Hi! I was searching something in English (Pop or Rock especially), and I saw that in the recent uploading maps. So, let's do that 
[Normal:]•
Settings:--> The Approach Rate looks kinda high on this difficulty. Remember, it's your easiest diff on the mapset, so I think that fits better if you Reduce it by 1 Tick (AR-1)
• 00:05:430 (5,6): The Overlap between these Sliders plays preety bad, it doesn't look fine. I prefer to see it Stacked instead of this ugly overlap, try to do something like this:
• 00:12:747 (1): This note is too close (in the Timeline) to the previous Spinner, in this kind of difficulties the players don't have the necesary time to react. You should do something with that, maybe you can finish the Spinner 1/1 back, sounds fine anyways.
• 00:26:649 (5): You should start with the section of Normal Custom:1 Hitsounds on the beginning of this Slider adding a Finish, fit properly with the Instrumental
• 00:27:381 (6,1): If you do the suggestion recomended above, you should swap these New Combo because the Instrumental and the Stanza change on this point, so this would work much better
• 00:32:137 (3,1,2,3,4): I don't like how to play this pattern, the change to 1/2 could be sudden to New Players, and if you listen the music the 1/1 fit fine here anyways. I suggest you to do that with (1,2,3,4).
• 00:47:869 (T): Hmm... What do you want to show with this fountain? Doesn't fit with this Slow section, I think that is better if you remove it from here
• 00:48:235 (1): In this case, this Slider finishing on a Red tick doesn't work with the Instrumental or the Vocal, really (Try to listen the music on 25% of speed. Would be better if it finishes on the Downbeat, 1/2 back.
• 01:03:966 (5,6): (NAZI)- Something of naziness xD, but I think that this pattern work better if you do something like that:
• 01:08:722 (1): The repetition doesn't follow the Drums properly, the last part of the Slider (after to the Repetition) it doesn't appear on the music. So, It's better if you Remove the Repetition from this Slider
• 01:15:674 (5,6): I would like to see that Stacked, looks much better, really.
• 01:18:600 (5,6): To unify the Vocal and make it just like a thing, I would like to replace these Notes to a Slider instead
• 01:19:332 (7): A New Combo on this long Slider fit perfectly, specially because with it the Section ends. Btw, Nice Slider :3
• 01:23:174: Drag this Break to 01:25:918, it plays preety fine with the Vocal.
• 01:42:747 (4,5): Fix the Spacing between these Sliders, I don't why it is reduced because the music sounds like always
• 01:47:137 (2): In this case, occure the same thing as 00:48:235, this Slider doesn't follow anything on the music properly (I recommend you to listen the music on 25%, again). To follow the music properly, this Slider have to finish 1/2 back
• 02:01:405 (1,2): Stacked notes can cause a headache on New Players, specially if they are under of Sliders because they are really Hard to read to them. Is better if you unstack (2), to make an easier pattern than before
• 02:06:527 (7,1): (^)
• 02:09:454 (4,1): In this case can be pass because are 2 Notes Stacked but what is the reason to stack 2 Notes of different pattern/Combos? Is not good, doesn't work with the representation that the map can give. Would be better if you unstack these Notes for this reason
• 02:21:527 (1,1): The change it's still on the first Note, so the New Combo on the second one is totally unecesary. I'd like to remove it, also this kind of Spam can cause confusion in New Players
• 02:21:527 ~ 02:44:942: Just Notes on this Section? This become preety boring also you didn't make any variety on the Rhythm, all the Notes are doing the Same thing. It's better if you remap this section adding Sliders and stuff.
• 02:33:235 (1,1): The Spam is unnecesary, Remove the New Combo on the Second Note.
• 03:19:368 (6): I don't recommend you the Stack with the Previous Slider (4), Move this Note to
x:160 y:208, flows much better and make the pattern easier to read
• 03:28:479 (5,1): To follow the 'No way', like you did in 03:29:942, is better if you Swap this New Combo (Add a new Combo in (5) and Remove it on (1), for consistency like I said before and also a Slider alone it looks preety weird in my opinion.
• 03:27:015 (3,4): Fix this Spacing, to mantain the Spacing consistency. Move this Slider (4) to
x:272 y:368, to do that
- This map needs much more work, I just mod it as a Normal (with a Easy on the mapset), but this is really difficulty to be the easiest on the mapset, the Rhythm sounds montone sometimes and Sliders Shapes can be better (but I really don't want to mention that). You have to work more on this difficulty.[TuHard:]• 00:03:783 (8): This can be consider overmapped, there isn't any Rhythm on this Red Tick (You can listen the music on 25% speed to be confident). So, is better if you remove it from here
• 00:09:637 (8): (^)
• 00:14:027 (5): (^)
• 00:16:954 (5): (^)
• 00:20:796 (7): To be consistent with the previous section before the first Kiai, is better if you replace that with an 1/1 Slider without any kind of Repetition, this is the best way because follow the Vocal properly
• 00:27:015 (6): I think that it's better if you Start the Section of Normal Custom:1 Hitsounds in this Note, adding this Finish hitsound
• 00:29:393 (x): I'm preety sure that a Note fit properly with the Vocal, so you can try it
• 00:47:869 (T): Same as Normal, I don't think that this Slow section need a Fountain
• 01:00:857 (3): Well, This Note is unnecesary here. Remove it
(I'm not going to mention this stuff again, follow my examples and delete the unnecesary Notes, is simple to do .) • 01:09:637 (4): Would be better if you remark the Downbeat in this pattern, sounds better since in this point change the Stanza. Plays better if you Reduce this Slider by 1/2 and after that add a Note in 01:10:003
• 01:23:174: Drag this Break to 01:25:918, it plays preety fine with the Vocal. (Same as Normal
)
• 01:34:332 (1): If you listen the music, is not a correct place to add a Slider with a Repetition because it isn't following the same thing when the ball hit on the Reverse. Works better if you delete the Repetition and then add a Note in 01:35:064
• 01:40:369 (x): To complete the 'dissapear' on the Vocal, add a Note here xD
• 01:46:771 (1,2): (NAZI)- The Blanket could be better here, I think that it's a good thing if you make something like that:
• 02:08:174 (4): Same as 01:09:637
• 02:21:893 (1): This Whistle on the beginning of this Slider sounds alone, because it is the only one on this section. This make an inconsistency, so is better if you remove it from here
• 02:23:539 (6): I think that you are missing a Clap on this Note, I can listen one on the music
• 02:26:283 (6,1): Same reason as above, add Clap on the beginning and the end of Slider (6) and Remove it form the beginning of Slider (1)
• 02:29:210 (4,5): Add Claps on these Notes
• 02:42:015 (1): A Clap here sounds really fitting, try it
• 03:22:076 (x): A Note fit fine with the Vocal here
- Nice :3. You just need to avoid these Unnecesaries Notes in 1/2 that don't play with the music, otherwise I didn't have big problems with the diff. [Insane:]• I think that the Slider Tick Rate 2 is not really necesary, the patterns sounds fine without it so I think that it's better if you set to 1.
• 00:19:881 (x): To follow the Vocal properly, is better if you add a Note here with a New Combo and then remove it from the Next note
• 00:33:052 (7,8,1,2): Incoming, I suggest you a pattern that fit much more with the sense of an Insane, I'm preety sure that players want to play a map more active than this section with just Sliders in 1/1, try to do something like that to make the pattern more enjoyable:
• 00:44:393 (5,6,1,2): You can make something like I said you before here too.
• 00:47:869 (T): Same as previous difficulties about this Fountain
• 00:56:649 (1,2,3,4): Make the distance between these Notes bigger, to remark the change in 2/1 to 1/1. It will be more flow in my opinion
• 01:07:899 (7): This Note is unnecesary, it doesn't appear anything in the music to justify the activity of this Note. Remove it, please (And listen the music in 25% speed to be confident)
• 01:10:735 (7): Add a Finish instead of the Clap, a double finish sounds preety fine here
• 01:19:332 (6,7,8,9,10): Again, this 5-plet is here to overmap, because no accompanying the music. Remove (7,9) to make the pattern consistent with the music
• 01:22:533 (5): Remove this Note, the Stream start on the next one
• 01:23:174: Drag this break to 01:25:918, like I mentioned on the other difficulties
• 02:21:527 ~ 02:44:576: Again only Notes like Normal, try to do a better variety with the objects that you add. I suggest you to add some more Sliders to make a better variety
• 02:59:119 (5): Remove this Note to avoid the Overmap
• 03:01:771 (3,4,5,6,7): Remove (4,6), the overmap is not good. You can make a Hard map without the necesary of overmap, try to follow the music properly
• 03:04:972 (5): You should to say good bye to this Note too
• 03:15:674 (1): Include this Slider with the Previous Combo, it looks weird a Combo with just a Slider specially on this difficulty. (Remove New Combo
)
• 03:29:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10): You know this is really overmapped, you just added notes to make the end difficult. Try to fix that removing the unnecesaries Notes.
-Well, I don't mod this Insane on my 100% lucid, but I think that it's not bad at all. The Problems are these Overmap just to make the difficulty more difficult so you can work in this aspect. As I said before, a Hard map can be based on another things (on a good way) and not in unnecesary overmap.That's all for me.
Still needs more work in all difficulties (specially Normal and on a 2nd place Insane).
Good Luck and Contact me in-game if you need help with something 
) nice advise though