0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

~mod4mod~

[General]
fine~

[Easy]
01:48:663 (3) - new combo
01:54:149 (3) - ^
01:59:634 (3) - ^
great job, Niva ^^
Sure, why not ~

[Hard]
oh, I can't find anything. nice diff as usual, Niva!

star~ Yay ^^

Frostmourne wrote:

Easy
fine


Maya's Normal
00:34:606 (1) - Add finish at the start of slider. From the sound I heard , Bass + Finish is more better than no finish because you add finish 00:40:092 (1) - which has equal sound
01:23:977 (1) - add finish please. In my opinion, This point is preparing to start kiai time (if it was other song)
Nice suggestion, added both~

Hard
00:25:863 (6) - consider to remove this clap from tail according to 00:28:606 (8) - , 00:31:520 (8) - and 00:34:092 (6) - sound is weird when I heard only 1 clap at the same period Err... That claps are intentional :3
00:40:092 (1) - Is this possible to add finish for more fit ? Oh, yes, you're right, there's supposed to be a finish there~
00:42:492 (8) - add clap at the start of slider (From 00:34:606 (1) to 00:45:577 (1)) I surely feel that it makes more balance in this period Sure, why not
00:55:863 (6) - Add new combo ? For balance the amount of combo (5 and 4 :3) and make it clear when you add these 2 notes under the same point of this slider 00:55:177 (4) - Different color can make it clear for that Ah, yes~
01:23:977 (1) - same point as normal Done~

1. it would be better if BG size is 1024x768, but current one seems not too bad since it's style is abstract.
   

LKs wrote:

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

1. it would be better if BG size is 1024x768, but current one seems not too bad since it's style is abstract. Actually it's a picture of a grass, taken in Bandung ^^
   

Easy

decent and neat diff, hitousnds were set logically. maybe increase the volume by 8%? It's fine (: - but I did some minor change on the hitsounding

Maya's Normal

00:26:034 (4) - too hard to tell this clap sound apart. to Niva: consider increase the wav file volume
Oh, my guess is Maya forgot to add clap 1/1 before~ Fixed this part :3

Hard

pitch on all the objects from 00:21:406 to end and then flip horizontally, this sounds freaky but I'll try my best to explain in my broken Eng.
http://puu.sh/j7KN
the pic above shows the cursor movement during 00:18:149 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
you can see it's a big anticlockwise curve
and the cursor movement during 00:20:892 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - is also a big anticlockwise curve.
this kind of repeat does make ppl feel bored, so I'd suggest you flipping horizontally the remaining objects
Haha, never thought of it, really ^^ - fixed (this part looks much prettier now! yay :3)

Hitsound

You two are competent on hitsounding, the arrangement of them are wonderful.
But I still wanna say some defect I found.
The custom hitsound files themselves are not very fancy and various, which result in I feel something is missing when the song was becoming intense.
After that, because the custom hitsounds is somehow limited, you have had to desert whistle while you must make a clap some where. This will be epic if you can get a way solving it

good job, GL

Actually it's a picture of a grass, taken in Bandung ^^

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

kyaaah t3mp-ten~~
request from queue~

lol niva ga pake spinner~ (:

[General]

[Timing]
> offset + around 8 ms ? Current offset is fine imo

[Easy]
01:45:234 (4) - split into 2 circles~ Sure
01:48:663 (1) - remove NC? It's fine
01:31:520 (3) - convert into a circle at start of slider Done

[Maya's Normal]
> OD and CS +1 ? Let's see...
lol nice~ ^^
01:23:120 (1) - remove NC? Done
01:25:863 (1) - remove NC? Done
01:28:434 (1) - remove NC? Not really sure about this one, it's a spinner anyway...

[Hard]
> OD and/or Drain +1 ? This OD/HDR setting is intentional
> for a slider end that ended at slider tick, i hope its distance to the slider tick is not really far (max 3px radius) Hmm... Not really sure what this one means @_@

lol nice map~

Actually it's a picture of a grass, taken in Bandung ^^

wut... lol i think it was a crystal or what....

1. I lol'd at the BG's filename. Can I say that everything is fine?

1. Overall, there is no problem... but even then, this feels like a Normal diff when I testplayed it. It's still not so difficult to be called an Easy, yet it's bordering (somewhat) to Normal. Well... it's safe to say that there's nothing wrong here.

1. 00:53:120 (4) - Replace the Clap at the beginning point of the slider with Whistle?
2. 01:31:863 (4) - Replace Clap with Whistle?
3. 01:55:520 (2) - Uh... why is this circle's sound is silenced up (the volume @ timing and control points) to 10%? I guess around ~30-40% would be fine. Maybe 38%?

1. I don't know if this is just me that's still suck at osu! or what, but I can feel that this beatmap's difficulty is close to an Insane diff when I played it... It's already great, though.

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi there I can start modding now, I guess?

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. I lol'd at the BG's filename. Can I say that everything is fine?

Don't mention it *runs*

>Easy

1. Overall, there is no problem... but even then, this feels like a Normal diff when I testplayed it. It's still not so difficult to be called an Easy, yet it's bordering (somewhat) to Normal. Well... it's safe to say that there's nothing wrong here.

>Maya's Normal

1. 00:53:120 (4) - Replace the Clap at the beginning point of the slider with Whistle? It's to emphasize that bass sound from the music (Maya wants to use it like this)
2. 01:31:863 (4) - Replace Clap with Whistle? ^
3. 01:55:520 (2) - Uh... why is this circle's sound is silenced up (the volume @ timing and control points) to 10%? I guess around ~30-40% would be fine. Maybe 38%? Yes~ Fixed :3

>Hard

1. I don't know if this is just me that's still suck at osu! or what, but I can feel that this beatmap's difficulty is close to an Insane diff when I played it... It's already great, though.

This diff has no stream at all :3

...Maybe just that? Well, I'm off from here. Oh, and good luck

[Easy]

1. Useless green line:
   00:55:863 -
   
   
2. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:17:977 -
   01:19:863 -
   
   
3. 01:02:377 (1,2) - how about this ? http://puu.sh/kJE9
4. 01:47:292 (2,1) - (1) touch (2) , let them a little distance ?!
   

   184,328,62720,2,0,B|148:296|144:224|208:192,1,160,2|0

[Maya's Normal]

1. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:19:863 -
   
   
2. 00:46:263 (2,1) - not symmetrical
3. 01:39:406 (4) - ^

[Hard]

1. Useless green line:
   00:47:120 -
   00:47:206 -
   01:19:692 -
   01:23:634 -
   01:34:863 -
   
   
2. Useless blue line:(although no effect)
   01:19:863 -
   
   
3. 00:19:177 (5) - It is dangerous that it a little distance article
   
4. I think ... this is diff harder than [Hard]

winber1 wrote:

Hard

00:28:606 (8) - i find it more interesting if this was two notes http://puu.sh/kUOF i guess it also puts a little more variation in the diff too. Ah, I personally feel a slider looks more solid there
00:44:120 - i'd add a note. Sure, why not
00:58:606 (7) - y no follow the drums? ^^

Normal

00:35:120 - random empty space imo, you could just add a note note at 00:35:463
00:37:863 - ^
Added both~
00:59:292 (1) - add a finish? Done :3

Easy

00:31:520 - I'd add a note. it also matches 00:28:434 (2,3) - Yep~
00:37:006 - ^ ^
00:42:492 - ^ ^
01:13:692 (1) - better like this imo http://puu.sh/kUXe
01:19:177 (1) - similar to 01:13:692
Great rhythm as well, fixed~

sorry for being so late. just suggestions anyways.

hope this helps a bit. good luck~~

• Hi Niva ~ request from my queue ~
  　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Bule : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
   　
   [ General ]
   　
4. Selete out Letterbox during breaks ?
5. What is tags "a" mean ? I think remove this word because of this
   　
   [ Easy ]
   　
6. 00:37:349 (1) - down 1 grid ? spacing is not correct >_< nazi...
7. 01:13:692 (4) - NC here , this part is a bit long >_<
8. 01:43:177 (3) - this is not a symmetrical slider , So...
   

   396,192,103177,2,0,B|364:200|328:200|328:200|304:244|257:252|257:252|208:244|184:200|184:200|148:200|116:192,1,320

   　
   [ Maya's Normal ]
   　
9. 00:35:463 (2) - add whistle?
10. 00:37:349 (5) - You forgot add NC here
11. 00:38:206 (6) - add whistle?
12. 01:20:377 (3) - this slider i think isn't fit the song , try this
    
    SPOILER

    

    112,32,80377,2,0,B|88:96|24:104,1,120
    8,152,80891,1,0

13. 01:23:120 (5) - ^
14. 01:28:434 (1) - Start 01:28:177 to follow the music
    　
    [ Hard ]
    　
15. 01:09:749 (1,2) - Remove NC 1 and add NC 2
16. 01:11:634 (1) - Remove NC
17. 01:15:234 (1,2) - Remove NC 1 and add NC 2
18. 01:17:120 (1) - Remove NC
19. 01:46:777 (5,6,7) - All slider Ctrl+R , it is more fun when i play xD
    
    SPOILER

    
    　
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bossandy wrote:

• Hi Niva ~ request from my queue ~
  　

1. Red : I think you must to fix.
2. Bule : Need to discuss.
3. Black : Just suggest or nazi.
   　
   [ General ]
   　
4. Selete out Letterbox during breaks ? I don't think this is not a big problem, it's not noticeable anyway (and it won't affect filesize either :3)
5. What is tags "a" mean ? I think remove this word because of this Oh, KaW is "Kyle A. Ward", deleted that A though
   　
   [ Easy ]
   　
6. 00:37:349 (1) - down 1 grid ? spacing is not correct >_< nazi... Oh, redid this part
7. 01:13:692 (4) - NC here , this part is a bit long >_< OK~
8. 01:43:177 (3) - this is not a symmetrical slider , So...
   

   396,192,103177,2,0,B|364:200|328:200|328:200|304:244|257:252|257:252|208:244|184:200|184:200|148:200|116:192,1,320

   Whoops, redid this slider as well
   　
   [ Maya's Normal ]
   　
9. 00:35:463 (2) - add whistle? Done~
10. 00:37:349 (5) - You forgot add NC here Done~
11. 00:38:206 (6) - add whistle? Done~
12. 01:20:377 (3) - this slider i think isn't fit the song , try this
    
    SPOILER

    

    112,32,80377,2,0,B|88:96|24:104,1,120
    8,152,80891,1,0

13. 01:23:120 (5) - ^
    Not changed these two.
14. 01:28:434 (1) - Start 01:28:177 to follow the music Done, much better now ><
    　
    [ Hard ]
    　
15. 01:09:749 (1,2) - Remove NC 1 and add NC 2
16. 01:11:634 (1) - Remove NC
17. 01:15:234 (1,2) - Remove NC 1 and add NC 2
18. 01:17:120 (1) - Remove NC
    Done all~
19. 01:46:777 (5,6,7) - All slider Ctrl+R , it is more fun when i play xD
    
    SPOILER

    
    Your image won't load here >< idk... I prefer like this~
    　
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Nice map!!!! Have my Star ~
Good Luck :3 ( I love your mod !! mod my map ? xD ) Thanks (: Just send me the link on forum PM orz, although I can't promise a fast mod :3

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[easy]
01:08:892 (2) - try this? orz saw the same rhythm
01:43:177 (3,1) - overlap in low diff is not good imo.. Can't figure out any other good pattern orz ><

[normal]
soft-hitclap.wav can't fit this song well imo...try default normal-hitnormal or turn down the volume Turned the volume lower~

[hard]
nice..but maybe too hard to be a hard diff...you'd better rename this to Insane and make another easier hard

orz not good at modding no-vocal song.No kud...
since you've got 13 stars so far..I won't shoot a star...

I appreciate your look and viewpoints to this map, so I think it still worth kd'ing (plus I changed something as well from your mod~)

Ain053 wrote:

[Easy]
No Problem!

[Maya's Normal]
The 1 1/2 Time Span (Like 00:37:692) is not really fun. (Opinion)
00:58:606 & 01:01:349 - Add note, maybe?
Oh, I did something else to that part

[Hard]
Drain Rate -1. It's rather hard to refill your HP. Considering the pretty unforgivable drain rate, I don't think this is good. (Unless this is supposed to be insane, ignore this) Oh, sure

01:25:349 (4) - It's Overlapping (6). considering your mapping style, perhaps you should fix this. It's not a problem actually :3 (plus I can't get any other place to put that orz)
01:46:434 (4-10) - I'm not sure, but overmap much? But- it's the most intense part >< Not changed

I couldn't find much

1. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/In_the_Groove_(video_game)
   ^
   i didn't find your track there. are you sure that it's from In the Groove? Just gimme source.
2. Make approachcircle like a hitcircle? like with "cross"?
3. You don't have a breaks. turn off letterboxes?

Aleks719 wrote:

Well, Mister Nivalis.


General

1. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/In_the_Groove_(video_game)
   ^
   i didn't find your track there. are you sure that it's from In the Groove? Just gimme source.
   Removed ~
   
2. Make approachcircle like a hitcircle? like with "cross"? Eh... No need to imo >< Default one is good enough (:
3. You don't have a breaks. turn off letterboxes? Done

Hard
HP+1 for better challenge? looks easy Sure

Normal
01:20:377 (3) - i think this slider is hard to read for the 1st time. but it's up to you. not force here idk if there's any better rhythm to be used here... it's the most intuitive one here imo
01:40:434 (1) - +finish How could this finish be forgotten... orz ><

Easy
01:13:692 (1) - look a bit down
01:19:177 (1) - imo, should be : (time line+placement) Done both (although I'm using my own placement~)

01:41:806 (2,3) - imo looks better: (+symmetry ofc) Yes! Looks much better now~

That's all!

Ain053 wrote:

I see it's already bubbled.

I just found out that KaW is Smiley too. Is it possible to add Smiley into the tag?

Niva wrote:

Ain053 wrote:

[Hard]
Drain Rate -1. It's rather hard to refill your HP. Considering the pretty unforgivable drain rate, I don't think this is good. (Unless this is supposed to be insane, ignore this) Oh, sure

Niva wrote:

Aleks719 wrote:

Hard
HP+1 for better challenge? looks easy Sure

Niva wrote:

hitcircleoverlay is from here, by Breeze

Jordan wrote:

There's something wrong with my HD SS... there aren't spinners but I did more score than others o.o