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Tonasa - RAINBOW GIRL

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Star Stream
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Star Stream
fixed all except:
00:55:097 (7,1) - Swap new combo
and ar+1

Download: Hatsune Miku - RAINBOW GIRL (Hinacle) [Star's Normal].osu
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Leorda wrote:

Hello

[Chata's Easy]
00:44:297 - Add note for following vocal?
01:44:983 - ^
01:50:812 (3) - New combo for your combo pattern?


[Star's GIRL]
* AR +1?
* I think would be better if this diff name has a difficulty name, like "Star's Normal". Please change it, like others diff name

00:55:097 (7,1) - Swap new combo?
01:05:897 (3) - This notes is almost offscreen (just a warning)
01:44:640 (1,2,3) - Too many whistle around here? Remove one of them whistle
01:56:983 (5) - Remove whistle at sliderbody. It's unecessary, unless if you have a reason to have it
02:25:440 (4) - This notes is almost offscreen (just a warning)


That's all I can find, sorry
Thank you mod!!>w<//
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
all done :3

Download: Hatsune Miku - RAINBOW GIRL (Hinacle) [Chata's Easy].osu
catastrophe_old
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Joined October 2011
catastrophe_old
:) :D ;) :o >:( :( :lol: 8-) :?
ecstasy19
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Joined May 2011
ecstasy19
:)
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Please don't post only emoticons, it looks like spam :?


~General~
- Tag "Nico Nico Douga" is not necessary
- Source: VOCALOID
- Mostly hitsound mods, I only suggest for parts I don't feel OK
- If possible, Hinacle, you should set hitsounds in every guest diffs to be similar to Insane. Then my hitsound mods for guest diffs can be skipped ;)


~Chata's Easy~
00:34:697 (3) - remove clap
00:47:726 (2) - add clap on all notes
00:49:097 (3) - add clap at start
01:00:754 (1) - add finish at the end
01:06:240 (1) - add finish at start
01:12:069 (1) - use soft-hitsound
01:23:726 (2) - add clap
01:24:069 (3) - remove clap
01:25:440 (1) - ^
01:43:954 (3) - remove finish
01:44:983 (4) - add finish
02:09:326 (1) - add finish at start

~Star's Normal~
00:38:811 (1) - add custom finish at start
00:46:697 (6) - anti-jump isn't a good idea
01:03:497 (1) - add finish at start
01:11:726 (1) - remove whistle
01:11:897 (1) - use soft-hitsound
01:44:640 (1) - add custom finish at the end
02:09:326 (2) - add finish at start

~rui's Hard~
01:00:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove all claps
01:05:212 (4) - remove clap at start
01:06:583 (2) - remove clap at start, add clap at the end
01:07:269 (3,4,6,7) - remove clap
01:09:669 (1) - remove clap at the end
01:11:554 (3) - at the end, remove clap, add finish
01:11:811 (1) - use soft-hitsound, remove finish
02:06:583 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - remove all claps
02:11:040 (7) - remove clap
02:13:097 (3,4,6,7) - ^
02:15:497 (1) - remove clap at the end

~Insane~
00:16:354 (1) - remove new combo
00:51:669 (6) - remove all finishes
01:11:126 (2,6) - delete, not fit
01:11:811 (1) - use soft-hitsound
01:57:497 (7) - remove all finishes
02:00:240 (3) - remove finish at the end
02:16:954 (2,6) - delete, not fit
02:17:640 (1) - add clap
02:20:897 - add note here
02:20:983 (1) - remove finish
Star Stream
2,031 posts
Joined June 2010
Star Stream
All fixed~

Download: Hatsune Miku - RAINBOW GIRL (Hinacle) [Star's Normal].osu
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
All fixed
Thank you mod :)

Download: Hatsune Miku - RAINBOW GIRL (Hinacle) [rui's Hard].osu
Abe Nana
1,148 posts
Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
all fixed

Download: Hatsune Miku - RAINBOW GIRL (Hinacle) [Chata's Easy].osu
Hinacle
1,311 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Hinacle

DJPop wrote:

Please don't post only emoticons, it looks like spam :?


~General~
- Tag "Nico Nico Douga" is not necessary
- Source: VOCALOID
- Mostly hitsound mods, I only suggest for parts I don't feel OK
- If possible, Hinacle, you should set hitsounds in every guest diffs to be similar to Insane. Then my hitsound mods for guest diffs can be skipped ;)

~Insane~
00:16:354 (1) - remove new combo ok
00:51:669 (6) - remove all finishes ok
01:11:126 (2,6) - delete, not fit ok
01:11:811 (1) - use soft-hitsound ok
01:57:497 (7) - remove all finishes ok
02:00:240 (3) - remove finish at the end ok
02:16:954 (2,6) - delete, not fit ok
02:17:640 (1) - add clap ok
02:20:897 - add note here sorry, no change
02:20:983 (1) - remove finish ok
Thank you mod~!!
DJPop
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DJPop

-Chata- wrote:

all fixed
Maybe you forgot this :?
01:06:240 (1) - add finish at start


I also noticed that spinner at 01:11:897 (1) in Star's Normal has 10% volume, I think it should be set like this in other diffs too.

no kds
Abe Nana
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Joined March 2011
Abe Nana
(´･ε･｀)ｴｰ

Download: Hatsune Miku - RAINBOW GIRL (Hinacle) [Chata's Easy].osu
Hinacle
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Topic Starter
Hinacle
Thank you mod DJPop~></

update!!
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
Before this gets bubbled, remove "Chata" from the tags. With just the tag -Chata-, you can still search "Chata."
Hinacle
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Topic Starter
Hinacle
I can’t search "-Chata-" in osudirect! when not put "Chata" T-T
DJPop
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DJPop
-Chata- doesn't work in both osu!direct and http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist, it just works via beatmap search in-game.

I'd tell remove tag "-Chata-" instead of "Chata", but let's just leave them for now.

Rechecked done, you can have a bubble :)
Abe Nana
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Abe Nana
' A '
abalee
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abalee
background not fit except Easy diff if i don't misunderstand this song.

Insane:
00:56:297 (8,1) - : change it to two 1/2 sliders seems better for me.

few jumps not fit in my opinion.
00:33:326 (2,3) - ,01:10:183 (4,5) -

hard:
try to make the spacing consistency.
rui
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Joined February 2009
rui

abalee wrote:

hard:
try to make the spacing consistency. sorry no changed
Hinacle
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Topic Starter
Hinacle

abalee wrote:

background not fit except Easy diff if i don't misunderstand this song.

Insane:
00:56:297 (8,1) - : change it to two 1/2 sliders seems better for me.I think this rhythm is very good. sorry no change

few jumps not fit in my opinion.
00:33:326 (2,3) - ,01:10:183 (4,5) - This jump is a my favorite. Is one of my placement. no change

hard:
try to make the spacing consistency.
Thank you mod~></
abalee
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abalee
gain more stars.
popner
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popner
Tag vocaloid2? (You can change this when BAT comes)

Why this is still not ranked? :(
those
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Joined November 2010
those
To the BAT checking this for rank, or mapper(s):
Got some concern with the suitability of the background images. Although Miku is singing this song, the song lyrics provide a general sad tone. As such, backgrounds for Easy, Normal, and/or Hard should be rechosen.
Additionally, the current bg for Normal uses the same one as http://osu.ppy.sh/s/47539, which gives an additional reason to change, as the two songs are not similar in very many ways.
Star Stream
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Joined June 2010
Star Stream
Using same BG with other ranked map(s) doesn't matter.
And I can agree with you when you're saying only thing about lewd image. but unless that, It's just up to Mapper.
Garven
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2010
Garven
Ahoy, Hinacle!

[All Difficulties]
01:44:983 - Start kiai here

[Chata's Easy]
00:14:126 (1) - This feels a little short for a spinner in an Easy. It might be best to map through it at this point.
02:25:783 (1) - ^

[Star's Normal]
01:10:354 (2) - After seeing 00:43:783 (5) - I fear this might be a little misleading. I'd just unstack it.
01:49:269 (4) - You know - just stick to one rhythm or the other. I'd prefer the 1/1 rhythm stacked under a slider end personally.
02:07:954 (1,2,3) - Why so much whistle? ;_; So noisy

[Insane]
00:19:612 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why so much new combo spam?
00:24:069 (2,3) - Swap the positions of these to keep your circular flow smooth. Right now, going from 00:23:726 (3) - > 00:23:897 (1,2) - feels unnatural
01:41:897 (1,2,1,2,1) - More new combo spam
02:20:983 (1,2,3) - This spacing felt really weird to play

@those: The BGs are fine. You could say that they are the memories of the happier times behind the screen if you really want.
Abe Nana
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Abe Nana
http://puu.sh/NoiH

done
Hinacle
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Topic Starter
Hinacle

Garven wrote:

Ahoy, Hinacle!

[All Difficulties]
01:44:983 - Start kiai here

[Chata's Easy]
00:14:126 (1) - This feels a little short for a spinner in an Easy. It might be best to map through it at this point.
02:25:783 (1) - ^

[Star's Normal]
01:10:354 (2) - After seeing 00:43:783 (5) - I fear this might be a little misleading. I'd just unstack it.
01:49:269 (4) - You know - just stick to one rhythm or the other. I'd prefer the 1/1 rhythm stacked under a slider end personally.
02:07:954 (1,2,3) - Why so much whistle? ;_; So noisy

[Insane]
00:19:612 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Why so much new combo spam?
00:24:069 (2,3) - Swap the positions of these to keep your circular flow smooth. Right now, going from 00:23:726 (3) - > 00:23:897 (1,2) - feels unnatural
01:41:897 (1,2,1,2,1) - More new combo spam
02:20:983 (1,2,3) - This spacing felt really weird to play

@those: The BGs are fine. You could say that they are the memories of the happier times behind the screen if you really want.
Thank you mod~!!
Fixed!!
Garven
osu! Alumni
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Garven
Bah, I wish there was a better mp3 available. I found this but it seems to be long dead, unfortunately. Ah well.

[Normal]
01:48:754 (3,4) -
SPOILER
Hinacle
1,311 posts
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Topic Starter
Hinacle

Garven wrote:

Bah, I wish there was a better mp3 available. I found this but it seems to be long dead, unfortunately. Ah well.

[Normal]
01:48:754 (3,4) -
SPOILER
Fixed!!

Thank you mod Garvn>3<//
Garven
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Garven
Reubbled!
ztrot
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ztrot
few things I need to point out.
[Easy]
00:40:183 (2) - this would go better if it started at 00:40:526 maybe make it look like this? http://puu.sh/R10w

[Normal]
00:53:897 (5) - Remove the whistle body from this slider not the whistle on the end points seeing as it is the only slider that has a whistle sound of it's slider slide.

Suggestion 01:11:897 (1) - remove the new combo from this spinner.

[Hard]
looked fine to me

[Insane]
No real complaints here.


[Source]
your source is inccorect but because we can't make up our minds over ch2 or tonasa just leave it blank please.

also after these fixes i would have no problem ranking it.
Abe Nana
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Abe Nana
http://puu.sh/R1fg

done
wmfchris
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Joined March 2008
wmfchris
[Insane]
I myself don't really care about boundary case of obscene backgrounds, but it's still better if you can change the BG.
01:44:983 - I prefer starting the kiai here (like the other diffs) because the real accent is there (not at 01:44:640 - ). Also if you start the kiai eariler the note 01:44:640 (6) - gives a kiai hitburst which doesn't fit there.

[Hard]
02:25:097 (5) - how about removing clapping here to highlight the accent of (6)?

[Easy]
02:07:954 (1) - The single note still refers to a new phrase so new combo here?

you'll have to response towards ztrot's mod on normal as well.
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui

wmfchris wrote:

[Hard]
02:25:097 (5) - how about removing clapping here to highlight the accent of (6)? fixed. it is nice idea :3
wmfchris Thank you mod

http://puu.sh/Yoa3
Abe Nana
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Abe Nana
（´･ω･`）
Yuukari-Banteki
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Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Chata]
set tick rate to .5 or 2 because you have so many 1.5 beat sliders (some BAT disagree with this statement)

[Star]
same tick rate issue, suggest a tick rate of 2

[rui]
set tick rate to 2
01:41:383 (4) - can you make the same distance from 3 as from 2: http://puu.sh/ZML0

[Insane]
01:39:497 (2) - make this the same distance from 1 and from 3: http://puu.sh/ZN8G

Ask me when you are ready for a remod >.<
Abe Nana
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Abe Nana
http://puu.sh/ZQtc
Melophobia
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Melophobia
Note: Hinacle can't upload this map because he can't stop playing LoL and pinball :<
Garven
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Garven
>_>
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
...i random checked this and about to rank and saw the thread...

/me moves out.
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