Aleks719 wrote:

Hard
00:23:037 (3) - same about unrankable slider... //Hmm, this is fine to me, and I have asked 2 MATs just now, they both considered this is okay. http://puu.sh/Iqw6 http://puu.sh/Iqus
01:06:498 (6) - replace nc here, for making slowdown easier to read//OK~
01:14:383 (1) - better replace it farer//Done~

JoJo wrote:

01:06:498 (6,2) - I don't know why, these two sliders should have 3 slider ticks but in test/play mode they only have one. Not sure if this is a bug, anyway for avoid unranking or something trouble, changed the patterns here.

1. Since you are using slider ticks for custom "hitclaps", I noticed that they are louder than they should be. This is because they are louder than your normal hitsounds for some reason. To make them the same as other hitclaps throughout the map, you should reduce their volume by 10%. This means, since you used for example 70%, it should be 60% to make it sound the same as the others. Try it out and see for yourself.

1. 00:06:498 (5) - Have you considered adding a whistle here? It sounds pretty nice in my opinion.
2. 01:11:306 (1,2,3,4) - I actually find this spacing slightly confusing because I feel it breaks the flow. Such antijumps just feel awkward. You can even create jumps here and they would fit nicely. To make it worse it makes it seem like it's a spacing error, which I would probably say it is so (check note 2, its 1x distanced from 1 and 0.5x distanced from 3).
   You should probably change these to atleast normal spacing or jumps, please.

1. HPdrain+1 please. HPD 4 is just too low. I would actually recommend OD6 for this difficulty as well.

1. 01:06:690 (1) - I am against this spinner because it's rather short. Since this is your lowest diff, you should make it more accessible to new players, as a player who spins around 200 will not 300 it, and with the next note coming so soon after it could trip him into a fail. As an alternative, how about mapping the drums which start at 01:06:883 and end at 01:07:267? After that you just have a blank spot which also fits and makes it easier on the new guys. Just don't forget to map the first note of the next section which starts as this spinner ends.

1. 00:09:383 - Seems like you forgot to fix the volume here. Should be 60%.
2. 00:15:537 - ^
3. 00:20:921 - ^ etc, just check your whole diff.

Melophobia wrote:

congratz

Pokie wrote:

(´･∀･`)

[General]

1. Please use Kantoku Skin by Ruru (玩笑)

[JoJo's Hard]

1. OD太低了…有什麼原因嗎?
2. 關Countdown

00:18:421 (1,1,1,1) - test時毫無疑問的按成了1/4什麼程度…
00:20:921 - 補一個slidertick音效
00:29:383 - ^
00:28:806 (2) - 結尾刪clap
00:48:613 - 補slidertick音效
00:56:883 (4) - 個人認為放上方比疊在(3)的結尾好…像這樣: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/318038 (不過修改的話後面的(6,7)也要一併下移)
01:07:267 (2) - 結尾刪clap

建議既然karen加了slidertick音效的話, 還漏拍就是不應該了…這點要加多注意



[Insane]

00:29:960 - 建議加一個note, 這邊抓不到你的節奏…
01:01:306 (3,4) - 幾乎注意不到是3/4 D:


01:07:267 (3) - 目測需加長1/2 (01:07:844 - 的綠線記得也要後移1/2)




什麼, 你說Normal沒mod? 那需要Mod嗎嗎嗎嗎!
好吧有一條, 00:55:825 - 這位置沒有Kiai噴泉嗎?

ts8zs wrote:

求EDIT这个皮肤

Mythol wrote:

nice map

NatsumeRin wrote:

karen moe moe~

h3k1ru wrote:

Mythol wrote:

nice map

karenying wrote:

Rin moe moe ww

h3k1ru wrote:

Mythol wrote:

nice map