1. Hard (4.74 stars, 372 notes)
2. Normal (2.13 stars, 168 notes)

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ A request from In-game ~ Maya-san!!!! ~ <3

Red - Fix It.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
Offset 20,000 ok ;w; I use 28000

[Normal]
Overall Difficult +1 ok ;w;
00:27:956(1) = add finish? ok ;w;

[Hard]
01:06:956(3) = slider end till 01:07:456?
01:15:456(x) = add note? no ;-;
01:21:956 = slider end till 01:23:456 ? and put timing volume 5% there?[/color] no ;-;
02:51:956(1,2,3) = Spacing? since this is very confuse. o.o'' I'll think of it if other peoples mention it ._.;; basically, they're just stacked

Here is the Mp3 >w<''
http://puu.sh/fjbo thank you ;w;

Okay! That's all I got ~
Good Luck Maya-san!! >w<"

1. 00:32:000 (1) - Use tilted slider wave here?
   
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2. 00:34:500 (2) - If you do ^, copy-paste your wave here and CTRL+J
3. 00:38:000 (1) - I wonder, why not just copy-paste 00:37:000 (2) here and flip it? It's a common technique, orz >_<
4. 00:40:000 (1) - Look at the image below. You can improve this slider's curve by stacking the slidertick. Might seem hard, but try it without grid snap~ If you're having trouble, I give you a code here:
   
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   296,312,40000,6,0,B|248:320|144:280|121:215|192:182|256:200|240:256|154:324|76:306,1,360,0|8

5. 01:00:000 (1) - Not perfectly stacked to 00:58:000 (1)'s start, but it's tolerable because you map this with grid lv3
6. 01:14:000 (1) - Hmm... Not perfectly in the center. Also, finish sounds much better on slider's end rather than clap
7. 01:26:000 (3) - I personally feel finish sound spam shouldn't be used here. idk, change the finish on the repeat into whistle?
8. 01:29:000 (2,3) - I prefer a slider wave on (2) to keep symmetry. Also, if you wanna encircle (4) with (3), it should be moved 1 grid right ><
9. 01:33:000 (2,2) - Basically, just snap these two's inherit section to the slider end. No need to put 1/4 earlier here, because it's a slider end.
10. 01:36:500 (2,4) - Add whistle here (don't remove the clap though! they blends well ~)
11. 01:45:500 (2) - Quite obvious it's overcurved to the right. Move the waypoint to the left a bit :3
12. 01:46:500 (3) - Finish sounds much better on downbeat on this song! So, don't need to finish sound spam here, left the finish on 01:48:000 (1)' start xD
13. 01:57:500 (3) - Too many repeats on this slider imo. The flow can much be improved this way:
    
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14. 02:08:000 (1,2) - Move these one grid right and up (ctrl+h (2) to see why)
15. 02:10:842 - Is it really required to drag the break by 1/2 here? Breaks better start on downbeat imo
16. 02:42:000 (1) - I wonder, why not put this in the upper left of the previous slider to avoid it being too linear, and curve (2) a bit? Will flow better imo:
    
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17. 03:00:000 (1) - Finish on slider's end, to accompany the cymbal sound from the song?
18. 03:18:000 (3,3) - Same as my previous mod about finish sound spam.
19. 03:24:000 (1,2,1,2) - To be honest, these four looks like they're placed quite randomly. Zig-zag slider (with linear or bezier curve) is a good pattern to use here imo
20. 03:32:000 (1) - Because this is a Normal (and your easiest) diff in the mapset, and you only give 500ms for player to recover after spinner here, I suggest not to put this slider far away from the center
21. 03:40:000 (1) - Finish on slider's start?
22. 03:52:000 (1) - Where's your clap pattern here? Feels weird being inconsistent ><
23. 04:00:000 (1,3) - Slightly curve these two (to the middle) to get more flow?

ikari_kyon wrote:

timing check
BPM: 120,000 (current)
Offset: 28017 (+17 on current)

_HydeSama_ wrote:

Normal
02:04:000 (1) - More curved ng.. like? o_o?
02:06:000 (1) - ^ ^
02:08:000 (1,2,3) - Place them so that they look more synchronized I've give some change ;w;''
03:58:000 - Remove New combo fixed
Is more as an Easy? .. TT^TT;; orz

Hard
02:53:750 - New combo fixed
04:02:750 - ^ why? o_o

Good Luck ~ c:

arien666 wrote:

[General]
offset still not fixed ;_; i don't think I should fix it ;-; because the one I have feels good already (used shana-chan's offset)

[Hard]
01:15:500 - Add finish? that would break the consistency? orz


Dunno but I think it is okay for something but whatever orz
Good luck :3

ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply :3

Niva wrote:

Mod request via In-Game PM ~

[General]

-> Kiai Time should start on downbeat! (at least that's what I've heard). Plus, the way you're ending kiai is very weird. If you wanna start a new kiai on 01:56:000, for example, you should end the kiai 4/1 earlier (01:54:000) and NOT 1/2 earlier.@^@? <-- confused
-> The character you use in hitcircle.png isn't centered. Is it intentional? yea ;w; it seems weird? orz
-> (optional) add ShounenT to tags? ok

[Normal]

-> I personally feel AR5 is too high for a 2-star Normal diff. AR 3/4 instead? I'll wait for next suggestions
-> And also, I feel you're using New Combo too often. 2 notes per combo overall could be improved with 4 notes per combo. I'll wait for next suggestions

1. 00:32:000 (1) - Use tilted slider wave here? uh sure. can I get the codes? ;w; <--can't make the exactly same slider
   
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2. 00:34:500 (2) - If you do ^, copy-paste your wave here and CTRL+J ^
3. 00:38:000 (1) - I wonder, why not just copy-paste 00:37:000 (2) here and flip it? It's a common technique, orz >_< uh-- how to say this @_@;; I'm bad at rotating and flipping (I guess that's the most logical answer I know)
4. 00:40:000 (1) - Look at the image below. You can improve this slider's curve by stacking the slidertick. Might seem hard, but try it without grid snap~ If you're having trouble, I give you a code here: uh yeah I see your point, but the difference? @_@;; oh btw, that code is for my current slider o-o;; if you want to give a code, you need to save that map and quit first, then you can see the change in notepad
   
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   296,312,40000,6,0,B|248:320|144:280|121:215|192:182|256:200|240:256|154:324|76:306,1,360,0|8

5. 01:00:000 (1) - Not perfectly stacked to 00:58:000 (1)'s start, but it's tolerable because you map this with grid lv3 I don't even notice orz-- but I'm not stacking them o_o;;
6. 01:14:000 (1) - Hmm... Not perfectly in the center. Also, finish sounds much better on slider's end rather than clap fixed
7. 01:26:000 (3) - I personally feel finish sound spam shouldn't be used here. idk, change the finish on the repeat into whistle? I see your point, but I like my finish ;_;''
8. 01:29:000 (2,3) - I prefer a slider wave on (2) to keep symmetry. Also, if you wanna encircle (4) with (3), it should be moved 1 grid right >< moved right
9. 01:33:000 (2,2) - Basically, just snap these two's inherit section to the slider end. No need to put 1/4 earlier here, because it's a slider end. ah, okay ;w; (I copy all of these points from hard orz)
10. 01:36:500 (2,4) - Add whistle here (don't remove the clap though! they blends well ~) fixed
11. 01:45:500 (2) - Quite obvious it's overcurved to the right. Move the waypoint to the left a bit :3 fixed
12. 01:46:500 (3) - Finish sounds much better on downbeat on this song! So, don't need to finish sound spam here, left the finish on 01:48:000 (1)' start xD I'll wait for next suggestions but I like the finish on 48.
13. 01:57:500 (3) - Too many repeats on this slider imo. The flow can much be improved this way: fixed
    
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14. 02:08:000 (1,2) - Move these one grid right and up (ctrl+h (2) to see why) fixed
15. 02:10:842 - Is it really required to drag the break by 1/2 here? Breaks better start on downbeat imo fixed
16. 02:42:000 (1) - I wonder, why not put this in the upper left of the previous slider to avoid it being too linear, and curve (2) a bit? Will flow better imo: fixed but with my own pattern
    
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17. 03:00:000 (1) - Finish on slider's end, to accompany the cymbal sound from the song? I see your point, but I want to keep the whistle consistency here T^T
18. 03:18:000 (3,3) - Same as my previous mod about finish sound spam. I'll wait for next suggestions
19. 03:24:000 (1,2,1,2) - To be honest, these four looks like they're placed quite randomly. Zig-zag slider (with linear or bezier curve) is a good pattern to use here imo fixed
20. 03:32:000 (1) - Because this is a Normal (and your easiest) diff in the mapset, and you only give 500ms for player to recover after spinner here, I suggest not to put this slider far away from the center fixed
21. 03:40:000 (1) - Finish on slider's start? fixed
22. 03:52:000 (1) - Where's your clap pattern here? Feels weird being inconsistent >< ara-- thank you >_<
23. 04:00:000 (1,3) - Slightly curve these two (to the middle) to get more flow? fixed

From my sightsee, I can see you're stuck with the paradigm "sliders should be curved with many waypoints". Short sliders (and even some long sliders) are played better with only 1 waypoint, really :3 I'll practice my sliders more TwTll thank you mentor-kun

I'll mod Hard tomorrow (: take your time ;w;

296,304,40000,6,0,B|240:312|128:264|128:192|192:174|256:192|256:264|144:312|72:304,1,360,0|8

56,176,37000,2,0,B|80:240|184:232|200:152,1,170,0|8

324,226,85000,2,0,B|308:282|204:282|190:226,1,170,4|0

1. Song Setup - Tags or Source - add or change JimmyThumb P http://puu.sh/fJ8P ( Like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26222 )
2. Break Time - 01:14:000~01:15:500 - There is too little note. >< 01:08:000~01:14:000 - I think it is better to add a note here
3. KIAI TIME - 1st KIAI end 01:56:000⇒01:55:875 , 2nd KIAI start 01:56:250⇒01:56:000 , 3rd KIAI end 03:48:000⇒03:47:875 , 4th KIAI start 03:48:250⇒03:48:000 is better IMO

1. 00:55:000 (2) - use 00:54:000 (1) copy (Ctrl+H,J ) is better
2. 01:00:000 (1) - more beautiful curve try? ↓
   

   264,156,59500,1,8
   166,125,60000,6,0,B|195:62|256:17|346:41|400:118|378:190|329:239,1,360,0|8

3. 01:29:000 (2) - grid move. x192,y72. http://puu.sh/fJpX This is more beautiful
4. 01:32:000 (1) - add finish to instead clap to start of the slider
5. 01:34:000 (1) - ^
6. 01:49:500 (2) - grid move. x368,y192. ( because 01:48:000 (1,2) - DS 0.92x, 01:49:500 (2,1) - DS 0.97x )
7. 01:51:500 (2) - ^
8. 01:53:000 (2) - add finish to start of the slider ? ( same as 02:01:000 (2) )
9. 01:54:000 (3) - add NC
10. 01:58:500 (4) - add clap to start of the slider ?
11. 02:00:000 (1) - add finish to start of the slider ? ( same as 01:52:000 (1) )
12. 02:04:000 (1) - DS1.07x(when Slider velocity multiplier 1.20x ) is better. and 02:02:000 (3,4,5,6,1) - more beautiful Star formation http://puu.sh/fJAn code↓
    
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    256,96,122000,1,4
    373,153,122500,1,4
    354,282,123000,1,4
    226,304,123500,1,4
    165,189,124000,6,0,B|111:117|198:12|284:37,1,240,4|0

    if you use it , plz follow after note >< ( Caution:02:04:000 (1,2) - DS 1.08x )
13. 02:10:000 (3) - spacing too far (1.13x) and add NC ?
14. 03:24:000 (1) - add finish to instead clap to start of the slider
15. 03:26:000 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
16. 03:24:000~03:29:500 - hitsound:same as 01:32:000~01:37:500 ( ex:03:25:000 (2) - add clap to start of the slider )
17. 03:44:000 (1) - add finish
18. 03:45:000 (3) - ^
19. 03:52:000 (1) - add finish to instead clap to start of the slider.
20. 03:53:000 (2) - remove finish to end of the slider
21. 03:59:500 (4) - add clap ?
22. 04:18:750 (2) - remove finish to end of the slider ? Sounds a little strange to me ( normal hitsound is better ? )

1. 01:07:000 (3) - slider end 01:06:721 is better ( same as normal diff )
2. 01:22:000 (1) - spinner start 01:22:125 ? ( I like that hear sounds from here )
3. 01:42:000 (5) - add NC
4. 01:46:000 (6) - ^
5. 01:52:750 (2) - add finish to end of the slider ?
6. 01:53:250 (1) - remove NC and 01:54:000 (3) - add NC ?
7. 01:55:500 (6) - add finish to end of the slider
8. 02:54:250 (5,6,7) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/fJS0
9. 03:33:750 (4) - add NC
10. 03:37:750 (5) - ^
11. 03:45:250 (5) - ^
12. 04:18:750 (4) - same normal diff

1. 00:34:000 (1,2,3) - Well, I prefer to put this note like this to keep the fan pattern consistent. Not something you must change though
   
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2. 00:41:500 (4) - One grid down (probably use lv4 to be more accurate) for a better blanket
3. 01:03:750 (4,1,2) - Because your previous pattern was symmetrical, it would be better if you could keep the symmetry to (4) here:
   
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4. 01:15:125 (4) - I highly recommend you to add two more repetitions here, and add finish on slider's end. Here, it's much better to give a 1/1 time before the break, rather than 3/2.
5. 01:22:000 (1) - Snap this spinner's end 1/6 earlier!
6. 01:36:333 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I wonder, because it's a Hard diff, maybe you can create some slider jumps here? If you still want to create double stacks, I think it plays better to space them apart to form a small jump:
   
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7. 01:44:250 (1,2,3,4) - I personally dislike this back-and-forth pattern. Maybe arrange like this here?
   
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   [img]http://[/img]
8. 01:55:000 (5) - Move one grid down (it's obvious orz)
9. 02:03:250 (7,8) - You don't have to, but you can move these one grid down to form a symmetry with (4)
10. 02:37:000 (3) - Hmm, why not CTRL+R this? Much better imo :3
11. 02:38:000 (1) - Because of the last drum part, maybe add finish here to emphasize a new part of the song?
12. 02:52:000 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Do you really need stack this much? Well, the first (1,2,3) would be better if converted into a jump though:
    
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13. 02:59:000 (4) - This curve looks unnatural for me. Try this one?
    
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14. 03:05:000 (3) - CTRL+R this also, really
15. 03:18:000 (2) - Considering the curve you did on 03:16:000 (2), (again) CTRL+R this
16. 03:26:500 (2,3) - To make the fan pattern neater : one grid down for (2)'s endpoint and (3)?
17. 03:41:500 (4) - Stack to (1)' start OR end?
18. 03:43:000 (3) - One grid left, to make it consistent with 03:41:000 (3)
19. 03:43:500 (4) - Same as 03:41:500, just make sure you're consistent with above
20. 03:47:500 (9) - Create something like this perhaps?
    
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21. 03:50:750 (4) - idk... I prefer 1/2 repeating slider here to follow the vocal more

kokoroanime wrote:

~Normal~

00:40:000 (1) - Try this, but I tried my best fixing it for you. okay thank you :3

296,304,40000,6,0,B|240:312|128:264|128:192|192:174|256:192|256:264|144:312|72:304,1,360,0|8

01:07:000 (2) - Move the 2nd point, one or two grids up. 1 up
02:30:000 (1) - To x:176 y:232. After that, fix the spacing after this slider. fixed

~Hard~

00:37:000 (3) - Come look at this. I tried my best though.no, sorry, your slider is good, but I think I like mine better <:)

56,176,37000,2,0,B|80:240|184:232|200:152,1,170,0|8

01:25:000 (2) - ^ ^

324,226,85000,2,0,B|308:282|204:282|190:226,1,170,4|0

01:50:500 (2) - To x:215 y:38 fixed
01:51:000 (3) - To x:311 y:37 fixed
02:33:000 (3) - To x:112 y:216, if I'm right about the nazi spacing... fixed
03:21:000 (2) - Fix this a little... I'll wait for next suggestions

That's all I can think of. Keep up the good work.
Good luck.

thenewearth wrote:

Normal:

00:44:000 <-- suggest adding a note + finish hitsound to make the rythm sound complete I prefer my way though-- maybe I'll consider it if someone mention this
01:08:000 <-- ^ same ^
01:15:500 <-- no point in putting a break here. why not map it? no point in mapping there since I don't map those guitar parts too.
01:27:500 <-- add finish hitsound no, sorry
01:31:500 <-- finish hitsound no, sorry
02:20:000 <-- your break is too long. start mapping here no, sorry
02:44:000 <-- note + finish hitsound no, sorry
03:08:000 <-- note + finish no, sorry
03:19:500 <-- finish hitsound no, sorry
03:23:500 <-- finish hitsound no, sorry
04:04:000 <-- no point of putting break here since it almost ends at this point no, sorry

Hard:

00:40:000 <-- note + finish (same reason as normal) no, sorry
01:08:000 <-- note + finish (well this note is VERY VERY optional since you ended the slider on the red tick) no, sorry
01:15:250 <-- no point in putting a break here. no, sorry
02:04:000 <-- finish hitsound no, sorry
02:20:000 <-- your break is too long. start mapping here no, sorry
02:44:000 <-- finish hitsound no, sorry
03:07:750 <-- note
03:08:000 <-- note + finish no, sorry
04:04:000 <-- no point in putting this break. since it's already ending at this point no, sorry

Niva wrote:

Okay, everything is in order now.

First of all, sorry if you don't understand my kiai suggestion above >< - end the first kiai in 01:54:000 and start the second kiai in 01:56:000.

Or try the one kosiga mentioned above, it works well too.

[Hard]

1. 00:34:000 (1,2,3) - Well, I prefer to put this note like this to keep the fan pattern consistent. Not something you must change though looks good.
   
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2. 00:41:500 (4) - One grid down (probably use lv4 to be more accurate) for a better blanket fixed
3. 01:03:750 (4,1,2) - Because your previous pattern was symmetrical, it would be better if you could keep the symmetry to (4) here: fixed
   
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4. 01:15:125 (4) - I highly recommend you to add two more repetitions here, and add finish on slider's end. Here, it's much better to give a 1/1 time before the break, rather than 3/2. ok two peoples already mention this. changed (by mah own way)
5. 01:22:000 (1) - Snap this spinner's end 1/6 earlier! why? @_@;; it sounds weird like that orz
6. 01:36:333 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I wonder, because it's a Hard diff, maybe you can create some slider jumps here? If you still want to create double stacks, I think it plays better to space them apart to form a small jump: I'll think about it
   
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7. 01:44:250 (1,2,3,4) - I personally dislike this back-and-forth pattern. Maybe arrange like this here? image doesn't load.
   
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   [img]http://[/img]
8. 01:55:000 (5) - Move one grid down (it's obvious orz) fixed
9. 02:03:250 (7,8) - You don't have to, but you can move these one grid down to form a symmetry with (4) I don't want a symmetry there o_o
10. 02:37:000 (3) - Hmm, why not CTRL+R this? Much better imo :3 fixed
11. 02:38:000 (1) - Because of the last drum part, maybe add finish here to emphasize a new part of the song? I'll think about it
12. 02:52:000 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Do you really need stack this much? Well, the first (1,2,3) would be better if converted into a jump though: good idea
    
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13. 02:59:000 (4) - This curve looks unnatural for me. Try this one? ^
    
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14. 03:05:000 (3) - CTRL+R this also, really I'll think about it (because I like the flow of the current one atm)
15. 03:18:000 (2) - Considering the curve you did on 03:16:000 (2), (again) CTRL+R this fixed
16. 03:26:500 (2,3) - To make the fan pattern neater : one grid down for (2)'s endpoint and (3)? fixed
17. 03:41:500 (4) - Stack to (1)' start OR end? I have no plan of stacking it TT_TTa;;;
18. 03:43:000 (3) - One grid left, to make it consistent with 03:41:000 (3)
19. 03:43:500 (4) - Same as 03:41:500, just make sure you're consistent with above fixed
20. 03:47:500 (9) - Create something like this perhaps? I'll think about it
    
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21. 03:50:750 (4) - idk... I prefer 1/2 repeating slider here to follow the vocal more I'll think about it

That's it from me~ I hope it helps.
Good luck ^^ ~

kosiga wrote:

hi~ Maya-kira

thank you for the request ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song Setup - Tags or Source - add or change JimmyThumb P http://puu.sh/fJ8P ( Like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/26222 )
2. Break Time - 01:14:000~01:15:500 - There is too little note. >< 01:08:000~01:14:000 - I think it is better to add a note here
3. KIAI TIME - 1st KIAI end 01:56:000⇒01:55:875 , 2nd KIAI start 01:56:250⇒01:56:000 , 3rd KIAI end 03:48:000⇒03:47:875 , 4th KIAI start 03:48:250⇒03:48:000 is better IMO

[Normal]

1. 00:55:000 (2) - use 00:54:000 (1) copy (Ctrl+H,J ) is better fixed
2. 01:00:000 (1) - more beautiful curve try? ↓ fixed
   

   264,156,59500,1,8
   166,125,60000,6,0,B|195:62|256:17|346:41|400:118|378:190|329:239,1,360,0|8

3. 01:29:000 (2) - grid move. x192,y72. http://puu.sh/fJpX This is more beautiful fixed
4. 01:32:000 (1) - add finish to instead clap to start of the slider fixed
5. 01:34:000 (1) - ^ no, sorry
6. 01:49:500 (2) - grid move. x368,y192. ( because 01:48:000 (1,2) - DS 0.92x, 01:49:500 (2,1) - DS 0.97x ) fixed
7. 01:51:500 (2) - ^ fixed
8. 01:53:000 (2) - add finish to start of the slider ? ( same as 02:01:000 (2) )not there ;_;
9. 01:54:000 (3) - add NC why?
10. 01:58:500 (4) - add clap to start of the slider ? fixed
11. 02:00:000 (1) - add finish to start of the slider ? ( same as 01:52:000 (1) ) fixed
12. 02:04:000 (1) - DS1.07x(when Slider velocity multiplier 1.20x ) is better. and 02:02:000 (3,4,5,6,1) - more beautiful Star formation http://puu.sh/fJAn code↓ looks good
    
    SPOILER

    256,96,122000,1,4
    373,153,122500,1,4
    354,282,123000,1,4
    226,304,123500,1,4
    165,189,124000,6,0,B|111:117|198:12|284:37,1,240,4|0

    if you use it , plz follow after note >< ( Caution:02:04:000 (1,2) - DS 1.08x )
13. 02:10:000 (3) - spacing too far (1.13x) and add NC ? no, sorry
14. 03:24:000 (1) - add finish to instead clap to start of the slider fixed
15. 03:26:000 (1) - add finish to start of the slider no, sorry
16. 03:24:000~03:29:500 - hitsound:same as 01:32:000~01:37:500 ( ex:03:25:000 (2) - add clap to start of the slider )
17. 03:44:000 (1) - add finish fixed
18. 03:45:000 (3) - ^ fixed
19. 03:52:000 (1) - add finish to instead clap to start of the slider. fixed
20. 03:53:000 (2) - remove finish to end of the slider no, sorry
21. 03:59:500 (4) - add clap ? fixed
22. 04:18:750 (2) - remove finish to end of the slider ? Sounds a little strange to me ( normal hitsound is better ? )I'll wait for next suggestions

[Hard]

1. 01:07:000 (3) - slider end 01:06:721 is better ( same as normal diff ) @^@?
2. 01:22:000 (1) - spinner start 01:22:125 ? ( I like that hear sounds from here ) no, sorry
3. 01:42:000 (5) - add NC no, sorry
4. 01:46:000 (6) - ^ ^
5. 01:52:750 (2) - add finish to end of the slider ? ^
6. 01:53:250 (1) - remove NC and 01:54:000 (3) - add NC ? fixed
7. 01:55:500 (6) - add finish to end of the slider ^
8. 02:54:250 (5,6,7) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/fJS0 no, sorry
9. 03:33:750 (4) - add NC ^
10. 03:37:750 (5) - ^ ^
11. 03:45:250 (5) - ^ ^
12. 04:18:750 (4) - same normal diff I'll think about it

sorry, long mod so cute skin and BG >x<! mapset is good, too

Star☆ and Good luck~

1. In folder, you has mp3 with bitrate 256 kb/s. change to 192? just suggestion ><
2. Inconsistency kiai time between normal and hard. make it same please

1. Unsnapped green timing section in 03:55:956 and 03:59:581 (check it with open timing setup (F6)

1. Unsnapped green timing section in 02:35:831 and 02:37:331

AngelHoney wrote:

really cute BG <33333 ikr <33

map is fine for me

just one thiny want to tell you , offset+28ms (+-5ms) 28028ms imo :3 ok ;w; I guess its the correct one since there's two point outs

Yasora-chan wrote:

Sorry for delay D':

General

1. In folder, you has mp3 with bitrate 256 kb/s. change to 192? just suggestion >< yes, but now its already 180 less or more
2. Inconsistency kiai time between normal and hard. make it same please really? I'll check

Normal

1. Unsnapped green timing section in 03:55:956 and 03:59:581 (check it with open timing setup (F6) fixed

00:32:000 (1) the sound in beginning is quite silent. I suggest to add whistle in slider's beginning? no, sorry
00:44:000 (x) usually before break, in long white tick, people will give note for end the rhythm. I suggest in here to add circle and add finish. ^
00:52:000 (1) for beginning vocal, add finish in slider's beginning? also I heard sound like "desh" in here.fixed
00:59:500 (3) what?? this unrankble, delete (3) please. fixed
01:08:000 (x) same think as 00:44:000 no, sorry
01:16:000 (x) ^ ^
01:32:000 (1) why not add finish in slider's beginning? I think the sound same with 01:28:000 (1) no, sorry
01:36:000 (1) add finish in here more following the song's sound? ^
01:48:000 (1) add clap in slider's reverse. I heard drum sound in there yes, but I want to keep the clap at
01:50:000 (1) ^ ^
01:51:500 (2) In here more fit finish than clap ^
01:54:000 (3) add new combo in here? Since too long combo and change the vocal fixed
01:57:500 (3) for following the drum sound and consistency clap from (2), add clap in slider's beginning ^
01:58:500 (4) ^ ^
02:00:000 (1) add finish in slider's beginning? no, sorry
02:44:000 (x) same think as 00:44:000 ^
03:08:000 (x) ^ ^
03:28:000 (1) add finish in slider's beginning. I feel too silent in here ^

Hard

1. Unsnapped green timing section in 02:35:831 and 02:37:331 fixed

00:44:000 (x) same think as 00:44:000 in Normal diff no, sorry
01:05:750 (x) I think because same with 01:03:750 (4), you should add circle in here too fixed
01:08:000 (x) same think as 00:44:000 in Normal diff no, sorry
01:16:000 (x) ^ ^
01:22:000 (1) this spinner should end in 01:23:500, since the song is low the sound in there ^
01:30:750 (3,4) I think sound finish in slider's beginning is weird to heard in my ear. can you reduce it? I'll think about it
01:32:000 (2) finish more fit if add in this slider's beginning no, sorry
02:28:000 (1) add finish in slider's beginning? fixed
03:08:000 (x) same think as 00:44:000 in Normal diff no, sorry
03:24:000 (2) add finish in slider's beginning? ^

Naisu map :3
Good luck (: