Miya wrote:

Konnichiwa :3

General

1. Consider adding Karen and Tsukihi into tags since they appear at the BG. hm... ok. add araragi, karen, tsukihi
2. Frankly, you need to tune down volume of costume clap at 00:07:466 - 00:36:103 because the natural volume of that clap is too high compared to other volume of other note. It can break the volume balance of the song. I want to hear the opinion of other people, too
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Normal

1. 00:43:830 (1,2,3) - This slider are too close to each other. Make them further please, since most of your pattern doesn't consist of slider this close.　Is not interesting just the same pattern. I think this is no problem so the same DS1.0x >x<!
2. 00:48:375 (2) - ^ ^
3. 01:16:557 (1) - A normal soft finish is good if you placed it here with 50% volume. Since i can hear cymbal sound at this spot. Better than whistle. sorry.. A whistle matches to me

Hard

1. 00:30:875 (5) - This slider end seems off, and doesn't follow anything in the music. How about reduce it into 1/2 sldier? It's more good and follow the music imo. I think that matches the vocal. there is no vocal ends with a 00:31:103, still growing
2. 00:44:966 (5) - This slider should be 1/4 repeat slider, since you have 1/4 repeat slider here : 00:43:830 (2). It's to follow consistencies with this rythim : 00:36:784 (2,3,4,5) - 00:43:830 (2) - I changed a pattern of this place
3. 01:01:671 - Since i hear a drum sound over here, it will be good if you add a normal hitsound to this spot with 50% volume. good. but volume is 40%
4. 01:08:716 - ^ ^
5. 01:16:103 (6) - Same as normal, a normal soft finish will be good at the end. sorry.. A whistle matches to me

Insane

1. 00:57:239 (3) - This slider touch the slider 00:56:784 (2) - which is not good to see. Consider to make them further. 00:56:784 (2) - one grid down
2. 01:01:671 - Same suggestion as hard, give a normal hitsound time over here. fixed
3. 01:16:557 (7) - Same suggestion again, add a normal soft finish over here. sorry.. A whistle matches to me

That's all from me. A nice song and a nice map. Have a star from me :3
Good luck~

Yasora-chan wrote:

why the title is (TVsize) o.o
that should be (TV Size) right?
just sayin' ;3

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

Normal
01:09:284 (1) - This spinner is too short for normal diff, you need to extend this hmm..ok. change it. but this was 5000 points. Is it permitted to several points?

Hard
00:31:557 (x) - Add note here with clap? sorry, I do not want to put here
00:34:284 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen ok. move it


Insane
00:28:375 (7) - Remove whistle at sliderbody fixed~
00:30:648 (5) - Jump pattern? Was intentional? yea. This is intentional. There is no sense of incongruity to me and this matches the flow of the next slider

Nice map, anyway

p3n wrote:

From my queue...you were not too late! I can't blame ppl for beeing #4 in there when it is full in less than a minute thank you ;x;

[Normal]
00:37:012 (2,3) - just a suggestion: add a repeat to (2) and use a circle where (3) used to end to better match the vocals and to map the downbeat properly with a circle: http://puu.sh/jQAt ok. change it


[Hard]
00:44:512 (4,5) - would fit the song much better if you add a repeat to (4) and use a stacked circle where (5) used to end: http://puu.sh/jQxL ok. change it
01:27:239 (4) - maybe stack this note? sorry, no change ><
very very very very good


[Insane]
flawless ♥ ♥


Lovely song and really great mapset. Not really much to do here. Well deserved

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

[General]
-Video quality could be better. Oh well. I think that do not have problem

[Normal]
-Okay

[Hard]
-Okay. Although I'm not a fan fof small circles.

[Insane]
-Good, but maybe reduce Drain rate to 7? I hear the opinion of other people ><!

Map is not bad imo. With a few more quality mods, I think it'll be fine for a bubble. Good Luck.

nich95 wrote:

Hi, kosiga

From my modding queue

[Normal]
I don't find the problem.

[Hard]
01:05:194 (4) - Move to x:244 y:332, order not to overlap with the slider in 01:05:648 (2). ok. but move to x244,y328

[Insane]
00:12:466 (3) - Move to left 2 grid fixed

That's all, that I can find them.
great map and nice song, give a star and I think that your map will have the opportunity to be ranked.

Good luck.

Ch1ka wrote:

Hi, kosiga.


[General]
Nothing found.

[Normal]
00:54:625 - useless timing section, I guess (sorry for being nazi) When a timing was not correct, hitsound may not show an effect. Therefore I put all them on the 1tick this side
01:25:648 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

[Hard]
00:54:625 - useless timing section again
01:18:603 (5,6) - Maybe my own preferences, but I don't like that tricks. If it good for you, you may leave as is.
01:25:648 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

[Insane]
00:54:625 - useless timing section again
00:58:830 (4,5,6,7,8) - Not perfectly symmetrical (nazi again), if it good for you, you may leave as is. This pattern is a pentagon. The symmetry is not necessary
01:27:012 (3,4) - I'd heard a loud sound in song. Maybe you increase volume of hs and add whistles?

That's all. Good song and map, I really can't find more. You must rank it!
Good luck and bye!

arien666 wrote:

Just things are fine :3
meow

Fenya wrote:

Hi~

Normal:
is pretty good o.o

Hard:
00:59:057 (4) - 4 grid up

Insane:
Fine~

Well, I'm not good at this, I did everything I could >_<
I hope you serve something... sorry for late mod ):
Sorry for my bad English, good luck

kosiga wrote:

Fenya Thanks~ but this map already has a bubble. so sorry, no change ><

Fenya wrote:

Oh, sorry, I did not realize D:
Good luck :3

James2250 wrote:

[Normal]
01:11:557 (1) - make sure this note has a new combo (not sure how it happened, but it will mess with the combo scoring how it is now I think)
fixed~
Just that minor thing to fix and I can rank
(You don't need to kudosu this)