Jacob wrote:

Here's a mod from my queue.

[General]

-- The second kiai time in Puppet should end at 01:41:484. fixed

[Puppet]

-- Consider adding +1 to AR due to the fact that the song is of very high BPM. I also suggest adding +1 to the overall difficulty. fixed
00:05:334 (4) - Add a finish to this note. fixed
00:22:284 (1) - Move this away from the previous note just a bit so that they are not touching. fixed
00:40:434 (2) - Move this away from the next object so that they're not touching.fixed
00:53:784 (1) - Don't make the end of the spinner quiet. It would be really awesome to hear the finish hitsound better.fixed
00:53:784 (1) - To have this spinner gradually decrease in volume feels weird. The volume of Miku's voice in this part doesn't change at all.fixed
01:14:784 (3) - Make this farther away from the previous note to perfect the spacing.fixed
01:34:734 (2,1) - The blanket between these two notes feels odd. Try something like this.fixed
01:36:684 (1) - Part of this circle is overlapped by 01:35:334 (1) if you follow the suggestion above. Make it so that this doesn't happen.fixed
02:47:784 (1) - Don't silence the end of this spinner. Also, don't make the volume fade out on it.fixed

[Harmony]

00:29:484 (5) - Add a finish.fixed
00:53:634 (1) - Same thing as Puppet with this spinner.fixed
01:36:684 (1,2,3) - Some thing like this would look and play out much better.fixed
02:05:484 (0) - Add a note that's stacked on top of the next slider here. It sounds much better. Also, put a clap on it.fixed
02:47:634 (1) - Same this as in Puppet.fixed

[Controllable]

Surprisingly, I found nothing wrong. Well done!

[Uncontrollable]

00:41:934 (1,2) - Ctrl + R these for easier readability. nope
00:53:634 (1) - I have the same complaint about this as the previous difficulties. fixed
00:53:634 (1) - ^ fixed
02:34:284 (1) - Crtl + R. adopted

Nicely mapped. Good luck!

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa :D

[Puppet]
* AR +1 or +2? Your current approach rate is slow AR +1

01:28:884 (4) - The head slider is almost offscreen (just a warning) moved


[Harmony]
00:09:234 (4) - Move and make a slider like this one to make a blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/304622 fixed
02:12:684 (5) - New combo for your combo pattern fixed
02:15:084 (6) - How about make 1st and 3rd slidertick are overlap together, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/304627 fixed


orz

wmfchris wrote:

[Controllable]
AR8 would be enough as observed...?if it must be fixed, i will do sorry
00:40:584 (2,3) - quite a sudden jump for me... try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329144 ok
00:40:884 (1,2) - it'll also look better if you rotate them 180 degrees pointing upwards to reduce overlappingok
01:45:984 (3,4,1) - such arrangement is not recommended as they covered (1) pretty much.ok
01:50:484 (1,2,3,4,5) - again there's some sort of better placement can be done here, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329148 if you want to make (1,2) on the symmetrical position ok
02:58:434 - the accent is here instead of 1/4 beat eariler so you can make the first slider a 3/4 beat ones instead of the second sliderok
03:01:584 - why an easier diff (Harmony) has triplet but a harder difficulty don't have?because i don't need it

don't have much to complain (except the BG too moe and it distracts me to mod) but the difficulty spread is a bit too hard. You may need to make [controllable] and [harmony] slightly easier. Other than that, the map sounds fine.
If I changed AR8 and it will be more easier, I try to do. But now I don't feel that.

wmfchris wrote:

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[Uncontrollable]
00:16:434 (6) - [Nazi] it curves around (5) perfectly when 1 grid left lv4 ok
00:30:684 (5,6,7) - the flow of these notes can be improved, suggested placement: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328699 nice placement
00:32:484 (3) - remove the clap? The normal-hit seems to fit the vocal better ok
01:08:484 (3,4) - stack properly ok
01:52:284 (7) - NC here like the coming streams (because the melody is similar to the coming ones) ok
01:55:584 (8,9) - imo the music don't really need an acceleration here not acceleration here.....

[Harmony]
02:43:884 (1,1) - they can be stacked properly, move (3) to make the entire placement symmetrical too ok

don't have much to complain (except the BG too moe and it distracts me to mod) but the difficulty spread is a bit too hard. You may need to make [controllable] and [harmony] slightly easier. Other than that, the map sounds fine. [harmony] was easy because deleted range note part

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Timing is = =||||||||, well, offset +16 (700)
02:27:384 - at this point, use a very low volume here may create a effect fits the music (hard to describe), lower to 30% and have a try?ok I tryed.
[Controllable]
...AR-1? leave an easier Insane for players like me. ok
01:07:734 (3) - just use 2 circles here?changed
02:07:884 (1) - the volume of those soft hitsounds seems a bit high, try 50%~60% maybeI used 55%
great.<333

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Timing is = =||||||||, well, offset +16 (700) fixed
02:27:384 - at this point, use a very low volume here may create a effect fits the music (hard to describe), lower to 30% and have a try? very nice idea! All diff fixed

[Puppet]
00:05:334 (4,1) - just stack them? in this diff it mostly follows 1/1 (and its spacing), 1/2 like this seems a bit crowded. ok
01:23:784 - add a note? nope

[Harmony]
00:39:084 (1) - http://puu.sh/AdgN this will follows the music better imo (check the place of sliders.) I thought too. fixed
00:45:684 (2,3) - farther a bit to make it look nicer? http://puu.sh/Adhl ok
00:51:084 (1,2,3,4) - this part is a bit ugly imo.. = =||| I'm sorry. it was rough. re-placement
01:17:484 (1) - same as 00:39:084 (1) fixed
01:45:984 (7) - not a big deal but still prefer to change the direction a bit to make the reverse arrow more obvious (my hit300 is a little bigger..?) ok reverse arrow is down

[Uncontrollable]
00:32:934 (1) - silence the end? good idea
00:43:434 - add a note? (normal hitsound) add note
01:11:334 (1) - silence the end? fixed
01:21:834 - add a note? add note
02:05:634 (1) - feels a bit strange in this part. the heavy sound is quite obvious, but all your sliders here start from a red line, it feels not so good to me...(just make 02:05:334 (7) a circle-circle-slider 1/4 triple then start this part?) fixed

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

bubbled YAY
[Uncontrollable]
but i think this note 02:03:925 (3) - should be here 02:04:000 (or make triplet) ^^ sorry no change. guitar follow this part

Garven wrote:

<3 <3

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best sorry no fixed.Tick rate 2 is a little noisy imo...

[Harmony]
00:39:100 (1) - This was kind of hard to see under the hitburst from 00:38:050 (1) - fixed
03:01:450 (1) - A little soon after a spinner for a Hard. Ending the spinner at 03:01:150 - goes with the guitar, if anything. fixed

[Controllable]
01:29:200 (4) - This is covered by a hitburst from 01:28:000 (4) - fixed

Sexy.