1. Gu's Miu~ (4.11 stars, 138 notes)
2. Hina~ (2.1 stars, 78 notes)
3. Raika~ (5 stars, 280 notes)
4. Sora~ (4.72 stars, 206 notes)

JauiPlaY wrote:

這個很簡單了 泥姆芙發騷單手都能1PC 4mod SS
所以就不加難度了...

• 仔细听听……歌曲一开头有一小段钢琴的尾音，不知道是本来有的还是你没剪好= =
  offset - 7
  预览点稍微往前移一点,切换歌曲的时候有个淡入效果
  上次有人建议我这种TV SIZE的歌曲最好加个视频
  个人感觉是从01:075开始map比较好

• 00:15:946 (2) - 上移一格
  00:52:357 (1) - Remove new combo？
  00:53:382 (2) - New combo?这样完全是为了好看- -
  01:14:921 (1,2) - 没有重叠好

• 建议在重音上加note,我玩着感觉挺不习惯
  00:50:305 (1,2) - 不好看,建议分开
  00:56:459 (4,5) - 不好看,建议分开
  01:05:946 (7) - 为啥要消音呢……不解
  01:13:639 (6) - 第二个圈声音略大一点比较好
  01:27:228 (1,2) - 不好看,建议分开
  01:30:818 (7) - 声音太小了亲

• 00:36:203 (2) - 难看- -
  00:38:254 (2) - 会被前面打出的300挡住
  00:57:485 (4) - 难看- -
  01:17:228 (2) - 和前面的没有重叠好，同时被完全挡住了这貌似是不能rank的
  01:19:536 (2,4) - 没有重叠好

1. 00:30:823 (3) - Create like this perhaps? It plays better before (1) imo:
   
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2. 00:34:926 (3,2) - Why not making this perfectly encircle 00:34:413 (2)?
   
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3. 01:00:567 (2) - Whistle on slider's end? (because you used whistle+clap on 00:53:387 (2)'s end also)
4. 01:05:695 (1) - I personally dislike this note's placement, with fat approachcircle it looks clustering if placed beneath slider... idk, maybe arrange like this?
   
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5. 01:07:233 (1,2,1) - If you're following ^, to keep it symmetrical, you can try this pattern:
   
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6. 01:16:977 (2) - Whistle on slider's end?

1. 00:11:849 (6) - Whistle on slider's start? It fits also (:
2. 00:13:387 (1,2) - Curving (1) a bit more and create a "?"-shaped slider on (2) isn't a bad idea imo:
   
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3. 00:18:003 (2) - Try slider wave here perhaps?
4. 00:20:054 (7) - This curve... Quite obvious it's unsymmetrical. I prefer to curve short sliders like this with only 1 waypoint
5. 00:28:259 (6) - You can curve this semi-blanketing (5):
   
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6. 00:32:105 (6,7,8) - Would be nice if you can move (6) closer to (8) to emphasize its diamond pattern. Just suggestion though (:
7. 00:38:515 (2) - Curve this encircling (3) like this? Would flow better rather than just a slight curve imo:
   
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8. 00:45:182 (5) - Well, you've added a bezier waypoint before the first linear (red) waypoint. Why not add another bezier waypoint after the last linear (red) waypoint? xD
9. 00:48:515 (3) - I'd rather delete the clap on slider's start, to keep the clap pattern (which is 1/1 before the downbeat) consistent here.
10. 00:50:310 (1,2,3) - Well, I personally feel too many whistle+claps at once doesn't sound good (I'd use whistle+claps only to emphasize some important parts in the song)... So I did some experiment with the hitsounds here. Maybe, try remove whistle on (1,3), and add whistle on (2)'s start and end?
11. 00:52:105 (4) - Add whistle on slider's end? (this is a cheerful song, so don't afraid to use whistle more often! Every 1/2 won't be bad imo. This applies for next sliders and circles (:)
12. 00:59:541 (3) - Try slider like below here? It flows better to the next (4) imo.
    
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13. 01:05:951 (7) - Because you're using quiet note here, do you really need that clap in the end? Because I can barely hear it ><
14. 01:11:849 (3) - Would be nice if you can create a slider blanketing (2) here:
    
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15. 01:30:567 (6) - Minor stuff, but put this one grid down to prevent it from touching (4)
16. 01:30:823 (7) - Optional, but you can move this few grids right and down (~6 grids down and 4 grids right) so (5)'s middle, (6), and (7) is arranged in a straight line, thus forming a "shooting star" formation here. (:

1. 00:12:362 (4,5) - Add finish to both, to emphasize this jump?
2. 00:20:438 (4,5) - Add whistle, on both slider's end? (really, whistle fits double 1/4 slider like this ^^)
3. 00:28:515 (4) - I'd prefer curving this slider facing left to avoid it touching 00:28:003 (2) , but that's just me though
4. 00:29:028 (5,6) - Again here, use whistles?
5. 00:30:567 (4,5) - I'd rather switch these two's position (CTRL+R) because the followpoints will guide better this way, thus making it easier to read
6. 00:36:592 (3) - At first my intuition says that this note is stacked under (2)'s start instead of (2)'s end. Again, this is just me ><
7. 00:48:259 (1) - Stack to (3)'s end instead? Would be tidier this way imo.
8. 00:51:721 (4,5,1) - Arrange (5) so these three's distance equal? (yeah, I prefer like that, maybe like this: )
   
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9. 00:58:259 (6) - Move the clap here to (5)'s end? (if you're listening carefully to the low frequency sounds, you can hear the bass' pitch increase on (5)'s end)
10. 01:00:182 (5) - Optional, but you can curve this upward a bit.
11. 01:08:772 (1,2) - I don't expect this to be 1/4 actually, it looks much more like it's 1/2...
12. 01:17:233 (2) - It's quite hard (not impossible though) to read for players without snaking sliders like me (idk if it's unrankable, but to avoid such conflicts, this is the simplest thing you can do here: )
    
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13. 01:20:951 (6) - This should be 1/6 (well, 1/4 should also do fine actually, just saying 1/6 is more accurate xD)
14. 01:24:669 (5) - Whistle here? It would be cute ~
15. 01:28:644 (4) - Same as above, for cuteness ^^

• [Gu's Normal]

1. 00:48:515 (3) - Remove "clap" on the start.
   
   [Hard]
2. 00:57:362 (3) - Remove this hitcircle.
3. 01:05:951 (6,7,8) - I don't like this sudden change of spacing. Please change it to a jump or use normal DS.
4. 01:28:644 (4) - Move this to "01:28:515" and add 1 reversal to this slider.

• Hi hi~ request from In-Game PM~ ( 其實是M4M XD )
  　
  General :
  　

1. Nothing I can find
   　
   Easy :
   　
2. 00:23:644 (1) - 沒對稱好啊lol!! 對稱圖發生這麼大的錯誤!! /me slaps JPY
   
   

   376,252,23644,2,0,B|376:292|352:316|320:300|320:300|304:324|272:336|240:336|208:324|192:300|192:300|160:316|136:292|136:252,1,330,8|2

3. 00:58:515 (1) - ^
   
   

   200,176,58515,6,0,B|148:112|196:48|256:32|316:48|364:112|312:174,1,330,4|8

   　
   Gu's Normal :
   　
4. /me slaps Baka No_Gu
   　
   Hard :
   　
5. 00:48:259 (1,2,3,4) - 這spacing很容易被騙的 改成同spacing?
6. 00:53:387 (4) - NC
7. 01:01:592 (4) - ^
8. 01:09:797 (4) - ^
9. 01:18:003 (4) - ^
10. 01:26:721 (9,10) - 這spacing坑爹啊 >_< 複製7,8然後改一下吧 像這樣 :
    
    
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11. 01:30:310 (4,5) - 音效顛倒過來吧
    　
    
    You must to read~!

    red:I think you must to fix. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.

[ S o R a ] wrote:

Hi ~

Please sorry for concern >_<

Need a video? If video need, that http://www.mediafire.com/?ddo1h50b2xr2ref

I think it is good quality video :3

Please sorry for concer again.

ykcarrot wrote:

The MP3 should be fixed due to it's incomplete.
BTW did you allow DRS to use mp3 in this map? http://osu.ppy.sh/s/18439
I confirmed that DRS use same mp3.

Anyway check the original video, there is one more beat after the end of last beat.

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Gu's Normal]
00:44:282 (5) - 这个shape好丑故意的
01:22:487 (2,3) - 感觉这个包围不完美，中间的间距比两边的大差不多就行

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
BG is too hentai , change one plz大丈夫萌大奶算了還是換個 無所謂了...另外combo color也換了
offset is really off , 170(-10) is better to meOK
diff spread is really bad , I think it is not Hard diff , it is Insane..難度名大改 現在不存在這個問題了

[Easy]
01:29:410 (2) - change to 2 sliders is better imo , now it is hard to know when it end..改成1個slider

[Hard]
你看你difficulty setting这么低还5.00 stars，这哪里是Hard啊所以說現在不是Hard了
AR我感觉太低了，我的话就会AR8原來就是 后來覺得不合適
00:16:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - 敢不敢降spacing降了11%
00:46:333 (3,1) - 这里是想stack的么？故意的
00:54:538 (3,4) - 这spacing太大了，很让人以为4是00:55:051 - 开始，最好改下OK
00:55:949 (2,3) - 这地方spacing缺又意外的小0.0...上面改了這個就不小了
01:04:795 (5) - 这个给我一种没跟01:03:385 (5,6,7,1,3) - 对齐的感觉其實是對齊的 斜著看有錯覺

diff are all fine , but diff spread is bad imo..
I suggest to change Hard to Insane , and make a new Hard 0.0
then I'll back 泥姆芙不肯幫我做 我也沒辦法

kirinoimouto22 wrote:

weird