OK , fixed ~Garven wrote:
Crap, sorry, a couple more things.
[Easy]
01:03:192 (1) - New combo
02:22:692 (1) - New combo
OK , fixed ~Garven wrote:
Crap, sorry, a couple more things.
[Easy]
01:03:192 (1) - New combo
02:22:692 (1) - New combo
XD.. Thanks Garven~Garven wrote:
Rebubbled!
lol 我也是這樣想的...Komeiji Yuki wrote:
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還以為要rank了........
Will update after guests replying this modSaturos-fangirl wrote:
[Halt]
03:23:067 (1) - having the wrong end of the slider being the closest one to the next note can be confusing for beginners; I suggest that you do an h-flip and re-space to avoid this issue OK ,make some changes
[Hate]
02:50:067 (1) - you can touch up the blanket on this one by using the approach circle on 2 to space the slider properly
02:51:567 (3) - ^ but with 4 lol ,look like optional ,but still adjusted.
[Hurt]
00:23:817 (4,5) - you might want to switch these two notes to make a more consistent triangle pattern (right-bot-left-right-bot instead of right-bot-right-left-bot) well, I don't intent to make triangle pattern there ,the pattern can be played more fluently imo
00:42:567 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is beautiful ^ ^
00:59:817 (4,5) - as with 0:23 Yes, as with 0:23
01:56:629 (4) - i dont think properly spacing 3-4 to match 2-3 would hurt your map I put 4 in the middle for symmetry
01:58:129 (4) - ^ ^
[Taiko]
03:03:004 (2,2) - these notes are both on offbeats, and honestly it feels a bit weird having notes on them but not on their respective white ticks. It might be better to add a note 1/2 before each of these to keep the rhythm going.
04:03:567 (1) - this is a little bit ridiculous in length...I mean seriously a spinner 120+ long? I'm sure you can find a better way to close the song than that.
Additionally, I think that changing the sv to match the speed of the music would make your map 20% more awesome just sayin'
[Heart]
00:16:129 (6) - maybe flip this vertically so that there isn't any overlap with 5
00:18:192 (8) - stacking this under the end of 6 would also be helpful
00:29:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you were trying to make a pattern of some sort here but it isn't parcing. The notes are perfectly readable, but it doesn't look like anything organized.
00:36:754 (2) - really, try to avoid messy overlaps like this, it's much more pretty to either move the note entirely out from under the other one or to stack them
00:53:817 (6) - try to move this a bit farther away from 4 so that there isn't overlap please
01:06:192 (7) - putting this under 1 would be rad :3
01:22:879 (7) - more messy overlap
02:08:817 (3,5) - the effect youre going for here is really cool but it's not coming across because the notes are too close together maybe move them 1 grid farther apart?
04:03:098 (2,3) - hate to say it but if you listen to this very carefully you will discover that the 2 and 3 both belong on 1/6 spacing: http://puu.sh/14lOg
This is an excellent map and shows a lot of promise, but I think that there is still a little polish yet to be applied for it to reach its full potential :3 I wish you the best map possible and have a nice day!
Thank you for your patient modding~!Saturos-fangirl wrote:
[Heart]
00:16:129 (6) - maybe flip this vertically so that there isn't any overlap with 5 Done
00:18:192 (8) - stacking this under the end of 6 would also be helpful Done, also changed the spacing of these notes
00:29:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think you were trying to make a pattern of some sort here but it isn't parcing. The notes are perfectly readable, but it doesn't look like anything organized. I see, and I tried to make a new pattern.I think it also fits the vocal.
00:36:754 (2) - really, try to avoid messy overlaps like this, it's much more pretty to either move the note entirely out from under the other one or to stack them Since I cannot find a good place to put it, I did stack them~
00:53:817 (6) - try to move this a bit farther away from 4 so that there isn't overlap please Done
01:06:192 (7) - putting this under 1 would be rad :3 Hmm, won't that be too far to jump and unexpected? Sorry I didn't change it right now~
01:22:879 (7) - more messy overlap In fact these were all stacked at first, but many people told me it's bad to do so many stacking... OK, do some change!
02:08:817 (3,5) - the effect youre going for here is really cool but it's not coming across because the notes are too close together maybe move them 1 grid farther apart? Maybe done? I forgot what it WAS LIKE after doing this...
04:03:098 (2,3) - hate to say it but if you listen to this very carefully you will discover that the 2 and 3 both belong on 1/6 spacing: http://puu.sh/14lOg Oh wow! I didn't notice that, really thank you!
This is an excellent map and shows a lot of promise, but I think that there is still a little polish yet to be applied for it to reach its full potential :3 I wish you the best map possible and have a nice day!
Oh,wait. The mod should be adopted in each diff. 0 0;eikkaleyd wrote:
Saturos-fangirl wrote:
04:03:098 (2,3) - hate to say it but if you listen to this very carefully you will discover that the 2 and 3 both belong on 1/6 spacing: http://puu.sh/14lOg Oh wow! I didn't notice that, really thank you!
This is an excellent map and shows a lot of promise, but I think that there is still a little polish yet to be applied for it to reach its full potential :3 I wish you the best map possible and have a nice day!
196,228,26442,6,0,B|256:248|322:226,1,120.000004577637
196,144,32817,2,0,B|256:128|316:144,1,120.000004577637
Thank you ,Rika!Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ sirjuyt ~ ~hi
pop map for mod ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions[Heart]
- 01:08:817 (1,2) - Try make blanket. ok
- 02:16:317 (1) - Move to center? ^
- [color=#FF00FF]02:25:317 (4) - Move to X:188 Y:51 symmetry with 02:24:942 (3). ^
[Hurt]
- [color=#FF00FF]00:26:442 (1) - Use this code,make more better slider.
196,228,26442,6,0,B|256:248|322:226,1,120.000004577637OK.- 00:32:817 (2) - ^
196,144,32817,2,0,B|256:128|316:144,1,120.000004577637^- 01:59:254 (2) - Move 1 grid left symmetry with 01:59:442 (3). Fixed.
- 02:06:004 (4) - Ctrl+R flow much better. 嗯,玩起來我是覺得兩邊由上而下是比較順手的~
[Halt]
- 02:27:567 (2) - Flip slider like this.
OK.- 02:54:567 (2) - Move 2 grid right symmetry with 02:53:067 (1). 這樣前後DS多了一點,我把(1)拉進一點吧
Just few small thing ~ 这里浏览图显示是 太鼓的, 把太鼓难度和BG 删了重新 full sumbit,然后再加回来 选osu难度 full submit 就可以了 ~ 喔 知道了!
Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
Oh ,this kiai section is I help him add ,so I think remove it would be better.Garven wrote:
[Taiko]
That last kiai section is kind of awkward since you can finish the spinner long before the kiai runs out. I'd remove it or add a note at 04:08:067 - to help finish the phrase.
Thank you Garven!Garven wrote:
Great! Ranked!
Thanks~ and thanks Garven ><!sirjuyt wrote:
help eikka fixed!
Thank you for telling me that! This map was mapped half a year ago when I was still a newbie....LOL And I'm really busy and unable to remap it, so...Alduric wrote:
Well I have to complain about Heart diff. These jumps are very unintuitive and tiring. eikkaleyd, please do something better next time.