hmm alright let's see what I can find. Found this through #modreqs
General:CLEAR!
I swear i thought this mapset had a SB when i 1st dl it, and i mean way back.
Zel's Easy:00:05:791 (4,1) - the spacing is intentional right? it's at 0.86 and the default DS is at 1.00
00:16:506 (2) - maybe fix this minor spacing error? it's at 1.06.
00:42:220 (2,3,4,5) - space these notes out to make it easier for beginners to read, or replace these circles for 2 1/1 sliders.
01:27:934 (3) - hmm to make it easier, do
this? i have this feeling that beginners might let go after the 1st repeat.
01:35:077 (3) - hmm i think beginners might just hit the note and not hold it because the hitburst covers the end of the slider. i suggest that you stack it on (2). IMO this looks easier as it's easy to see.
02:06:506 (2,3,4,5) - same as 00:42:220
02:13:649 (1) - ooh uhh move this down because the end is touching the score and it's at the same level as the hp bar. since this is the easiest diff, beginners might get nervous because of that.
02:25:077 (5) - same as 01:27:934
02:27:934 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:42:220
ezek's Normal:00:22:220 - add a circle to follow vocals?
00:34:363 - hmm try a 1/2 repeat slider and remember to delete (2) if you do so. it follows "one more time", or a 1/1 slider to make it easier.
00:37:320 - i feel that something's missing here. add a circle or a repeat to follow vocals?
01:05:077 (1) - i like the custom whistles, the problem is that it's too loud for this part. maybe reduce the volume of the whistles so that it doesn't get in the way during gameplay, or use decresendo? it'll give a really nice effect during gameplay. eg: the default volume is at 70%, so reduce the 1st whistle, and reduce the 2nd whistle even lower. it's basically like the spinners at the end of some maps. if you still don't understand, it's like
this 01:10:791 (1) - ^
01:16:506 (1) - ^
01:22:220 (1) - ^
01:25:434 (2) - make this a NC because the vocals start. that u-shaped slider is following that sound.
02:10:791 (1) - Align this to (1) on the other side so that it'd look like the shape of a football (American Football)
02:15:077 (1) - same as 01:05:077
02:20:791 (1) - ^
02:26:506 (1) - ^
02:32:220 (1) - ^
Rika-Chan:00:25:077 (4) - maybe add a finish at the beginning since the 1st 2 sliders in this combo have finishes?
00:27:934 (4) - ^
00:30:791 (1) - ^
00:36:506 (1) - ^
i'm sure you get the idea because i don't want to spam the same thing over and over again.
00:37:934 (4) - make this a NC because of new vocals.
00:43:649 (5,6) - a NC here for (5). same reason as above, and i don't understand why you stopped with the finishes. they sound really nice. so add finishes at the beginning of (5) and at (6) too keep that pattern going.
01:36:149 (4) - NC here because the end is following new lyrics
01:45:077 (4) - ^
Hard:00:40:791 (1) - i think you forgot to add finishes at the beginning and at the end? same with Rika's reason about the finishes.
00:43:649 (1,2) - the finishes should be at the beginning to keep the pattern going.
01:01:149 (2) - a NC here because the instrumental changes.
01:12:934 (2) -
oh dear i made this mistake. this sounds really weird if the clap is at the sliderbody and at the beginning and end. add it at the end and remove it at the sliderbody and the beginning to keep the consistency.
Insane:00:09:720 (5) - a NC here because of new lyrics
00:19:184 (8) - ^
00:24:899 (5,6) - either make these 2 a NC because of new vocals like at 00:36:327
00:27:756 (5,6) - ^
01:23:649 - add a circle to follow the drums?
01:49:184 (5,6) - same as 00:24:899
02:15:434 (6) - NC here because the instrumental changes.
02:32:577 (9,10,11,12) - a NC on (9) because the instrumental and instead of going back and forth, how about doing a diamond jump to challenge other players?
This is the best I can do. GL