forum

Hatsune Miku - Sayonara Goodbye

posted
Total Posts
32
Topic Starter
j e a n_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 Mac 2012 at 12:54:32

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Sayonara Goodbye
Source: NoboruP
Tags: Project Diva Vocaloid Vocaloid2
BPM: 155
Filesize: 4992kb
Play Time: 02:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Goodbye (5 stars, 583 notes)
  2. Hard (4.31 stars, 297 notes)
  3. Normal (2.8 stars, 192 notes)
  4. Taiko (4.72 stars, 915 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Sayonara Goodbye
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
plz help ><
thanks L_P for 4 stars!
thanks Leorda for bubble~
mintong89
I Don't Know You Are First Do Beatmap or Not.

Problem
1.Check AIMOD and See The Problem (Warning Only), Make Sure All Warning Gone. (Or You Do One Again, Because Warning Too More)
2.Source is "Vocaloid".
3.Please Set Preview Point.

Not Problem
1.I Will Do Taiko Oni or Hard For You....... (Or Two)
Topic Starter
j e a n_old

mint_ong89 wrote:

I Don't Know You Are First Do Beatmap or Not.

Problem
1.Check AIMOD and See The Problem (Warning Only), Make Sure All Warning Gone. (Or You Do One Again, Because Warning Too More)
nope! it plays fine
2.Source is "Vocaloid". ok!
3.Please Set Preview Point. i found so hard for the preview point button

Not Problem
1.I Will Do Taiko Oni or Hard For You....... (Or Two)
Thanks! about the taiko oni, you can try to make one? because im making a taiko halfway now.If yours is better than mine,i will use yours.
btw, dont need a osu diff from you for now

and you know, i cant accept two guest diff from the same person
SuperMIC
You need a normal diff. I can do one for you?

Also, the star pattern is way overused in the insane diff, it made things repetitive and a bit boring. ._. Also, on Easy, CS+1
Neptunus
okay, here we go~

General:
1, diff spread, you need diffs to make this mapset a well diffcult-arranged
2, in source, capital the "v" in vocaloid

Easy:
***REDUCE THE USE OF SPINNERS***
00:50:398 (1) - cancel the new combo, because these 2 sliders are in the same vocal part
00:52:140 (5) - extend this slider to 00:52:720 -
01:18:269 (1) - from here , I suggest that you arrange these 1 note and 3 sliders like this: (just the style, please dismiss the spacing)

02:48:462 (5) - no...this is not consistent with the former pattern

Goodbye:
00:01:624 (3,4) - these are not fun, althought I know you want a jump here, but this should not be arranged like this, you can use new combos to avoid misreading
00:02:591 (6,7) - also these 2
***00:12:462 (9,10,1) - GOOD SKILL!this make the mapset professional :!:***
00:52:140 (1,2,3,4) - space out
mintong89

j e a n wrote:

mint_ong89 wrote:

I Don't Know You Are First Do Beatmap or Not.

Problem
1.Check AIMOD and See The Problem (Warning Only), Make Sure All Warning Gone. (Or You Do One Again, Because Warning Too More)
nope! it plays fine
2.Source is "Vocaloid". ok!
3.Please Set Preview Point. i found so hard for the preview point button

Not Problem
1.I Will Do Taiko Oni or Hard For You....... (Or Two)
Thanks! about the taiko oni, you can try to make one? because im making a taiko halfway now.If yours is better than mine,i will use yours.
btw, dont need a osu diff from you for now

and you know, i cant accept two guest diff from the same person
ok, i will do taiko oni for you ;)
M a n a
[General]

SPOILER
Add Project Diva Vocaloid Vocaloid2 to the Tag
The source should be NoboruP not Vocaloid
At 00:41:108 ,Click timing -> Set current potition as Preview point
I suggest you to make Normal and Hard diff

[Easy]

SPOILER
Circle Size +1
00:00:850 - Decrease the volume. It's too noisy
00:12:849 (3) - Remove clap
00:13:237 (1) - Maybe add finish in the begining?
00:38:398 - Add note?
00:50:398 (1) - Add finish in the begining?
00:51:559 (1) - Remove finish or clap?
00:52:140 (2) - Confusing rhythm for beginer
01:18:849 (2) - ^
01:20:398 (4) - ^
01:33:753 - Same as 00:51:559
01:56:979 (1) - Remove new combo
02:00:075 (1) - Add finish?
02:49:624 - Same as 00:00:850

[Goodbye]

SPOILER
00:00:850 - Same as easy
00:00:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing placement
00:49:624 (9) - New combo
01:31:043 (2) - I know this is insane diff,but this note just make this diff overmapped.
01:31:817 (4) - ^
01:41:882 (9) - Weird hitsound
02:00:269 (1,2) - Weird rhythm
02:19:043 (2) - This note doesn't really fit the song.
02:19:817 (4) - ^
02:22:140 (2) - ^
02:22:914 (4) - ^
02:41:398 (7) - ^
02:49:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:00:849

That's all
Good luck :D
Sure
Hi :D

[General]
Is this map WIP, right?
You should make Normal and Hard diff if you wanna rank it.

01:42:269 - Add a timing point for end kiai.
02:52:333 - End kiai


[Goodbye]
00:00:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Mostly star formation is spaced by equal distance. But it isn't. Try to add new combo to 4 and 7. Or you'd better find other formation.
01:09:559 (3) - x:168 / y:128
01:38:011 (4) - It's a bit hard to see reverse arrow due to hitburst, also it's ugly overlapping. Move it to x:296 / y:184, then rotate it a bit.
02:00:269 (1,2) - I really can't understand. I'd like to change this. http://puu.sh/g8N7
02:19:817 (4) - Same problem with 01:38:011 (4)
02:28:333 (2,3) - You have same pattern with 02:29:108 (4,5). But they have a bit different spacing.
02:49:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I mentioned it already.

I think you overmapped to much. :p


[Easy]
Circle Size +1
00:12:075 (3) - Add clap to start
00:14:785 (3) - Add finish to start
00:50:398 (1) - ^
01:32:204 (3) - Remove clap from end
01:49:237 (1) - Add finish
02:16:333 (2) - Remove whistle from end
02:17:495 (3,5) - Add wishtle
02:17:882 (4) - Remove whistle
02:18:656 (1) - Remove whistle from reverse arrow
02:21:754 (1) - Add finish to start


k, Good luck
Topic Starter
j e a n_old

Neptunus wrote:

okay, here we go~

General:
1, diff spread, you need diffs to make this mapset a well diffcult-arranged oh,k
2, in source, capital the "v" in vocaloid changed the source

Easy:
***REDUCE THE USE OF SPINNERS*** but..i only have 4 spinners..
00:50:398 (1) - cancel the new combo, because these 2 sliders are in the same vocal part done
00:52:140 (5) - extend this slider to 00:52:720 - done
01:18:269 (1) - from here , I suggest that you arrange these 1 note and 3 sliders like this: (just the style, please dismiss the spacing)
done
02:48:462 (5) - no...this is not consistent with the former pattern done

Goodbye:
00:01:624 (3,4) - these are not fun, althought I know you want a jump here, but this should not be arranged like this, you can use new combos to avoid misreading sorry, but i decided to become a mapper that player will remember my name
00:02:591 (6,7) - also these 2 done
***00:12:462 (9,10,1) - GOOD SKILL!this make the mapset professional :!:***
00:52:140 (1,2,3,4) - space out done

M a n a wrote:

[General]

SPOILER
Add Project Diva Vocaloid Vocaloid2 to the Tag
The source should be NoboruP not Vocaloid done
At 00:41:108 ,Click timing -> Set current potition as Preview point done
I suggest you to make Normal and Hard diff

[Easy]

SPOILER
Circle Size +1
00:00:850 - Decrease the volume. It's too noisy done
00:12:849 (3) - Remove clap done
00:13:237 (1) - Maybe add finish in the begining? done
00:38:398 - Add note? become a slider
00:50:398 (1) - Add finish in the begining? done
00:51:559 (1) - Remove finish or clap? oh..
00:52:140 (2) - Confusing rhythm for beginer i will keep this
01:18:849 (2) - ^ done
01:20:398 (4) - ^ done
01:33:753 - Same as 00:51:559 done
01:56:979 (1) - Remove new combo
02:00:075 (1) - Add finish? done
02:49:624 - Same as 00:00:850 done

[Goodbye]

SPOILER
00:00:850 - Same as easy done
00:00:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing placement sorry, but i decided to become a mapper that player will remember my name
00:49:624 (9) - New combo done
01:31:043 (2) - I know this is insane diff,but this note just make this diff overmapped.
01:31:817 (4) - ^ some kind...but i think some pattern here
01:41:882 (9) - Weird hitsound ha, did some changes
02:00:269 (1,2) - Weird rhythm done
02:19:043 (2) - This note doesn't really fit the song.
02:19:817 (4) - ^
02:22:140 (2) - ^
02:22:914 (4) - ^
02:41:398 (7) - ^
02:49:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same as 00:00:849 done

That's all
Good luck :D

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi :D

[General]
Is this map WIP, right?
You should make Normal and Hard diff if you wanna rank it. oh...ok

01:42:269 - Add a timing point for end kiai. done
02:52:333 - End kiai done


[Goodbye]
00:00:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Mostly star formation is spaced by equal distance. But it isn't. Try to add new combo to 4 and 7. Or you'd better find other formation. sorry, but i decided to become a mapper that player will remember my name
01:09:559 (3) - x:168 / y:128 no thanks
01:38:011 (4) - It's a bit hard to see reverse arrow due to hitburst, also it's ugly overlapping. Move it to x:296 / y:184, then rotate it a bit. done
02:00:269 (1,2) - I really can't understand. I'd like to change this. http://puu.sh/g8N7 haha done
02:19:817 (4) - Same problem with 01:38:011 (4) done
02:28:333 (2,3) - You have same pattern with 02:29:108 (4,5). But they have a bit different spacing. yeah,thats what i want
02:49:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I mentioned it already.

I think you overmapped to much. :p a bbit..><


[Easy]
Circle Size +1
00:12:075 (3) - Add clap to start done
00:14:785 (3) - Add finish to start done
00:50:398 (1) - ^ no thanks
01:32:204 (3) - Remove clap from end done
01:49:237 (1) - Add finish done
02:16:333 (2) - Remove whistle from end done
02:17:495 (3,5) - Add wishtle done
02:17:882 (4) - Remove whistle done
02:18:656 (1) - Remove whistle from reverse arrow done
02:21:754 (1) - Add finish to start done


k, Good luck
thank you all
Topic Starter
j e a n_old

SuperMICrophone wrote:

You need a normal diff. I can do one for you?

Also, the star pattern is way overused in the insane diff, it made things repetitive and a bit boring. ._. Also, on Easy, CS+1
no, sorry
mintong89
I do Finish Taiko Oni!!!...... :) :)

Here My Taiko Oni :D :D
mintong89
and set preview point (go to "timing" way click "Set Current Position .......")
L_P
are you going to take that taiko?

General: a very interesting map made by a first time map submitter! dont worry about star, i think i will give you more after i comform that you have the best map in this round, haha

people not giving you star are asshole

Normal
Some slider shape, arrangement are not very pretty yet, need more work on your own , mod couldnt give you much
02:00:075 (1) - finish
02:27:946 (3) - finish head
02:32:204 (8) - add a note
02:34:140 (3) - finish

Hard
00:28:720 (1) - finish
00:34:914 (1) - finish
00:59:688 (1) - head finish
01:05:882 (1) - ^
01:18:269 (1) - ^ (why you missed so many finish? you can hear them in music!
01:29:882 (7) - tail finish
01:42:269 (8) - all finish?
02:00:849 (2) - tail whistle, next slider head finish
02:02:398 (3) - whistle
check your hitsounds again = =
02:38:204 (3) - this slider hahahahahahah!!!


Insane
00:00:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i noticed so many mods tell you to change it, DONNT LISTEN TO THEM
00:14:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - find some arrangement..
00:27:753 (5,6,7,8,9) - spacing suddenly too big, plz find some thing to do here, but not star shape again
00:39:366 (5) - ctrl + R this?
00:48:849 (7) - move it closer, make player familiar to your pattern first
01:05:882 (1) - head finish
02:07:817 (1) - finish
last kiai seems like overmap imo, but it is fun for me
Topic Starter
j e a n_old
fixed all! thanks!

@mint_ong89, sorry
Touche_old
[TAIKO]

00:22:140 : K -> k (not finish sound please)
00:31:817 : ^
00:41:108 : D -> d
00:46:527 : K -> k
00:46:914 : ^
00:59:688 : D -> d
01:15:172 : ^
01:21:462 : K -> k
01:24:462 : D -> d
01:33:336 : K -> k
02:24:075 : You really need the BIG SLIDER? Use normal slider
02:27:559 : D -> d
02:40:333 ~ 02:49:624 : Use 1,25x Slider Velocity AND NOT 1,25x - 1,00x - 1,25x CUZ IS HARD TO READ D:
02:49:624 ~ End : You can use 1,00x Slider Velocity here :>
BeatofIke
Request from my modding queue.

[General] None

[Easy]
Slider tick rate 1?
Circle size 3?

[Goodbye]
- Moe stars everywhere!

I shall star this map.
L_P
ok, your map is the best map of this round in my queue.
enjoy your 4 stars as promised~
Topic Starter
j e a n_old

Touche wrote:

[TAIKO]

00:22:140 : K -> k (not finish sound please) fixed
00:31:817 : ^ fixed
00:41:108 : D -> d fixed
00:46:527 : K -> k fixed
00:46:914 : ^ fixed
00:59:688 : D -> d fixed
01:15:172 : ^ fixed
01:21:462 : K -> k fixed
01:24:462 : D -> d fixed
01:33:336 : K -> k fixed
02:24:075 : You really need the BIG SLIDER? Use normal slider fixed
02:27:559 : D -> d fixed
02:40:333 ~ 02:49:624 : Use 1,25x Slider Velocity AND NOT 1,25x - 1,00x - 1,25x CUZ IS HARD TO READ D: on purpose...
02:49:624 ~ End : You can use 1,00x Slider Velocity here :> i do use 1.00 ... O.o

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

[General] None

[Easy]
Slider tick rate 1? ok
Circle size 3? no

[Goodbye]
- Moe stars everywhere!

I shall star this map.
thanks for the star~

L_P wrote:

ok, your map is the best map of this round in my queue.
enjoy your 4 stars as promised~
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
wmfchris
end the break uniquely at 01:43:043 - for the solo diffs

1000 audio lead-in may not be enough, try 1500

[Goodbye]
00:12:462 (9) - New combo (NC) to indicate the spacing change
00:37:043 (4) - turn the slider to other direction to avoid overlapping with coming notes
00:39:366 (5) - I prefer clap+finish since this serves as another accent which is slightly different from (4)
01:08:785 (10) - remove whistle

some impressive sounding, pattern sounds fine but repeats a bit too much.

[Hard]
00:48:849 (5,6) - ...such slider placement looks poor to me orz
01:59:108 (6) - also feel odd here because ending of (5) don't give the signs of 3/2 beat pattern -w-
02:40:720 (4) - NC here

feeling that the hitsound logic is a bit different from [goodbye]...

[Normal] -> maybe you'll need to put this even easier, and try avoiding starting slider in tricky points like red ticks,etc

[Taiko]
Timing and difficulty Settings
CS, AR has no effect on taiko diff. HP, OD -> 5~6. (We usually put taiko diff in that settings)

S/S:C2 is significantly softer than N in taiko gameplay, try to make the loudness in this diff around N 50%~80%. Also, Remove all unecessary timing points so that no kiai flash happens.

Arrangement
00:12:366 - remove
00:12:462 - slider=1/4 stream in taiko play so I don't think it's suitable here, try k d kkkkd
00:13:624 - remove
00:27:172 - not fit with slider
00:31:817 - d sounds better with the lower pitch of vocal
00:50:398 - not fit with slider
01:05:108 - ^
01:26:785 - ^
01:29:882 - ^
01:35:495 - try K K K D D K D
01:36:849 - slider...
01:42:849 - artificially remove break from taiko diff because there shouldn't be break (I mean the one with pass/fail figures, etc) sectino in taiko
01:56:979 - K K K ddk ---- D
02:14:785 - slider
02:24:075 - ^
02:27:946 - ^
02:38:979 - this stream does not fit with the music : < the drum's 4 in a group (1/4) not 3 so ddkdddk's not suitable
02:42:269 - very confusing. I don't know why we need a significant acceleration there (even though you use it I prefer like 1.2->0.9x/1.0x) and the K should be in 1.2x speed too
02:45:753 - ^

main problem's from the slider and the SV change at the end. Try to put more variation to show the vocal's emotional/tonal change other than following drrum's d d k d d d k d ......
mintong89
all right....
Kamure
Mod Request:

[Hard]
  1. 02:38:204 (3) - what is that.

[Insane]
  1. 02:04:720 (1) - finish at the beginning of the slider
Nice.. I saw the wmfchris modded too, so I removed all that matched his.

Star!!
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ j e a n ~ :) (Sorry for the later mod)

M4M here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove Enable countdown.
  2. 01:42:946 - This break time should move to here 01:43:043.

[Goodbye]


  1. 00:48:849 (7) - Add new combo to here,vocal start to here.
  2. 01:26:011 (5) - ^
  3. 01:27:366 - Add a note here will be better.
  4. 02:16:333 (7) - Move 2 grid right.
  5. 02:19:043 (2) - This slider Hidden by 02:19:817 (4) arrow,it's unrankable.
  6. 02:23:301 (5) - Add new combo to here,vocal start to here.

[Hard]


  1. 00:41:108 - Add finish.
  2. 02:15:559 - ^
  3. 02:25:624 (3) - Add a repeat will be better with me.

[Normal]


  1. 01:55:430 (1) - Remove too short new combo.

That's all ~ Nice song ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
j e a n_old

wmfchris wrote:

end the break uniquely at 01:43:043 - for the solo diffs done

1000 audio lead-in may not be enough, try 1500 done

[Goodbye]
00:12:462 (9) - New combo (NC) to indicate the spacing change done
00:37:043 (4) - turn the slider to other direction to avoid overlapping with coming notes done
00:39:366 (5) - I prefer clap+finish since this serves as another accent which is slightly different from (4) done
01:08:785 (10) - remove whistle i think whistle is fine

some impressive sounding, pattern sounds fine but repeats a bit too much. yin wei wo mei you geng...haha

[Hard]
00:48:849 (5,6) - ...such slider placement looks poor to me orz changed something...
01:59:108 (6) - also feel odd here because ending of (5) don't give the signs of 3/2 beat pattern -w- agreed...added a note
02:40:720 (4) - NC here done

feeling that the hitsound logic is a bit different from [goodbye]... um....

[Normal] -> maybe you'll need to put this even easier, and try avoiding starting slider in tricky points like red ticks,etc i really think it sound nice...

[Taiko]
Timing and difficulty Settings
CS, AR has no effect on taiko diff. HP, OD -> 5~6. (We usually put taiko diff in that settings) okay, fixed, sir

S/S:C2 is significantly softer than N in taiko gameplay, try to make the loudness in this diff around N 50%~80%. Also, Remove all unecessary timing points so that no kiai flash happens. done

Arrangement
00:12:366 - remove done
00:12:462 - slider=1/4 stream in taiko play so I don't think it's suitable here, try k d kkkkd done
00:13:624 - remove i made a stream from kkkdd
00:27:172 - not fit with slider done
00:31:817 - d sounds better with the lower pitch of vocal it is already don..
00:50:398 - not fit with slider i think i keep this
01:05:108 - ^ done
01:26:785 - ^ done
01:29:882 - ^ done
01:35:495 - try K K K D D K D done
01:36:849 - slider... i think will keep this as well
01:42:849 - artificially remove break from taiko diff because there shouldn't be break (I mean the one with pass/fail figures, etc) sectino in taiko done
01:56:979 - K K K ddk ---- D done
02:14:785 - slider i keep this..
02:24:075 - ^ done
02:27:946 - ^ done
02:38:979 - this stream does not fit with the music : < the drum's 4 in a group (1/4) not 3 so ddkdddk's not suitable done
02:42:269 - very confusing. I don't know why we need a significant acceleration there (even though you use it I prefer like 1.2->0.9x/1.0x) and the K should be in 1.2x speed too done
02:45:753 - ^ done

main problem's from the slider and the SV change at the end. Try to put more variation to show the vocal's emotional/tonal change other than following drrum's d d k d d d k d ......did some changes..
Thanks for the mod!

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Mod Request:

[Hard]
  1. 02:38:204 (3) - what is that.

[Insane]
  1. 02:04:720 (1) - finish at the beginning of the slider done
Nice.. I saw the wmfchris modded too, so I removed all that matched his.

Star!!
Thanks for the mod!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ j e a n ~ :) (Sorry for the later mod)

M4M here ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Remove Enable countdown. done
  2. 01:42:946 - This break time should move to here 01:43:043. done

[Goodbye]


  1. 00:48:849 (7) - Add new combo to here,vocal start to here. done
  2. 01:26:011 (5) - ^ done
  3. 01:27:366 - Add a note here will be better. done
  4. 02:16:333 (7) - Move 2 grid right. done
  5. 02:19:043 (2) - This slider Hidden by 02:19:817 (4) arrow,it's unrankable. done
  6. 02:23:301 (5) - Add new combo to here,vocal start to here. done

[Hard]


  1. 00:41:108 - Add finish. done
  2. 02:15:559 - ^ done
  3. 02:25:624 (3) - Add a repeat will be better with me. done

[Normal]


  1. 01:55:430 (1) - Remove too short new combo. done

That's all ~ Nice song ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Thanks for the mod!
Thanks everybody for the help!
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply