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y u c a
O_O

arigato pangpang
added taiko diff
some pattern changed by james's mod arigato
S h i a
go go yuka!
Sandpig
Hard

00:31:891 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of stack is hard to read. if you want to keep then 00:33:630 (4) - new combo
00:37:000 - I think there should be a note here?
00:41:891 (3,4,5,1) - seperate them or 00:42:217 - add note . also some suggestion for 01:53:195 (3,4,5,1)
00:39:608 - add note here and remove this one 00:40:043 (8) ?
01:48:413 (2,3) - in fact I don't quite understand the use of these 2 sliders...imo there should be more notes here
02:18:630 - I think this note should not be skipped according to previous rhythm


Normal

00:34:717 (6) - it feels better to me if this one is stacked with previous slider...or just seperate 00:34:717 (6,1).

mapset is fine. nothing more to point out

have a star baca \:D/
kyuten
とりあえずStar~~☆~☆
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Topic Starter
y u c a

Sandpig wrote:

Hard

00:31:891 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of stack is hard to read. if you want to keep then 00:33:630 (4) - new combo added new combo!
00:37:000 - I think there should be a note here? fixed
00:41:891 (3,4,5,1) - seperate them or 00:42:217 - add note . also some suggestion for 01:53:195 (3,4,5,1) no change here T_T
00:39:608 - add note here and remove this one 00:40:043 (8) ? following the song's rhythm so no change
01:48:413 (2,3) - in fact I don't quite understand the use of these 2 sliders...imo there should be more notes here changed~
02:18:630 - I think this note should not be skipped according to previous rhythm no changee yappari fixed


Normal

00:34:717 (6) - it feels better to me if this one is stacked with previous slider...or just seperate 00:34:717 (6,1). no change

mapset is fine. nothing more to point out

have a star baca \:D/
baca janai yucaヾ(*`Д´*)ノ really thanks mod and star!

@shia
arigato star!

@QQ姐
wa arigato moe star~!!

@⑨姐
えええええ2個も★ありがとおおおおおおヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛
TW-KUMA01
[Taiko] 打起來感覺有 10星中段~下段的難度:O

排的很好,只有一點小小建議。

00:03:413 (11) - note去掉? 感覺是多出來的音...?

00:09:717 (10,11,12) - 這個三連打聽起來有點怪怪的....改一下排法..?

.........沒了!好短!其他都沒什麼問題了,天才美少年胖胖加油:D!
yeahyeahyeahhh
<3

Hard:
00:03:195 (7,8) - I think this is better if you don't do a double at the start, since you're following the instrument/trumpet. Like this I think plays/sounds better

00:06:673 (7) - Make this slider 3 notes? Too follow the instrument again and to still hit the down beat?

or you can make it like this..

00:10:152 (8,9) - Again, think its better like this

00:21:456 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:32:760 (1) - ^

Everything else good xD
Topic Starter
y u c a

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

<3

Hard:
00:03:195 (7,8) - I think this is better if you don't do a double at the start, since you're following the instrument/trumpet. Like this I think plays/sounds better

00:06:673 (7) - Make this slider 3 notes? Too follow the instrument again and to still hit the down beat?

or you can make it like this..
 

i changed this
00:10:152 (8,9) - Again, think its better like this

00:21:456 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:32:760 (1) - ^

Everything else good xD
thanks mod yyy <33
Sure
Hi yuca :D


[Hard]
00:03:304 (8,1,2,3) - Their stacking looks a bit weird. Try this code.
Code and screenshots
171,49,3304,2,0,B|112:59|64:104,1,120,0|2
76,112,4065,5,0
76,112,4500,1,0
76,112,4934,2,0,B|22:151,1,40,0|2

00:12:108 - That huge gap of volume makes a bit weird spinning sound. Try to raise little. Maybe around 25 would be good.
02:07:543 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo


[Normal]
00:22:326 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo
00:42:326 (4) - New combo
00:56:673 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo
01:01:456 (4) - Touches HP bar
01:33:630 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo
01:53:630 (4) - New combo
02:07:978 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo
02:11:021 (4) - New combo. According to your comboing pattern, you add new combo every 3rd downbeat.


Nice job. ;)

Topic Starter
y u c a
thaaaanks yk all fixed!!

and fixed sb sound too ( o v o )!!
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff, you should fix
Blue : Important things, you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions, fix it only if you want

General

  1. It seems you've cutted the mp3? If so, you'd better add a (short ver.) after your title :
    :arrow: Atoguru - Privilege (Short Ver.)

Normal

  1. Fine, to tell the truth, I feel this normal is a bit hard as normal, spacing is kinda large. Just be aware when you make normal next time

Hard

  1. 00:43:847 (x) - I think add a note here better since there's a sound in music here, make it empty here sounds weird. It's playable though, but if confused me when first play, played well when 2nd try :/ Depends on you
  2. 00:45:586 (x) - ^

Nice in all, send me a forum PM for recheck when you're ready
Topic Starter
y u c a
@ bree

i dont wanna put 'short ver.' Orz
if really need add it, ill add

hard diff fixed

thanks mod(・∀・)
Breeze

y u c a wrote:

@ bree

i dont wanna put 'short ver.' Orz
if really need add it, ill add
:arrow: It's not must, I think
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Topic Starter
y u c a
ooooo arigato bree~(・∀・)!!
Garven
Quite the prolific mapper trio here~

[Normal]
Uh, you have bookmarks going way beyond the end of the mp3.
00:41:021 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for the easiest diff
00:56:673 (1) - ^ If you don't want to change it, at least make it a little closer to the center to aid in recovery.
01:24:282 (1,2) - Rather large jump. Maybe have the 1 angled towards the 2 instead of away to help give direction better.
01:44:934 (5,6) - Not quite aligned correctly.
01:52:326 (1) - Same as earlier
02:07:978 (1) - Yep

[Hard]
You have bookmarks going way beyond the end of the mp3 here too.
Topic Starter
y u c a
@garven

normal fixed by mapper
hard fixed too~

and...i changed some hitsound in hard diff
its sound better now

thanks mod~(・∀・)ノ
James
uploaded and edited normal. i didn't change some of your suggestion as it really doesnt affect gameplay... which is kinda useless... although i changed some patterns..

you only mentioned 3 unaligned parts while hard and normal has alot of them.... ill change them if you can point out all of them. ;)


note that you also pointed out one spinner being short for normal, while there are actually two. tsk tsk... Don't worry I already changed it for you and I do apologize for my part for not knowing that it is "too short" now considering the playing level of players (and beginners maybe) are alot higher than before.
Garven
James:

Actually, I pointed out four post-spinner notes that were rather soon after for a Normal.
Check 00:56:673 (1) - and 01:52:326 (1) - too. Though as I said, if you feel that they are fine, perhaps try to set up the next note closer to the center of the screen to assist in realignment.

I mentioned 3 unaligned parts? I only see the one, and it was the only one I cared enough to say. Sure, it doesn't effect game play, but in case you were going for linear patterns there (which appeared to be what you were going for) I figure I may as well mention it.

I figure you're a good enough mapper to be able to get the gist of a mod instead of just nitpicking at every detail in any case.

yuca:

Sounds better. That was a lot of change though - you must have had this all prepped. q:
Topic Starter
y u c a
i was thinking this hitsound is best or not
now, sound best for me
i dont wanna think this change things is bad

thanks mod again~


edit: i misunderstand you because of my english baka!
arigato garven rebubble and explain~
Garven
Alright, since James doesn't want to make any other changes, I'll just leave this here~
abalee


OK fine for ranking.
Megurine Luka


yeah
hoLysoup


:>
omedetou~
Natsume
1,6x spacing in [Normal]? lolwut?
Topic Starter
y u c a
arigatoooooo!!

but...baca janaaaiヾ(*`Д´*)ノ
Hinacle
おめでと~!!
xsrsbsns
omedetou 床~
Shiro

abalee wrote:



OK fine for ranking.
I laughed.
omedetou yuca !
Sure

mou baca ni kimatteiru w

tonikaku omedetou :D
S h i a
omedetooooooooooooooooooo <3
Topic Starter
y u c a
arigato again~ヾ(*´∀`*)ノ゛

demo baca janai 床janai Tv T
Kite
>< Congrats
Breeze

abalee wrote:



OK fine for ranking.
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