。。
spboxer3
我來騙KD的
因為比較懶 所以只看unrankable的((slap

[general]


  • Settings
  1. 紅線並沒有統一:
    在kiiwa的難度裡多了
    03:17:528 - BPM of 100.000
    03:18:128 - BPM of 67.000

  2. 最低的Stack Leniency不能低於3你現在全度都低於3摟~
  3. 因為妳有放Skin所以需要個sliderbroder

[Easy]


  • Settings
  1. SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999這個最好改一下~改成0.8吧...


mapping
  1. 03:34:984 (4) - 這邊用slider是對不到線的~不能用slider


紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

恩...其他的diff我也看過了~應該是沒有什麼unrankable的 ((好啦 其實是我沒有時間了 沒時間幫妳看排列 只能幫妳看看Unrankable的部份 我要去上課了掰掰>_>
zero2442
求背景换成这个!!!!!!
http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av94807/
Topic Starter
Beren

zero2442 wrote:

求背景换成这个!!!!!!
http://www.bilibili.tv/video/av94807/
无限菊花
Kiiwa
:)
vivicat
快点搞rank好吗 :o
Axey
\rank rank/

Insane

00:11:505(6)-remove clap
00:12:105(1)-add clap
00:19:455(2)-remove clap
00:19:605(3)-remove clap ; add finish
00:19:905(5)-add clap
00:20:505(6,7)-(6)remove clap ; (7)add finish
00:22:755(2)-remove clap
00:24:105-~00:27:705(3)-^ (如果觉得这样比较好的话后面相似部分也这样修改下吧~<_> nazi
00:41:955(3)-remove clap
LKs


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Topic Starter
Beren
谢谢谢谢谢谢谢谢谢谢
grasscarp
Easy
03:11:561 这红线是不用的吧?

S h i a
03:27:849 (5,6,7) - 有点远我觉得..我以为是1/2

Insane
00:31:899 (2) - ...这个有点远!
00:39:099 (2) - 太长了么?
01:07:599 (3) - clap
01:51:747 (5) - 往下一格?

快rank吧!
Mystica
怒掏了個clewota的verz在自己坑著玩略爽 star
vivicat
骗kds?闪开,让职业的来

[Insane]
00:01:299 (4) - 没叠好
00:02:499 (1) - remove nc
00:03:099 (3) - nc
00:04:899 (1,2,3) - 搞成直线吧
00:12:099 (1) - remove nc
00:12:699 (3) - nc
00:20:499 (6) - 没叠好
00:50:799 (2) - 感觉还不如分开。。
01:15:099 (1) - remove nc
01:15:099 (3) - nc
01:15:099 (1,2) - 这两个反过来?
01:35:809 (3) - 没叠好
01:49:872 (5) - 稍微往下搞点弧度?
03:23:691 (2) - 没叠好
03:30:820 (2) - ^

[shia]
00:13:899 (7) - 这个来个减速吧?。。。后面总感觉少东西了?
00:19:899 (4) - finish at begin
00:22:299 (1) - clap at begin
00:29:199 (4) - remove nc
00:29:499 (5) - nc
00:42:999 (4) - delete this note
00:50:799 (5) - 和后面的00:52:299 (3) - 叠一下吧
00:59:499 (1) - remove nc
01:00:699 (5) - nc
01:11:799 (4) - delete this not
01:55:028 (4) - 垂直镜像一下,翻到下面来?
02:53:387 (2) - 和后面叠好了吧

[kiiwa]
00:00:099 (1) - 结尾没叠好
00:03:999 (4) - ^
02:28:075 (4) - ^

[easy]
03:12:303 (4,5,6) - snap
03:14:679 (2,3,4) - ^
后面还有,用aimod吧 =A=
lovhin456
Hello, sorry for the huge delay

[General]
- Move to pending ?
- Easy is missing a red timing section at 03:35:610 with a BPM of 101
- Please move stack leniency, it should never be on the very start or the very end

[Skin]
- Since you have a cursor tail please add a cursor to complete the set
- Delete playskip because is not used in gameplay
- I don't if it is me but the spinner circle while spinning the center ... moves a little weird
- The word spin is cut in spinner-spin

[Easy]
- 01:48:934 ~ Maybe a new combo here is a good idea ?
- 03:04:972 ~ ^
- 03:08:153 ~ ^
- 03:12:372 ~ ^

[Kiiwa]
- 00:03:999 ~ Stack better under (2)s end, using grid level 4 might help
- 00:16:899 ~ This one too, just a little more
- 00:22:299 ~ Add a new combo for the start of a new lyric
- 00:27:399 ~ Add a new combo, same reason as above
- 00:31:999 ~ Shorten this slider by 1/2 and move it to the next big white tick then add a note on this spot
- 00:32:199 ~ Add a new combo for lyrics
- 00:42:699 (7,1) ~ I strongly suggest you don't do this in a diff like this one, first because players that have played until now a constant will find this like a suprise and most likely fail then secondly it doesn't sound very good imo, it would be better to just end (7) on the previous red tick
- 01:05:499 ~ This formation may be hard but I don't think that hard in any case it would be nice to add a new combo here
- 01:47:059 ~ It would be good if you add a repeat here imo, the transition and flow between this and the next slider feels better
- 01:57:372 ~ I don't know how to explain this well but removing a repeat and adding a note in the place of where the last repeat was suits more the feel and lyrics of the song, I know this entirely my opinion so do as you like
- 02:00:418 ~ To follow the lyrics more shorten this slider by 1/2 then move it to the next white tick and add a note here ?
- 02:17:528 ~ This should be a bit more far
- 02:28:075 ~ Try to stack better
- 02:49:637 ~ I'm a little worried about the formation you have here, I think some might have problems with it, maybe a new combo on (4) will help ?
- 03:27:255 ~ Stack better

[S h i a]
- 00:13:899 ~ It would be better and make more sense if you added the new combo for the slow down sliders
- 01:44:247 ~ This new combo doesn't seem necessary
- 02:13:778 ~ Remove new combo here

[Insane]
- I couldn't find anything, looks really good and nice flow

Very nice overall
Topic Starter
Beren

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello, sorry for the huge delay (*´∀`)

[General]
- Move to pending ? fixed
- Easy is missing a red timing section at 03:35:610 with a BPM of 101 fixed
- Please move stack leniency, it should never be on the very start or the very end fixed

[Skin]
- Since you have a cursor tail please add a cursor to complete the set fixed
- Delete playskip because is not used in gameplay fixed
- I don't if it is me but the spinner circle while spinning the center ... moves a little weird fixed
- The word spin is cut in spinner-spin fixed

[Easy]
- 01:48:934 ~ Maybe a new combo here is a good idea ? fixed
- 03:04:972 ~ ^ fixed
- 03:08:153 ~ ^ fixed
- 03:12:372 ~ ^ fixed

[Kiiwa]
- 00:03:999 ~ Stack better under (2)s end, using grid level 4 might help fixed
- 00:16:899 ~ This one too, just a little more fixed
- 00:22:299 ~ Add a new combo for the start of a new lyric fixed
- 00:27:399 ~ Add a new combo, same reason as above fixed
- 00:31:999 ~ Shorten this slider by 1/2 and move it to the next big white tick then add a note on this spot fixed
- 00:32:199 ~ Add a new combo for lyrics fixed
- 00:42:699 (7,1) ~ I strongly suggest you don't do this in a diff like this one, first because players that have played until now a constant will find this like a suprise and most likely fail then secondly it doesn't sound very good imo, it would be better to just end (7) on the previous red tick fixed
- 01:05:499 ~ This formation may be hard but I don't think that hard in any case it would be nice to add a new combo here fixed
- 01:47:059 ~ It would be good if you add a repeat here imo, the transition and flow between this and the next slider feels better fixed
- 01:57:372 ~ I don't know how to explain this well but removing a repeat and adding a note in the place of where the last repeat was suits more the feel and lyrics of the song, I know this entirely my opinion so do as you like
- 02:00:418 ~ To follow the lyrics more shorten this slider by 1/2 then move it to the next white tick and add a note here ?
- 02:17:528 ~ This should be a bit more far fixed
- 02:28:075 ~ Try to stack better fixed
- 02:49:637 ~ I'm a little worried about the formation you have here, I think some might have problems with it, maybe a new combo on (4) will help ? fixed
- 03:27:255 ~ Stack better fixed

[S h i a]
- 00:13:899 ~ It would be better and make more sense if you added the new combo for the slow down sliders fixed
- 01:44:247 ~ This new combo doesn't seem necessary fixed
- 02:13:778 ~ Remove new combo here fixed

[Insane]
- I couldn't find anything, looks really good and nice flow :3

Very nice overall
thanks! >~<
lovhin456
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