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01:05:702 - ผมว่าตรงนี้สลับด้านให้เริ่มที่ด้านซ้ายดีกว่านะครับ เพราะมันไหลมากกว่า

01:40:140 - เพิ่มโน๊ตตรงนี้ดีมั้ยกว่า เพราะเพลงมันรัว

โชคดีครับ เพลงเพราะ แมพเยี่ยม

+1 star

Nichiyouki wrote:

สวัสดีครับ

Red = Unrankable
Biue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

Tranquil

1. 00:37:845 (2,3,4) - ลองลงไปสัก 1 ช่อง มันจะสวยมากขึ้น
   จัดไป
2. 00:44:885 (1) - จังหวะนี้ ควรจะใส่เสียง clap นะครับ
   ลืม lol
3. 00:45:804 (3) - ^ โดยใส่ที่ช่วงเริ่มของ slider และอีกอย่างคือที่นี่กับ (2) ไม่สมมาตรกัน น่าจะย้ายลงไปอยู่ที่ x:360 y:296
   แก้ละจ้า
4. 01:12:436 (5) - น่าจะควรใส่ NC ไว้ที่นี่นะครับ
   ดูแล้วไม่จำเป็นนะ เพราะยังเห็นโน้ต (6) ชัดเจนอยู่ -...-
5. 02:02:334 (3) - ควรใส่ finish ที่ช่วงสิ้นสุดของ slider
   จัดไปจ้า
6. 02:04:738 (6,1) - ใส่ finish ที่ช่วงสิ้นสุดของ slider ใน (6) แต่เอา finish ที่อยู่ใน (1) ออก

โอเช =w=
ไม่ต้องให้ kd นะครับ เพราะผมเคยได้มาแล้ว

ผมจะส่งดาวไปให้ และขอให้โชคดีนะครับ

1. sliderfollowcircle.png is more thicker than hitcircleoverlay.png , looks strange...

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:18:559 (1,2,3,4) - Make a great square looks better ( Move circle 4 up 2 grids and left 2 grids to make a square)
   2. 01:23:457 (1,2,3) - I would like to make a change on this pattern , try this? Use slider 3 encircle circle 01:26:518 (4) - looks really great
      
      Picture

      
   3. 01:28:967 (1,2,3) - Right angle here is not give the pattern a nice flow , try to make them more radians?
   4. 01:38:304 - Unused Green Timing Section , remove it
   5. 01:43:661 (1,2) - Hmm... This flow ... , I prefer something else like this , The flow is not fit me at all >~<
      
      Picture

      
   6. 01:55:906 (1) - This slider is not symmetrical correctly , I make a symmetrical one for you! here is my code
      
      Code

      184,376,115906,6,0,B|200:348|232:348|232:348|236:324|256:316|256:316|276:324|280:348|280:348|312:348|328:376,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   7. 02:06:314 (1) - Same as above , I make a symmetrical one for you~ :3
      
      Code

      336,168,126314,2,0,B|316:120|256:100|196:120|176:168,1,199.999980926514,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   8. 02:16:110 (1) - This New Combo is not needed in my opinion , Remove it?
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:24:681 (1,2) - Hmm... The sliderslide sound is not good for me , silence it sounds better
   2. 01:38:151 (1) - Add a whistle here is not a bad idea , sounds great

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections , leave one and remove one , this is unrankable , because both sections option is different
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:50:702 (3,4) - Bad Flow >~< the flow is very bad between 00:50:396 (2,3) - , Probably try my arrengement?
      
      Picture

      
   2. 01:02:947 (4) - Curve this slider to the other side can get a better flow
   3. 01:07:232 (2) - Same suggestion as above
   4. 01:23:457 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - About these the same slider , I would suggested you make more changes , a bit boring while playing >~<
   5. 01:38:304 - Unused Green Timing Section~
   6. 01:47:947 (1) - Wave slider will make the flow much better ~
      
      Picture

      
   7. 01:57:130 (4,1) - These two objects are a bit orderless in my opinion , Use a circular slider is enough ~
      
      Picture

      
   8. 02:15:804 (1,2,3,4) - Looks very very crowded , try to make them more comfortable ~
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nothing to say~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections here , please remove one
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:42:743 (2,3) - Move slider (2) 1 grid right , and (3) 1 grid left looks better
   2. 01:29:885 (5) - Curve this slider a bit ?
   3. 01:57:130 (1) - I would like you move this circle to x:418 y:348 , the flow is fitting me very well , I don't know what other players think about though :p
   4. Not much to say , this diff is great
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:07:232 (4) - Add a finish end?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. Nothing! Really great difficulty!!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. None!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections here , please remove one
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:53:763 (7,8) - Move these two up 2 grid together , make the same spacing
   2. 01:45:191 (10) - Roteta this slider by 30 ?
   3. Amazing jumps!!
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nothing~

Taiko BG

1. sliderfollowcircle.png is more thicker than hitcircleoverlay.png , looks strange...

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 01:18:559 (1,2,3,4) - Make a great square looks better ( Move circle 4 up 2 grids and left 2 grids to make a square)
      okay changed.
   2. 01:23:457 (1,2,3) - I would like to make a change on this pattern , try this? Use slider 3 encircle circle 01:26:518 (4) - looks really great
      
      Picture

      
      okay
   3. 01:28:967 (1,2,3) - Right angle here is not give the pattern a nice flow , try to make them more radians?
      fixed.
   4. 01:38:304 - Unused Green Timing Section , remove it
      oops!! remove it >3
   5. 01:43:661 (1,2) - Hmm... This flow ... , I prefer something else like this , The flow is not fit me at all >~<
      
      Picture

      
      fixed.
   6. 01:55:906 (1) - This slider is not symmetrical correctly , I make a symmetrical one for you! here is my code
      
      Code

      184,376,115906,6,0,B|200:348|232:348|232:348|236:324|256:316|256:316|276:324|280:348|280:348|312:348|328:376,1,199.999980926514,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

      thanks >w<
   7. 02:06:314 (1) - Same as above , I make a symmetrical one for you~ :3
      
      Code

      336,168,126314,2,0,B|316:120|256:100|196:120|176:168,1,199.999980926514,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

      same as above lol
   8. 02:16:110 (1) - This New Combo is not needed in my opinion , Remove it?
   removed it.
   
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:24:681 (1,2) - Hmm... The sliderslide sound is not good for me , silence it sounds better
      nope.
   2. 01:38:151 (1) - Add a whistle here is not a bad idea , sounds great

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections , leave one and remove one , this is unrankable , because both sections option is different
   fixed.
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:50:702 (3,4) - Bad Flow >~< the flow is very bad between 00:50:396 (2,3) - , Probably try my arrengement?
      
      Picture

      
   2. 01:02:947 (4) - Curve this slider to the other side can get a better flow
   3. 01:07:232 (2) - Same suggestion as above
   4. 01:23:457 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - About these the same slider , I would suggested you make more changes , a bit boring while playing >~<
   5. 01:38:304 - Unused Green Timing Section~
   6. 01:47:947 (1) - Wave slider will make the flow much better ~
      
      Picture

      
   7. 01:57:130 (4,1) - These two objects are a bit orderless in my opinion , Use a circular slider is enough ~
      
      Picture

      
   8. 02:15:804 (1,2,3,4) - Looks very very crowded , try to make them more comfortable ~
   fixed all restful diff orz ._. (old beatmap = old style)
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nothing to say~

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections here , please remove one
   fixed again ._.　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:42:743 (2,3) - Move slider (2) 1 grid right , and (3) 1 grid left looks better
   2. 01:29:885 (5) - Curve this slider a bit ?
   3. 01:57:130 (1) - I would like you move this circle to x:418 y:348 , the flow is fitting me very well , I don't know what other players think about though :p
      disagree about this suggest, I feel weird when change it orz ._.
   4. Not much to say , this diff is great
   I think this diff is great too... (it's 2012 beatmap style lol)
   
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:07:232 (4) - Add a finish end?

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. 01:57:896 - There are two Timing Sections here , please remove one
   fixed again and again ._.
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:53:763 (7,8) - Move these two up 2 grid together , make the same spacing
      okay
   2. 01:45:191 (10) - Roteta this slider by 30 ?
      fixed with 30 anti-clockwise
   3. Amazing jumps!!
   it's crazy jumps lol
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. Nothing~

Taiko BG

Tweelon wrote:

Y U Graveyard fckin awesome peaceful map moreover with awesome dj. Well I really like it.

Frostmourne wrote:

hi !

General
inconsistent .osu file version,this can be fixed by editing something in every diffs , just to make some changes
also inconsistent TitleUnicode ArtistUnicode so you have to add them manually in .osu files
Tips : U know, It's can make it easy with press F4 on edit mode (it will fill Title & Artist Unicode atomatically) my mistake

Quiet
01:24:681 (3) - miss clap at repeat point here
Oh god, i forgot xD

Restful
AR-1 ? , it feels too fast for this diff
01:06:008 (5) - whistle here as it sounds similar to 01:04:783 (2) - (tik tik)
01:15:498 (3) - ^ tail of this slider , quite similar reason
01:20:702 (4) - ^
01:25:600 (7) - ^
01:29:579 (2) - last point only ^
01:57:743 (1) - miss clap at the tail
02:16:722 (3) - maybe clap with S:C2 is good enough for the very end here
Agree with your idea, so fixed all.

Tranquil
AR-1 ? quite fast imo , like Restful diff
00:35:396 (2) - move left and up both 2 grid (will be x:452 y:252) it will balance spacing better
02:02:334 (3) - head of slider here , normally you use whistle for cymbal sound in the drum but this point , it sounds awkward so it better be drum with S:C2
same idea
02:07:232 (4) - head slider with S:C2 clap again orz...
Nice idea for this diff, fixed.

Spinboxer
fine but.. don't forget to update the version , titleunicode and artist unicode after being done this !

Peaceful
00:48:100 (1) - is this intentional? , this spinner is too fast and suddenly followed by a slider so maybe shorten this spinner 1/4 beat ?
intentional ?, yes coz it must have at least spinner on this diff. But it shorten spinner, so delete some note to make longer spinner.
01:23:151 (1) - clap ?
forgot LOL
01:33:253 (1) - from this note to 01:36:926 (8) - , maybe reduce volume for this section to 30-40% ? and gradually increase its volume to 70 at the end of the part (01:36:926 (8) - ) as the song sounds like a slow part before the chorus so it might be a great idea to gradually increase the volume inside this section (something like 30->35->40->45->50 on the volume)
Nice idea, fixed.
02:06:773 (6) - add new combo here , will automatically shape a star and easier to read
okay
Taiko diff is fine but you should make an update (maybe move one note > update , and then move back to the old version > update)
Call me in-game when you are done !

Frostmourne wrote:

cool SB !

Royston wrote:

Lol, naming the hardest difficulty "Peaceful". What a troll.

Nice map by the way.