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Weez

Saten-san wrote:

183 BPM all the way should do the magic~
too late already got it ;)
Saten

Weezy wrote:

Saten-san wrote:

183 BPM all the way should do the magic~
too late already got it ;)
:(

also, try offset 2757


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working on my diff~~♪
climbb65588
Another taiko diff is finished. :)

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Climbb's Taiko Oni].osu

Topic Starter
Weez
Thank you I'll add the image tomorrow, full submission takes forever for me now :/
Saten
here's my sexy diff, hidden users will rage

:3

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten].osu
Topic Starter
Weez
arigato :3
really sexy ;)
Haruhi_sama
The girl with the sharp thorn in her fresh.
I meet you at your story.
Behind the hatred threr lies murderous love.
Do you kill your friends if you can fulfil your wish?
Can you die for someone?
There are synonymous words.
Life is a game it's a survival.
That's Right!How do you start?
Time and Space it's crossroad through.
a game! Where do you go?
You seek eternal breath.
Why do you need to live?
We don't know when this word come into being.
We are the time leaper.
Nothing's gonna change with you in the world.
Everything will be decided by the rules.
Oh,we are traveling the past and the future.
Through love.
Break out.
Let's dial back all the pains and we will borned again.
I wanna see the stars with you.
Over the miracle.
IT'S NOT DEAD END!
Topic Starter
Weez
emmmmm yaaa....
Nyquill
I decided to give flow priority for this map, so I went ahead and fixed the parts where I wasn't sure if I should opt for flow or hitsounds for ;3.

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Nyquill's Taiko Oni].osu
Haruhi_sama

Weezy wrote:

emmmmm yaaa....
YES Lyc
_DeathAngel
Not bad :)
Kiddo-Kun
TTTTTTTTTTTT
>:(
Topic Starter
Weez

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

>:(
.___. What??
Topic Starter
Weez
To pending this will go
To pending this will go
...something something something something
To pending this will go!
YTYuyu
HURRAY ITS DONE :D alright lets see wat i can find.

General:
No problems here

Easy:
no problems here

Kiddo's Average:
00:04:724(5,1) - add a whistle at the end of (5) and remove the whistle at the beginning of (1). that way it could keep a steady pattern in the whistles.
00:10:953(2) - replace the whistle for a clap since this part is all claps.
00:47:347(3) - how about flipping it vertically(Ctrl+J) to make an easier path for players?
00:50:297(4) - ^
00:56:199(1) - add a finish? sounds nice IMO
00:58:166(1,2) - move it down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause a distraction to players leading to a combo breaker, a miss or a fail.

Hard:
00:34:068 - hmm how about adding a slider and ending it at 00:34:888? so that it can follow "words"?
01:01:609(3,4) - i think itd be nice if u can make 1 if these sliders look the same as the other 1?

Saten:
00:25:379(2) - same as kiddo's diff on 00:58:166. suggest that u move it at x:24 y:36. i think it looks better if its there
00:34:232 - same as the hard diffs 1st suggestion but since this is the hardest diff in this mapset how about doing 2 kick sliders like This? it would cover the pause. well idk about ur style but when i do hard or insane diffs thats 1 of my styles in mapping.
01:24:068(1) - IMO this s-curve slider is ugly. make it smoother?

this is the best i can do. 2 stars and GL :D

I am so watching Mirai Nikku after this :D
Topic Starter
Weez

Byakugan249 wrote:

HURRAY ITS DONE :D alright lets see wat i can find.
Hard:
00:34:068 - hmm how about adding a slider and ending it at 00:34:888? so that it can follow "words"? I swear there was a spinner there .__.
01:01:609(3,4) - i think itd be nice if u can make 1 if these sliders look the same as the other 1? Done :)

this is the best i can do. 2 stars and GL :D

I am so watching Mirai Nikku after this :D <------Nikki not Nikku lol :P
Thanks for the mod :D
TTTTTTTTTTTT
I ate you, lol
Saten

Byakugan249 wrote:

Saten:
00:25:379(2) - same as kiddo's diff on 00:58:166. suggest that u move it at x:24 y:36. i think it looks better if its there Moved several objects to cover for that
00:34:232 - same as the hard diffs 1st suggestion but since this is the hardest diff in this mapset how about doing 2 kick sliders like This? it would cover the pause. well idk about ur style but when i do hard or insane diffs thats 1 of my styles in mapping. I tried something new
01:24:068(1) - IMO this s-curve slider is ugly. make it smoother? smoooooth

this is the best i can do. 2 stars and GL :D

I am so watching Mirai Nikku after this :D
Future Nick

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten].osu
Topic Starter
Weez
tbh i personal hate that slider at 00:34:232 thats my opinion, its your diff
Haruhi_sama

Weezy wrote:

tbh i personal hate that slider at 00:34:232 thats my opinion, its your diff
so sexy slider lol
Saten

Weezy wrote:

tbh i personal hate that slider at 00:34:232 thats my opinion, its your diff
I was unsure about it as well. I fell asleep right after, so I never manage to test it out :P

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten].osu
Kiddo-Kun

Byakugan249 wrote:

Kiddo's Average:
00:04:724(5,1) - add a whistle at the end of (5) and remove the whistle at the beginning of (1). that way it could keep a steady pattern in the whistles.
00:10:953(2) - replace the whistle for a clap since this part is all claps.
00:47:347(3) - how about flipping it vertically(Ctrl+J) to make an easier path for players?
00:50:297(4) - ^
00:56:199(1) - add a finish? sounds nice IMO
00:58:166(1,2) - move it down because its touching the hp bar. this may cause a distraction to players leading to a combo breaker, a miss or a fail.
Did them all, thanks Byakugan!

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Kiddo's Average].osu
suzutsukikanade
Just one suggestion.

In Hard diff, you could change AR and OD to 7? I think it would be better.

Good Map and GL.
Mafiamaster
[Easy]
00:51:117 (1,2) - How about making this into a single slider? It just feels a bit irregular during gameplay currently. Also add a finish to the beginning if you do change it into a slider.

[Hard]
Add 5% to the overall volume like the Hard and Saten's?
00:24:888 (2) - Add a finish at the beginning?
01:23:904 (9) - Finish at the end?

[Both Taikos]
Don't let the video play in these two difficulties.

[Saten's Insane]
00:06:363 (4) - New combo?
00:07:019 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:08:658 (1) - New combo?
00:30:789 (1) - Looks pretty hidden to me imo.
00:31:445 (1) - ^
01:06:035 (1) - Kind of hidden imo.

How about a better video?
http://puu.sh/gdit
Saten

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Saten's Insane]
00:06:363 (4) - New combo? done
00:07:019 (1) - Remove new combo? done
00:08:658 (1) - New combo? done
00:30:789 (1) - Looks pretty hidden to me imo. okay ;w; changed
00:31:445 (1) - ^ changed
01:06:035 (1) - Kind of hidden imo. changed
Thanks~

Why did you change the diffname? ><
oh well~

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Weez
k all changes have been made
thanks :D
Mok
Get this "over the miracle"~ Star :3
Topic Starter
Weez
Thanks mok :D
Hamuko
I was going to ask to map an Easy, but yours is probably way better than the one I would make~
Wish I had the kudosu to star this ;w;
Anyway, good luck~
wmfchris
[General]
excess file [Saten].osu in the map package. Remember to remove and FULL submit (btw you can remvoe osb as well)

Better unique the time that kiai starts between 00:58:986 - and 00:59:150 - ?

I wonder why audio lead in is still needed orz

[Climbb's Taiko]
00:18:658 - ddk d again sounds redandunt, try ddk---d d...
00:40:461 - k k?
01:04:068 - feeling that kdk may not fit here, try sth like ddd <_<
01:12:101 - k?
01:27:675 - in early part you placed kkkkkkkkkkk ignoring the melody, so I prefer kkkkkkkkkk also here
nice =w=b

[Nyquill's Taiko]
00:19:806 - k?
00:22:429 - can't understand why D is also with finish... and maybe change the stream into individual notes with some finish like d K---d K---d K
00:54:888 - suggestion: use K K D K K D here to notify the rising pitch
00:58:986 - finish
01:21:527 - leave 1/2 bet before spinner
01:28:002 - ends with a d here

quite different style, but both sounds ok to me~
Gasaiyuno-chan
ok.I don't like this background. lol
use it lol?
I can make a extra if you want lol
Topic Starter
Weez

Alexanderkun wrote:

ok.I don't like this background. lol
use it lol?[attachment=0:6a543]You're end.png[/attachment:6a543]
I can make a extra if you want lol
U don't like it but I do soooo nope.avi
Nyquill
did everything and everything done.

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Nyquill's Taiko Oni].osu
Kamure
Mod Request:

Kiddo's Average
  1. 00:25:379 (3,5) - you forgot the clap here?
  2. 00:27:183 (1) - ^ at the middle of the slider (actually it's fine either way.... disregard this if you wish)
  3. 01:25:543 (4,5) - these sliders feel empty without hitsounds, add a finish to the start and beginning? or a whistle?
Saten's Insane
  1. 00:19:724 (2) - Maybe you can add a clap here? You know, for a syncopated sound.
Loving the Insane Diffs, you guys!! Great Job!

Star!
Saten

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Saten's Insane
  1. 00:19:724 (2) - Maybe you can add a clap here? You know, for a syncopated sound. Added
Loving the Insane Diffs, you guys!! Great Job! \o/
thanks~

Download: Faylan - Dead END (TV Size) (Weezy) [Saten's Insane].osu
Kiddo-Kun

chamelepeace710 wrote:

Mod Request:

Kiddo's Average
  1. 00:25:379 (3,5) - you forgot the clap here?
  2. 00:27:183 (1) - ^ at the middle of the slider (actually it's fine either way.... disregard this if you wish)
  3. 01:25:543 (4,5) - these sliders feel empty without hitsounds, add a finish to the start and beginning? or a whistle?
Saten's Insane
  1. 00:19:724 (2) - Maybe you can add a clap here? You know, for a syncopated sound.
Loving the Insane Diffs, you guys!! Great Job!

Star!
Fixed all, Weezy will make the changes.
Thanks~
Topic Starter
Weez
all updated :)
Aleks719
General
1st and 2nd combocolours look close, also 2nd is gray and can mix up players in multi. suggest to change it
Set your kiai times in standard diffs 00:58:986 - 01:26:691 , taiko - fine
Both taiko bg have black line between pic and playfield, it's fine, but looks untidy

Saten's Insane
Stats looks fun, cuz of stats in hard. suggest to make at least od+1.
00:48:494 (1,2,3) - looks bad, increase spacing on 1-2 grids
00:49:806 (4,5,6) - ^
00:55:789 (1) - ^ + remove nc
00:56:035 (3) - add nc
00:56:363 (1) - remove nc
01:12:593 (1,1,1) - 0x spacing, even not a anti jumps. looks like combospam~
01:28:002 (1) - remove nc
01:28:576 (1) - this spinner doesn't fin music, no sound there. better remove

Hard
00:35:052 (1,2,3) - don't think it's a best variant. better 1/4 slider with reverse.

Climbb's Taiko Oni
00:58:658 (350,351,352,353) - 1/6? don't think so

Kiddo's Average
HP2,AR6,OD2 here and HP3,AR3,OD3 in Easy. Nope, just nope.

Easy
00:11:937 (1) - finish it 1/2 earlier?
00:54:888 (5) - finish 1/2 earlier + finish to the end
01:04:396 (2) - add finish to the start
Saten

Aleks719 wrote:

Saten's Insane
Stats looks fun, cuz of stats in hard. suggest to make at least od+1. kay
00:48:494 (1,2,3) - looks bad, increase spacing on 1-2 grids looks fine imo
00:49:806 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
00:55:789 (1) - ^ + remove nc NC
00:56:035 (3) - add nc done
00:56:363 (1) - remove nc done
01:12:593 (1,1,1) - 0x spacing, even not a anti jumps. looks like combospam~ uh, if you say so
01:28:002 (1) - remove nc staying
01:28:576 (1) - this spinner doesn't fin music, no sound there. better remove same
look down
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