Hanyuu wrote:

Very good

Lesjuh wrote:

hiya! o/

CyanogenLP wrote:

[This map is fine]:
01:21:611 (1) - I'd move the hit on the end of the sliders slightly displaced to make it a bit easier, also hinting the position of the next slider, but that might be just me lacking skills
01:40:085 (5,6,7) - Cramp the hits a bit together to create a more consistent stream movement? http://puu.sh/ij0z
02:14:068 (15,16) - same as above.
02:30:509 {7,8,9) - Those jumps are too big for me :S
02:40:509 (3) - Put that somewhere else, you can barely see it because of the previous slider. - you can, since it's placed on the beginning; well i and my testplayers can
03:02:034 (5,6) - Change the direction of these sliders so it is visible that these actually are sliders, ~80° clockwise. - um... it's pretty visible i think, don't get how 80° rotating would change a thing there
03:58:306 (4) - I would like some indication that the last slider is different (slower) than the others, turning it around would be sufficient for me (http://puu.sh/ij3E) - it's the intention of this slider to break the previous ones' speed while having a great jump attached to it; if more people mind it, i'll try something though

Conclusion: Quite a fun map to play, enjoyed it a lot!

Can't say that much about [W1], because I'm not that good at jumps ...

DoKoLP wrote:

01:21:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - I don't like that part. Impossibru to read for me. q-q

winber1 wrote:

Extra

00:14:577 (4) - fits a lot better if this was a note not a kick slider imo.
00:18:306 (9) - I wouldn't do this unless you make it like a long term pattern, but i guess it kinda works.
00:21:865 (2,3) - hmm. i guess it's ok too ._. still flows better imo if you didn't do it tho.
00:35:255 (1,2,3,4,1) - amgggagag. make a better star? idk
01:02:373 (1) - end spinner at 01:04:746. I don't hear anything on the red tick that you have it on ._.
01:21:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - even when i was first playing this i was like lol. i'm so bad at this.
01:32:204 (6) - better to unstack this imo. It may possibly look like it is on the blue tick even tho it's not.
02:18:221 (8,1) - looks weird since it's not evenly spaced liek the rest of the stream
02:22:034 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - combos are a little weird imo. I know you are trying to perhaps emphasize the jumps, but I would still use consistent combos of 4 or 8 since it follows the music better imo.
02:27:797 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I still can't get over the fact that this looks exactly like 02:28:475 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - in my difficulty except you moved some notes around >_> lol
02:47:373 - i kinda like adding a note here, but it will need some rearranging of notes.
02:57:797 (6) - i would remove two repeats and add a note at 02:58:136. Just makes it more readable imo. http://puu.sh/iMt2 Honestly i just randomly placed a note there, but i just wanted to show you what i meant.
03:04:238 - needs to be a note here (http://puu.sh/iMtV) this could be a little awkward to play tho.
03:12:204 (4) - new combo fits imo

not much of a mod. I have a few random comments in there too. I guess I could've combo modded a litte more, but i didn't really do much of that.

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-Lennox- wrote:

It wasn't a mod. Just a quick look at the tags. Will do a full mod later..

Hijiri Tezuka wrote:

Just a quick question before I go in and mod this:
Was this mape made for Osu!general (As in, both mouse and tablet players) or specificly for tablet players? I'm not exactly great at Osu myself, but it feels like even some of the better mouse players might have trouble beating it. (This applies mosty to Extra; the guest diff is more leaning towards the plausible to beat)

1. 00:04:831 (4) - this plays not so good I think.. = =
2. 00:07:119 (7) - this stacked note kills the flow =.= how about this,, http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot254.jpg
3. 01:33:560 (1) - this note more distance with previous one
4. 01:33:306 (6,7,8) - this doesn't fit the music..
5. 01:58:221 (2) - like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot255-1.jpg
6. 02:18:306 (1) - move 1 grid down and 1 grid left
7. 02:23:391 (4) - move to (240,324)
8. 02:40:933 (5,6) - like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot257-0.jpg
9. 03:08:814 (1) - it's stacked with the note..?
10. 03:48:560 (4,5,6) - spacing larger.. this is too close, it doesn't fit the fast sliders
11. 03:50:170 (7,8,9,10) - ^
12. 03:58:306 (4) - like this.. http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot258.jpg

1. 00:19:492 - add note
2. 01:27:458 (4,5) - make like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot259.jpg
3. 01:28:390 (2) - ctrl+r better i think

Fiya wrote:

Got space for a taiko diff? The 1/8th, all the slider speed changes, and very low hitsounds make this not so fun for taiko players, so I could make one if you wanted

Also offset is about -21~-25
If you're worried about the negetive offset, just change it to the negetive then put the red tick on the start of the next stanza. It's definately not 1 though

Gorlum wrote:

Amazing map. Good luck with approving.

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