謝謝CH

Yo.

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best (looking at the easy/normal here).

[Easy]
00:24:450 (3,1) - Might be a bit tough for an easy
00:43:617 (2) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on short sliders for an easy diff.
00:50:075 (1) - Start this at 00:50:284 -
01:19:659 (2) - Hrm. I think it would be betterif you deleted 2 and added 1 repeat to 1 and add a note at 01:20:284 -

[Normal]
00:53:617 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal.


[Hard]
00:10:284 (2) - Kind of lame to be on this long slider when the music has changed and has two strong beats while you're just sliding away. AND it ends half a beat late. :/ Change this please.
00:48:617 (1) - I don't understand why you did a slowdown here. You can't see the ticks either. If you -must- have a slowdown, just do .75x
00:52:783 (3) - Remove that extra anchor point please. It's made this into a burai slider.

[Taiko]
01:16:950 - The return to 1x is wierd since the intensity of the song doesn't really change here.

[Saya]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song.
00:49:450 (4,5,6,7) - That's uh, some crazy spacing changes suddenly. Not realy feeling them at this point.
00:50:283 (1,2,3,4) - And why jumps here but not at 00:47:575 (2,3,4) - ? At 50: it's more of a descending phrase anyway - I don't understand why there are jumps.
01:19:450 (2) - This is fairly obscured by the spinner finish stuff.


[Insane]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song.
00:48:617 (1) - Such a drastic slow down for zero change in pace in the music. Please don't. Especially since you follow it up with huge jumps.
01:14:867 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - This spacing sucks to play after all that larger spacing.

Garven wrote:

Yo. Hello ><

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best (looking at the easy/normal here). Fixed in Easy and Normal

[Easy]
00:24:450 (3,1) - Might be a bit tough for an easy Fixed
00:43:617 (2) - I don't recommend having more than one repeat on short sliders for an easy diff. Fixed
00:50:075 (1) - Start this at 00:50:284 - Fixed
01:19:659 (2) - Hrm. I think it would be betterif you deleted 2 and added 1 repeat to 1 and add a note at 01:20:284 -
I think both are in compliance with the rhythm, so there is no change.

[Hard]
00:10:284 (2) - Kind of lame to be on this long slider when the music has changed and has two strong beats while you're just sliding away. AND it ends half a beat late. :/ Change this please. Fixed
00:48:617 (1) - I don't understand why you did a slowdown here. You can't see the ticks either. If you -must- have a slowdown, just do .75x Change to 0.75x
00:52:783 (3) - Remove that extra anchor point please. It's made this into a burai slider. My mistake, Fixed

[Insane]
Not a fan of the 1/4 stack spam. A lot of them don't fit the song. It was made when I'm new mapper. Sorry
00:48:617 (1) - Such a drastic slow down for zero change in pace in the music. Please don't. Especially since you follow it up with huge jumps. Spinner instead
01:14:867 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - This spacing sucks to play after all that larger spacing. Do not see a serious problem, I think that can keep

thank you garven
Just tell you in pm when the GD was fixed

>Mr Garven
Sorry, I haven't change it because I feel 01:16:950 (1) - is a new stage. And the reason why I slow down here is I want make a incremental effect 01:18:409 (1,1,1,1) -

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:53:617 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal Sorry but I think it's okay. The spinner can turn 5000 X3

Thanks mod~

BARRY:

I'm talking about the note -after- the spinner. It comes too soon and doesn't offer enough recovery time for a player of that level to hit the note in time.

Edit:

Rebubbled~

Thank Garevn

[Easy]
looks good

[Barry]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Taiko]
looks good

[Saya]
00:19:867 (5) - jump feels wrong
00:21:742 (1) - ^
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't make sense
01:04:450 (7) - jump feels wrong
01:19:867 (3) - line this up better under or beside 2

[Insane]
looks good

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks good

[Barry]
looks good

[Hard]
looks good

[Taiko]
looks good

[Saya]
00:19:867 (5) - jump feels wrong
00:21:742 (1) - ^
00:48:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern doesn't make sense
01:04:450 (7) - jump feels wrong
01:19:867 (3) - line this up better under or beside 2

[Insane]
looks good

All fixed in "Saya" diff.
Thank you Saturos-fangirl

Ok rebubbled then.

Thank Saturos-fangirl

hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________-

[Saya]
00:10:075 (6) - You used soft whistle in the rest of the pattern corresponding to the whistle like sound in the background, so to maintain consistancy use soft whistle here
00:17:992 (1,2,3,4) - a bit nazi but according to the music the vocal ended during the slider so the spacing (5,1) should be larger than (1,2)
00:27:784 (4) - right 1 grid lv4
00:49:450 (1,2,3,4,1) - the anti-jump (3,4) is misleading. Also there's no need to stack hardly on notes long time ago, equal spacing can be made. Try sth like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/339319
01:13:617 (1) - whistle at the beginning like you've done before

other looks fine. find me when they're fixed

wmfchris wrote:

hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________- 我比較想吐糟您點解又用英文=3=

All fixed

Thx Wmf

ertyukjh010 wrote:

wmfchris wrote:

hi你 點解最後又係我mod -____________- 我比較想吐糟您點解又用英文=3=

一般我都用英文架啦你唔明咪問囉

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