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Hanatan - Tropical Summer

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Topic Starter
Star Stream
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 1월 31일 화요일 at 오전 11:38:46

Artist: Hanatan
Title: Tropical Summer
Source: Summer*Syrup
Tags: C80 yurika Hanatan
BPM: 153
Filesize: 5579kb
Play Time: 03:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.87 stars, 362 notes)
  2. Normal (2.83 stars, 164 notes)
Download: Hanatan - Tropical Summer
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hanatan - Tropical Summer

Normal - Done
Hard - Done

Doki Doki~ Realxing map! <.<


1.25 - Deleted .osb files
1.31 - Fixed custom hitsounds
Asgard
[hard]
00:35:951 (8) - 끝부분 크랩
01:06:343 (5,6,7,8) - 이것들 슬라 똑같이해서 하는게 더 보기좋을듯
01:12:421 (4) - 슬라이더 모양이 좀 이상함 좀더 동그랗게 http://puu.sh/eqSi 이정도로? 뭐 이것도 멀쩡한건 아니지만..
01:18:500 (3,4) - 괜히 아래있으니까 좀 이상함 x : 44 y : 216 으로
01:55:558 (2) - 슬라를 위로 구부리는게 좋을듯
02:11:245 (2) - 이거 지우고 02:10:656 (1) - 이거 대칭으로.. 현재 대칭이 안맞음
02:40:264 (4) - 2번이랑 안겹치게
02:45:166 (1,2) - 이런건 어떰? http://puu.sh/eqRE


[normal]
01:54:186 (3) - 시작부분 크랩 제거
02:20:068 (1) - 한번더 반복
02:21:245 (2) - 제거
02:21:629 (1) - 한번더 반복
02:22:814 (2) - 제거

으음...
우선 이정도밖에 못잡겠네
나중에 더 찾으면 겜에서 알려주지 흐흐흐
KayeSara
[Normal]
  1. 01:18:892 - NC
  2. Good enough, nothing to say.
[Hard]
  1. 00:25:558 (4,5,6) - I suggest keep 00:25:656 (5,6,7) 1/2 later and add note at 00:25:754, it makes stronger tempo.
  2. 00:35:558 (7,8) - I strongly recommend do not overlap it, or you can add note at 00:35:754.
  3. 01:04:578 - add note and overlap with next slider, making a jump here is better than nothing.
  4. 01:23:598 (1,2,3) - Too lag here, I suggest you can use slider instead of it.
  5. 01:26:735 (1,2,3) - ^
  6. 02:51:441 (1,2,3) - ^
  7. 02:54:578 (1) - This must better than 3 notes here.
  8. Last but note least, it's better to make tercet begin at red line, and it makes stronger tempo.
Anyway, that's all my advices. star
No_Gu
request from my queue
I tried to find original source.It is Summer☆Syrup.you can add * as ☆.So the source is Summer*Syrup.
Tag C80. yurika(ユリカ) → another singer for this album
No preview time point?
[Normal]
01:03:990 (4) - a little close to 3 .use grid 4 to fix it
01:17:323 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:54:186 (3) - remove clap at the beginning
02:16:931 (1,2,3,4) - a little overlap.try to fix this

[hard]
00:22:519 (6) - move to 00:22:323
01:12:421 (4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227711 also don't forget to fix spacing
76,140,72421,2,0,B|76:52|200:12|256:76,1,233.999995815754
01:53:402 (7) - NC
I really don't like using change slider speed to map:p

Orz really feel noisy because you use 70% normal hitsound..Try to use soft or turn down the volume..I think 50% is enough
A cute song.but you use many straight sliders..It doesn't matter.But if you change to curving sliders.the mapset will be much cuter :3

You have a big improvement on your mapping skill.So a star for your progress \o/
Topic Starter
Star Stream

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
I tried to find original source.It is Summer☆Syrup.you can add * as ☆.So the source is Summer*Syrup.
Tag C80. yurika(ユリカ) → another singer for this album thx :D
No preview time point? i forgot to add it >.<
[Normal]
01:03:990 (4) - a little close to 3 .use grid 4 to fix it ok
01:17:323 (1) - finish at the beginning ok
01:54:186 (3) - remove clap at the beginning nope
02:16:931 (1,2,3,4) - a little overlap.try to fix this hmm.. suspend

[hard]
00:22:519 (6) - move to 00:22:323 no
01:12:421 (4) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227711 also don't forget to fix spacing cool ;D
76,140,72421,2,0,B|76:52|200:12|256:76,1,233.999995815754
01:53:402 (7) - NC no
I really don't like using change slider speed to map:p

Orz really feel noisy because you use 70% normal hitsound..Try to use soft or turn down the volume..I think 50% is enough hmm.. i don't think it's noisy.. but ok, reduced to 60%
A cute song.but you use many straight sliders..It doesn't matter.But if you change to curving sliders.the mapset will be much cuter :3 well, respect my mapping style plz ;D

You have a big improvement on your mapping skill.So a star for your progress \o/
thx for your modding and staring~ :D
Teru21
hii! from my queue.. :D

[Hard]
00:27:127 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227751
00:47:715 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227749
01:04:774 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227752
02:33:205 (2) - deactive distance snap and move it to x:40

y:92
02:40:264 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227756

GL :D
Kirino Kousaka
Hello~ here's my mod!~ (a request from my queue)

  • [Hard]
  1. Approach Rate +1
  2. 00:26:343 - Add a hitcircle here
  3. 00:35:754 - ^
  4. 01:53:402 (7) - Add NC
  5. 02:43:990 (5) - ^
That's all!~
Star!~
suzutsukikanade
As you requested in my modding queue.
Is all suggestions.

[General]
Nothing Bad.

[Normal]
00:40:853 (4): NC?
02:20:853: Add note here?

[Hard]
00:22:421 (5,6,7): Like this?
00:26:343: Add a note here?
00:35:754: ^
00:38:794 (6,7): Like this?
01:15:951 (5): NC?
02:43:990 (5): ^

Nice job!

Kogure
Hi there
from my queue :D

[Normal]
01:28:304 (2) - This is fine where it is, but if you want it to be pointing at the center of 01:29:872 (1), move it 1 grid up.
01:34:578 (1) - Maybe a soft end with 5% volume?
03:02:421 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:34:578 (1) - Same as Normal
03:02:421 (1) - ^

Good stuff
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Star Stream
fixed some
thx guys ^^
-Lennox-
IRC mod incoming~

SPOILER
05:25 <Star Stream> : hi~
05:26 <-Lennox-> : Hi.
05:26 <-Lennox-> : Would you mind if i do IRC mod on your maps?
05:26 <-Lennox-> : i just post the log after modding in the thread
05:26 <Star Stream> : i don't mind <.<
05:26 <Star Stream> : let's go
05:27 <-Lennox-> : sec have to download
05:27 <-Lennox-> : we'll start with that for ranked one. Tropical summer
05:27 <Star Stream> : ok
05:29 <-Lennox-> : 00:52:225 (1) - Idk if the new combo is ok here.
05:29 <-Lennox-> : I mean there is not a big change in music
05:30 <-Lennox-> : 01:48:696 (1,2,3) - That patterns doesnt look good at all.
05:30 <-Lennox-> : The sliders goes op up a little too high
05:31 <-Lennox-> : And the circle feels weird after them
05:31 <-Lennox-> : you might want to change this
05:32 <-Lennox-> : 02:01:245 (1,3) - Don't do the overlap here
05:33 <-Lennox-> : do it at least like this http://puu.sh/eBXE
05:33 <-Lennox-> : don't forgett the slider after fixing
05:33 <-Lennox-> : 02:17:715 (2,3,4) - No way. You can't do this at all. Thats too confusing
05:34 <-Lennox-> : 02:19:284 (4) - Reverse them with CTRL+R and put them at a other place
05:34 <-Lennox-> : so he don't overlap with everything what comes under them
05:35 <-Lennox-> : 02:20:068 (1) - ??. Stretch them to the next white tick
05:35 <-Lennox-> : 02:21:637 (1) - same
05:36 <-Lennox-> : 02:23:205 (1,1) - The spacing after the spinner and the next slider is too big for the easiest diff. You need
05:36 <-Lennox-> : to change this
05:36 <-Lennox-> : idk why.. but you need do to D:
05:37 <-Lennox-> : Otherwise this is the best normal diff from you so far
05:37 <Star Stream> : <.<
05:37 <-Lennox-> : lets go to the hard diff
05:40 <-Lennox-> : 00:25:656 - You might want to delete the note here
05:40 <-Lennox-> : and add here
05:40 <-Lennox-> : 00:26:245 - and here00:26:343 - one note
05:40 <-Lennox-> : it follows the music
05:41 <-Lennox-> : 00:37:127 (2) - You may want to put this slider a bit up
05:41 <-Lennox-> : for not overalpping with (1)
05:41 <-Lennox-> : *overlapping
05:43 <-Lennox-> : 00:51:049 (2) - 00:51:049 (2) - Stretch them to the next blue tick? It follows the vocal if you here on 50%
05:44 <-Lennox-> : 01:53:402 (7) - New combo for fixing the long combo
05:45 <Star Stream> : ;_; so many modders pointed it out
05:45 <-Lennox-> : :p
05:45 <-Lennox-> : 02:29:480 (1) - Stack them correkt with (6)
05:46 <-Lennox-> : Everything else looks ok
05:46 <-Lennox-> : good job
05:46 <Star Stream> : ok
05:46 <Star Stream> : thx :D
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue

nice, star~

Tags

  1. remove "," in the tags...
Normal

  1. looks fine, no problems
Hard

  1. 00:20:853 (1) - move it to (416,188) looks better
  2. 00:42:029 (8) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot172-1.jpg ?
  3. 00:47:519 (1,2) - this ? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot173-4.jpg
  4. 01:15:754 (5,6,7) - this ? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot174.jpg
  5. 01:29:872 (1) - move middle point to (216,132) looks better imo
  6. 02:43:990 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - why only jump here in the map... = =
Good luck~
Mikkuri
~mod request via in game pm~ :D

[General]


  • fine~

[Normal]


  • Circle size -1?
    00:58:500 (1) - note comes after spin very fast, you should fix
    01:33:794 (2) - spacing
    02:23:205 (1) - ^ same as above

[Hard]


  • 00:51:441 (3) - add clap tail
    01:03:598 (5) - remove finish
    01:03:990 (7) - ^
    01:04:088 (8) - add clap?
    01:15:951 (5) - spacing
    02:06:735 (7,8,9,10) - imo this better
    02:31:931 (8) - add clap?
Topic Starter
Star Stream
Thx Mickey <.<
fixed some
benzvp
nice song :)
pls put cordelia(hanatan) in tag cause it sell CD in name of cordelia
and dios for compose and lyric :P
ps. wanna mod this to but i bad in mod lolz
Dino99
M4M~ :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:31:049 (2) - Reverse?
  2. 00:40:460 (2,3,4) - Maybe replace with a slider?
  3. 00:42:029 (6,7,8) - ^
  4. 01:11:049 (1,2,1) - Make it better>.< How about This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228587
    64,224,111049,2,0,B|64:288,2,60,0|0|8
  5. 01:29:872 (1) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228599 (I changed the shape a little><)
    256,312,129872,2,0,B|336:272|392:272,1,120,0|8
  6. 02:00:460 (3,4,5) - Changed to slider?
  7. 02:46:735 (2) - DS is large>_> it's difficult for beginners
[Hard]
  1. HR+1 & OD+1?
  2. 00:45:951 (1) - Stack on 00:45:166 (7)
  3. 00:46:343 (2,3) - DS is too small...
  4. 01:06:343 (5,6,7,8) - Ugly>_>...... Try this!! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228614
    412,308,66343,2,0,B|304:244,1,116.999997907877,4|0
    100,308,66735,2,0,B|208:244,1,116.999997907877,4|0
    412,176,67127,2,0,B|300:144,1,116.999997907877
    100,176,67519,2,0,B|212:144,1,116.999997907877
  5. 01:25:166 (1) - Move to [X:220 Y:112]
  6. 01:54:186 - Clap
  7. 01:54:284 (5) - Remove Clap
  8. 02:06:735 (7) - Clap
  9. 02:06:833 (8) - Remove Clap
  10. 02:23:598 (2,3) - Move to [X:300 Y:196]
  11. 02:24:383 (5,6) - Move to [X:136 Y:132]
  12. 02:52:813 - Add a note
  13. 02:59:088 - ^
That's all~ Good Luck!!~ ;)
Topic Starter
Star Stream
Stick my Notes, Hitsounds
also no m4m,kds Sorry
-Lennox-

12BARRY21 wrote:

M4M~ :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:31:049 (2) - Reverse?
  2. 00:40:460 (2,3,4) - Maybe replace with a slider?
  3. 00:42:029 (6,7,8) - ^
  4. 01:11:049 (1,2,1) - Make it better>.< How about This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228587
    64,224,111049,2,0,B|64:288,2,60,0|0|8
  5. 01:29:872 (1) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228599 (I changed the shape a little><)
    256,312,129872,2,0,B|336:272|392:272,1,120,0|8
  6. 02:00:460 (3,4,5) - Changed to slider?
  7. 02:46:735 (2) - DS is large>_> it's difficult for beginners
[Hard]
  1. HR+1 & OD+1?
  2. 00:45:951 (1) - Stack on 00:45:166 (7)
  3. 00:46:343 (2,3) - DS is too small...
  4. 01:06:343 (5,6,7,8) - Ugly>_>...... Try this!! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228614
    412,308,66343,2,0,B|304:244,1,116.999997907877,4|0
    100,308,66735,2,0,B|208:244,1,116.999997907877,4|0
    412,176,67127,2,0,B|300:144,1,116.999997907877
    100,176,67519,2,0,B|212:144,1,116.999997907877
  5. 01:25:166 (1) - Move to [X:220 Y:112]
  6. 01:54:186 - Clap
  7. 01:54:284 (5) - Remove Clap
  8. 02:06:735 (7) - Clap
  9. 02:06:833 (8) - Remove Clap
  10. 02:23:598 (2,3) - Move to [X:300 Y:196]
  11. 02:24:383 (5,6) - Move to [X:136 Y:132]
  12. 02:52:813 - Add a note
  13. 02:59:088 - ^
That's all~ Good Luck!!~ ;)
This is a kind of mod i really hate. You just say things without giving a reason why. "Its ugly.. do this!" "looks bad, do this!" This IS NOT a real mod. You should help him/she, give him/she a reason why he have to change this and that. Stop doing these mods >:(
Topic Starter
Star Stream
Yes, moreover, there's no changeable something to me.
..
Lennox! that's what you said to me before! lol
Dino99

-Lennox- wrote:

12BARRY21 wrote:

M4M~ :D

[Normal]
  1. 00:31:049 (2) - Reverse?
  2. 00:40:460 (2,3,4) - Maybe replace with a slider?
  3. 00:42:029 (6,7,8) - ^
  4. 01:11:049 (1,2,1) - Make it better>.< How about This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228587
    64,224,111049,2,0,B|64:288,2,60,0|0|8
  5. 01:29:872 (1) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228599 (I changed the shape a little><)
    256,312,129872,2,0,B|336:272|392:272,1,120,0|8
  6. 02:00:460 (3,4,5) - Changed to slider?
  7. 02:46:735 (2) - DS is large>_> it's difficult for beginners
[Hard]
  1. HR+1 & OD+1?
  2. 00:45:951 (1) - Stack on 00:45:166 (7)
  3. 00:46:343 (2,3) - DS is too small...
  4. 01:06:343 (5,6,7,8) - Ugly>_>...... Try this!! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/228614
    412,308,66343,2,0,B|304:244,1,116.999997907877,4|0
    100,308,66735,2,0,B|208:244,1,116.999997907877,4|0
    412,176,67127,2,0,B|300:144,1,116.999997907877
    100,176,67519,2,0,B|212:144,1,116.999997907877
  5. 01:25:166 (1) - Move to [X:220 Y:112]
  6. 01:54:186 - Clap
  7. 01:54:284 (5) - Remove Clap
  8. 02:06:735 (7) - Clap
  9. 02:06:833 (8) - Remove Clap
  10. 02:23:598 (2,3) - Move to [X:300 Y:196]
  11. 02:24:383 (5,6) - Move to [X:136 Y:132]
  12. 02:52:813 - Add a note
  13. 02:59:088 - ^
That's all~ Good Luck!!~ ;)
This is a kind of mod i really hate. You just say things without giving a reason why. "Its ugly.. do this!" "looks bad, do this!" This IS NOT a real mod. You should help him/she, give him/she a reason why he have to change this and that. Stop doing these mods >:(
OK....sorry for my bad mod T_T............. I'll tell the reason why need to change....... :(
kanpakyin
Modder at least have a try to mod/improve your map.Change or not is depend on you.However you should give a kuds for the effort of modder.
S h i o n
Not a real mod? You need any reason?

If you really want,ok i tell you, they are just ugly.

I checked his mod and your map, only to find that many of his suggestions are helpful to make this map better. (pointing out bad flows,shapes,spacings, etc)

As what kpy's said, you should at least give his kd. Now your behavior is rude.
Topic Starter
Star Stream
Ok then, Sorry 12BARRY21
jossieP

kanpakyin wrote:

Modder at least have a try to mod/improve your map.Change or not is depend on you.However you should give a kuds for the effort of modder.
no, mod post must be healpful
narakucrimson
kanpakyin:

http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=6&t=38549

It doesn't say anything about "effort". The only point in which you could think about effort is this one:

Larto wrote:

Even if you don't follow the modder's advice, did you not follow it because of your personal choice only, and not because the modding seemed pointless to you?
But if you consider the mod to be pointless or something, you don't necessarily have to give kudosu.
The mapper here didn't consider the mod helpful, and even complained about the lack of explanation, so if he doesn't want to give kudosu to the modder, then his decision should be respected.

Just a friendly reminder here.
Kiddo-Kun

-Lennox- wrote:

This is a kind of mod i really hate. You just say things without giving a reason why. "Its ugly.. do this!" "looks bad, do this!" This IS NOT a real mod. You should help him/she, give him/she a reason why he have to change this and that. Stop doing these mods >:(
*Sigh*. I don't agree with you here. Looking at the mod, they are all simple suggestions. They don't require long paragraphs describing why it is necessary for you to follow through with the suggestion simply because the reason should be obvious. It either makes your map look better or sound better. Would you rather he writes out a novel for everything he find wrong and describes how your map is terrible without it?
Also, 12BARRY21, don't apologize. Your mod is well constructed and there is evidence of effort put into it, good job. Hope you can improve in the future.
Miya

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

-Lennox- wrote:

This is a kind of mod i really hate. You just say things without giving a reason why. "Its ugly.. do this!" "looks bad, do this!" This IS NOT a real mod. You should help him/she, give him/she a reason why he have to change this and that. Stop doing these mods >:(
*Sigh*. I don't agree with you here. Looking at the mod, they are all simple suggestions. They don't require long paragraphs describing why it is necessary for you to follow through with the suggestion simply because the reason should be obvious. It either makes your map look better or sound better. Would you rather he writes out a novel for everything he find wrong and describes how your map is terrible without it?
Also, 12BARRY21, don't apologize. Your mod is well constructed and there is evidence of effort put into it, good job. Hope you can improve in the future.
Agree with Kiddo-kun here. Well, all people have different way of modding, i don't mind modder that not give any reason in their mod as long as their mod is helpful. :)

And since when this map thread became modding discusion thread? lol
Ranger
Hi~
From my queue

[Normal]
00:25:951 (3) - Put in x:292 y:360
00:27:911 (2) - Put in x:188 y:140
00:39:676 (1) - Put in x:124 y:204
00:40:460 (2,3,4) - Put in x:204 y:184
00:41:245 (5) - Put in x:280 y:104
00:42:029 (6,7,8) - Put in x:184 y:124
00:45:951 (1) - Put in x:340 y:164
00:46:343 (2) - Put in x:420 y:220
01:59:676 (2) - Put in x:200 y:324
02:01:245 (1) - Put in x:52 y:244
02:04:382 (1) - Put in x:348 y:316
02:38:892 (1) - Put in x:20 y:140
02:42:029 (1) - Put in x:172 y:188

[Hard]
00:37:127 (2) - Touch the HP bar. Put a little lower
01:53:990 (4,5,6,7) - Strange beat

That`s all
good map
kurohana
ok, my mod, thanks for your request :D

[Normal]
00:55:362 (1) - let this slider end at 56:931, then it's easier to play
02:23:205 (1) - same as above, end at 2:24:774

[Hard]
i like this diff ^^

good luck :D
Miya
Hi Star, my mod here :D

General
  1. I believe your offset is 10ms early. So please decrease the offset by 10ms (-10ms). Don't forget to resnap all timing section and the note ;)
  2. Why are you repeating artist name in tag? Please remove it
Normal
  1. 00:31:049 (2) - If i look into this pattern, i think this slider is more toward right side and not balanced. Please move this slider 1 grid left to balanced the pattern.
  2. How about adding a finish rythim at this note that i said? It seems good imo.
    1. 00:47:519 (1) -
    2. 00:49:088 (1) -
    3. 00:50:656 (1) - At the startpoint
    4. 00:52:225 (1) - ^
    5. 00:53:794 (1) -
  3. 01:10:460 - How about adding a note here? I think the rythim fits there. Just stack it below 01:10:264 (3) -
  4. 02:14:578 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2) - Adding a finish rythim above to rythim is good too ^^
Wow, this is a good Normal diff. Nice job Star :D

Hard
  1. AR -1. AR 8 is for insane diff or above. I know there are jump in this map, but this is make a huge gap between normal and hard.
  2. 01:28:107 (5) - This one is not stacked properly.
  3. 02:33:990 (4) - What with this sudden jump? Orz, too surprising and not consistent. Your previous note doesn't consist jumps like these.
That's all for this diff. Hmm, like ussual too hard for hard diff :P

Ok, that's all from me. Overal your diff is quite good. :)
Star for you ^^
Good luck~
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