hi hi as per your request
you know the drill
General
you know the drill
General
- 02:29:109 - The kiai at this point is quite short. I'm not sure it'd be allowed at all ? Either way, I don't quite see where it comes from so I think it would be better to remove it.
- asdf comboing is inconsistent, you should keep the pattern of new combo every big white tick going, or make it one new combo every two white ticks to give yourself some leniency. This assumes that the former will be followed, but I think that for the structure of the map it'd be better to follow the latter:
- 00:54:309 (2) - This slider breaks the comboing (it ends where the new combo should be)
- 00:59:109 (2) - same
- 01:02:709 (3) - There should be a new combo on this
- 01:05:109 (5,1) - New combo should be on (5)
- 01:07:509 (3) - There should be a new combo on this
- 01:36:909 (2) - 01:39:309 (4) - I assume that these are longer on purpose, but it sounds really weird. I know it's supposed to go with the drums in the background, but it felt weird when testplaying because I expected them to finish on the white tick. I think that would be preferable, honestly, it'd be less confusing and more intuitive
- 01:48:309 (3,1) - New combo should be on (3)
- 01:50:709 (2) - There should be a new combo on this
- 01:53:109 (5,1) - New combo should be on (5)
- 01:53:709 (1,2) - That sounds very weird. There isn't any strong drums to support this rhythm and it just makes it kinda... bizarre. Also the second slider breaks the comboing.
- 01:56:709 (4) - Breaks the comboing <_>
- 02:00:309 (2) - There should be a new combo on this
- 02:03:909 (3) - There should be a new combo on this
- 02:07:509 (2) - There should be a new combo on this
- 02:09:909 (4,1) - New combo should be on (4)
- 02:12:309 (2) - There should be a new combo on this
- 02:13:509 (4) - Breaks the comboing
- 02:17:109 (2) - There should be a new combo on this
- 02:30:909 (2) - Breaks the comboing... and I'll stop here I'm getting tired >.>...
- 02:41:109 (1,2,3,4) - That was very weird. I see where it comes from, but it was weird to play and kind of unintuitive. I'd suggest to either replace the whole part with a spinner or add a repeat to the sliders to make it more intuitive in terms of rhythm. I'd rather you replace it with a spinner though !
- 03:10:509 (1) - Here again the extended slider sounds really weird. The chorus was mostly 1/1 so far, it'd be more intuitive to keep that going !
- 03:24:309 (1,1) - not a good ideaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa make the second spinner start later or merge them both, having spinners so close together in an Easy is a really really unintuitive and unfun gimmick =(
Here, have the sad fox of disapproval for the comboing. The rhythms are pretty fine (apart from the ones I pointed out) and it plays decently well. There's also some structure, so it's pretty good !
- 00:22:509 (1) - To keep the comboing consistent for this beginning, there shouldn't be any new combo here.
- 00:26:709 (1) - Same.
- 00:40:809 (1) - Same !
- 00:42:009 (3) - This slider feels weird because you're missing on the drum hits, and it makes the hitsounding feel empty at this point when the song isn't empty at all. Methinks you should work something out to make sure not to miss the drum hit at least at 00:42:909 -
- 00:47:109 (1) - For the sake of consistency, there shouldn't be any new combo here.
- 00:48:909 (2) - I'm not sure why there's a whistle on this slider. Is it a mistake ? This part is empty of drums and adding a drum-whistle on this kind of ruins the effect of 00:52:509 (6,7,1) -
- 00:56:109 (1) - This is the last one I point out, but yeah, there shouldn't be any new combo here. Make sure to make your comboing consistent at least (one new combo every second big white tick)... =( here's the sad fox of disapproval
- 01:06:159 (2) - That sounds extremely weird and is rather surprising. Why is it starting on the blue tick ? It'd be more intuitive to make it start on the red tick and shorten it.
- 01:32:409 (2) - This slider makes you miss on a "clap" at 01:33:309 - and it sounds really weird. Think there's a way you can change this to fill in that blank ?
- 01:58:959 (2) - 02:15:759 (2) - 03:15:759 (2) - Same as 01:06:159 (2) -
- 02:43:509 (2,1) - Ok I lied I'm pointing one more out but this one really really needs to be fixed: new combo should be on (2)
- 03:24:309 (1,1) - Same as Easy - I don't think having the two spinners this close together is acceptable for a Normal. =(
- 02:11:259 (5,6) - There should be a circle somewhere between these two. The expected "wait" is 1/2 but the one you mapped is 3/4 and it feels extremely weird.
- 02:32:709 - methinks there should be a circle here. It'd be more consistent with 02:31:509 (1,2,3) - in terms of rhythm and would also the problem of ^
- 03:10:359 - Same !
- 03:11:559 - same, it would also fit the lyrics more !
- 01:28:809 (5) - O_o ???!o_o???o_O???!!??
this is hell in DT =(