Vass_Bass wrote:

Hi there~

General

1. Size of BG 1024x758, resize please as long as it's not over 1024x768, it should be fine
2. 04:16:834 - fountain there...so epic chorus in the end, add the full kiai there I'' just keep this for now

Normal

1. 00:44:600 (1,2,3,4) - looks not good, may be you will do reverses there k
2. 01:02:140 - add finish there, strong part nah
3. 01:03:017 (5) - and there
4. 01:03:894 (1) - yeah, finish there too
5. 01:46:867 (1,2) - add whistle on the all first slider and start and start of the second sorry but i don't like how it sounds like that

Hard

1. 01:01:920 (1,2,1) - same thing with the finishes I don't like add finish here
2. 01:03:894 (1,2,3,4) - in normal diff you have whistles there, may be you will do the same? k
3. 02:10:546 (4,5) - they're little overlaped oh well changed
4. 02:22:604 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - finishhh sorry, no, really sounds bad to me
5. 02:59:438 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - add some whistles like in music k
6. 04:33:935 (6,7) - may be you will swap them? swap? what?

Good luck

Thanks

Byakugan249 wrote:

Text

Thanks, fixed some, too lazy to reply them all lol, it's a long mod

A K Breeze !

HBD

Let's go ~




Hope it can help you ~ ><

微風醬 早灣 OwO

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[Normal]

1. 00:40:215 (5) - re 紅線的finish 如何 ?~OAO
2. 00:48:985 (2) - 讓第2個點在 x:216 y:80 ,第3個點在 x:288 y:96
3. 01:00:386 (3) - 讓它在x:408 y:88 , 第2個點在x:456 y:104 如何呢?!OAO
4. 02:05:284 (6) - NC ?~
5. 02:42:118 (3) - 讓第3個點在 x:320 y:120 ?
6. 03:53:812 (2) - 讓第2個點在 x:200 y:264 ,第3個點在 x:168 y:200 ?
7. 04:30:866 (1) - 讓第4個點在 x:56 y:208

[Hard]

1. 00:20:921 (3) - 讓第2個點在 x:72 y:184
2. 00:40:434 (2) - re finish
3. 01:55:637 (1) - re NC
4. 02:06:599 (4) - 讓它在 x:280 y:312
5. 03:32:764 (4) - 讓它在 x:392 y:64

good map & good song & good luck~
mod不好請見諒 OTZ

Netsukawa wrote:

A K Breeze !

HBD

Let's go ~

General

• Setting

1. 1. Remove countdown in all diff ? k

• Folder

1. 1. Fine

Normal

• Setting

1. 1. Fine

• Mapping

1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion
   
   
   1. 00:34:514 (1) - Overlapped by hit-300 , Stack next note ? I think this should be fine
   2. 00:48:546 (1) - ^ ^
   3. 04:30:866 (1) - Move right 2 grids ? k
2. Hit Sounds
   
   
   1. 02:19:316 (3) - Add finish ?
   2. 02:43:433 (4) - This whistle slider sound weird , Remove it ? k
   3. 03:31:230 (1) - Add finish ?
   4. 03:38:246 (1) - ^
   5. 03:41:754 (1) - ^
   6. 04:32:400 (1) - ^

Hard

• Setting

1. 1. AR -1 ?

• Mapping

1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion
   
   
   1. 00:31:445 (1) - NC ?
   2. 00:40:215 (1,2,3) - Change to 1/2 slider with reverse ?
   3. 01:30:204 (3) - NC ?
   4. 01:55:637 (1) - Remove NC ? k
   5. 03:04:920 (3) - Epic slider...
   6. 03:17:198 (5) - NC ?
   7. 03:54:251 (4) - ^ k for this 2
2. Hit Sounds
   
   
   1. 00:19:605 (4) - Remove clap at end and start of slider ? there are claps in background music
   2. 01:58:268 (1) - Add finish ?
   3. 02:01:776 (1) - ^
   4. 02:05:284 (1) - ^

Hope it can help you ~ ><

Thanks

l1106188 wrote:

微風醬 早灣 OwO

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[Normal]

1. 00:40:215 (5) - re 紅線的finish 如何 ?~OAO
2. 00:48:985 (2) - 讓第2個點在 x:216 y:80 ,第3個點在 x:288 y:96 k
3. 01:00:386 (3) - 讓它在x:408 y:88 , 第2個點在x:456 y:104 如何呢?!OAO k
4. 02:05:284 (6) - NC ?~ k
5. 02:42:118 (3) - 讓第3個點在 x:320 y:120 ? k
6. 03:53:812 (2) - 讓第2個點在 x:200 y:264 ,第3個點在 x:168 y:200 ? k
7. 04:30:866 (1) - 讓第4個點在 x:56 y:208 k

[Hard]

1. 00:20:921 (3) - 讓第2個點在 x:72 y:184 k
2. 00:40:434 (2) - re finish
3. 01:55:637 (1) - re NC
4. 02:06:599 (4) - 讓它在 x:280 y:312 感觉现在更好
5. 03:32:764 (4) - 讓它在 x:392 y:64

good map & good song & good luck~
mod不好請見諒 OTZ

thanks

Hello!

General

1. Your background is 1024x758, when it should be 1024x768. Perhaps you might want to use another background or resize your current one.
2. 00:00:969 (1) - At this first slider on all of the difficulties, you might want to make the beginning of it soft due to the volume and intensity gradually increasing.

Normal

1. 00:14:782 (4) - It would be in your best interest if you made this slider symmetrical in order for it to be better looking.
   

   392,176,14782,2,0,B|360:224|392:272|432:272|472:272|504:320|472:368,1,240

2. 00:49:862 (3) - I believe that you could easily make this slider better looking.
3. 01:08:717 (1) - This slider doesn't match the vocals very well. Doing this could solve the problem easily with minimal changes.
4. 01:39:193 (3) - Reversing this slider and moving it upwards to follow the distance snap flows better than putting it behind (2) in terms of position.
5. 01:40:728 - Even though it doesn't matter too much, extend the beginning of the break to this point. Make sure to also do it for the hard difficulty.
6. 02:03:530 (4) - You should avoid this touching with (3). Newer players may think that (3) has an extra reverse due to the spacing and they may miss.
7. 02:04:407 (5) - In normal difficulties, it's recommended that you don't have things touching the HP bar.
8. 02:13:177 (1) - This one note combo is unneeded.
9. 02:21:070 (5) - You might want to add a new combo here in order to shorten up the current long combo.
10. 02:43:433 (4) - This doesn't follow the vocals very well. Try something like this.
11. 03:00:096 (1) - This spinner seems rather short for a normal difficulty.
12. 03:32:984 (1,1) - For the sake of looking good, try not to make the endpoints of these sliders touch.
13. 03:54:470 (1) - Short spinner.

Hard

1. 00:48:546 (1) - Try to avoid centering things after a spinner. They get overlapped by the hitburst and the spinner-osu!.
   Not many problems. Excellent work!

Jacob wrote:

Hello!

General

1. Your background is 1024x758, when it should be 1024x768. Perhaps you might want to use another background or resize your current one. resized
2. 00:00:969 (1) - At this first slider on all of the difficulties, you might want to make the beginning of it soft due to the volume and intensity gradually increasing. okay, changed

Normal

1. 00:14:782 (4) - It would be in your best interest if you made this slider symmetrical in order for it to be better looking.
   

   392,176,14782,2,0,B|360:224|392:272|432:272|472:272|504:320|472:368,1,240

   looked good, changed
2. 00:49:862 (3) - I believe that you could easily make this slider better looking. lol well
3. 01:08:717 (1) - This slider doesn't match the vocals very well. Doing this could solve the problem easily with minimal changes. I think this should befine
4. 01:39:193 (3) - Reversing this slider and moving it upwards to follow the distance snap flows better than putting it behind (2) in terms of position. k
5. 01:40:728 - Even though it doesn't matter too much, extend the beginning of the break to this point. Make sure to also do it for the hard difficulty. k
6. 02:03:530 (4) - You should avoid this touching with (3). Newer players may think that (3) has an extra reverse due to the spacing and they may miss.
7. 02:04:407 (5) - In normal difficulties, it's recommended that you don't have things touching the HP bar.
8. 02:13:177 (1) - This one note combo is unneeded.
9. 02:21:070 (5) - You might want to add a new combo here in order to shorten up the current long combo.
10. 02:43:433 (4) - This doesn't follow the vocals very well. Try something like this.
11. 03:00:096 (1) - This spinner seems rather short for a normal difficulty.
12. 03:32:984 (1,1) - For the sake of looking good, try not to make the endpoints of these sliders touch.
13. 03:54:470 (1) - Short spinner.

Hard

1. 00:48:546 (1) - Try to avoid centering things after a spinner. They get overlapped by the hitburst and the spinner-osu!. Hmm, since it's a note, it could be easily read by approch circle
   Not many problems. Excellent work!

Thanks for mod

iroseka wrote:

iroseka's moddin' from tha queue

总体来说……我很喜欢就这样吧【拖走
算是神map了

normal
03:57:540 (2) - 要不要在这里加一个？ 加什么?
04:06:310 (1) - 形状 形状怎么了...?

hard
01:17:049 (5) - 逆时针旋转5° k
01:24:284 (3,4) - 形状略猎奇…… ...
01:50:375 (4) - 逆时针旋转10°，其余顺移 k
02:00:899 (1,2,3) - 要不要跳一跳？我觉得可以跳一跳 算了还是不跳了
02:50:888 (1) - 要加whistle么 不用了
02:54:834 (1,4) - 在return箭头处加上whistle？ 加了听着蛮奇怪的

谢谢mod

Hello ~ Breeze ~

Random mod for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions



That's all ~ really nice mapset and cool song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hello ~ Breeze ~

Random mod for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Hard]

1. 00:43:065 (3) - Move 1 grid left,looks better. k
2. 01:30:204 (3) - Add new combo should to here and Remove 01:29:765 (1). objection! 異議あり！(误 here's a new lyric bar so should be fine
3. 01:40:508 (6) - Looks not straight. fixed
4. 01:40:728 - Add finish sound better to me. sounds odd to me
5. 03:55:786 - ^ okay for this

[Normal]

1. 03:23:556 (4) - This slider(rhythm) a bit hard for beginner,so i suggestion change a circle on 03:23:775. k
2. 03:37:588 (4) - ^ sure
3. 04:32:400 (1) - Extend to 04:36:566,sound much better. yes, agree

That's all ~ really nice mapset and cool song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

thanks for modding

Hi breeze, random mod. I hope this can help you

[Normal]
00:00:969 (1) - Don't use 5% volume because it's unrankable. Just start the increase of volume with 10%
00:00:969 (1) - Still here, use finish on this slider's tail, it sounds very good since a new rhythm starts and you reach the 80% volume
00:14:782 (4) - Mh, since there should be a clap on 00:15:220 what about to make this rhythm adding the clap on it?

00:32:332 Not important but unsnapped green line
00:34:514 (1) - Placing this circle in the grid's center makes it become very confusing for the spinner-approachcircle of 00:32:322 (1). It's really hard to read for beginners, and since this is the easiest diff of your mapset you really should fix it
00:48:546 (1) - The same ^
01:23:188 (1) - How you can see from: http://puu.sh/MP9y this slider is asymmetric. This is the right code: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386415

220,328,83188,6,0,B|136:288|136:104|320:104|352:336|152:312|112:192,1,420,2|0

01:39:193 (3) - Nazi but snap the penultimate waypoint.
01:47:305 (2) - Add finish on this slider's end
02:00:899 (4) - Too loud these finishes omg @.@ Use 80% volume instead plz
02:05:284 (1) - Still asymmetric slider here. Making it symmetric would improve the flow of your map: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386417

304,132,125284,6,0,B|272:176|328:248|352:208|336:160|264:224|288:280,1,180

02:11:642 (1) - This part is a bit hard for the easiest diff ç.ç What about to remove this circle to make it easier?
02:14:931 (3) - Still not good slider's shape here. Use this code instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386418

440,56,134931,2,0,B|472:96|440:152|440:152|416:140|440:128|440:128|472:176|436:224,1,240

02:26:332 (1) - Dno't you think that this rhythm would be better? And easier to play.

02:33:348 (1) - Ugly slider:

392,64,153348,6,0,B|304:48|320:24|320:24|328:56|248:48,1,180,2|0

02:43:872 (5) - New combo and remove from 02:46:503 (1)
03:54:470 (3) - Yes i'm really bothering but.. this shape flows better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386427

180,172,234470,2,0,B|140:144|60:144|24:200|28:280|44:320|124:340|156:312|168:260|120:224,1,360

04:03:240 (1) - Same of 00:34:514 (1)

[Hard]
00:00:969 (1) - Same of Normal
01:03:894 (1,2,3,4) - Wrong spacing. You can keep a consistency spacing in this way too: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386437 <-- every circle is distant 0,60x from the other one (prev. and next)

256,356,63894,5,2
256,248,64332,1,2
256,140,64771,1,2
256,32,65209,1,2

01:50:375 (4) - Improve this blanket: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386439

56,176,110375,2,0,B|24:216|52:312|128:316,1,180,0|8

01:53:883 (2) - overlap better this slider's tail with 01:52:568 (4)'s head?
03:26:077 Reduce this break till the previous long white tick
04:26:919 (8) - New combo

Good luck with rank :3/

Chewin wrote:

Hi breeze, random mod. I hope this can help you

[Normal]
00:00:969 (1) - Don't use 5% volume because it's unrankable. Just start the increase of volume with 10% k
00:00:969 (1) - Still here, use finish on this slider's tail, it sounds very good since a new rhythm starts and you reach the 80% volume well thanks for suggestion, but add finish sounds odd for me
00:14:782 (4) - Mh, since there should be a clap on 00:15:220 what about to make this rhythm adding the clap on it?
this slider is for a whole rhythm in the music, so no change
00:32:332 Not important but unsnapped green line
00:34:514 (1) - Placing this circle in the grid's center makes it become very confusing for the spinner-approachcircle of 00:32:322 (1). It's really hard to read for beginners, and since this is the easiest diff of your mapset you really should fix it 1/2 beat space after a spinner should be fine, and in the centre should be the most easy case right?
00:48:546 (1) - The same ^
01:23:188 (1) - How you can see from: http://puu.sh/MP9y this slider is asymmetric. This is the right code: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386415 k

220,328,83188,6,0,B|136:288|136:104|320:104|352:336|152:312|112:192,1,420,2|0

01:39:193 (3) - Nazi but snap the penultimate waypoint.
01:47:305 (2) - Add finish on this slider's end
02:00:899 (4) - Too loud these finishes omg @.@ Use 80% volume instead plz sounds fine for me
02:05:284 (1) - Still asymmetric slider here. Making it symmetric would improve the flow of your map: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386417 k

304,132,125284,6,0,B|272:176|328:248|352:208|336:160|264:224|288:280,1,180

02:11:642 (1) - This part is a bit hard for the easiest diff ç.ç What about to remove this circle to make it easier? seems no much differences :/
02:14:931 (3) - Still not good slider's shape here. Use this code instead: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386418 k

440,56,134931,2,0,B|472:96|440:152|440:152|416:140|440:128|440:128|472:176|436:224,1,240

02:26:332 (1) - Dno't you think that this rhythm would be better? And easier to play. k

02:33:348 (1) - Ugly slider: changed

392,64,153348,6,0,B|304:48|320:24|320:24|328:56|248:48,1,180,2|0

02:43:872 (5) - New combo and remove from 02:46:503 (1) k
03:54:470 (3) - Yes i'm really bothering but.. this shape flows better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386427 k

180,172,234470,2,0,B|140:144|60:144|24:200|28:280|44:320|124:340|156:312|168:260|120:224,1,360

04:03:240 (1) - Same of 00:34:514 (1)

[Hard]
00:00:969 (1) - Same of Normal k
01:03:894 (1,2,3,4) - Wrong spacing. You can keep a consistency spacing in this way too: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386437 <-- every circle is distant 0,60x from the other one (prev. and next) k

256,356,63894,5,2
256,248,64332,1,2
256,140,64771,1,2
256,32,65209,1,2

01:50:375 (4) - Improve this blanket: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/386439 k

56,176,110375,2,0,B|24:216|52:312|128:316,1,180,0|8

01:53:883 (2) - overlap better this slider's tail with 01:52:568 (4)'s head? k
03:26:077 Reduce this break till the previous long white tick seems no need
04:26:919 (8) - New combo why here?

Good luck with rank :3/

thx

Konnichiwa

[Normal]

1. 01:53:006 (1,2) - Looks odd. Move (2)'s end above by 1 grid to make them symmetric.
2. 02:11:642 (1,2,3) - A bit too difficult for the easiest diff in this mapset. Change these notes to a slider please.
3. 02:42:118 (3) - Incorrect spacing. It's too near from a previous note.
4. 02:49:134 (3,1,2) - Looks crowded. Please avoid overlapping (3,2).

[Hard]

1. 00:32:332 (T) - This green line is a bit late so it doesn't effect correctly now.
2. 01:01:920 (1) - How about adding a finish to the return of slider? I feel it fits the music more.
3. 02:22:824 (2) - ^
4. 04:32:181 (3,4,5,6,7) - Since you followed the bell(?) sound, I recommend to use soft hitsound from 04:32:620 to 04:34:374. Also suggest to add a new combo to (4) so it makes reading the timing easier.

Call me back later~

Suzully wrote:

Konnichiwa

[Normal]

1. 01:53:006 (1,2) - Looks odd. Move (2)'s end above by 1 grid to make them symmetric. k
2. 02:11:642 (1,2,3) - A bit too difficult for the easiest diff in this mapset. Change these notes to a slider please. k
3. 02:42:118 (3) - Incorrect spacing. It's too near from a previous note. fixed
4. 02:49:134 (3,1,2) - Looks crowded. Please avoid overlapping (3,2). fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:32:332 (T) - This green line is a bit late so it doesn't effect correctly now. fixed
2. 01:01:920 (1) - How about adding a finish to the return of slider? I feel it fits the music more. Hmm sounds odd, so no, sorry
3. 02:22:824 (2) - ^ ^
4. 04:32:181 (3,4,5,6,7) - Since you followed the bell(?) sound, I recommend to use soft hitsound from 04:32:620 to 04:34:374. Also suggest to add a new combo to (4) so it makes reading the timing easier. NC added, sound changed

Call me back later~

thanks for checking

碎了2次泡泡了。真不容易啊

happy happy~ birthday~♪
If today is a someone's birthday, let's recommend this map to them.

grats!

這個好!

微風醬 恭喜 >w<!

Congrats \:D/

Happy AKBreeze omedeto ><

The score spread is too far ><

Congrats~ \:D/

congratz~~

lol i remember modding this map, and look at it now...congratz

哇～～congrats

Wow, Congratz !

good map ~~ ^^

congrats~

哇AKB

*O* 哇 gratz~

congratz!

恭喜摟~^^

虾

Grats

The page you were looking for can't be found... why???

good job breeze :3

we need more AKB songs lol , grats breeze!