1. Easy (2,75 stars, 92 notes)
2. Hard (4,88 stars, 216 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 330 notes)
4. Normal (4,25 stars, 135 notes)

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1. Your BG does not contain Kobato. Kobato is mad, please fix this.
2. normal-slidertick.wav should be atleast 44 bytes large.

1. CS +1
2. 00:02:990 (1,2,3,4) - Durr center this
3. 00:12:915 (4) - This slider looks a tad bit off.
4. 00:20:584 (3) - ctrl+r?
5. 00:30:284 (2) - The 2nd repeat is kinda covered up. It's fine for higher diffs, but it's an easy, so yeah, you should probably fix this in some way.
6. 00:30:284 (2,3) - Imo the 1/4 then 1/2 feels hella awkward to play in general, let alone in an easy. You could just drop the slider 00:31:637 (3), and put a note at 00:31:863 (and/or 00:32:088) instead.
7. 00:44:043 (5) - Move back to 00:43:930 and extend 1/4.
8. 01:05:697 (5,6) - Herp spacing
9. 01:19:006 (1,1) - Fairly sure the recovery time here is kinda short for an Easy.
10. 01:22:389 (2,3) - This feels weird, but idk.
11. 01:26:787 (5) - Move to 01:26:675 - and extend 1/4.
12. 01:29:156 (2) - Remove whistle?

1. AR -1?
2. 00:17:427 (1) - This is kinda not centered in the square. Make the pattern round the middle axis, then rotate it and place it back or smth.
3. 00:52:051 (1) - I think you should avoid starting on 1/4 like this. Just feels weird in a normal for me.
4. 01:29:156 (3) - Remove whistle.

1. 00:03:103 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.
2. 00:03:893 (4) - Wait 1/3? This should be 1/4 yeah.
3. 01:15:171 (1) - ;_;
4. 01:29:156 (6) - Remove whistle.

1. 00:23:291 (2) - derp ugly.
2. 01:16:073 (3) - Might be confusing with the other 2 sliders looking exactly alike but with 1 repeat less.
3. 01:25:547 (6) - This slidershape looks out of place ;_;

CXu wrote:

[General]

1. Your BG does not contain Kobato. Kobato is mad, please fix this. I can't because when I start searching for a nice background with her, I'm eventually ending up fa...scinating how adorable she is =w=
2. normal-slidertick.wav should be atleast 44 bytes large. fixed

[Easy]

1. CS +1 sure
2. 00:02:990 (1,2,3,4) - Durr center this ok
3. 00:12:915 (4) - This slider looks a tad bit off. not really
4. 00:20:584 (3) - ctrl+r? no
5. 00:30:284 (2) - The 2nd repeat is kinda covered up. It's fine for higher diffs, but it's an easy, so yeah, you should probably fix this in some way. I simply deleted the note before it xD
6. 00:30:284 (2,3) - Imo the 1/4 then 1/2 feels hella awkward to play in general, let alone in an easy. You could just drop the slider 00:31:637 (3), and put a note at 00:31:863 (and/or 00:32:088) instead. yeah, sure
7. 00:44:043 (5) - Move back to 00:43:930 and extend 1/4.mhm
8. 01:05:697 (5,6) - Herp spacing =w=
9. 01:19:006 (1,1) - Fairly sure the recovery time here is kinda short for an Easy. sure thing
10. 01:22:389 (2,3) - This feels weird, but idk. not really
11. 01:26:787 (5) - Move to 01:26:675 - and extend 1/4. nah
12. 01:29:156 (2) - Remove whistle? no

Why so hard Easy ;_; because that song's weird and sounds so weird when mapped in 1/1s =w=

[Normal]

1. AR -1? sure
2. 00:17:427 (1) - This is kinda not centered in the square. Make the pattern round the middle axis, then rotate it and place it back or smth. I guess it's alright...
3. 00:52:051 (1) - I think you should avoid starting on 1/4 like this. Just feels weird in a normal for me. it fits the song, so it's alright~
4. 01:29:156 (3) - Remove whistle. no

Not much here really, but all the changes to 1/4 might be confusing for a Normal. this was supposed to be more like a Normal+, also the beginners need to learn that the songs aren't based on 1/2s always~

[Hard]

1. 00:03:103 (2) - Unsnapped sliderend.a little snapping mistake, fixed
2. 00:03:893 (4) - Wait 1/3? This should be 1/4 yeah. ^
3. 01:15:171 (1) - ;_; should be alright now
4. 01:29:156 (6) - Remove whistle. =w=

[Insane]

1. 00:23:291 (2) - derp ugly. fixed
2. 01:16:073 (3) - Might be confusing with the other 2 sliders looking exactly alike but with 1 repeat less. it's alright, that's an Insane difficulty after all. besides, it's one of the parts in the map I like the most~
3. 01:25:547 (6) - This slidershape looks out of place ;_; came up with something a lot better

Not-so-long modpost is long short thanks a lot~

happy30 wrote:

[General]
The videofile is quite big. I could cut it down to ~10mb without harming the quality if you want. if that wouldn't be a problem for you, why not~
The BG file is also quite big maybe compress it a bit more. if it's about the background, I guess it's fine... that's just 300KBs more than the size of a usual BG.

[Easy]
I think you should make the spacing equal throughout the diff. Somehow it looks like you couldnt decide between 0.8 or 1.0 so you changed it every now and then xD I just noticed that, ahaha 8D thanks for pointing that out!

00:10:209 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. I don't really know what's wrong with that...
01:00:284 (2) - ^_^

[Normal]
01:20:584 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. as above
01:28:592 (2) - the endpoint doesn't follow anything in the song. (make it 1/4 shorter or fix it somehow else) yeah, added a little 1/4 slider, I don't think it's gonna be tricky for the beginners.

hard and insane are good. thanks! (:

happy30 wrote:

less file-size video: http://puu.sh/olos the quality actually improved cool, thanks a bunch!
Fix the new combo post-spinner stuff I mentioned. It affects the score. seriously, I don't think it affects the score that much that it's really necessary to shape it like that. these notes just simply doesn't look good with these combos set on them. if you're still adamant (sorry for that harsh word, huh) that it's REALLY needed to add them, feel free to PM me and tell me why, I'm looking forward to it ^^

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[Easy]
00:36:825 (4) - start 1/4 earlier? yes

{ 00:52:051 (2) - this is a bit confusing for an easy I think, because [...]
{ 00:52:953 (4) - ^ fixed these two on my own accord. there's a really similar pattern to this one some time earlier in the beatmap, so players shouldn't have problems with that.
 
{ 01:23:178 (4) - ^
{ 01:26:787 (5) - ^ about those two, though... I feel like they aren't that hard to read, people shouldn't have problems.

[Insane]
00:29:720 (6,7) - This is kinda hidden hope it's fixed right now

CXu wrote:

Where is my Kobato =w=p

Andrea wrote:

[Easy]
... all fixed

[Normal]
00:57:126 (5) + 01:18:893 (5) - This spinner is missing a new combo. both fixed
01:20:584 (1) - Same as Easy, there's the new combo here though. moved a bit closer to the center of the scren, should work fine

[Insane]
... all fixed


I'm sorry but I have to pop this for now. HIDOIII ;-;