1. Easy (1,26 stars, 141 notes)
2. Hard (4,64 stars, 411 notes)
3. Normal (3,69 stars, 239 notes)

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ gyt ~

Mod time my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file ><.
2. Your Mp3 file it's 338 kbps,this is unrankable.need change for 192 kbps. Overall bit rate: 141 Kbps. I think it's ok

[Hard]

1. AR+1 will be fun for me. t's a soft song, AR6 is better, imo
2. 00:15:276 (1) - Moved 1 grid down.
3. 00:27:968 (5,6,7,8,9) - Moved note,like this. changed a bit
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:36:507 (8) - Add new combo. ok
5. 00:52:199 (1,2,3) - Using same spacing. I use stack for now
6. 00:55:891 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 01:51:276 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 01:54:968 (1,2,3) - ^
9. 01:30:737 (6) - Moved 1 grid up. perfect line for me
10. 01:33:737 (3) - ^
11. 01:35:353 (7) - Add new combo to here,because spacing. ok
12. 02:00:506 (6) - ^
13. 02:30:276 (9) - ^
14. 02:37:429 (6) - ^ I think about it

[Normal]

1. 00:22:660 - Add finish. ok
2. 00:44:583 (6) - This note should move to here 00:44:353. nah, it's nice here
3. 01:50:814 (6) - ^ 01:50:814.
4. 01:21:737 - Remove whistle and Add finish.
5. 02:39:160 - Add finish.

[Easy]

1. 01:20:814 (3) - This slider should end to here 01:21:737. it's like at first verse. I don't want to change it

That's all ~

Good luck ~ thank you!

1. Советую не использовать клап в софт секциях, так как звучит ужасно. Оставь только свистки, они классные :3
2. В остальном хорошо

1. 02:30:507 (4) - если оставишь клапи, то клап сюда. И форма не очень, изменишь может?
2. 02:34:200 (3) - ^
3. 02:57:968 (1) - можно сделать постепенно затухающую громкость

1. 00:32:814 (1) - убери нк
2. 00:48:507 (х) - ноту
3. 01:17:122 (1) - убери нк
4. 01:31:891 (1) - ^
5. 01:47:583 (х) - ноту
6. 02:57:737 (1) - убрать нк?
7. 02:57:853 (1) - так же, как в изе

1. 00:30:507 (2,3) - лучше убрать финиши
2. 00:48:507 (х) - добавь ноту
3. 01:29:583 (2,3) - убери финиши
4. 01:47:583 (х) - ноту
5. 02:02:814 (х) - и сюда бы я добавила
6. 02:03:507 (х) - сюда можно
7. 02:28:199 (4) - нк

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Привет, извини, что так поздно

[General]

1. Советую не использовать клап в софт секциях, так как звучит ужасно. Оставь только свистки, они классные :3 прям ужасно? ну подумаю - не хочу просто удалять клапы, может другой какой саунд использую
2. В остальном хорошо

[Easy]

1. 02:30:507 (4) - если оставишь клапи, то клап сюда. И форма не очень, изменишь может? ладно, форма мне нравится, но подумаю ещё
2. 02:34:200 (3) - ^
3. 02:57:968 (1) - можно сделать постепенно затухающую громкость сделал

[Normal]

1. 00:32:814 (1) - убери нк ок
2. 00:48:507 (х) - ноту не, вот насчет нот я не согласен. Мне важно подчеркнуть вокал здесь
3. 01:17:122 (1) - убери нк
4. 01:31:891 (1) - ^
5. 01:47:583 (х) - ноту
6. 02:57:737 (1) - убрать нк?
7. 02:57:853 (1) - так же, как в изе

[Hard]

1. 00:30:507 (2,3) - лучше убрать финиши
2. 00:48:507 (х) - добавь ноту
3. 01:29:583 (2,3) - убери финиши
4. 01:47:583 (х) - ноту
5. 02:02:814 (х) - и сюда бы я добавила хм, не - мне нравятся релаксирующие джампы
6. 02:03:507 (х) - сюда можно
7. 02:28:199 (4) - нк

Песня понравилась. И мапка хорошая, удачи с ней! спасибо за мод и звезду!

CDFA wrote:

Insane:
00:19:430 (2) - Not moe! oh, I was doing waves wrong all this time, fixed
00:52:430 (2) - Kinda weird jump well, it's like 00:37:199 (4,1,2) or 00:44:583 (8,1,2) - exactly the same.
01:51:507 (2) - ^
02:36:506 (3,4,5) - This is kinda weird, mostly because there's no real call for it, and the next similar pattern doesn't do this either :> hm, I don't use similar pattern (spacing?) further, but I really think it's kinda cool here.

Normal:
swaq

Easy:
swaq

It's a cool map, but the insane is kinda meh :>. btw, it's not insane. Maybe I play it too often or something, but I like it and it's not too hard for me.

I'll star it, though. thanks

HellDawn wrote:

Easy

02:53:122- clap
02:56:814- ^

Normal

02:08:814- clap
02:09:276- ^
02:12:507- ^
02:12:968- ^ nah^

Hard

01:19:660- new combo ?
01:30:045- remove finish please it sound weird ok^

Behonkiss wrote:

Easy:
00:41:122 (1) - Consider getting rid of the slider whistle here. I lower volume a bit
00:48:507 (1) - ^
01:20:814 (3) - Add a finish at the end?
01:40:199 (1) - Again, consider getting rid of the slider whistle.
00:48:507 (1) - ^
01:40:199 (1) - ^
01:47:583 (1) - ^

Normal:
00:48:737 (1) - Shouldn't this be starting half a beat earlier, at 00:48:507? yea, it's tricky, but I like it. It follow the voice.
01:47:814 (1) - ^

Hard:
00:37:660 (2) - Should probably be closer to 1. maybe-maybe, but I need to change all chorus logic then. Do not want
00:39:507 (2) - ^
00:48:737 (1) - Consider starting this half a beat earlier, at 00:48:507.
01:38:583 (2) - Again, should be closer spacing-wise.
01:44:122 (2) - ^
01:47:814 (1) - Half a beat earlier?
02:36:507 (3,4,5) - Why so close? eh, changed

Great job overall, just got nitpicky about some repeating issues.