1. Corruption! (4.02 stars, 269 notes)
2. Painful World! (4.77 stars, 348 notes)
3. Violation! (1.69 stars, 177 notes)

Hi. Here's your map's first mod. <3

VIOLATION!

1. 00:35:408 - I hope you can move this away from the corner cause it is almost touching the edge.
   
   
2. 00:47:408 - Move to x:216 y:84.
   
   
3. 00:50:408 - (4,5) Fix the spacing. It's not consistent.
   
   
4. 00:57:908 - Remove new combo. Add a new combo on 00:58:408.
   
   
5. 02:17:408 - Move the 2nd at point x:408 y:40 & 3rd point of this slider at x:260 y:56.
   
   
6. 02:20:408 - Move 3rd point of slider at x:352 y:320.
   
   
7. Overall Difficulty +1

Philippines wrote:

Hi. Here's your map's first mod. <3

VIOLATION!

1. 00:35:408 - I hope you can move this away from the corner cause it is almost touching the edge.Fixed
   
   
2. 00:47:408 - Move to x:216 y:84. well. this is symmetry with 00:44:408 (1)
   
   
3. 00:50:408 - (4,5) Fix the spacing. It's not consistent. Fixed
   
   
4. 00:57:908 - Remove new combo. Add a new combo on 00:58:408. Well..
   
   
5. 02:17:408 - Move the 2nd at point x:408 y:40 & 3rd point of this slider at x:260 y:56. i don't want this shape
   
   
6. 02:20:408 - Move 3rd point of slider at x:352 y:320. no
   
   
7. Overall Difficulty +1

Fixed

1. this song is not for Shiki, the song itself is Gothic Lolita, I really dont think it fits.
2. add Wakeshima Kanon in tags, she is the vocal.
3. remove shiki from the source, this song is just c/w of the CD, but not for Shiki.And if you dont know what is c/w
   

   「c/w」とは - coupling withの略表記。 CDシングルにおいてタイトル曲以外の曲を指していう。 カップリングともいう。

• 00:51:908 (4) - add a repeat or extend the slider to the next red tick, it looks like style sudden changed
  02:15:908 (5) - ^

1. 01:43:408 (1) - remove new combo
   01:44:408 (3) - new combo here
   01:48:408 (1) - move the second tick up.it means, make the slider curve
   02:01:908 (1) - why you nc here..
   02:24:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ugly.
   02:39:908 (1) - remove new combo
   02:40:158 (2) - new combo

goodbye wrote:

[General]

1. this song is not for Shiki, the song itself is Gothic Lolita, I really dont think it fits.
2. add Wakeshima Kanon in tags, she is the vocal.
3. remove shiki from the source, this song is just c/w of the CD, but not for Shiki.And if you dont know what is c/w
   

   「c/w」とは - coupling withの略表記。 CDシングルにおいてタイトル曲以外の曲を指していう。 カップリングともいう。

Painful World

• 00:51:908 (4) - add a repeat or extend the slider to the next red tick, it looks like style sudden changed Fixed
  02:15:908 (5) - ^

Fixed

Corrupotion!

1. 01:43:408 (1) - remove new combo Fixed
   01:44:408 (3) - new combo here Fixed
   01:48:408 (1) - move the second tick up.it means, make the slider curve Fixed
   02:01:908 (1) - why you nc here.. i don't know why NC here
   02:24:408 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ugly. Fixed
   02:39:908 (1) - remove new combo
   02:40:158 (2) - new combo

180,296,150908,2,0,B|256:328|256:328|332:296,1,160,8|0

512,144,20408,6,0,B|464:152|464:232|512:240,1,120

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
add Shiki to tag.the song isn't opening or ending theme.but it has a little relationship with Shiki
I can see a whitle line in bg(left side).my issue or the issue of BG?..

[Violation!]
02:17:408 (2,1,2) - too huge jump..I think this kind of notes shouldn't in easy..
02:22:408 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - too many circle. chage some to sliders?
02:25:908 (1) - remove NC and add nc at next note
01:20:908 (1,1) - add clap
01:16:408 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - combo set looks a little strange.

SPOILER

• 01:18:408 remove NC
  01:20:408 add NC
  01:21:908 remove NC

01:52:408 (1) - I don't like stack notes in easy.move to x148 y124?
03:17:908 (3) - remove clap and add finish

[Corruption!]
00:40:908 (1,2,3,4) - make them a square?
00:51:908 (8) - If you follow vocal . this should end at 00:52:158
01:20:408 (5,6) - clap in the end?
02:30:908 (5) - this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/230046

180,296,150908,2,0,B|256:328|256:328|332:296,1,160,8|0

02:34:408 (8,9) - try these notes ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/230048
03:17:908 (7) - add finish.don't need to remove clap

[Painful World!]
00:20:408 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/230056

512,144,20408,6,0,B|464:152|464:232|512:240,1,120

00:58:408 add a note with finish
01:17:908 (5) - y192 to be straight with next 1
03:17:908 (7) - same as last diff

:3☆

1. Eh? not source? I think this song is from a anime

Yasora-chan wrote:

Hi :3

General

1. Eh? not source? I think this song is from a anime

Violation!
00:31:408 (1) I think this slider should be start in before note (2) until here. then, add slider from 00:31:908 until 00:32:408 and add circle in 00:32:908. more following vocal imo. oh if you aren't understand this, you can look here
00:41:408 (2) umm.. spacing is to close..? I mean not consistent
00:46:408 (1,2) also in here too same issues I think. just check with distance snap and move a little. I think more tidy like this right?
00:51:408 (1) no need NC in here. since same spacing and vocal
00:53:408 (2) hmm.. I think it's overlap with slider's 00:51:408 imo. can you move to another place, or change the pattern?
01:54:408 (3) I think give finish in slider's beginning is give effect and connected with slider's finish in (1) imo
02:20:408 (2) this slider is too far from before note. since this diff is low diff in this mapset. plz consistent spacing
02:54:408 (1) since this is same rhythm with before, delete NC plz
02:58:408 (3) in here too. no need NC in here orz
03:06:408 (1) this slider is overlaped with (1)'s tail. plz change slider shape or pattern imo. and no need NC in here because same rhythm in here (I heard in my ear)
03:12:408 (1) before note (5) is touching this slider's border and I think that weird to looking. can you move to another place?

Corruption!
00:32:908 (2) same reason as Violation! diff (01:54:408) I think more better if add finish in here
00:35:908 (5) add NC in here? new vocal I think. also remove NC in next note
00:38:408 (5) add NC in here? since it's downbeat and the finish sound give effect new vocal imo
00:49:908 (3) stack this in slider reverse's 00:47:908 (1), is more better to looking imo
02:22:658 (6) NC in here since I think that make help the player to read this notes
02:41:408 (4) add finish in slider's beginning? give a effect imo

Painful World!
ok I think it's fine

That's all
Good luck :3

1. Seems good, great job.

1. 01:04:408 (1) - I think this spinner would be great if you stop it at 01:08:408. Because there's a hight pitch overthere which cover the finish sounds you have at the spinner. If you agree with me, apply this to other diff as well.
2. 01:20:908 (1) - A new combo here doesn't neccesary imo. It's still on the same pattern and rythim with 01:20:408 (1) - . So please remove it.
3. 01:54:408 (3) - The finish sound at the startpoint is a little bit awkward. It will be good if you just remove it.
4. 01:57:908 (4) - Maybe you should add a finish here at the repeat point for consistencies.
5. 02:05:408 (3) - This one too have an awkward finish sounds since the song in this spot is going to silent moment.
6. 02:17:408 (2) - This slider is abit overlap slider 02:18:408 (1) - which makes this not good to see. Could you make it like this? >http://puu.sh/eYtB
7. 03:02:408 (1) - Add a finish at the startpoint for consistencies with the next part.
8. 03:04:408 (1) - Remove new combo here since it's still on the same pattern with previous combo.

1. 00:32:908 (2) - Awkward finish sounds detected. Please remove it >.<
2. 00:42:408 (4) - ^
3. 00:47:908 (1) - Awkward slider shape imo. Why not just make it straight? Just remove the second point.
4. 00:51:908 (8) - Try to avoid 1/4 rythim in normal or easy diff. I suggest make this rythim to 1/2.
5. 01:03:908 (6) - You should add a finish rythim at the endpoint to close the finish rythim you have before.
6. 01:44:158 (9,1) - New combo problem imo. I think you should add a new combo at 9 rather at 1. It's because 9 is on different rythim and pattern.
7. 02:15:908 (9) - This one have 1/4 rtyhim too. Try to avoid it.
8. 02:26:408 - I think you should have a note with finish sound overhere for closing the finish rythim you have. So move the spinner back to 02:26:658/02:26:533 before you add a note there.

1. I'm quite satisfiend about this diff. Although it's jumpy for a hard map, it seems everything is good. Great job

S i R i R u wrote:

from your SB mod request

a1 - Kagami no oku

a3 - Muishiki ni jiga

a7 - Shinshoku suru doutoku

b1 - Towa ni nukedasenai (永遠 yes this is Eien but using Towa for this time)

c1 - hitomi wa kanashikutemo "kanashikutemo" is 1 word

c2 - namida wo nagasenai

d3 - Houwa suru itami

d4 - to hajikete

e1 - Jouge sayuu mo nai

e9 - Hotsureta kuchibiru wa

f1 - Himei wo agetemo

f2 - Koe ni naranakute

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

General:
No problems here

Violation!
00:30:908(2) - face it like This because its a bit slanted
00:51:408(6) - Add a finish at the beginning to continue the rhythm. the finishes sounds nice but idk why u stopped here.
00:59:408(3) - ^
01:03:283(2) - here as well. i think u forgot to add a finish at this slider tick. so add it to continue the rhythm
02:15:408(3) - same as 00:51:408
02:23:408(3) - add a finish here. looks like u stopped here but u shouldve kept going.
02:26:408(1) - add a finish at the end. same reason as above
02:35:408(1) - same as 00:51:408
02:39:908(3,1) - i think itd be better if u space this out because IMO stacking would be hard for beginners.
03:01:408(2) - place it beside the end of (3) instead of stacking it. Beginners wont expect this because the circle is under the end of the slider

Corrpuption!:
00:33:408(3) - make this a curved slider so that itd make a nice blanket around (4)
00:34:658(2) - same as above but this time around (1)
01:58:408(1) - Ctrl+J for an easier path?
01:59:908(5) - ^
02:04:408(6,7) - replace these for 1/1 sliders to follow vocals accurately
02:17:408(3) - can u move this somewhere else. Because i dont like how the arc of the slider is overlapping the beginning of the slider.
02:28:408(1,2,3) - this 1 is better than the suggestion above. so try to make 02:17:408 like this
02:36:408(1) - hmm i think itd be better if u flip it horizontally (Ctrl+H) so that not only it can make an easier path, but to form a blanket around (2)
03:00:408(1) - i think itd be better if u add the 1st custom normal hitsound on the 1st and 3rd slider ticks so u can continue the rhythm.
03:08:408(1) - ^

Painful World!
00:44:408(1,2) - this is a bad blanket. so how about making (1) a 4-point slider like This? IMO this slider would be nice because there would be a small gap at the blanket.
01:20:533(2,3,6,7) - delete these notes. 1st of all theyre unsnapped and they dont follow instrumental at all. so add the circles at 01:20:658 and 01:21:658 so that itd keep a steady flow to the song
02:02:408(1,2,3) - itd look nice if u can stack this under the end of (6). putting it under the end of (6) looks ugly and itd be hard to read IMO but if u want to do this set the 1st 2 notes at the following co-ordinates.(1): x:132 y:104 (2)x:132 y:248
02:09:158(2) - same as my 1st suggestion.
02:17:158(2) - ^
03:04:408(1) - i think itd be nice if u put the 1st custom normal hitsound at the 1st slider tick so that u can continue the clap rhythm? dont forget to remove the finish and replace it for a clap if u do so.
03:07:908(2) - i think u forgot to add a clap here? if yes then add it if u want to keep the flow going.
03:12:408(1) - same as 03:04:408
03:17:658(6,7) - how about stacking these on (1,2) because IMO putting (6) above (5) is unexpected. in other words i want these 2 notes to continue the star pattern

This is the best i can do. GL

Leorda wrote:

Annyong~

General
* Your BG seems scary, try this BG. You should resize it yourself, because I'm lazy. Forum PM me if you can't do this resize it. And that BG is a REAL Kanon Wakeshima


Violation!
02:08:403 (1) - Too soon from spinner, you need to change this pattern
03:10:403 (2,3,4) - Fix this spacing, because it's a bit error


Corruption!
* AR +1 or +2? Your AR is slow

01:40:903 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make a perfect star pattern? (Nazi)
02:08:403 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug


Painful World!
* AR +1 or +2? Your AR is slow

00:32:403 (5,1,2) - These spacing makes players go confusing about distance inside the pattern. Please fix the pattern here
01:03:403 (3) - Add finish?
02:08:403 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug
02:09:153 (2) - Why finish on head slider?
02:17:153 (2) - ^


Forum PM me when you're done

SPOILER

1. (General) - Fix the lyric SB due to cut off glow and letter
2. (General) - Change the combo color for fit the BG
3. (Violation!) - Remove on clap
4. (Violation!) - Fix the combo in 03:02:403 and 03:04:403
5. (Painful World!) - Add finish at 01:04:403

Leorda wrote:

IRC Modding

1. (General) - Fix the lyric SB due to cut off glow and letter
2. (General) - Change the combo color for fit the BG
3. (Violation!) - Remove on clap
4. (Violation!) - Fix the combo in 03:02:403 and 03:04:403
5. (Painful World!) - Add finish at 01:04:403

Bubbled

Faust wrote:

IRC modded.

SPOILER

2:13 <Asgard> : um.. R U wake up?
22:14 <Asgard> : oh.. afk..
23:36 <Faust> : I was sleeping.
23:36 <Asgard> : hm..
23:36 <Asgard> : actually i want mod request to you.
23:36 <Asgard> : i need really help...
23:36 <Asgard> : leorda gave bubble in my map
23:37 <Asgard> : but i popped my self because change username and ifnormation's image has bug..
23:37 <Faust> : alright.
23:37 <Asgard> : i don't know what can i do...
23:37 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/hMQp
23:38 <Asgard> : http://puu.sh/hKvQ
23:38 <Asgard> : orz
23:39 <Faust> : Link your map
23:39 <Asgard> : :O
23:39 *Asgard is listening to (kanon x kanon - The Doll House!)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43714]
23:40 <Asgard> : I apologize to you for being rude and really Thank you!
23:40 <Faust> : Why can't Leorda help you?
23:40 <Faust> : seems like he should
23:40 <Asgard> : i don't know..
23:40 <Asgard> : actually i ask befor i changed username
23:40 <Asgard> : but when i ask to him, he said "ok"
23:41 <Asgard> : but now....orz
23:48 <Faust> : Painful World:
23:48 <Faust> : 01:09:401 (3) - unsnapped
23:49 <Asgard> : oh really..
23:49 <Asgard> : ok
23:49 <Faust> : this song is from Shiki?
23:49 <Asgard> : yes
23:49 <Faust> : Put it as source I guess
23:50 <Asgard> : but goodbye say this is C/W song.. so don't put source..
23:50 <Faust> : C/W ?
23:50 <Asgard> : viewtopic.php?p=1286858#p1286858
23:51 <Asgard> : exactly this is from shiki's music album
23:51 <Faust> : http://vgmdb.net/album/22235
23:51 <Faust> : seems to be based on Shiki
23:52 <Asgard> : so add source "Shiki?
23:52 <Faust> : Yes
23:52 <Asgard> : ok
23:53 <Asgard> : ok done
23:54 <Faust> : Corruption:
23:54 <Faust> : 00:34:153 (4) - New combo
23:54 <Faust> : remove the new combo on the next note
23:59 <Faust> : Violation diff..
23:59 <Faust> : maybe +1 to OD
23:59 <Faust> : it doesn't really matter though
23:59 <Asgard> : hm. ok
00:01 <Asgard> : oh.. remove tag "Shiki" right?
00:01 <Faust> : Yes
00:03 <Faust> : ok, seems fine.
00:04 <Faust> : you said there was a problem with the background information or something?
00:04 <Faust> : image*
00:04 <Asgard> : yes
00:04 <Asgard> : hm..
00:04 <Asgard> : i changed BG
00:04 <Asgard> : but information's image was not changed..
00:04 <Asgard> : so i ask to naraku
00:04 <Faust> : Oh, scores and information
00:04 <Asgard> : so he said "full submit again"..
00:04 <Asgard> : yes..
00:05 <Faust> : well, fixed now
00:05 <Faust> : I'll post this log then.
00:05 <Asgard> : ok
00:05 <Asgard> : wait a minuate
00:06 <Asgard> : i redownloading because for check sb again.
00:06 <Faust> : were there problems?
00:06 <Faust> : I checked your folder
00:06 <Asgard> : now no problem XD
00:07 <Faust> : yeah
00:07 <Faust> : alright then.

goodbye wrote:

So why is shiki still in source........

Faust you're really baka..

Faust wrote:

k.

My sincerest apologies over that obscured repeat.