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ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

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Topic Starter
jossieP

spboxer3 wrote:

from Spinboxer's mod queue~

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. none~

Normal



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:31:687 (2) - make it parallel. It's looks like a bit off. you can use flip horizontal (ctrl + H) to check this pattern I cant make it moar paralell, if you can please give me a code, Ill be very grateful
  2. 00:46:533 (1) - [arc issue] awkward slider arc for third node. It's a ambiguous slider arc. look likes straight but it's not a straight. sorry for random slider
  3. 01:24:883 (1) - [suggest] let the slider ball set at turning point on 01:25:347 - . like this↓ hmm ok, changed and spaced correctly
    photo


    400,196,84883,6,0,B|364:148|312:152|312:152|280:152|280:152|252:68|168:68,1,270,8|0
    104,68,86120,1,8

Hard



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:08:182 (1,3) -
  2. 00:57:667 (1,2) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:02:615 (3) - make it parallel. It's looks like a bit off. you know~ you can use flip to check those patttern k
  2. 00:20:244 (1,2) - [suggest] you can let those slider head and slider tail's spacing more relational. like this↓ cant see a significative difference, but ok, thanks for the code
    photo

    132,256,20244,6,0,B|140:304|204:304,1,80,8|0
    168,372,20553,2,0,B|120:376|80:344|40:288|72:248,1,160,2|8
    72,200,21017,1,2
  3. 00:53:337 (4,1) - [suggest] let those stack on the same point. It's let this pattern more neatly clean. (if you want to change this pattern please notice the spacing for next pattern: 00:55:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ) all that combo 1 grid up
  4. 01:06:945 (2,4) - [nazi] let (2) full stack on the (4)'s slider reverse. It's have a kinda off k
  5. 01:22:718 (5) - [suggest] it's very inflexible slider pattern since you only used 90∘rotate this slider. maybe you can up 1 grid (size 3) for the third node like this↓ ok o:

Insane



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:04:935 (3) - [arc issue] it's very awkward slider for me this arc it's looks too casual. please make the layout better~ oh yes, fixed the flow
  2. 00:56:430 (1,2,3,4,5) - Honestly, I think this rhythm it's too confuse for the player. also you used note it's very hard to read when you used sudden increase of spacing. so I suggest avoid to used this pattern. [/color]

red is unrankable issue. bule is recommended to fix. Black is just suggestion.

totaliy it's a awesome map~
star~
thanks
Mystica
Here comes my mod.

[Normal]
00:11:894 (4) - may consider put it in the middle fo (3) may seems more beauty
00:26:120 - cancen the whistle..not fit well

[Hard]
00:11:894 (3,4,5) - see the first pattern.It seems 1/1 slider fits.(thougt I know you just follow the rhyme
00:26:739 (3) - consider to make it 1 grid down
00:31:378 (6,7,8) - stack notes for this pattern not play very well um.

[Insane]
lol 2.2sv for the bpm 194.00...It's really fast yeh
00:55:192 (1,2,3) - consider not to hide these..I even get miss for many times

creative slider map.Bus some not very fit the rhyme..May consider it..
However good map..GL.
Katsuri
[insane]
00:23:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing here should look a lot confuse, try to make the spacing between the two patterns a bit like http://puu.sh/vTtG
01:07:564 (4) - the reverse arrow is hidden by the note hitburst. nice slider btw

solid mapset
Darksonic
Holas.. Acá esta mi mod.. Y en español porque me es 700 veces mas fácil :D

Normal:

00:15:605 (3): Finish en vez de Clap?
00:16:842 (5): Finish al final del slider? Para mi encajaría mejor ya que termina la parte que vendría a ser solo instrumental.
00:52:718 (1): Finish en vez de Clap?
00:53:955 (3): ^
01:11:275 (1): En mi opinion este NC esta de más, podrías quitarlo ya que este slider tiene un finish al final y quedaría mejor si sirve para marcar el final del combo.
01:17:924: Este spinner empieza muy tarde, movelo a 01:17:770?
01:26:430 (3): Podrías moverlo a x:28 y:100 para que termine justo en el centro.

Hard:

00:09:419 (3): Movelo un espacio para la izquierda, así no toca el slider (1).
00:11:894 (3): Acá perdiste la consistencia del spacing, movelo usando 1,1x.
00:16:842 (1): Borra NC, y lo mismo que en la Normal.
00:31:997 (1): Borra NC.
00:32:615 (2): El vocal vuelve a empezar acá, así que el NC estaría mejor.
00:35:399 (2,3): Los Claps al final de cada slider que encima vienen uno al lado del otro se escuchan algo ruidosos. Te sugiero borrar el de (3) y agregarle un Clap al final de (4).
00:46:223 (4): Convendría mas usar spacing 1,0x y moverlo un espacio para arriba, así no toca el slider anterior y te quedaría mejor.
00:52:100 (1): Borra NC así no te queda un pattern con solo 2 combos, e iría mejor con la canción.
00:52:718 (3): NC.

Insane:

00:25:038 (3,4): Utiliza 1,1x spacing y stackea estas dos notas con 00:23:955 (5).
00:48:388 (4): Donde termina (3) empieza otra parte de la vocal, así que te sugiero agregarle NC a esta nota y borrarselo a la que sigue para que quede mejor.
01:14:368 (3,4): Cambia estas dos notas por un slider?

Me gustaron bastante los sliders xD, suerte!
Topic Starter
jossieP

Mystica wrote:

Here comes my mod.

[Normal]
00:11:894 (4) - may consider put it in the middle fo (3) may seems more beauty I tried to make this but cant get a good combination between this and the spacing
00:26:120 - cancen the whistle..not fit well as merchat said, this whistle must follow the cymbal sounding

[Hard]
00:11:894 (3,4,5) - see the first pattern.It seems 1/1 slider fits.(thougt I know you just follow the rhyme o.o
00:26:739 (3) - consider to make it 1 grid down o: nice spacing now
00:31:378 (6,7,8) - stack notes for this pattern not play very well um. I think it does, look at the weird slider on before xD

[Insane]
lol 2.2sv for the bpm 194.00...It's really fast yeh yeah 8-)
00:55:192 (1,2,3) - consider not to hide these..I even get miss for many times Ill considerated if its pointed again later

creative slider map.Bus some not very fit the rhyme..May consider it..
However good map..GL.
thanks


Katsuri wrote:

[insane]
00:23:028 (1,2,3,4,5) - the spacing here should look a lot confuse, try to make the spacing between the two patterns a bit like http://puu.sh/vTtG nice flow, thanks
01:07:564 (4) - the reverse arrow is hidden by the note hitburst. nice slider btw thanks, and I give up about that circle QAQ

solid mapset
fast mod FTW

Darksonic wrote:

Holas.. Acá esta mi mod.. Y en español porque me es 700 veces mas fácil :D :D

Normal:

00:15:605 (3): Finish en vez de Clap? un poco exagerado a mi gusto
00:16:842 (5): Finish al final del slider? Para mi encajaría mejor ya que termina la parte que vendría a ser solo instrumental. el clap de ahora suena bastante bien con el ultimo acorde, ademas que el finish cubriria este
00:52:718 (1): Finish en vez de Clap? hmm no se porque estoy usando finish en el [Insane]
00:53:955 (3): ^
01:11:275 (1): En mi opinion este NC esta de más, podrías quitarlo ya que este slider tiene un finish al final y quedaría mejor si sirve para marcar el final del combo. ok, parece razonable
01:17:924: Este spinner empieza muy tarde, movelo a 01:17:770? esta justo en 01:17:770
01:26:430 (3): Podrías moverlo a x:28 y:100 para que termine justo en el centro. no me quiero salir de la cuadricula xD

Hard:

00:09:419 (3): Movelo un espacio para la izquierda, así no toca el slider (1). mejor uno abajo para el spacing
00:11:894 (3): Acá perdiste la consistencia del spacing, movelo usando 1,1x. intenta moverlo vos :D
00:16:842 (1): Borra NC, y lo mismo que en la Normal.no me agrada mucho como va el follow point de (4) a (1)
00:31:997 (1): Borra NC.
00:32:615 (2): El vocal vuelve a empezar acá, así que el NC estaría mejor. pero mi pattern no <:
00:35:399 (2,3): Los Claps al final de cada slider que encima vienen uno al lado del otro se escuchan algo ruidosos. Te sugiero borrar el de (3) y agregarle un Clap al final de (4). justo ahora me gusta mucho el efecto de bateria que dan
00:46:223 (4): Convendría mas usar spacing 1,0x y moverlo un espacio para arriba, así no toca el slider anterior y te quedaría mejor. ok o:
00:52:100 (1): Borra NC así no te queda un pattern con solo 2 combos, e iría mejor con la canción. follow points
00:52:718 (3): NC.

Insane:

00:25:038 (3,4): Utiliza 1,1x spacing y stackea estas dos notas con 00:23:955 (5). cambie el (5) a sugerencia de katsuri, me gusto mucho el flow con el que quedo
00:48:388 (4): Donde termina (3) empieza otra parte de la vocal, así que te sugiero agregarle NC a esta nota y borrarselo a la que sigue para que quede mejor. este y el anterior slider son identocos (duplicados en tamaño) no me gustaria tenerlos en dos colores
01:14:368 (3,4): Cambia estas dos notas por un slider? porque? *3*

Me gustaron bastante los sliders xD, suerte!
;D

Edit: pag 7 /o/
Kei

Darksonic wrote:

Me gustaron bastante los sliders xD, suerte!
Es que Kyon es muy creativo c:
Sallad4ever
tutturu~
oh wait wrong anime

[General]
  1. Could you search for more better mp3? The quality of the current mp3 is quite low, it's very noticeable from the low volume. I can try search it for you if you want
  2. It seems that you sometime sacrifice the spacing in order to
  3. Please include the level of the difficulty on the diff name (Oni, Muzukashi, etc)
  4. The taiko's BG is better than the standard
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:182 (1,2) - The dent on this 2 sliders don't look so good. I suggest 2 possible solution for you. You can use your own idea of course
    First

    287,79,9419,2,0,B|296:140|272:168|232:192|232:192|272:216|296:244|288:304,1,270,8|8
    Second

    288,80,9419,2,0,B|288:156|288:156|241:192|241:192|288:228|288:228|288:304,1,270,8|8
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:687 (8) - I suggest to remove this . Because of 00:30:450 (5) I assume you'll follow the lyric and there are only 2 object under the slider end. If you still want to keep it you better unstack 00:31:378 (6,7,8) so it'll be easier to read
  2. 00:32:615 (2) - Not a good overlap here. Try another pattern, maybe something like this?
  3. 00:39:110 (1,2) - Please use an elbow or semi-elbow slider. Tbh the current shape looks bad
  4. 00:45:296 (1,2) - Try to space these 2 objects so it won't be covered by the slider slide of 00:44:677 (3)
  5. 00:50:244 (4) - Unique shape slider, but it'll look more neat if you make a curve slider that blanket the head of 00:50:708 (5)
  6. 00:51:327 (1) - Remove the NC, it's unnecessary. Also I don't think you need to use anti jump here. Normal distance snap works better
  7. 00:51:481 (2) - Too many overlap is not good. The previous slider before this was already overlapped to 00:50:708 (5) so please consider reposition 00:51:481 (2). I suggest something like this
  8. 01:14:368 (2) - Hmm I'll try making the slider smoother just like below(it doesn't look that different lol) Use it if you want~
    Slider

    256,288,74368,2,0,B|204:284|184:248|184:216|184:216|184:168,1,160,0|8
  9. 01:16:842 (8) - I suggest to use blanket rather than an overlap something like the pic below. The overlap doesn't look good
    SPOILER

    332,260,76842,2,0,B|340:332|296:364|256:368|216:364|172:332|180:260,1,280
  10. 01:23:337 (6) - Try to make this slider have the same shape as 01:25:192 (4) to make it symmetry
[Insane]
  1. Wow the SV is so fast
  2. 00:05:708 (1) - If you're following the drum, the end of this slider should be on 00:05:914. Also please don't change the spacing, if you're using 1x as normal spacing please always use it unless you want to make a jump. The spacing on this note is too confusing because the next note is on 1/4 but the spacing look the same as 1/3
  3. 01:16:533 (1) - Use normal spacing for this slider. The previous objects are spaced normally and it'll flow better if you make it the same for this slider (the anti jump doesn't really fit here too anyway)
  4. 01:17:770 (1) - I suggest to start this spinner on 01:17:538 to make it follow the vocal more closely, don't forget to lengthen the spinner after that
  5. 01:23:028 (1) - Try to make this slider more smoother. You can replace the 2 red anchor point with a normal one to make it smoother. Below is some example (I also change the shape of 01:22:409 (5) to make it curve better, so you may have to copy both code if you want to use the same slider as on the pic)
    SPOILER

    256,212,82409,2,0,B|244:296|320:352|400:340,1,220,0|8
    292,148,83028,6,0,B|324:168|332:196|324:236|324:236|328:268|380:288|436:272,1,220,0|8
  6. 01:26:120 (3) - The slider repeat is covered by the hitburst of the previous object. You have to reposition it
That's all, I can't say that I like the Insane but the Normal and Hard is good enough
Anyway Good Luck~
Topic Starter
jossieP

Sallad4ever wrote:

tutturu~
oh wait wrong anime xD

[General]
  1. Could you search for more better mp3? The quality of the current mp3 is quite low, it's very noticeable from the low volume. I can try search it for you if you want if you can search other mp3 for me Ill be very happy ovo
  2. It seems that you sometime sacrifice the spacing in order to
  3. Please include the level of the difficulty on the diff name (Oni, Muzukashi, etc) I dont usually name my taiko diffs as oni or muzukashii, I have no idea about tatsujin criteria, and I have some taiko ranked just with this name: i_k's Taiko
  4. The taiko's BG is better than the standard ºoº
[Normal]
  1. 00:08:182 (1,2) - The dent on this 2 sliders don't look so good. I suggest 2 possible solution for you. You can use your own idea of course I choose the second option, wow nice :D spacing becomes a bit unconcistant but lets see what happen
    First

    287,79,9419,2,0,B|296:140|272:168|232:192|232:192|272:216|296:244|288:304,1,270,8|8
    Second

    288,80,9419,2,0,B|288:156|288:156|241:192|241:192|288:228|288:228|288:304,1,270,8|8
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:687 (8) - I suggest to remove this . Because of 00:30:450 (5) I assume you'll follow the lyric and there are only 2 object under the slider end. If you still want to keep it you better unstack 00:31:378 (6,7,8) so it'll be easier to read as someones suggested the last circle (8) is following the vocal extension, but I didnt liked at all, on a beginning I just has 2 circles here, so back to begin
  2. 00:32:615 (2) - Not a good overlap here. Try another pattern, maybe something like this? something like that
  3. 00:39:110 (1,2) - Please use an elbow or semi-elbow slider. Tbh the current shape looks bad o:
  4. 00:45:296 (1,2) - Try to space these 2 objects so it won't be covered by the slider slide of 00:44:677 (3) as someone has suggested this, changed
  5. 00:50:244 (4) - Unique shape slider, but it'll look more neat if you make a curve slider that blanket the head of 00:50:708 (5) now (5) is moar visible
  6. 00:51:327 (1) - Remove the NC, it's unnecessary. Also I don't think you need to use anti jump here. Normal distance snap works better spaced corretly
  7. 00:51:481 (2) - Too many overlap is not good. The previous slider before this was already overlapped to 00:50:708 (5) so please consider reposition 00:51:481 (2). I suggest something like this that blanket looks nice, also re-arranged next sliders
  8. 01:14:368 (2) - Hmm I'll try making the slider smoother just like below(it doesn't look that different lol) Use it if you want~ maked something on 01:11:275 (2) also I think I made it a bit different ovO
    Slider

    256,288,74368,2,0,B|204:284|184:248|184:216|184:216|184:168,1,160,0|8
  9. 01:16:842 (8) - I suggest to use blanket rather than an overlap something like the pic below. The overlap doesn't look good ok, I like blankets *.* but I make it a bit bigger because it ends was snaped on a blue tick
    SPOILER

    332,260,76842,2,0,B|340:332|296:364|256:368|216:364|172:332|180:260,1,280
  10. 01:23:337 (6) - Try to make this slider have the same shape as 01:25:192 (4) to make it symmetry copied
[Insane]
  1. Wow the SV is so fast yup ;3
  2. 00:05:708 (1) - If you're following the drum, the end of this slider should be on 00:05:914. Also please don't change the spacing, if you're using 1x as normal spacing please always use it unless you want to make a jump. The spacing on this note is too confusing because the next note is on 1/4 but the spacing look the same as 1/3 I think something was happened when re-snaped notes, now is ok
  3. 01:16:533 (1) - Use normal spacing for this slider. The previous objects are spaced normally and it'll flow better if you make it the same for this slider (the anti jump doesn't really fit here too anyway) spaced near to (2) of previous combo
  4. 01:17:770 (1) - I suggest to start this spinner on 01:17:538 to make it follow the vocal more closely, don't forget to lengthen the spinner after that loong spinner /o/
  5. 01:23:028 (1) - Try to make this slider more smoother. You can replace the 2 red anchor point with a normal one to make it smoother. Below is some example (I also change the shape of 01:22:409 (5) to make it curve better, so you may have to copy both code if you want to use the same slider as on the pic) wow, awesome thanks a lot!!
    SPOILER

    256,212,82409,2,0,B|244:296|320:352|400:340,1,220,0|8
    292,148,83028,6,0,B|324:168|332:196|324:236|324:236|328:268|380:288|436:272,1,220,0|8
  6. 01:26:120 (3) - The slider repeat is covered by the hitburst of the previous object. You have to reposition it oh
That's all, I can't say that I like the Insane but the Normal and Hard is good enough
Anyway Good Luck~
thanks for slider lessons :D
Sallad4ever
http://puu.sh/wP8l
There you go. The offset should be 413 but because I currently can't use my headphone I can't really clarify this. Try searching for other people opinion on the offset

Good Luck and Hasta la vista~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Seems fine to me~

Good luck + star.

PS:If you accept the new mp3 file,plz do not forget to fix the video offset.It should be -499.
Topic Starter
jossieP
thanks thanks :D
Ill use offset 412 and video offset -540
aibat-chan says everything is ok
full submit now <:
spboxer3

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. none

Normal



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:00:412 (1) - [nazi] try to fix your pattern. make it parallel.
    code
    166,119,412,2,0,B|358:119,1,180,2|2

Hard



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:27:319 (5,2) - [suggestion] up 1 grid? (size 4)
  2. 00:32:267 (2,3) -
  3. 00:57:319 (1,2,4) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:11:546 (3) - why don't you use 01:10:927 (2) - to flip for this pattern?

Insane



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:14:329 (3) - [arc issue] you have many awkward slider~you can make the layout better. e.g: 00:15:875 (3) - ,00:18:968 (4) - 00:18:968 (4) - etc.


Taiko


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

    mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:17:113 (2) - try to use K?
  2. 00:56:083 (1,2,3,4,1) - D D ddK? when this↓ it's rankable
  3. 01:25:670 (2,3,4,5) - sound like kd K K is better (about pitch)

good luck~
Topic Starter
jossieP

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. none

Normal



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:00:412 (1) - [nazi] try to fix your pattern. make it parallel. thanks code
    code
    166,119,412,2,0,B|358:119,1,180,2|2

Hard



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:27:319 (5,2) - [suggestion] up 1 grid? (size 4) I preffer 1 grid down, blanket looks better
  2. 00:32:267 (2,3) - o:?
  3. 00:57:319 (1,2,4) -
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 01:11:546 (3) - why don't you use 01:10:927 (2) - to flip for this pattern? k, this slider is new, that is why

Insane



  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:14:329 (3) - [arc issue] you have many awkward slider~you can make the layout better. e.g: 00:15:875 (3) - ,00:18:968 (4) - 00:18:968 (4) - etc.


Taiko


  • Settings my god many notes was unsnaped xD
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)

    mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:17:113 (2) - try to use K? confusing for me, just maked a litle katsu
  2. 00:56:083 (1,2,3,4,1) - D D ddK? when this↓ it's rankable hmm although is rankable its confusing for me
  3. 01:25:670 (2,3,4,5) - sound like kd K K is better (about pitch)
kd d D explained a bit to this to chris

good luck~
I had star icon already /o/ thanks anyway
Topic Starter
jossieP
100th post /o/!!!!

KuronumaSawako
O.o Those sliders...nice *---*
Teach me to make creative sliders like u ;__;
Topic Starter
jossieP
looks like having "creative" sliders are not enough to have a bubble ;_;
KuronumaSawako

ikari_kyon wrote:

looks like having "creative" sliders are not enough to have a bubble ;_;
;________;
shit
Topic Starter
jossieP
some stuff changed since IceBeam pointed on pm some stuff about snapping
I changed many stuff on [Insane] now is correctly snaped, [Hard] has 1 or 2 changes, [Normal] is all 1/1 so is not changed
>[Taiko] I cant believe how many snap errors it has, this is the last time that I dont use 25% to map
/o/ hope this can be enough, but is not as always
Fumika
Oh god , I'm too lazy :'(

sorry for delay.

General

  • [list:30eb4]
  1. Don't needed guest easy diff ?

Normal

  • Setting


    1. Fine
  • Mapping
  1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion

    1. 00:39:999 (3) - Make it more symmetry ?
      01:03:504 (2) - Down 1 grid ?
  2. Hit Sounds

    1. 00:47:422 (2) - Add finish instead clap.

Hard

  • Setting


    1. Fine
  • Mapping
  1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion

    1. 01:22:061 (4) - NC here.
  2. Hit Sounds

    1. 00:47:422 (2) - Add finish instead clap.

Insane

  • Setting


    1. CS 5 + AR9 = Dies orz
  • Mapping
  1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion

    1. Fine
  2. Hit Sounds

    1. Fine

That's all I can find , sorry orz
Topic Starter
jossieP

Netsukawa wrote:

Oh god , I'm too lazy :'(

sorry for delay.

General

  • [list:16317]
  1. Don't needed guest easy diff ? nope, [Normal] is under 3 star rating and is pretty simple <:

Normal

  • Setting


    1. Fine
  • Mapping
  1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion

    1. 00:39:999 (3) - Make it more symmetry ? the blanket is pretty nice right now, cant see a significative difference
      01:03:504 (2) - Down 1 grid ?
  2. Hit Sounds

    1. 00:47:422 (2) - Add finish instead clap. added default normal soundset finish, also to [Normal]

Hard

  • Setting


    1. Fine
  • Mapping
  1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion

    1. 01:22:061 (4) - NC here. why?
  2. Hit Sounds

    1. 00:47:422 (2) - Add finish instead clap.

Insane

  • Setting


    1. CS 5 + AR9 = Dies orz
  • Mapping
  1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion

    1. Fine
  2. Hit Sounds

    1. Fine

That's all I can find , sorry orz
thanks =w=

edit: page 8 /o/
SuperMIC
Timing re-check with the new MP3.

Use off-set 390 (-22 ms). Resnap inherited sections, etc., etc.

No kds. :O
Topic Starter
jossieP
no O:
Kiddo-Kun

ikari_kyon wrote:

looks like having "creative" sliders are not enough to have a bubble ;_;
You're 100% right, my friend! Not enough.

[Normal]
* In the future, please try to be more consistent with the combos in the difficulty. You constantly switch from long combos to very short ones. Stick with one pattern and one pattern only. Ex: New combo for every 8th white tick.

• 00:12:473 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note and add it onto the next slider to match the combo pattern and match the music.
• 00:14:329 - Add in a note here, it feels pretty empty and odd without one.
• 00:21:752 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note, for it will be much more consistent and matching that way.
• 00:25:154 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note. For consistency.
• 00:30:102 (1) - Same as above.
• 00:47:422 (2) - It will be much better if you changed the combo to something like this so that it follows the music better:
• 01:09:690 (4) - Remove this new combo as well. Consistency is the reason.
• 01:17:576 (1) - Start this spinner on the white tick (01:17:422-), it feels less awkward that way.

[Hard]
*Just like in Normal, combo consistency is a quite the problem here. So, seeing as you probably get the point - I won't focus on combo patterns.

• 00:07:834 (1,2) - This slider does not flow into (2) at all, leading to awkward gameplay.
• 00:11:855 (4) - Add a clap at the start of this slider.
• 00:16:494 (1) - Remove the new combo on this slider. It's a tad bit redundant.
• 00:30:927 (1) - This slider is too difficult to get, for this level. Also, it does not play very well. Replace it with a note on 00:31:030 -.
• 01:22:370 (5) - Please change the slider so that the borders are legible.

[Insane]
* Combos again...

• 00:50:824 (5) - Remove the finish from the start of this slider and add it to the end.
• 01:01:649 (4) - This note here is barely legible. Re-arrange the pattern.
• 01:05:979 (5) - ^
Topic Starter
jossieP

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

ikari_kyon wrote:

looks like having "creative" sliders are not enough to have a bubble ;_;
You're 100% right, my friend! Not enough. so what can I do? just use combos on a way that is not like me? gimme the secret

[Normal]
* In the future, please try to be more consistent with the combos in the difficulty. You constantly switch from long combos to very short ones. Stick with one pattern and one pattern only. Ex: New combo for every 8th white tick. my combos are mainly following my patterns is more weird for me seein combos in the half of a row of simmetrical circles/sliders

• 00:12:473 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note and add it onto the next slider to match the combo pattern and match the music. since (1) here has a different flow and way I want to keep this combo here
• 00:14:329 - Add in a note here, it feels pretty empty and odd without one. the pattern here 00:07:834 (1,2,3,4), is a hit on tick before downbeat, then hit on downbeat, can you listen it? here 00:11:546 (4,1,2) I add 1 hit moresame case of end of 00:12:783 (2) and 00:13:710 (3) - makes the 3 hits per white ticks, adding a note there would be unconcistant and would break the simple rhythm
• 00:21:752 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note, for it will be much more consistent and matching that way. an 8 numers combo, wow well this combo is supported by second guitar accord also mention that 00:17:731 (1,2,3,4) - was simmetrical sliders except by the circle on the middle and the new combo starts the new slider form and marks the 1/1 rhythm since previous sliders was pretty larges
• 00:25:154 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note. For consistency. simmilar as up, long sliders back and new rhythm comes, also
SPOILER

looks nice the same colour

• 00:30:102 (1) - Same as above. long sliders incoming, same as above
• 00:47:422 (2) - It will be much better if you changed the combo to something like this so that it follows the music better: shortering the slider by 1/1 and add a circle where it ends originally is not the same? it may follow the vocal change but the end of the slider is well marked by that sound
• 01:09:690 (4) - Remove this new combo as well. Consistency is the reason. you are pointing (4) there is no new combo here o:
• 01:17:576 (1) - Start this spinner on the white tick (01:17:422-), it feels less awkward that way. ok it started pretty late D:

[Hard]
*Just like in Normal, combo consistency is a quite the problem here. So, seeing as you probably get the point - I won't focus on combo patterns. what? my combos follows all my patterns

• 00:07:834 (1,2) - This slider does not flow into (2) at all, leading to awkward gameplay. yes, and 00:08:762 (2,3) too
• 00:11:855 (4) - Add a clap at the start of this slider. forgot to add it on previous udpate, thanks for remind
• 00:16:494 (1) - Remove the new combo on this slider. It's a tad bit redundant. hmm, ok, it is on a non regular spacing with diamoned circle pattern but ok
• 00:30:927 (1) - This slider is too difficult to get, for this level. Also, it does not play very well. Replace it with a note on 00:31:030 -. removed slider, added note on 00:31:030 and 00:31:339
• 01:22:370 (5) - Please change the slider so that the borders are legible. external border is readable? any suggest? no?

[Insane]
* Combos again... wich ones?

• 00:50:824 (5) - Remove the finish from the start of this slider and add it to the end. this wasnt finishes /o/
• 01:01:649 (4) - This note here is barely legible. Re-arrange the pattern.
• 01:05:979 (5) - ^ merchat pointed a while ago, changed
NatsumeRin
Hi challlenger...

[General]
Personally i hope you could make someone to double check the timing. I checked and it seems play well but still worry a little bit. (especially the first part)

[Normal]
00:36:597 - add a note?
00:42:473 (3,4) - make this a reversed slider may help the flow a bit (but you need to place them in a different way)

[Hard]
00:02:267 (3) - not "three, four" like what you did in Insane?
00:35:051 (2,3,4) - 2/3 here sounds better to me...
00:37:422 - add a note?
00:44:948 (1,2,3,4) - 2/3 again.

[Taiko]
00:03:079 (4,1,2) - they should probably be on 1/3s in theory, but when listening i feel it's fine.... (that's why i'm really not sure of the timing here, the beats here looks really strange)
00:04:277 (6,1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:05:051 (5) - should be a clap at the beginning?
00:37:422 - still feel needs a note here to start another part...
00:54:535 (6) - should be a 1/3 slider right?

Starred for now.
Topic Starter
jossieP

NatsumeRin wrote:

Hi challlenger... hello

[General]
Personally i hope you could make someone to double check the timing. I checked and it seems play well but still worry a little bit. (especially the first part) Ill try to find someone, the Sallad4ever timing suggest (who gave me this mp3) was +1ms

[Normal]
00:36:597 - add a note? a slider from 00:36:288 to here should be ok?
00:42:473 (3,4) - make this a reversed slider may help the flow a bit (but you need to place them in a different way) k, but Im not sure at all about the overlap that now I have

[Hard]
00:02:267 (3) - not "three, four" like what you did in Insane? now yes
00:35:051 (2,3,4) - 2/3 here sounds better to me... 2/3 now
00:37:422 - add a note? the guitar accord is no high enough? also the vocals are higher here
00:44:948 (1,2,3,4) - 2/3 again. ;3

[Taiko]
00:03:079 (4,1,2) - they should probably be on 1/3s in theory, but when listening i feel it's fine.... (that's why i'm really not sure of the timing here, the beats here looks really strange) yeah, this part is so weird and confusing, I used 1/3 and 1/8, carefully listen to 25% playback also it plays good
00:04:277 (6,1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:05:051 (5) - should be a clap at the beginning? forgotten, added
00:37:422 - still feel needs a note here to start another part... same as hard, I think the vocal has a higher sound and start the slider is simple following, but if its really needed I will add it
00:54:535 (6) - should be a 1/3 slider right? thanks I missed some 1/3 beats since IceBeam suggest

Starred for now.
now I have 3 star icons 8-)
NatsumeRin
k. bubble.

To the next MAT/BAT: Double check the timing if you can, ask some pro to check it if you can't
Topic Starter
jossieP
thanks <: and Im a good timer
Darksonic
\o/ Te iba a dar 5 estrellas pero ya te lo bubblearon así que no.

(??????????
Mercurial
PEROOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
lepidopodus
Not every songs are exactly fit into timing systems we are using, you know.

Sometimes compromising between conceptional beat and actual beats might work... Whatever. If Mapper makes decision and MAT & BAT agree, that should be fine. (For me, well, there will be some problem with reading those beats in the first part of Taiko map but if you say 'Cause they sound like that!', I have nothing to decline.)
Topic Starter
jossieP
thanks for supporting, and yes song sounds like that and there is an 1/8 note on standard diffs too
and yes this song is weird
Yasora
go go pro i_k \owo/
Andrea
[Insane]

Reduce Approach Rate by 1 tick at least, it's way too high right now.


00:56:082 (1,2,3,4,5) - Space them equally.
01:14:638 (3,1) - I seriously dislike this anti-jump.
Topic Starter
jossieP
the "unequal" spacing was because of snaping, spaced equally anyways

page 9 /o/
Mercurial
FLAMING!
Andrea


As you can see here, they're not spaced equally at all.

Please fix that and I'll rank, the rest is fine now.
Stefan
Yay :D
Topic Starter
jossieP
what about now
those
[Taiko]
  1. 00:07:796 (1) - Snap to 00:07:834 - .
  2. 00:21:442 (1,1,1,2) - The swing suggests it's not 1/4.
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