Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~~

Here's the video clip as i promise >w<"

http://puu.sh/fd07
Is it working???

Hope you like it >w<"

go go! Ranked this map!! ^ ^

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Gomen... Here... try this?

http://puu.sh/fdaj

Kitsuneko wrote:

hi -HaRuNa- san (*'n`)
my modding for Hard and Insane (I'm not good for Normal, Easy >.<)
Let's go ~


[General]
offset:0 -> 26 (you can select all timing section to "Shift + click". then don't forget reset preview point)
01:27:103 - toggle off kiai time (also other diffs is same too, Insane is okay)


[Hard]
00:04:577 (3) - change rhythm to http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232797
00:13:681 - clap here
00:26:094 - ^
00:26:508 - remove clap and add finish
00:26:922 (3) - add clap
00:28:551 - ^
00:29:379 - ^
00:30:206 (1) - ^
00:31:862 - ^
00:32:482 - ^
00:32:689 - ^
00:33:517 (3) - ^
00:34:344 (6) - ^
00:35:172 (2) - ^
00:36:000 - ^
00:36:413 (1,2) - swap clap sound
00:39:724 - add finish and remove clap
00:40:137 - add clap
00:40:551 (3) - remove clap
00:40:965 - add clap
00:53:172 (2) - remove this slider, and add note 00:53:379, 00:53:586.
if i make it, like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/232806 Sorry, I don't agree........
00:57:517 (8) - move to X:476 Y:192
01:07:862 (1,2) - the slider isn't length enough
01:09:517 (1,2) - ^
01:21:103 (1,1,1,1) - Players wouldn't be able to trace slider, and it's Unrankable. you should move it a bit or



[YuZuKi's Insane]
Slider Tick Rate 0.5 -> 1
00:26:508 (1) - add finish to head and remove whistle from slider body and head
00:08:301 (1) - add whistle head and tail, try keep same rhythm
00:39:750 (1) - remove whistle
00:42:853 (2) - add whistle
00:43:060 (1,2) - add clap to end
00:45:750 (2) - add clap
00:46:370 (1,2) - add finish to head
00:48:026 (1) - close from 00:47:198 (2). suggest: stack it to 00:48:232 (2)
00:49:681 (1) - add finish to head, and remove whistle from head
00:52:163 (3) - close from (2). try to move or NC. I suggest X:456 y:240

01:13:267 - volume 55% here
01:13:681 - 60%
01:14:094 - 65%
01:14:508 - 70%

00:00:026 (1) - remove whistle from slider body, and readd whistle to slider's head and end. not all
00:01:681 (1) - ^
00:03:336 (1) - ^
00:04:991 (1) - ^
00:06:646 (1) - ^
00:14:922 (1) - ^
00:15:750 (2) - ^
00:27:336 (3) - ^
00:31:474 (1) - ^
00:32:301 (3) - ^
00:34:784 (1,2) - ^

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my queue. Sorry that I took so long.

[Mapping Tip]
- You can make your sliders parallel by just copying and pasting the slider you want parallel. Then move the pasted slider anywhere on the grid making sure it's on the right time frame.
- Make use of the Edit menu, it's very useful and can save time.
-Make use of the Select tool.

[General]
-Your audio bitrate is too high. It must be between 128-192 kbps.
-Maybe disable letterbox during breaks.
-Fix your Kiai Time.

[nekonomitsu's Easy]
-00:19:448 - Remove Kiai Time.
-01:04:137 (5) - That's a pretty big jump. Move it closer to slider 4.
-01:26:896 - End Kiai Time here.
-01:27:000 - Remove Kiai Time.

[Normal]
-00:19:448 - Remove Kiai Time.
-01:26:896 - End Kiai Time here.
-01:27:000 - Remove Kiai Time.

[Hard]
00:06:827 (1) - Very sudden hit circle here.
-00:19:448 - Remove Kiai Time.
-01:26:896 - End Kiai Time here.
-01:27:000 - Remove Kiai Time.

[YuZuKi's Insane]
-01:24:206 -Remove Kiai Time.
-Inconsistent Kiai Time. If you are going to use kiai times on those time frames, you might as well do so with the other difficulties. Usually, kiai times are on the same time frame in each difficulty.
-01:27:000- Remove Kiai Time.

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Yuzuki]
0.13.267(1,2,3,4) - dont use blue tick and remove slider end clap
0.15.750(2,1) - stack plz(x0.0 spacing and not use grid)
0.36.336(5) - remove clap
0.36.646(1) - ^ (slider end)
0.37.060(2) - ^ (slider start)
0.41.405(1) - ^ (slider 1st return and end)
0.43.060(1) - ^ (slider end)
0.45.750(2,4) - ^
0.55.681(5,7) - ^
0.57.336(5,7) - ^
1.00.646(2,4) - ^
1.03.750(2,4) - ^
1.08.922(5,7) - ^
1.10.577(5,7) - ^
1.15.750(3) - ^ (slider end)
1.16.163(1,2) - ^ (slider start and return)
1.17.612(6) - ^
1.19.060(7) - ^ (slider start and return)

[Hard]
slider tick rate 0.5(unrankble) -> 1

[Normal]
0.07.060(2) - remove clap
0.08.715(2) - ^
0.10.370(2) - ^ (slider start)
0.11.198(3) - ^
0.13.681(2,4) - ^
0.45.129(1,3) - ^
1.14.508(1.2) - ^ (slider end)
1.16.163(3) - ^ (slider return)
1.21.336(1) - ^ (slider return and end)
1.21.750(2,4,7) - ^
1.22.163(3) - ^ (slider return and end)
1.22.991(5) - ^ (slider return and end)

[Easy]
!add hit sound (start~0.06.232,0.09.957~0.17.819,0.26.508~0.36.026,0.38.508~0.57.129)
0.06.646(1,2,1,2) - remove clap (slider end)
0.36.439(1,2) - remove finish (slider start)
0.37.681(1) - add finish (slider end)
0.55.888(3) - add clap (slider end)
0.59.198(1) - ^ (slider end)
1.02.508(3) - ^ (slider end)
1.05.819(2) - ^
1.07.474(4) - ^ (slider end)
1.08.715(2) - ^ (slider end)
1.12.439(3) - ^ (slider end)
1.15.750(2) - ^ (slider end)
1.19.060(3) - ^ (slider end)

Starry wrote:

Nice song, I will mod

Black:Suggestion
Green:Nazi

[Easy]

00:09:957 (1) - Straight ?
00:34:784 (2) - Move here? http://puu.sh/fpeH
00:36:439 (1) - If you do that above you must move this too
00:40:163 (1,2) - Spinner fit here better?
01:19:474 (4,5,6) - Here too, but spinner may be too short.

[Normal]


thanks for mod

00:03:336 (1,2) - Shorten by 1 tick?
00:14:508 (4) - 4 grid left m.....
01:19:474 (3,4) - Spinner here?

[Hard]

00:05:612 (1) - Ok remove spinner. m.....
00:07:060 (1) - Move this back 1 white tick and reverse 1 more time.
00:13:267 (1) - Remove reverse
00:14:301 (2,3,4) - Something like this http://puu.sh/fpp0
00:39:750 (1,2,3,4) - Spinner here m....
01:02:301 (4) - New combo

[YuZuKi's Insane]
01:18:439 (4) - New combo?
No spinner at the end?

Overall, Nice map

_HydeSama_ wrote:

nekomitsu’s Easy
00:56:301 - New combo And I recommend this rate http://puu.sh/fpLV

Normal
00:14:922 (5) - Slider end here: 00:15:750
00:43:267 - Spinner end here: 00:44:301
00:44:715 - Add note but retains the combo
00:46:370 - New combo
01:06:232 – ^
01:07:474 - Add note
01:19:474 - New combo

Hard
00:46:370 – NC
00:46:784 - Remove NC
00:48:026 – NC
00:48:232 - Remove NC
00:49:681 – NC
01:13:681 - ^
01:13:888 - Remove new combo
01:14:508 – NC
01:18:646 – ^
01:19:888 - ^

YuZuKi’s Insane
00:12:232 – NC
00:37:888 - Remove NC
00:38:922 – NC
00:39:750 - ^
00:40:370 - ^
00:41:405 – New combo but Remove reverse arrows I don’t like listening
00:42:026 - New combo , I like this http://puu.sh/fpUe

Good Luck ~

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, HaRuNa.
A bit of mod...

nekonomitsu's easy

00:49:681(5) - use finish instead of whistle
00:57:957(1,2) - maybe a clap will do..
01:19:474 - this spinner can be replaced by slider..

Normal

00:14:922(5) - use clap may sounds better..
00:16:991(2) - the front of the slider use clap
00:18:026(3) - at the end of this slider put a clap sound
01:23:612(6) - can change into finish instead of clap..

Hard

00:13:267(1) - at the end put clap sound, much better I think
00:14:094(3) - same as above
00:15:750(8) - remove the circle? No.....
01:10:474(4) - add finish
01:16:646(6) - at the first beat the slider, can put finish..

YuZuKi's Insane
00:02:094(2,3,4) - remove whistle
00:19:888(1) - add finish, sounds better
00:22:577(2,3) - change to finish?
00:24:439(4) - put finish at the end of the slider
00:44:715(1) - maybe by replacing the current hitsound into finish..
00:46:991 - add a circle here?
00:51:232 - same as above

And..

00:57:129(7), ??
00:57:543(8), ??
00:58:370(3), and ??
01:13:888(2) ??

Please, resnap this..

I concentrate more on hit sound because the spacing and others are done by other modders before and after me.
Huh, good map..

-HaRuNa- wrote:

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, HaRuNa.
A bit of mod...

nekonomitsu's easy

00:49:681(5) - use finish instead of whistle
00:57:957(1,2) - maybe a clap will do..
01:19:474 - this spinner can be replaced by slider..

Normal

00:14:922(5) - use clap may sounds better..
00:16:991(2) - the front of the slider use clap
00:18:026(3) - at the end of this slider put a clap sound
01:23:612(6) - can change into finish instead of clap..

Hard

00:13:267(1) - at the end put clap sound, much better I think
00:14:094(3) - same as above
00:15:750(8) - remove the circle? No.....
01:10:474(4) - add finish
01:16:646(6) - at the first beat the slider, can put finish..

YuZuKi's Insane
00:02:094(2,3,4) - remove whistle
00:19:888(1) - add finish, sounds better
00:22:577(2,3) - change to finish?
00:24:439(4) - put finish at the end of the slider
00:44:715(1) - maybe by replacing the current hitsound into finish..
00:46:991 - add a circle here?
00:51:232 - same as above

And..

00:57:129(7), ??
00:57:543(8), ??
00:58:370(3), and ??
01:13:888(2) ??

Please, resnap this..

I concentrate more on hit sound because the spacing and others are done by other modders before and after me.
Huh, good map..

Thanks

Byakugan249 wrote:

Mod request taken from #modreqs

General:
no problems here

nekonomitsu's Easy:
00:06:646(1,2,1,2) - move the claps at the end instead of the beginning. sounds a lot better IMO
00:13:267(1) - get rid of the claps at the beginning and at the 2nd repeat because right now it sounds inconsistent and it ruins the clap pattern.
00:26:508(1,2) - same as 00:06:646 but this time add a finish at the beginning of (1) so that it could blend in with the instrumental
00:28:163(3,1) - if u want to keep the clap pattern going then extend (3) till 00:29:819, delete (1), add a circle at 00:30:232 to keep the pattern going. it should be like This if u dont understand.
00:40:163(1,1) - 1st off this is way too far near the middle and 2nd is that beginners wont hav enough time to recover after this. so end the spinner till 00:41:405 and add a circle at 00:42:232.
00:51:336(1) - end the spinner at 00:52:991. this spinner should follow "Ru"
01:20:301(6) - i was expecting to hear a clap at the end but i guess u forgot about it? anyways add a clap at the end to keep the pattern going.
01:24:046(1) - how about adding a slider here and ending it at the next red tick. then move the spinner to 01:24:439 and end it till 01:27:336. that way the slider follows vocals and the spinner is the outro.
the note placement is good. the problem is the clap hitsounds.theres some parts where they sound inconsistent


Normal:
00:12:026(5) - remove the clap at the beginning. it ruins the original pattern ur doing.
00:16:577(1) - oh i think u forgot to add a clap at the beginning? if yes then add it to keep the flow going
00:17:612(3) - move the clap at the repeat arrow. sounds a lot better.
00:43:267(2,1) - get rid of the repeat for (2), and replace the spinner for a slider that starts at 00:43:060 and end it till 00:44:031. that way itd a lot easier for players.
01:02:094(3,4,5) - why did u stop using clap hitsounds? the clap pattern was going so well until it stopped. so add claps here to continue the pattern
01:07:888(1) - i think itd sound nice if u add a finish?
01:19:474(1,1) - this is not a good gap. this will be extremely hard for beginners to reach that. when beginners reach a spinner and they begin to adjust usually it takes them 1-2 seconds, but this is from my POV. how about replacing the spinner for 2 1/1 sliders. sounds better IMO

Hard:
ur gonna hav to increase the SV for this. suggest 1.5. the flow of the sliders is perfect and itd be a fun 1 because of the SV. IMO a hard diff with a low SV is boring.
00:14:922(5) - remove the clap. it sounds inconsistent and it ruins the flow
00:15:336(7) - add a clap at the beginning to keep it consistent
00:16:163(2) - ^ and remove it at the end. it sounds completely off IMO
00:16:991(4,5) - add a clap for (4) and remove the clap for (5). same reason as 00:15:336
00:54:026(4) - now this is why i wanted it to be at 1.5. this kick slider would follow that sound idk wat its called. anyways it sounds a lot better.

YuZuKi's Insane:
00:13:267(1,2,3,4) - i think itd be nice if u can stack the sliders?
01:03:336(2) - stack this perfectly. i dont like how this is stacked because it looks ugly during gameplay.

this is the best i can do. GL

Maya-kira wrote:

-easy-

00:09:957- (1) why don't make it a wave slider? I think they flows well.
00:53:198- there's a red break here @_@;; I think for easy, even though there's no break, there'll be no problem.
01:02:922- (4) try this?

SPOILER

anyway is ds 1,4 okay for easy? @_@;

gonna mod the rest tomorrow

The sliders at YuZuKi's Insane are not snapped on the time I given...
that's the meaning..

nokd~

1. 为什么 "Easy" 不是大写的...
2. 01:02:922 (4) - 中间的点放到 (252,368)

1. 00:03:336 (1) - 这个滑条没摆好 左上角那个点拉到(72,96)
2. 00:57:957 (1) - 这个摆对称
3. 01:06:232 (1) - 这样新手不好读, 拆成2个slider?
4. 01:08:301 (3,3,1) - ^

1. 00:59:405 (7) - 这个打的时候很难感觉到是两个reverse, 最好把下一个note和这个滑条的方向拉到一条线上
2. 01:02:715 (3,4) - 换个位置? 先放滑条 那个圈叠在后面

1. 00:04:577 (6) - 第二和第三个点往上两格
2. 00:04:991 (1) - 第二个点往右1格
3. 00:05:612 (3) - 复制(1) 然后ctrl+H
4. 00:46:370 (1) - 这个加速也太快了吧... 这是前面速度三倍了完全跟不上这个 = =, 这个滑条1.0x 后面那个再1.5x如何 或者两个都1.0x
5. 00:47:819 - 加个圈
6. 01:17:612 (6) - 叠到4上?

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue


Nekonomitsu's easy

1. 为什么 "Easy" 不是大写的...
2. 01:02:922 (4) - 中间的点放到 (252,368)

Normal

1. 00:03:336 (1) - 这个滑条没摆好 左上角那个点拉到(72,96)
2. 00:57:957 (1) - 这个摆对称
3. 01:06:232 (1) - 这样新手不好读, 拆成2个slider?
4. 01:08:301 (3,3,1) - ^

Hard

1. 00:59:405 (7) - 这个打的时候很难感觉到是两个reverse, 最好把下一个note和这个滑条的方向拉到一条线上
2. 01:02:715 (3,4) - 换个位置? 先放滑条 那个圈叠在后面

YuZuKi's Insane

1. 00:04:577 (6) - 第二和第三个点往上两格
2. 00:04:991 (1) - 第二个点往右1格
   
3. 00:46:370 (1) - 这个加速也太快了吧... 这是前面速度三倍了完全跟不上这个 = =, 这个滑条1.0x 后面那个再1.5x如何 或者两个都1.0x
4. 00:47:819 - 加个圈
5. 01:17:612 (6) - 叠到4上?

that's all

Good luck~

-HaRuNa- wrote:

謝謝mod
但這個我不太懂
[*]00:05:612 (3) - 复制(1) 然后ctrl+H

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

-HaRuNa- wrote:

謝謝mod
但這個我不太懂
[*]00:05:612 (3) - 复制(1) 然后ctrl+H

就是把(3)做成和(1)对称的形状 然后放回去

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 影片必須去除聲音
2. letterbox可以拿掉~如果不知道那是什麼就看一下教學吧

[nekonomitsu's Easy]

• 
  mapping
  

1. 01:02:922 (4,5) - 間距太遠了

[Normal]

• 
  mapping
  

1. 00:04:991 (1,1) - 距離中心太遠了 對於新手來說太過困難了~
2. 00:16:577 (1,2,3) - 間距不相同 改一下吧
3. 00:30:646 (2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 01:19:474 (1,1) - 距離中心太遠了

[Hard]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 聲音至少還可以再-10% 現在還是很吵

mapping

1. 00:26:508 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排的不工整 整理一下吧
2. 00:43:267 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 全部用clap這樣好嗎? 聽起還是有點吵的...
3. 00:54:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 兩段節奏不同? 建議統一會好些
4. 00:58:370 (3,4,5,6,7) - 間距不平均 改一下吧
5. 00:59:198 (6,7,8) - 你看 6,7之間空這麼大 但是7,8之間的距離就幾乎黏在一起了 這樣子的排列真的不好~

[YuZuKi's Insane]

• 
  Settings
  

1. 未使用到的綠線:
   01:24:439 -

mapping

1. 00:24:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建議只要(1,3,4)放clap就好了
2. 00:47:198 (3,4,1,2) - 這邊加速完後突然縮小間距會讓人容易產生誤會 重點是我覺得這應該是3段加速 你只有加了兩段就啞了!! (( 00:48:026 (1,2,3,4) -
3. 01:09:543 (1,2) - 沒有覆蓋好

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議

ok就這樣~加油摟

suirenn05 wrote:

Nice MAP!!!!!!!!!!　(ノ*´д｀*)ノ＝[star~]

• [General]

1. add tag "YuZuKi"
2. uncheck letterbox during breaks\
3. expect Easy
   
   [YuZuKi's Insane]
4. 00:12:232 (1) - add NC
5. 00:22:370 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:25:474 (6) - add clap on start and end of slider
7. 00:26:301 (8) - remove
8. 00:31:474 (1,2,3,4) - i'm not recommended SV X1.5
9. 00:40:370 (1) - remove NC
10. 00:42:026 (1) - ^
11. 00:47:198 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - i'm not recommended SV X1.5
12. 00:53:301 (2) - not symmetry with (1) http://puu.sh/g1Dy
13. 01:17:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - remove whistle
14. 01:19:474 (1) - ^ and add finish
    
    [Hard]
15. 00:13:784 (2,4) - remove
16. 00:15:336 (7) - end : 00:15:750
17. 00:15:750 (8) - remove
18. 00:49:681 (8) - NC
19. 01:00:232 (8) - Hit Hp bar
20. 01:21:543 (1,1,1) - remove NC
21. 01:23:198 (1) - ^
    other diff maybe fine

A s g a r d wrote:

• [General]

1. add tag "YuZuKi"
2. uncheck letterbox during breaks\
3. expect Easy
   
   [YuZuKi's Insane]
4. 00:12:232 (1) - add NC
5. 00:22:370 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:25:474 (6) - add clap on start and end of slider
7. 00:26:301 (8) - remove
8. 00:31:474 (1,2,3,4) - i'm not recommended SV X1.5 m....
9. 00:40:370 (1) - remove NC
10. 00:42:026 (1) - ^
11. 00:47:198 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - i'm not recommended SV X1.5
12. 00:53:301 (2) - not symmetry with (1) http://puu.sh/g1Dy
13. 01:17:819 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - remove whistle
14. 01:19:474 (1) - ^ and add finish
    
    [Hard]
15. 00:13:784 (2,4) - remove
16. 00:15:336 (7) - end : 00:15:750
17. 00:15:750 (8) - remove
18. 00:49:681 (8) - NC
19. 01:00:232 (8) - Hit Hp bar
20. 01:21:543 (1,1,1) - remove NC
21. 01:23:198 (1) - ^
    other diff maybe fine

SPOILER

152,92,9957,6,0,B|196:128|264:112,1,110
384,140,10784,2,0,B|340:100|356:32,2,110
428,264,12026,2,0,B|356:368|224:312,1,220

JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi
一些建議:

[General]
osb如果是我就刪了
每個難度的tags請保持一致,多檢查幾次比較好

[nekonomitsu's Easy]
Easy怎麼能有spacing error呢...開aimod好好看看吧
00:00:026 (1,2,3) - 一上來就這樣啊...改slider會不會好點
00:13:267 (1) - clap正好都放反了...
00:28:163 (3) - 這里放clap很怪
00:33:129 (1,2) - 頭去clap
00:40:163 (1) - 頭擺在前面的紅線比較好
01:20:301 (6) - 折返加clap
combo控制在4以內比較好

[Normal]
Normal也有spacing問題啊...
00:32:301 (6) - 其實應該拉到前面紅線,然後原本這個slider結尾的地方加個note
00:44:715 (1,2,3,4) - 個人認為不要疊比較好
00:54:646 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這一段怎麼沒音效=_=
01:04:577 (1,2,1,2,3) - ^,還有好多就不一一列舉了
然後combo也控制一下吧,4-6好些

[Hard]
00:00:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 其實這些clap非常違和...換whistle好點
00:08:301 (1) - 無意義的new combo啊
00:41:819 (x) - 加個note
00:43:267 (1) - 應該在前面藍線開始
combo控制在6-9比較好

[YuZuKi's Insane]
00:18:232 (1) - 應該在前面藍線開始
00:49:681 (T) - 貌似這綠線沒用
01:12:853 (1,2,3,4) - 聲音低點比較好
感覺還不錯恩恩

差不多這樣了

Maya-kira wrote:

continuing my last mod:

-normal-

you should definitely decrease the amount of reverse (especially in a fast part) ._.; it make the play confusing really.

00:09:957- (1,2,3,4,5) I think you can make a better pattern (not linear) try this. flows better too (nb: please hitsound by yourself >_<)

SPOILER

152,92,9957,6,0,B|196:128|264:112,1,110
384,140,10784,2,0,B|340:100|356:32,2,110
428,264,12026,2,0,B|356:368|224:312,1,220

00:16:163- (6) don't stack this ;w;
00:38:715- (1,2) I think this flows better (circle, circle, circle, slider)

01:02:922- (4) I think it sounds better if you remove one reverse
01:17:819- (1) remove 1 reverse and move (2) 1/2 beat earlier. it fits the vocal more.

-hard-

00:21:957- (7) rather than repeat, I think its better to make a 1/1 slider plus 1 hitcircle after it. (like this)

00:54:026- (4) remove 1 reverse ._.;
00:59:405- (7,8) (7) remove 1 reverse, then move (8) 1/2 beat infront. it follows the flow better imo.

I think you can still improve this @_@;; like patterns and all..

skipping insane (sorry) TwT