arikanon wrote:

★~ Star!

• Guilty Crownって感じで、GとCだけ大文字じゃだめなのかな？

• AR-1
  00:06:386 (1) - 提案　
  
  00:18:944 (3) - 折り返しはずして上の提案と合わせてみるとか？
  00:24:525 (5) - 折り返し地点にadd whistle
  00:52:083 (3) - 初心者には難しいと思ったので(4)消して3を折り返しにしてみたりとかどうでしょう
  01:10:921 (1) - end this at 01:11:618 -

• Drain or OD-1?
  01:11:967 (x) - add note?

• 00:46:328 (6) - add new combo?
  00:47:374 (1) - remove new combo
  01:23:479 (1,2,3,4) - 四角形好きです　
  
  01:24:176 (1) - 終わりのVolume5%を消してsoftのwhistleを追加とか。（超個人的な意見)

R a r e wrote:

よう！！りゃふかさん！！！！
前IRC Modやったから残りやりました
全部提案です

General

• Guilty Crownって感じで、GとCだけ大文字じゃだめなのかな？

公式が"カタカナ(英語の大文字)"って感じだったんでこうしました！

Easy

• AR-1
  00:06:386 (1) - 提案　
  
  ok~
  00:18:944 (3) - 折り返しはずして上の提案と合わせてみるとか？no change T_T
  00:24:525 (5) - 折り返し地点にadd whistle ok~
  00:52:083 (3) - 初心者には難しいと思ったので(4)消して3を折り返しにしてみたりとかどうでしょう ん～とりあえず保留で～
  01:10:921 (1) - end this at 01:11:618 - とりあえず変えましたがまた変更するかもしれません！

Normal

• Drain or OD-1?　ok~
  01:11:967 (x) - add note? sliderの前にnoteを置きたくないのでこのままで～T_T

Hard

• 00:46:328 (6) - add new combo?　no change T_T
  00:47:374 (1) - remove new combo ^
  01:23:479 (1,2,3,4) - 四角形好きです　
  
  なるべく簡単にしたかったんでこのままでT_T
  01:24:176 (1) - 終わりのVolume5%を消してsoftのwhistleを追加とか。（超個人的な意見)

このままで～T_T

no kd pls!
直すとこない！！
go ranked

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Ryafuka ~ (Sorry for the later mod) hi ^^/

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:56:967 (1,2) - Try this rhythm. no change T_T
   
2. 01:22:083 (4) - Flip this slider,flow much better,like this. ok~
   

[Normal]

1. AR+1 will be fun with me. ok~
2. 00:49:990 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here. woops,thanks ><

[Easy]

1. 01:08:130 (5) - Add new combo to here,long combo hard for beginner. ok~
2. 01:15:804 (5) - ^ ok~

That' all ~ Nice mapsed gogo ranked ~

Good luck ~

GiNa wrote:

Hiii !

They all suggestions btw

[Easy]
01:24:176 (1) – this ended early, it should end at 01:27:316, so also moved the green line to 01:27:316　ok!
Others are fine

[Normal]
00:30:630 (1,2,3) – maybe try this instead, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/251883 no change T_T
00:34:816 (2) – this sounds off, delete this slider then add a note at 00:34:990 ok~
00:35:339 – add a note here too ok~
00:35:514 (3) – move to 00:35:688
After all, it should look like this, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/251889, I also adjusted the spacing, you don’t really have to follow mine ok,all changed!
01:06:560 (2,3,4) – maybe this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/251892 hmm..no change T_T
01:24:176 (1) – same as Easy ok~

[Insane]
01:24:176 (1) – same as Easy ok~
Nice diff, I like it <3 thanks <3

That's all, good luck !

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello! hello~

General:
- Fine

Skin:
- Flip horizontally: comboburst-0, comboburst-1, comboburst-3 and comboburst-4 ok~
- Also try to crop the combobursts in general so the size of the image is lower. In all the comboburst there is transparency you can cut ok~
- The reverse arrow seems a little big ok~ it became somewhat small
- The slider ball looks weird while playing and I think is too much try to do something more simple hmm..ok,I deleted slider ball T_T

Easy:
- The slider velocity is a bit high no change T_T Because it is easy enough for newbie player, i think..
- 01:27:316 >> Switch to soft sample set, with the normal set you hear a little pop sound ok~

Normal:
- 01:27:316 >> Switch to soft sample set, with the normal set you hear a little pop sound ok~

Hard:
- 00:47:374 >> I don't know, I don't think the new combo is necessary ok deleted (same NC of "Insane" was deleted similarly)
- 01:27:316 >> Switch to soft sample set, with the normal set you hear a little pop sound ok~

Insane:
- 01:27:316 >> Switch to soft sample set, with the normal set you hear a little pop sound ok~

* Pretty good mapset

lovhin456 wrote:

Recheck

Skin:
- For the sliderball why not try this one http://puu.sh/j5Ny ? I did it, I think it suits well the whole skin you have

Easy:
- 00:47:897 (1,2) >> Instead of these 2 make a slider from (1) to (2)

Normal:
- HP Drain -1 ?

Hard:
- 01:03:769 (7,8) >> Exchange their places in the timeline, it sounds better imo
- 01:23:479 (3,4) >> I think that it is better to make a copy of previous (1,2) and flip them horizontally so it creates a little jump

* That's all, call me back after

lovhin456 wrote:

All is good
Bubbled

lovhin456 wrote:

Ah, it's my fault I didn't see it >< I'm sorry and it's ok
Rebubbled

Garven wrote:

o/ o/

[General]
I didn't like how the ticks were silenced throughout the entire map. Leaving them audible from 00:28:362 - would fit nicely imo. In almost parts, it can be heard noisily,I think..so I won't change...

[Easy]
00:25:397 (1) - start this at 00:25:572 - ok~
00:52:083 (3,4) - Hrm, I think something like this fits better:
　ok~
01:24:176 (1) - I'd end this at 01:27:142 - ok~

[Normal]
00:25:397 (1) - Start this at 00:25:572 - ok~
01:24:002 - Add note? no~;A;
01:24:176 (1) - I'd end this at 01:27:142 - ok~

[Hard]
00:56:618 (6,1) - Move down and right two grids to adjust for stacking ok~
01:18:421 (1) - Start this at 01:18:595 - ok~
01:24:176 (1) - I'd end this at 01:27:142 - ok~

[Insane]
01:07:956 - Add note ok~
01:08:653 - Add note ok~
01:09:351 - Add note ok~
01:11:618 (7) - Stop the stack here. Move away since there's a new phrase starting. Also new combo ok~
01:24:176 (1) - I'd end this at 01:27:142 - ok~

Garven wrote:

o.o

[Easy]
00:52:083 (3) - I was thinking with one more repeat on this. You can rearrange things like this and it should be fine.

SPOILER

Garven wrote:

Aaand rebubbled~

Envi wrote:

when this stuff will be ranked? Been waiting for soo long orz

1. 00:08:479 (1,2,3) - Easyとして非常にタイミング取りづらいしあんまり音楽に合ってない。↓こうしよう。
   
2. 00:39:525 (1,2,3,4) - これももう少し上手く音楽に合わせられないかな？
3. 00:52:083 (3) - 初心者は戸惑うので普通のスライダーの方が良いです。修正したら次のスペーシングを直すのも忘れずに。
   

1. 00:33:944 (1) - 00:31:153 (2)にfinishつけるならこっちの始端にもfinish。
2. 00:39:525 (1) - ^

1. 00:09:176 (1,2,3,4) - この3連打は違和感ある。↓こうのが良いです。
   
2. 00:36:037 (3,4,5,6) - ここも同じ違和感があるので同様に。
3. 00:36:735 (1) - 綺麗だけど・・・正直あまりゲームプレイとしては面白くない。このスライダーは00:37:083で終わって、00:37:258に単発を置いた方がベター。

Suzully wrote:

[Easy]

1. 00:08:479 (1,2,3) - Easyとして非常にタイミング取りづらいしあんまり音楽に合ってない。↓こうしよう。
   
2. 00:39:525 (1,2,3,4) - これももう少し上手く音楽に合わせられないかな？
3. 00:52:083 (3) - 初心者は戸惑うので普通のスライダーの方が良いです。修正したら次のスペーシングを直すのも忘れずに。
   

[Normal]

1. 00:33:944 (1) - 00:31:153 (2)にfinishつけるならこっちの始端にもfinish。
2. 00:39:525 (1) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:09:176 (1,2,3,4) - この3連打は違和感ある。↓こうのが良いです。
   
2. 00:36:037 (3,4,5,6) - ここも同じ違和感があるので同様に。
3. 00:36:735 (1) - 綺麗だけど・・・正直あまりゲームプレイとしては面白くない。このスライダーは00:37:083で終わって、00:37:258に単発を置いた方がベター。

all fixed~