Demetori - Final Sorcery [Taiko|Osu] · forum

Komeiji Yuki

Joined March 2010

Komeiji Yuki 2012-06-21T13:40:24+00:00

Tenshi-nyan wrote:
Tell you what, I kinda like it. I think I'll upload it, but before I do there are some things I want you to check and fix:

00:10:945 (1) - I think it would be better if you did a pattern like this: http://puu.sh/Cy2l would keep it
00:13:394 (1) - ^ ^
00:27:935 (3) - minor spacing error fix
00:34:058 (4,5,6) - this kind of feels strange to play, mostly because of the (5), which should be, according to the music, at 00:34:517 - instead. Something like http://puu.sh/Cy3G would be much better. fix
01:27:935 (1) - Reverse selection (CTRL + R). fix
01:34:364 - add a slider, like this http://puu.sh/Cy63 ok
01:35:282 (1) - Reverse selection Due to the new slider 01:34:364 (3) , I would keep it "
01:42:170 (4,5,6) - arrange like this: http://puu.sh/Cy6J fix
01:43:701 (1) - this starts 1/2 beat later at 01:43:854 . fix

The break after that is very long. Why don't you add some single object in there like I did in my Normal? ok done

02:29:313 (1,2,3) - remove (2) and move (3) in it's place instead fix
02:31:456 - add a beat here fix
02:32:068 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid down fix
02:37:578 (2,3,4) - flip horizontally? looks better imo. change
02:42:782 - add 2 sliders so it looks somewhat like this: http://puu.sh/Cya3 fix
02:57:323 (1,1,1,1,1) - unstack the notes, remove the New Combos because they are too confusing. fix
02:58:547 (1) - replace with a single circle fix

That's all that came to my mind.

ok enjoy

http://puu.sh/CyVF

Tenshi-nyan

1,482 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

Tenshi-nyan 2012-06-21T14:30:42+00:00

Nice.
Uploaded the diff after adding hitsounds and adjusting the difficulty settings.

I can finally move this into Pending!!!

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-06-23T15:28:21+00:00

Hii

[General]
* Your mp3 bitrate is 277kbps. You need to re-encode it to 192kbps

[Yuki's Easy]
00:23:190 (1) - The repeating slider is touch the HP Bar
01:12:323 (1,2) - These stacks will confuse for beginners....
01:13:547 (3,4) - ^
01:25:486 (1) - While the default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden at gameplay. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350433

[Normal]
00:29:160 (3) - The tail slider is a bit offscreen!!
01:00:996 (4) - This slider is almost offscreen
01:25:486 (1) - While the default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden at gameplay. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350433
02:10:333 (2) - Tail slider is almost offscreen

[Regou's Hard]
00:43:854 (1) - This slider is overlapped by hitbursts http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350459

[Lucid Dream]
00:40:486 (1,2) - Some player expecting this one is snap at white tick, because this is in the star pattern...
00:59:619 (4) - The head slider is almost offscreen
01:54:721 (5) - 0,5x slider inside the stream pattern will kill the flow
01:59:619 (5) - ^

Since Extra diff is currently remap, I skip that diff

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-06-24T04:04:21+00:00

Changed that pattern. Shall works better now.

SPOILER

osu file format v9

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 85027
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Metadata]
Title:Final Sorcery
Artist:Demetori
Creator:Tenshi-nyan
Version:Regou's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:Kirisame Marisa Begierde Des Zauberer C81 Nakagawa-Kanon dksslqj regou komeiji yuki

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Tenshi-nyan

1,482 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

Tenshi-nyan 2012-06-24T13:18:15+00:00

Finished re-mapping the Kiai in Extra, uploaded Regou's update, uploaded a new MP3 and made some other, minor changes to the guest diffs.

Come get some!

Komeiji Yuki

1,264 posts

Joined March 2010

Komeiji Yuki 2012-06-25T17:56:22+00:00

Leorda wrote:
[Yuki's Easy]
00:23:190 (1) - The repeating slider is touch the HP Bar I think it's visible to see the repeat
01:12:323 (1,2) - These stacks will confuse for beginners.... fiexed
01:13:547 (3,4) - ^ fine imo
01:25:486 (1) - While the default spinner is red-orange-yellow, this might be hidden at gameplay. Do the colorhax by doing this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/350433 fixed

http://puu.sh/Dzs3

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YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,146 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-06-26T23:25:55+00:00

Alright after a 2 day break in modding, let's get started

. mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting for fun

[General]
Add "Love Colored Master Spark" in the tags. that's the original title of the song.

[Yuki's Easy]
I understand that this is an easy diff, but i suggest that you decrease the AR by 1. it looks too fast for beginners to keep up and they might fall behind with a BPM this high.
00:03:671 (1,1) - This is intentional right? because the spacing is too close and that might break the flow during gameplay. if you ignore the spacing issue, then move the 2nd (1) down so that it'd reach a DS of 0.8 and mean exactly 0.8. i think the spacing would be even, not to mention, i think it'll flow a bit smoother during gameplay.
00:06:733 (2,3) - to make it easier, how about replacing this for a 2/1 slider? since were at the beginning of the song, i figured that it'd be nice if you can give something easy and then it gets slightly harder as it progresses. the 2/1 should start at 00:06:426. get rid of the repeat if you do so if you want to make the 2/1 slider, you can add a repeat on (1) to follow the instrumental for flow to the next note.
00:09:794 (3) - Unstack this and do Ctrl+>. you'll make a blanket for the previous circle and the previous slider and it should be easier for beginners to clear.
00:20:202 (5) - add a finish at the repeat arrow. it'll match the cymbals in the song.
00:25:559 (1) - with a rhythm like this, i think it'd look better if you can unstack it and put this around the previous note to form a blanket. again i think it'd be easier to clear for beginners.
00:39:794 (5) - maybe add a repeat on this slider to follow the guitar in the song?
00:59:386 (5) - ^
01:03:825 (5,6) - (5) should be a 1/2 slider and (6) should be a 1/2 repeat slider to follow the guitar in the song.
01:50:202 (1,1,1,1) - i see that the 1st (1)s are shaped like the triangle, but it looks like the 4th (1) is put there ramdomly. i suggest that you make a 4 sided shape out of this so that it'd make sense, as in since there's 4 (1)s in this, it should make a 4 sided shape like a square. not to mention it'd look nicer and straightforward for some players.
02:30:304 (2) - make a 4 point slider out of this. if you notice, you make a small border for the previous note. i think it'll flow a bit smoother during gameplay.
02:32:141 (2) - you should unstack this because the repeat arrow is slightly covered and with a BPM this high, beginners might not be able to react in time.
02:33:059 (4) - how about replacing the clap for a whistle for more effect in the cymbals?
02:39:182 (1) - this slider should end at 02:41:630. it follows the new guitar riff in the song.
02:53:876 (1) - to make it easier, replace this for a 2/2 slider (a slider that starts from the white tick and ends at the red tick).
nice diff but 2 things i highly suggest that you should do: make the majority of the straight sliders curved sliders to give off that flowy feeling to the map, and try to reduce the number of stacks and i mean the stacks beside each other. 02:48:671 is an example to make it a bit easier for players.

[Normal]
I suggest increasing the HP and OD by 1 to give off a bit of a challenge for players.
00:24:181 (2) - make this a NC because the guitar changes in the song. you did it on the last 2 notes in which the guitar changes.
00:29:997 (4,1) - add whistles for finishes at the repeat of (4) and at the beginning of (1) to match the small clash of the cymbals in the song. if you say it's too loud, then reduce the volume of the hitsounds to match the cymbal clash in the song.
00:39:946 (6,1) - similar as above.
01:01:834 (5,6) - maybe to make it a bit easier, replace this for 1/2 repeat slider and a circle. i don't think palyers would alternate that quick with a high BPM like this.
01:13:619 (3) - make this slider look like (1,2). idk about you i but i feel that this straight slider breaks the flow in this combo because i was expecting this slider to look like (1,2). if you can make this slider look like (1,2), the flow in this combo will continue.
01:22:344 (1) - i think this kick slider would be hard because players won't know when this will end due to the number of repeats and the high BPM, so i think it'd be easier if you can do 2 1/2 repeat sliders because although players have to react quick, it should reduce the nervousness of the player playing this diff.
01:29:997 (4) - to follow the guitar accurately, replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider. you did something similar at 01:26:324 so why don't you do it here?
01:32:599 - add a circle here. it follows the guitar riff in the song.
01:45:609 - i think it'd be easier for players if you can add a break here because with no break here and the HP bar draining slowly, players might overthink too much and they might hit the next note too early causing the HP bar to decrease even more.
01:50:507 - ^
Keep on adding the breaks till 02:00:303 to avoid that during gameplay.
02:06:273 (3,4) - are you sure that players would make this note in time?
02:06:732 (4,5) - make these curved sliders to give off that flowy feeling to the map, and to be consistent with the other curved sliders in this combo.
02:09:181 (7,8) - ^, but to be consistent with (2).
02:14:079 (5) - same as 01:22:344, but the 2nd note should be a 1/2 slider.
02:46:528 (1,2) - same as 02:06:732.
02:56:477 (2,3,4) - are you 100% sure that players can clear this. i mean ik this is the end and you want to something hard, but i suggest that you reduce the damage somehow tt make it a bit easier for players.
everything looks fine, just 1 thing: make the 2 straight 1/2 sliders like at 02:06:732. again i think it'll give off that flowy feeling to the map.

[Regou's Hard]
Increase the HP by +1 or +2. i find it hard to see that the HP bar stays at the end of the drain.
00:11:477 (1) - i don't see a purpose in this slidershape. the overlaps on the other sliders bother me the most and that threw me off during gameplay. i suggest doing a different slidershape to avoid this issue, or change up this slidershape to clear the overlaps during gameplay.
00:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to make it easier, replace this stream for a kick slider. i don't mind seeing streams in hard diffs, but not over 3 or 4 notes. it makes me think that this is an insane diff.
00:16:834 (4) - i see the blanket but get rid of the red point. to me, it makes the slider look ugly and it doesn't play right during gameplay. instead make this slider symmetrical and move it up so that it'd blanket the previous slider.
00:25:558 (1) - make a 4 point slider like this. that way it'll stack on both notes perfectly and it'll look neater during gameplay.
00:29:691 (3,1) - similar to 00:29:997 on normal.
00:32:140 (2) - how about doing Ctrl+R to give a nice challenge for players?
00:33:977 (5,6) - same as 00:25:558, but like this. just move (5) at the middle to avoid the slight overlaps in the map. again it'll look neater during gameplay.
00:39:793 (3,1) - same as 00:29:691.
01:29:232 (1) - similar to 00:25:558, but ik that you can do it. if you can do stacked notes like this, then this would be a piece of cake.
02:36:426 (4) - replace this for a 1/2 slider to follow the long pause in the guitar?
02:43:466 (4) - Unrankable issue here. the hitburst is covering the repeat arrow and that's a no no in mapping. find a way to make the repeat arrow fully visible for players to see.
02:51:119 (3) - align this to the end of (1) to avoid the alight overlap during gameplay.

[Lucid Dream]
Lucid dream? why don't you call it Master Spark? Lucid would be fine if this is Byakuren's theme but since this is Marisa's theme, i think it'd be better if you can re-name this to "Master Spark".
00:19:589 (1) - *nazi* not to be picky but stack this perfectly on the end of the other slider. if you say this is manual tacking, you didn't do a manual stack on 00:21:273.
01:11:630 (3) - curve this slider a lot more like you did on (2) to give off that flowy feeling to the map.
01:39:028 (5) - move this slider beside (2) to the left to avoid the overlap during gameplay. it should look neater and playable as that overlap is playable, but it looks messy and a bit clumped up.
01:49:818 (1,2) - remove the NC on (1) because the instrumental is still going. (2) should be a NC mainly because of the drums.
01:55:176 (6) - same as above, but the drum changes in the song.
02:07:803 (4) - i think players might expect a square pattern from (1-4). this stack might surprise players in their 1st try causibng them to mess up, so stack this on (5) to make it easy and straightforward for players.
02:33:517 (4) - move this at x: 512 y:184. it'll make a triangle for (3,4,1). again i think doing this would be easier and straightforward for players.
02:35:201 (6) - same as above but i'll leave it up to you.
02:39:487 (2) - Do Ctrl+R for that flowy feeling to the map.
02:43:773 (9) - are you sure that this is ok? i mean the hitburst is covering the repeat slider in a bad way and that might be iunrankable. i highly suggest that you move this horizontally to make the repeat arrow fully visible for players.

[Extra]
This is going for app so do HP7 and OD8 to give a nice challenge for players.
00:07:956 (9) - i'm not feeling the flow in this in a app map, but this is just my personal opinion. i suggest Ctrl+R to give a nice challenge for players, and i think it'd look fun for players if they do this.
00:12:395 (2) - *nazi* if you want, stack this perfectly. it looks weird if a note isn't stacked properly because of the transition in the map.
00:13:926 (4) - make this a straight slider because this wave slider breaks the flow in the map since the last few sliders are straight sliders.
00:14:232 (5) - *nazi* go 1 grid down so that it'd align with (3). it'll look neater during gameplay.
00:20:201 (3) - make this slider symmetrical. this 2nd half of the slider curves a lot more than the 1st half.
00:22:038 (3) - i don't think players would expect this since (5) appears as if it's a diamond pattern. so stack this on (5) to make it straightforward for players.
01:11:936 (6) - make this slider look like the last 2 sliders. like i said before, the straight sliders breaks the flow in the map during gameplay. it might makes players feel uncomfortable because of that...well it made me feel uncomfortable.
02:41:630 (1) - Make this a NC. there's a bug on this note.
02:50:507 (9) - to make the flow smoother, make this slider look like (11). it'll give off a smooth feeling to the map during gameplay.
03:38:415 (2,3) - move (2) to where the kiai time is, and move (3) below the middle so that it'd form a triangle from (1-3). this pattern made me hesitate on what to hit in the song.
03:43:160 (7) - in order to do this, you have to move (4) around: stack this note on the triplets at the next combo, move (4) around so that it'd stack perfectly on (7). it'd look neater and it should play a bit smoother during gameplay. the current pattern looks clumped up due to the hitbursts.
04:15:303 (4) - same as 00:12:395.
04:20:660 (7) - this note looked like it was placed there randomly. stack this on (1) to make it straightforward. i don't think players would expect a note to be there at all.

I guess that's it. now before i go , i have 1 more suggestion...i remember mentioning adding finishes near the beginning of a diff, and i heardsever other small clashes in the song. if you can, add the finishes and cymbals to match that small clash in the map. anyways GL on the rank...this has potential i'll tell you that

.

Tenshi-nyan

1,482 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

Tenshi-nyan 2012-06-27T00:32:16+00:00

SPOILER

Byakugan249 wrote:
[General]
Add "Love Colored Master Spark" in the tags. that's the original title of the song. sure.

[Normal]
I suggest increasing the HP and OD by 1 to give off a bit of a challenge for players. noo... don't wanna get the star rating above 4.5
00:24:181 (2) - make this a NC because the guitar changes in the song. you did it on the last 2 notes in which the guitar changes. k
00:29:997 (4,1) - add whistles for finishes at the repeat of (4) and at the beginning of (1) to match the small clash of the cymbals in the song. if you say it's too loud, then reduce the volume of the hitsounds to match the cymbal clash in the song. sorry, but no.
00:39:946 (6,1) - similar as above.
01:01:834 (5,6) - maybe to make it a bit easier, replace this for 1/2 repeat slider and a circle. i don't think palyers would alternate that quick with a high BPM like this. that doesn't make it easier :3
01:13:619 (3) - make this slider look like (1,2). idk about you i but i feel that this straight slider breaks the flow in this combo because i was expecting this slider to look like (1,2). if you can make this slider look like (1,2), the flow in this combo will continue. eh, sure.
01:22:344 (1) - i think this kick slider would be hard because players won't know when this will end due to the number of repeats and the high BPM, so i think it'd be easier if you can do 2 1/2 repeat sliders because although players have to react quick, it should reduce the nervousness of the player playing this diff. sounds strange to me, but still changed it.
01:29:997 (4) - to follow the guitar accurately, replace this for a 1/2 repeat slider. you did something similar at 01:26:324 so why don't you do it here? hmm nah, no need.
01:32:599 - add a circle here. it follows the guitar riff in the song. added a slider instead.
01:45:609 - i think it'd be easier for players if you can add a break here because with no break here and the HP bar draining slowly, players might overthink too much and they might hit the next note too early causing the HP bar to decrease even more. hmm. yeah.
01:50:507 - ^
Keep on adding the breaks till 02:00:303 to avoid that during gameplay.
02:06:273 (3,4) - are you sure that players would make this note in time? of course they will.
02:06:732 (4,5) - make these curved sliders to give off that flowy feeling to the map, and to be consistent with the other curved sliders in this combo.
02:09:181 (7,8) - ^, but to be consistent with (2). changed some.
02:14:079 (5) - same as 01:22:344, but the 2nd note should be a 1/2 slider. no change here, should be fine here.
02:46:528 (1,2) - same as 02:06:732. nah, not here.
02:56:477 (2,3,4) - are you 100% sure that players can clear this. i mean ik this is the end and you want to something hard, but i suggest that you reduce the damage somehow tt make it a bit easier for players. if you can make it this far, this little challenge should pose no problem.
everything looks fine, just 1 thing: make the 2 straight 1/2 sliders like at 02:06:732. again i think it'll give off that flowy feeling to the map.

[Extra]
This is going for app so do HP7 and OD8 to give a nice challenge for players.[/i ]HP7 OK, OD8 no... too much.
00:07:956 (9) - [i]i'm not feeling the flow in this in a app map, but this is just my personal opinion. i suggest Ctrl+R to give a nice challenge for players, and i think it'd look fun for players if they do this. nah, I gradually add on difficulty
00:12:395 (2) - *nazi* if you want, stack this perfectly. it looks weird if a note isn't stacked properly because of the transition in the map. Stacked it like this on purpose.
00:13:926 (4) - make this a straight slider because this wave slider breaks the flow in the map since the last few sliders are straight sliders. sure.
00:14:232 (5) - *nazi* go 1 grid down so that it'd align with (3). it'll look neater during gameplay.
00:20:201 (3) - make this slider symmetrical. this 2nd half of the slider curves a lot more than the 1st half. so nazi~
00:22:038 (3) - i don't think players would expect this since (5) appears as if it's a diamond pattern. so stack this on (5) to make it straightforward for players. that plays worse IMO.
01:11:936 (6) - make this slider look like the last 2 sliders. like i said before, the straight sliders breaks the flow in the map during gameplay. it might makes players feel uncomfortable because of that...well it made me feel uncomfortable. you've got a weird sense of comfort.
02:41:630 (1) - Make this a NC. there's a bug on this note. What? A bug? Where? /me gets the flyswatter
02:50:507 (9) - to make the flow smoother, make this slider look like (11). it'll give off a smooth feeling to the map during gameplay. smooth yes?
03:38:415 (2,3) - move (2) to where the kiai time is, and move (3) below the middle so that it'd form a triangle from (1-3). this pattern made me hesitate on what to hit in the song. changed it, but more to my style.
03:43:160 (7) - in order to do this, you have to move (4) around: stack this note on the triplets at the next combo, move (4) around so that it'd stack perfectly on (7). it'd look neater and it should play a bit smoother during gameplay. the current pattern looks clumped up due to the hitbursts. I like it this way and the combobursts aren't that bad IMO.
04:15:303 (4) - same as 00:12:395.
04:20:660 (7) - this note looked like it was placed there randomly. stack this on (1) to make it straightforward. i don't think players would expect a note to be there at all. randomly? nope.

I guess that's it. now before i go , i have 1 more suggestion...i remember mentioning adding finishes near the beginning of a diff, and i heardsever other small clashes in the song. if you can, add the finishes and cymbals to match that small clash in the map. anyways GL on the rank...this has potential i'll tell you that .

I have no idea what you mean with that last statement, but thanks for the real long mod. Are your mods, like, always this long? You sure put a lot of time and effort into them, don't you? You ever though about applying for MAT?

@ Regou, I ask that you don't increase the HP Drain because of the messed up Star Rating system. If you increase the HP by just 1 it will show your Hard as the most difficult from the whole set, which is something I REALLY want to avoid.

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,146 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-06-27T00:55:00+00:00

Tenshi-nyan wrote:
I have no idea what you mean with that last statement, but thanks for the real long mod. Are your mods, like, always this long? You sure put a lot of time and effort into them, don't you? You ever though about applying for MAT? ~~it's been like this since i got around 300kd...and i have no intention of being a MAT but ty for the comment.~~ i take that back, well that depends. sometimes it can be short and sometimes it can be long.

i'm saying around 00:29:997,
00:34:895
00:39:946
00:59:385 and several other places. if you listen carefully, you'd hear the small clash in the cymbals, but since you ignored them, i guess it's fine.

Snowy Dream

2,195 posts

Joined September 2009

Snowy Dream 2012-06-27T15:21:52+00:00

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
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[General]
Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [Extra] : 0
- [Lucid Dream] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Regou's Hard] : 1
- [Yuki's Easy] : 1

Inconsistency in Kiai Times: only "Extra" diff use the whole music? I think some MAT/BAT will mention it :<
- [Extra] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303
Kiai #2: Starts on 03:29:232, ends on 03:48:747
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:48:824, ends on 04:07:191
- [Lucid Dream] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303
- [Regou's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303
- [Yuki's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303

[Yuki's Easy]
01:12:396 (1) - end at 01:12:548
02:09:794 (1) - spacing

[Normal]
00:07:956 (5) - spacing?
02:00:150 - add break here?
02:56:170 (1) - try to use a 1/4 slider?

[Regou's Hard]
00:57:395 (1) - at the end of the slider, some parts are covered.something like a fly in the ointment
00:58:160 (3) - jump will do better
01:32:752 (4,5) - exchange position
02:08:262 (4) - :< not natural enough
02:23:109 - here should be a note

[Lucid Dream]
00:40:558 (1) - ....ppl will click this early
01:31:681 (1) - try a bit larger spacing
02:10:099 (1,2) - try ctrl+r?

[Extra]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at: 04:07:295 (snap to 04:07:267)
00:44:691 (3,4,5,6) - confuse ppl a lot :< (if you really want to do this, plz newcombo everyone)
00:53:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:07:956 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:59:538 (2) - ..cant find this note when first time
02:29:079 (10) - move to x:296 y:184
02:33:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - umm..why spacing so tiny suddenly?
--------------------------------------------------
okay okay that's all > <
Wonderful Mapset
But.. Star ~☆

Tenshi-nyan

1,482 posts

Joined September 2010

Topic Starter

Tenshi-nyan 2012-06-27T15:32:03+00:00

Snowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [Extra] : 0 <-- This is because the break is only 1 second long. It looks better without the letterbox!
- [Lucid Dream] : 1
- [Normal] : 1
- [Regou's Hard] : 1
- [Yuki's Easy] : 1

Inconsistency in Kiai Times: only "Extra" diff use the whole music? I think some MAT/BAT will mention it :< Irrevelant, because only the EXTRA diff uses the whole MP3.
- [Extra] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303
Kiai #2: Starts on 03:29:232, ends on 03:48:747
Kiai #3: Starts on 03:48:824, ends on 04:07:191
- [Lucid Dream] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303
- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303
- [Regou's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303
- [Yuki's Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 01:25:558, ends on 01:45:303

[Normal]
00:07:956 (5) - spacing? yeah
02:00:150 - add break here? ok.
02:56:170 (1) - try to use a 1/4 slider? using 1/4 slider in a normal diff is not a good idea.

[Extra]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at: 04:07:295 (snap to 04:07:267) k
00:44:691 (3,4,5,6) - confuse ppl a lot :< (if you really want to do this, plz newcombo everyone) I don't see how that would confuse anyone.
00:53:875 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
03:07:956 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:59:538 (2) - ..cant find this note when first time well, look better.
02:29:079 (10) - move to x:296 y:184 changed the shape minimaly instead.
02:33:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - umm..why spacing so tiny suddenly? to make it fit better between the beats.
--------------------------------------------------
okay okay that's all > <
Wonderful Mapset
But.. Star ~☆

Thanks for mod and star.

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-06-28T08:27:15+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
Alright after a 2 day break in modding, let's get started . mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting for fun

[General]
Add "Love Colored Master Spark" in the tags. that's the original title of the song.

[Regou's Hard]
Increase the HP by +1 or +2. i find it hard to see that the HP bar stays at the end of the drain. The diff is quite challenging already. I don't want to even make this harder.
00:11:477 (1) - i don't see a purpose in this slidershape. the overlaps on the other sliders bother me the most and that threw me off during gameplay. i suggest doing a different slidershape to avoid this issue, or change up this slidershape to clear the overlaps during gameplay. ...I just want to blanket 00:11:017 (3) o.o
00:15:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - to make it easier, replace this stream for a kick slider. i don't mind seeing streams in hard diffs, but not over 3 or 4 notes. it makes me think that this is an insane diff. Not that difficult (Compare with Lucid dream diff and Extra diff, imo?)
00:16:834 (4) - i see the blanket but get rid of the red point. to me, it makes the slider look ugly and it doesn't play right during gameplay. instead make this slider symmetrical and move it up so that it'd blanket the previous slider.
00:25:558 (1) - make a 4 point slider like this. that way it'll stack on both notes perfectly and it'll look neater during gameplay.Done~
00:29:691 (3,1) - similar to 00:29:997 on normal. Done~
00:32:140 (2) - how about doing Ctrl+R to give a nice challenge for players? Don't play well imo :<
00:33:977 (5,6) - same as 00:25:558, but like this. just move (5) at the middle to avoid the slight overlaps in the map. again it'll look neater during gameplay. mmm...
00:39:793 (3,1) - same as 00:29:691. Done~
01:29:232 (1) - similar to 00:25:558, but ik that you can do it. if you can do stacked notes like this, then this would be a piece of cake. o.o?
02:36:426 (4) - replace this for a 1/2 slider to follow the long pause in the guitar? I may think of this
02:43:466 (4) - Unrankable issue here. the hitburst is covering the repeat arrow and that's a no no in mapping. find a way to make the repeat arrow fully visible for players to see. Move this silghtly away from 02:43:007 (1). Not sure whether it's ok now...
02:51:119 (3) - align this to the end of (1) to avoid the alight overlap during gameplay. ok.

I guess that's it. now before i go , i have 1 more suggestion...i remember mentioning adding finishes near the beginning of a diff, and i heardsever other small clashes in the song. if you can, add the finishes and cymbals to match that small clash in the map. anyways GL on the rank...this has potential i'll tell you that .

Snowy Dream wrote:
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Regou's Hard]
00:57:395 (1) - at the end of the slider, some parts are covered.something like a fly in the ointment Should look fine now
00:58:160 (3) - jump will do better mmm o.o
01:32:752 (4,5) - exchange position 不覺得不順手嗎...
02:08:262 (4) - :< not natural enough Fixed
02:23:109 - here should be a note ok

okay okay that's all > <
Wonderful Mapset
But.. Star ~☆

Thanks!

SPOILER

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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 85027
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Final Sorcery
Artist:Demetori
Creator:Tenshi-nyan
Version:Regou's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:Love Colored Master Spark Kirisame Marisa Begierde Des Zauberer C81 Nakagawa-Kanon dksslqj regou komeiji yuki

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322,153,24640,2,2,B|308:120|260:96|208:116|192:152,2,160,8|10|10
328,312,25558,6,0,B|296:272|216:272|184:312,1,160,4|0
112,336,26017,2,0,B|52:280|80:184,1,160,8|0
136,136,26477,2,0,B|164:172|148:216,1,80,0|8
64,120,26783,6,0,B|68:76|112:56|160:52|200:92,1,160,0|0
244,136,27242,1,8
320,152,27395,1,0
396,148,27548,2,0,B|436:156|480:148,1,80
436,80,27854,1,8
368,220,28007,6,0,B|324:216|280:232|260:276|272:320,1,160
344,296,28466,1,8
136,160,28773,2,0,B|124:200|136:244,1,80
204,200,29079,1,8
280,188,29232,6,0,B|272:148|232:120|200:128|200:128|184:76,1,160,0|0
256,60,29691,2,0,B|300:76|324:108,1,80,8|0
368,248,29997,2,0,B|356:212|364:168,1,80,2|0
396,100,30303,1,10
464,68,30456,6,0,B|480:104|464:152|432:168|432:168|428:212|448:236,1,160,4|0
436,288,30915,2,0,B|412:328|368:340|324:324|296:284,1,160,8|0
248,232,31375,2,0,B|292:208|336:224,1,80,0|8
228,308,31681,6,0,B|69:333,1,160
70,334,32140,2,0,B|44:296|47:258,1,80,8|0
68,104,32446,2,0,B|84:136|72:192,1,80
0,192,32752,1,8
152,168,32905,6,0,B|240:152,1,80
320,268,33211,2,0,B|298:191,1,80,0|8
332,48,33517,2,0,B|292:124,1,80
228,80,33824,1,0
360,152,33977,1,8
396,220,34130,2,0,B|440:192|448:144|444:88|380:56|332:68|300:104,1,240,0|8
180,296,34895,5,0
332,296,35048,1,0
256,60,35354,6,0,B|256:236,1,160,4|0
192,252,35813,2,0,B|220:296|248:300|276:296|300:288|324:252,1,160,8|0
180,176,36273,2,0,B|132:196|124:236,1,80,0|8
120,304,36579,6,0,B|136:208|40:168,1,160,0|0
40,260,37038,1,8
100,104,37191,2,0,B|48:84|0:100,1,80
176,128,37497,2,0,B|216:144|264:136,1,80,0|8
264,212,37803,6,0,B|316:212|316:212|372:224|372:224|444:224,1,160
296,284,38262,2,0,B|244:284|244:284|188:272|188:272|116:272,1,160,8|0
112,344,38722,1,0
64,284,38875,1,8
88,208,39028,6,0,B|128:192|176:200|176:200|248:184,1,160
320,200,39487,2,0,B|352:224|396:216,1,80,8|0
296,124,39793,2,0,B|320:92|308:40,1,80,2|0
236,72,40099,1,10
160,56,40252,6,0,B|156:104|180:140|224:148|224:148|208:196,1,160,4|0
284,208,40711,2,0,B|268:248|220:268|176:260|144:224,1,160,8|0
88,184,41170,1,0
152,140,41324,1,8
212,184,41477,6,0,B|244:364,1,160,0|0
164,324,41936,2,0,B|148:236,1,80,8|0
292,224,42242,2,0,B|308:316,1,80
240,342,42548,1,8
164,324,42701,6,0,B|72:344,1,80
48,276,43007,1,0
80,204,43160,2,0,B|172:216,1,80,8|0
236,224,43466,1,0
208,152,43619,1,0
128,144,43773,1,8
159,215,43926,6,0,B|339:235,1,160,4|0
384,268,44385,1,8
388,192,44538,1,0
320,152,44691,2,0,B|220:140,3,80,8|8|8|4
220,124,54946,6,0,B|184:152|168:192|180:236|228:264,1,160,4|0
256,192,55405,1,8
188,56,55711,2,0,B|152:76|128:116,2,80,0|0|8
260,80,56170,6,0,B|312:80|312:80|372:104|372:104|424:104,1,160
404,180,56630,2,0,B|320:180,1,80,8|0
204,244,56936,2,0,B|292:244,1,80
180,168,57242,1,8
104,152,57395,6,0,B|96:200|128:244|180:252|216:240,1,160
180,168,57854,1,8
56,252,58160,2,0,B|84:292|136:308,1,80
188,324,58466,1,8
264,312,58619,6,0,B|424:312,1,160
492,340,59079,2,0,B|504:296|480:260,1,80,8|0
392,160,59385,2,0,B|388:200|408:236,1,80
468,180,59691,1,8
392,160,59844,6,0,B|384:120|340:92|288:92|256:136,1,160,0|0
320,176,60303,1,8
408,332,60609,2,0,B|436:292|420:248,1,80
352,280,60915,1,8
284,252,61068,6,0,B|272:300|288:340|340:352|340:352|304:384,1,160
244,376,61528,2,0,B|216:348|212:288,1,80,8|0
208,228,61834,1,0
264,172,61987,1,0
336,192,62140,1,8
404,152,62293,6,0,B|420:200|396:244,1,80
336,112,62599,2,0,B|324:68|336:24,1,80,0|8
404,72,62905,1,0
260,80,63058,2,0,B|224:100|180:88,1,80
56,152,63364,2,0,B|96:132|148:152,1,80,8|0
64,344,63824,5,0
56,268,63977,1,8
120,228,64130,1,0
196,240,64283,2,0,B|236:244|268:288,1,80,8|0
192,316,64589,1,8
196,160,64742,6,0,B|284:176|332:252,1,160,4|0
328,320,65201,1,8
120,156,65507,2,0,B|64:88,2,80,0|0|8
196,160,65966,6,0,B|284:176|332:252,1,160,0|0
396,280,66426,2,0,B|372:312|328:320,1,80,8|0
256,312,66732,1,0
180,320,66885,2,0,B|92:336,1,80,0|8
88,260,67191,6,0,B|168:248|168:248|196:168,1,160
136,128,67650,2,0,B|144:172|184:200|232:192|272:168,1,160,8|0
332,212,68109,1,0
400,176,68262,1,8
332,132,68415,6,0,B|480:216,1,160
496,140,68875,2,0,B|468:104|408:96,1,80,8|0
372,248,69181,2,0,B|400:280|448:284,1,80
292,272,69487,1,8
292,272,69640,6,0,B|248:268|248:268|184:280|184:280|128:272,1,160,0|0
112,200,70099,1,8
276,192,70405,2,0,B|260:104,2,80,0|0|8
292,272,70864,6,0,B|248:268|248:268|184:280|184:280|128:272,1,160,0|0
68,320,71324,2,0,B|52:224,1,80,8|0
56,72,71630,2,0,B|68:164,1,80
128,200,71936,1,8
196,168,72089,6,0,B|276:148|352:192,1,160,4|8
360,200,72472,1,0
368,208,72548,1,8
408,304,72701,2,0,B|400:348,2,40,0|0|0
480,228,73007,2,0,B|520:216,2,40,0|0|0
408,304,73313,6,0,B|320:260|264:372|168:320,2,240,4|8|0
408,304,74385,1,10
184,84,74691,6,0,B|136:84|96:120|88:176|124:228|160:228,1,200,4|0
184,160,75609,1,0
260,148,75762,1,0
332,124,75915,6,0,B|344:168|324:212|272:236|236:216,1,160
184,160,76681,2,0,B|176:104,1,40,0|0
228,64,76987,1,0
304,48,77140,6,0,B|344:40|388:56|412:100,2,120,0|8|0
152,60,78364,2,0,B|56:72,1,80,0|8
20,120,78824,2,0,B|48:152|104:136,1,80
168,136,79283,1,0
236,172,79436,1,0
168,212,79589,5,4
400,320,80507,1,0
352,260,80660,1,0
428,248,80813,5,4
144,328,81579,1,0
80,280,81732,1,0
120,212,81885,1,0
184,260,82038,2,0,B|224:288|232:336|208:376,1,120,4|8
144,328,82650,5,8
184,260,82803,1,8
244,216,82956,1,8
316,200,83109,1,0
392,212,83262,6,8,B|448:224|500:176|476:104,1,160,8|0
404,136,83722,2,0,B|228:108,1,160,8|0
172,104,84181,1,12
96,96,84334,2,0,B|44:92,6,40,0|0|8|8|8|8|8
128,160,84946,6,0,B|132:184|124:212,1,40
56,224,85252,1,0
116,272,85405,2,0,B|112:296|120:320,1,40,0|4
280,344,85864,5,0
360,328,86017,2,0,B|344:272|268:248|216:288,1,160,10|2
156,280,86477,2,0,B|152:324|200:352,1,80,0|10
196,212,86783,6,0,B|144:196|104:216|104:216|40:168|40:168,1,160,4|0
8,112,87242,1,10
84,108,87395,1,0
160,120,87548,2,0,B|196:136|248:140,1,80,2|0
312,120,87854,1,8
388,128,88007,5,4
368,288,88313,1,0
440,320,88466,2,0,B|456:276|440:236|404:204|348:212,1,160,10|2
304,332,88926,2,0,B|332:360|384:372,1,80,0|10
296,256,89232,6,0,B|212:236|136:292,1,160,4|0
84,344,89691,1,10
160,360,89844,1,0
64,272,89997,2,0,B|72:232|28:192,1,80,2|0
16,128,90303,1,10
88,148,90456,6,0,B|152:208|136:304,1,160,4|0
212,296,90915,1,10
212,296,91222,1,2
288,324,91375,1,0
312,252,91528,1,10
236,224,91681,6,0,B|304:264|396:264,1,160,4|0
460,292,92140,2,0,B|472:248|448:212,1,80,10|0
360,112,92446,2,0,B|352:156|376:200,1,80,2|0
436,140,92752,1,10
288,84,92905,1,4
136,116,93211,5,0
184,180,93364,2,0,B|216:140|220:96|200:64|160:40,1,160,10|2
92,48,93824,2,0,B|56:80|60:136,1,80,0|10
100,188,94130,5,4
156,248,94436,5,4
240,256,94742,5,4
316,276,94895,2,0,B|356:272|408:296,1,80,0|4
464,320,95201,1,8
396,364,95354,6,0,B|388:276|440:212,1,160,4|0
500,168,95813,2,0,B|444:236|340:208,1,160,10|2
284,188,96273,1,0
208,180,96426,1,10
132,184,96579,6,0,B|88:184|48:208|36:248|44:296,1,160,4|0
116,264,97038,2,0,B|192:304,1,80,10|0
304,208,97344,2,0,B|256:228|252:272,1,80,2|0
252,340,97650,1,10
320,384,97803,6,0,B|336:340|320:304|320:304|336:268|376:248,1,160,4|0
400,320,98262,1,10
400,320,98568,1,2
460,272,98722,1,0
456,196,98875,1,10
396,152,99028,6,0,B|376:192|380:236|412:268|480:276,1,160,4|0
456,196,99487,1,10
396,152,99640,2,0,B|352:144|312:156,1,80,0|2
247,186,99946,2,0,B|208:196|168:184,1,80,0|10
96,160,100252,1,4
96,160,100558,5,0
36,200,100711,2,0,B|56:232|104:244|148:224|172:180,1,160,10|2
96,160,101170,2,0,B|104:116|96:72,1,80,0|10
28,120,101477,6,0,B|116:112|144:24,1,160,4|0
68,24,101936,1,10
200,76,102089,2,0,B|236:92|284:88,1,80
348,116,102395,1,0
348,116,102472,1,0
348,116,102548,1,8
392,184,102701,1,4
256,352,103007,5,2
204,268,103160,1,8
308,268,103313,1,4
256,24,103619,5,2
328,148,103773,1,8
188,148,103926,1,4
84,236,104155,6,0,B|64:196,1,40,0|8
108,132,104385,1,0
188,148,104538,2,0,B|228:168|264:160,1,80,0|0
312,220,104844,1,0
388,208,104997,1,0
360,280,105150,2,0,B|392:308|384:364,1,80,0|4
256,192,115099,5,4
112,72,124895,6,0,B|120:156,1,80,4|0
80,296,125201,2,0,B|68:208,1,80,8|0
44,144,125507,1,0
120,152,125660,1,0
192,160,125813,1,8
248,216,125966,6,0,B|276:176|276:132|248:96|200:88,1,160
192,160,126426,2,0,B|168:204|176:244,1,80,8|0
228,292,126732,1,0
300,276,126885,1,0
372,288,127038,1,8
432,336,127191,1,0
432,336,127344,6,0,B|512:360,2,80,0|0|8
372,288,127803,1,0
444,264,127956,2,0,B|444:224|456:172,1,80
400,128,128262,1,8
468,92,128415,6,0,B|388:132|316:168,1,160
268,216,128875,2,0,B|304:240|348:240,1,80,8|0
252,144,129181,2,0,B|204:152|188:212,1,80
136,248,129487,1,10
208,272,129640,1,0
280,300,129793,6,0,B|320:312|364:312,1,80,4|0
216,352,130099,2,0,B|168:340|132:352,1,80,8|0
60,360,130405,1,0
80,288,130558,2,0,B|52:204,1,80,0|8
120,180,130864,6,0,B|100:140|52:128|16:144|16:144|12:96,1,160
60,48,131324,1,8
136,52,131477,1,0
208,72,131630,1,0
260,128,131783,2,0,B|272:172|268:216,2,80,0|8|0
196,176,132242,6,0,B|192:228|204:256,1,80,2|0
276,280,132548,2,0,B|360:296,1,80,8|0
424,328,132854,1,0
488,276,133007,1,0
416,248,133160,1,8
344,224,133313,6,0,B|344:184|324:140|276:120|228:128,1,160
228,128,133696,1,0
216,132,133773,1,12
256,208,133926,1,0
360,84,134079,2,0,B|388:56,4,40,8|8|8|8|0
108,172,134691,6,0,B|64:164|20:172,1,80,4|0
176,202,134997,2,0,B|216:214|264:206,1,80,10|0
328,188,135303,1,2
404,176,135456,1,0
476,200,135609,1,10
476,200,135762,6,0,B|384:192|344:120,1,160,0|0
408,80,136222,1,10
336,48,136375,2,0,B|288:40|236:48,1,80,0|2
112,84,136681,2,0,B|152:92|196:84,1,80,0|10
52,140,136987,1,0
52,140,137140,6,0,B|28:224,1,80,2|0
76,336,137446,2,0,B|100:248,1,80,10|0
156,204,137752,1,2
188,280,137905,2,0,B|224:300|268:280,1,80,0|10
340,300,138211,6,0,B|348:260|324:204|268:196|216:216,1,160
264,281,138670,1,10
340,300,138824,2,0,B|384:324|436:320,1,80,0|2
480,276,139130,1,0
464,200,139283,1,10
396,164,139436,1,0
320,164,139589,6,0,B|232:172,1,80,4|0
88,160,139895,2,0,B|168:152,1,80,10|0
224,96,140201,1,2
188,228,140354,2,0,B|172:264|180:316,1,80,0|10
248,280,140660,6,0,B|84:264,1,160
24,312,141119,1,10
20,236,141273,2,0,B|28:188|20:136,1,80,0|2
88,44,141579,2,0,B|80:84|92:132,1,80,0|10
96,200,141885,1,0
160,152,142038,6,0,B|200:140|248:152,1,80,4|0
316,160,142344,2,0,B|360:168|408:156,1,80,10|0
468,132,142650,1,2
404,84,142803,1,0
396,160,142956,2,0,B|368:240|400:324,1,160,12|12
256,136,143722,5,10
116,316,144028,1,0
88,180,144181,1,10
140,240,144334,1,0
140,240,144487,6,0,B|220:232|304:240,1,160,4|8
376,228,144946,2,0,B|380:272|356:312|308:324|256:308,1,160
300,240,145405,1,8
328,168,145558,1,0
404,152,145711,6,0,B|440:168|468:212|460:256|436:292,1,160,0|8
108,152,146324,2,0,B|72:168|44:212|52:256|76:292,1,160,0|8
136,232,146783,1,0
148,308,146936,6,0,B|188:308|220:264|212:216|212:216|248:192,1,160,0|8
308,232,147395,2,0,B|324:196|316:136|268:116|196:120,1,160
240,196,147854,2,0,B|380:100,2,160,8|0|8
472,344,148773,5,0
400,320,148926,2,0,B|368:352,2,40,0|0|10
380,244,149232,1,0
448,204,149385,6,4,B|384:272|276:244,1,160,4|8
252,308,149844,2,0,B|224:280|212:236|236:188|288:172,1,160
344,128,150303,1,8
424,136,150456,1,0
424,136,150762,5,0
344,128,150915,1,8
264,136,151068,1,0
192,160,151222,1,0
136,216,151375,2,0,B|128:256,2,40,0|0|8
116,140,151681,1,0
168,84,151834,6,0,B|204:64|252:56,1,80
260,56,152063,1,0
280,60,152140,2,0,B|352:72,3,40,8|0|0|0
336,76,152446,2,0,B|356:156|336:248,1,160,0|8
280,288,152905,1,0
280,288,152982,1,0
280,288,153058,6,0,B|292:240|344:224|392:224|432:276,1,160,0|10
356,312,153517,2,0,B|368:352,2,40
280,288,153824,1,0
208,280,153977,2,0,B|168:272|116:280,1,80,8|0
60,304,154283,6,0,B|28:228,2,80,2|0|8
124,352,154742,1,0
129,278,154895,2,0,B|133:234|129:182,1,80
80,52,155201,2,0,B|76:92|80:132,1,80,8|0
56,200,155507,6,0,B|208:120,1,160,0|8
264,92,155966,1,0
328,140,156119,2,0,B|348:104|340:56,1,80
256,168,156426,1,10
256,168,156732,6,0,B|240:244|252:336,1,160,4|8
260,344,157114,1,0
272,356,157191,1,0
360,364,157344,2,0,B|452:356,1,80
468,204,157650,2,0,B|368:212,1,80,8|0
388,210,158109,5,0
316,244,158262,1,8
324,168,158415,1,0
384,284,158568,2,0,B|360:324|312:336|264:320|244:272,1,160,0|8
315,93,159181,6,0,B|359:97|399:129|403:169|383:229,1,160,2|8
454,252,159640,2,0,B|426:284|384:296|334:280|310:236,1,160
252,208,160099,1,8
256,288,160252,2,0,B|216:260|172:256|136:272|116:320,1,160
192,340,160711,1,8
192,340,160864,2,0,B|160:180,1,160
88,168,161324,1,10
344,136,161630,6,0,B|384:148|436:136,1,80,4|0
272,112,161936,1,8
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Komeiji Yuki

1,264 posts

Joined March 2010

Komeiji Yuki 2012-06-30T11:42:46+00:00

change a bit

about the ar I would see the other modders' opinions to change it

http://puu.sh/EM4L

DarkDunskin

1,875 posts

Joined April 2009

DarkDunskin 2012-07-01T11:07:39+00:00

Finally, the long awaited Taiko diff is done~

http://puu.sh/F0xK

Taiko BG

Not bad. Not bad at all~

Tshemmp

1,405 posts

Joined June 2011

Tshemmp 2012-07-01T13:39:37+00:00

Demetori <3
Please see everything as suggestion.

[Extra]
00:02:446 - the 1 in the measure is very strong, I would place an object here, especially since you mapped 3 beats 00:03:058, but only the last 2 ones 00:02:446 (these parts are the same basically). You mapped this beat 00:04:895, too.
00:07:956 (9) - 2 circles instead like before?
00:09:946 (1,2) - with this arrangement I expect (2) to start already 00:10:405 (look at 00:34:130 (1,2) to understand what I mean) This pattern is very common nowadays but you mapped it differently here. You should increase the spacing or add a circle between them to avoid this.
00:11:783 (1,2) - huuuge gap, doesn't play well, you should map something here
00:12:395 (2,3) - this feels very static, too
00:15:762 (7) - NC here already?
00:43:773 (3) - add one repeat maybe?
00:46:375 (1,2,3) - 6 sliders in row starting on the off-beat... While the first 3 ones still feel good, the last three ones just play awkward imo (the music doesn't really imply this pattern).
00:54:946 (8,1,2) - I don't like the gaps between these. I highly suggest this:

SPOILER

01:32:446 (1) - why a NC here?
01:33:364 (2,3,4,5) - because of the shape of the previous slider I expect this triangle to go counter-clockwise and start from the point where (3) currently is. This would increase the flow much more.
01:34:436 (1,2,3) - I don't like this part so much, because you didn't map the beat at 01:34:895.
01:44:155 (1) - this one feels awkward (especially with the following sliders) but I can't find a really good solution. The only thing I can think of is maybe to add a circle 01:44:079 (you did this 02:57:089 too and this is basically the same issue)
01:45:380 (1) - this one should really start 01:45:303 already since it feels really strange not the click on the 1 in a measure but 1/16 after this. This means you have to rework the slider part before that.
01:51:119 (1,2) - why 2 sliders? Nothing in the music indicates that.
02:12:242 (5) - NC here already
02:23:951 - add a circle here, you did this in the previous part and it was awesome!
02:24:487 - again a very strong downbeat where I want to click and not to end a slider
02:24:792 (2) - this one doesn't fit since the tone changes during it at 02:24:946 (and because of the previous point the rhythm feels a bit strange)
02:30:992 - add a circle here
02:31:604 - ^
03:12:242 (1) - yeah, this clearly doesn't play nice although it is on the 1 in the measure, because one has this long tone 03:12:089. A long slider like before might be the best solution.
03:26:783 (6) - delete this and just add a circle at 03:26:936, this repeat slider just starts too early.
03:28:926 - a strong beat here, you should add a circle and unstack 03:29:079 (1,2), remove the NC on 03:29:079 (1) and add it 03:29:232 (2) instead. It should look like this then:

SPOILER

03:31:681 - there is a long tone here, turn the slider into a circle and add a long slider as usual afterwards (and delete the following 2 circles) OR just delete 03:31:834 (1) since this one is the real problem
03:38:109 (1,2,3) - like 01:34:436
03:45:150 - like 03:31:681
03:57:395 - like 03:38:109
04:21:502 (4) - this one doesn't exist
04:26:936 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why this low spacing? There is nothing in the music indicating that.

[Lucid Dream]
00:12:089 - I don't like this gap
00:30:915 (2) - why does this end on e blue tick?
00:42:854 - nice, this is a very cool idea!
00:55:405 (2) - why does this end on e blue tick?
01:00:303 (2) - this curve looks a bit ugly, maybe you can move the second node a bit down and to the left
01:07:191 (1) - really... I don't think these fit (or play nice)
01:12:242 (2,3,4) - this stream would feel better 01:12:089
01:25:099 - pleeeaaase add a circle here and 01:25:252, this gap is just horrible because the song goes into the climax and you are doing nothing during this. In the end it should look like this (please notice the NC change too):

SPOILER

01:29:232 (1) - yeah, you know what I mean
01:43:926 (1) - .
02:23:262 (1,2) - nah, turn this 2 into a slider, it plays nicer
02:23:722 (1,2) - ^
02:30:992 - add circle here
02:31:604 - ^
02:32:216 - ^

[Regou's Hard]
00:22:956 - there are so many NCs here, I think it might be a bit difficult to read. Maybe remove the NC on 00:22:956 (1) or re-arrange the pattern.
00:34:130 (6) - this slider should actually end 00:34:436 (ctrl+shift+s 0,667x ?). Then you can add a circle 00:34:589.
00:37:038 (2,3) - sure about this jump?
00:44:691 (4) - double repeats are awkward, remove atleast one and add a circle instead (one wants to click on the last beat before the break and don't forget the finish). I suggest removing the remaining repeat aswell and adding a circle insteand.
01:13:313 (1) - this repeat... where does it fit the music? There is a note 01:13:926, you should map to this.
01:18:364 (2) - since you put a NC on every first beat in each measure in this part you should add a NC here too
01:24:946 - why decreased SV here, it doesn't fit at all (or at least not 0,5x, this is too much)
01:24:946 (1,2) - swap them
02:18:670 (2) - this one is not exactly under the end of 02:17:905 (4)
02:30:992 - add circle here?
02:43:466 (4) - this one is nearly impossible to read
02:53:454 (3,4) - ? Intended that they are on a yellow tick? This whole part should look like this (looking from 02:53:568):

SPOILER

[Normal]
AR 6 please. Otherwise the gap to Hard (AR 8 woul be too high).
00:12:395 (2) - this one is on the offbeat but there is no transition to it whatsoever. You should add something 00:12:242. Take a look at this one for a detailed explanation.
02:05:813 (2,3) - the placement of (3) is not so good imo, you should ctrl+j it and place it like this:

SPOILER

02:52:191 (2) - this one is partially covered by the hitburst of 02:50:813 (4) making it not possible to say wether it is a circle or a slider
02:56:170 (1,2,3,4) - delete (1) and move (2,3,4) two ticks back in the timeline. Currently it just plays awkward.

[Yuki's Easy]
Just wanted to point out, that I think the AR is okay.
00:28:007 (3) - the beginning of this slider is way too curved, it looks ugly u.u
01:06:732 - finally non-orthogonal sliders \o/ ;D
02:04:895 (1) - not evenly curved. Come on, it is not hard to make good-looking sliders.
02:09:793 (1) - ^

Yo, that's it.

Last edited by Tshemmp 2012-07-02T23:21:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Regou

1,916 posts

Joined July 2010

Regou 2012-07-01T13:57:17+00:00

[quote="Tshemmp"]Demetori <3
Please see everything as suggestion.

[Regou's Hard]
00:22:956 - there are so many NCs here, I think it might be a bit difficult to read. Maybe remove the NC on 00:22:956 (1) or re-arrange the pattern. It's fine for me... ._. Here's something called approch circle, right?
00:34:130 (6) - this slider should actually end 00:34:436 (ctrl+shift+s 0,667x ?). Then you can add a circle 00:34:589. I'll think of this one.
00:37:038 (2,3) - sure about this jump? Why not? This kind of just is obviously easier than jumps in other two Insane diff D:
00:44:691 (4) - double repeats are awkward, remove atleast one and add a circle instead (one wants to click on the last beat before the break and don't forget the finish). I suggest removing the remaining repeat aswell and adding a circle insteand. Change them into 2 sliders.
01:13:313 (1) - this repeat... where does it fit the music? There is a note 01:13:926, you should map to this. Let people have a little break here please D:
01:18:364 (2) - since you put a NC on every first beat in each measure in this part you should add a NC here too Nope, I don't want 1-note combo appear
01:24:946 - why decreased SV here, it doesn't fit at all (or at least not 0,5x, this is too much) 1.0x looks awkward here...well.
01:24:946 (1,2) - swap them okay.
02:18:670 (2) - this one is not exactly under the end of 02:17:905 (4) Fixed
02:30:992 - add circle here? Nope D:
02:43:466 (4) - this one is nearly impossible to read ...I just don't want to hide the reversearrow..orz
02:53:454 (3,4) - ? Intended that they are on a yellow tick? This whole part should look like this (looking from 02:53:568):

SPOILER

Thanks!

SPOILER

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496,140,68875,2,0,B|468:104|408:96,1,80,8|0
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292,272,69487,1,8
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300,276,126885,1,0
372,288,127038,1,8
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264,92,155966,1,0
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Komeiji Yuki

1,264 posts

Joined March 2010

Komeiji Yuki 2012-07-01T21:25:06+00:00

Tshemmp wrote:
[Yuki's Easy]
Just wanted to point out, that I think the AR is okay.
00:28:007 (3) - the beginning of this slider is way too curved, it looks ugly u.u actually it's ctrl+h from 00:25:558 (1) :l "
01:06:732 - finally non-orthogonal sliders \o/ ;D o_o
02:04:895 (1) - not evenly curved. Come on, it is not hard to make good-looking sliders. fix
02:09:793 (1) - ^ fix

Yo, that's it.

http://puu.sh/F7EG

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Frizz

4,131 posts

Joined April 2011

Frizz 2012-07-07T05:59:42+00:00

Hi there, from A certain lazy modding queue
Holy shit begierde des zauberer \o\

Perfect mapset, you're making a music out of those hitsounds. I guess there is almost nothing that I can find.
Just gonna give some thoughts.

[Normal]
CS-1 considering how the spacing is in here?

[Regou's Hard]
I personally think that this map is a bit too difficult for Hard, just sayin'
01:15:609 (2) - clap?
01:16:681 (2) - clap @ end?

[Extra]
00:44:691 (3,6) - 1 grid to the left and they'll be aligned perfectly
03:07:956 (4,5,6,7) - Line these up?

[Lucid Dream]
02:02:446 (1,2,3) - Maybe make the sliders all lined down like 02:02:905 (4) ? Also, move 02:02:752 (3) - 1 grid up to align it better
02:03:364 (1,2,3,) - ^ ?
02:48:977 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make it like this http://puu.sh/Gv4H I personally like it though
02:50:201 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ?

Yeh sorry for the shit mod, the map is just way too perfect for me ;_;

Regou

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Regou 2012-07-26T16:49:31+00:00

Frizz925 wrote:
Hi there, from A certain lazy modding queue
Holy shit begierde des zauberer \o\

Perfect mapset, you're making a music out of those hitsounds. I guess there is almost nothing that I can find.
Just gonna give some thoughts.

[Regou's Hard]
I personally think that this map is a bit too difficult for Hard, just sayin' The BPM is so high, meh D:
01:15:609 (2) - clap?
01:16:681 (2) - clap @ end?
Leave them for Tenshi, I'm not good at hitsounding ._.
Yeh sorry for the shit mod, the map is just way too perfect for me ;_;

wait, fixed one pattern, try

http://puu.sh/LUey

Saten

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Saten 2012-08-23T19:15:41+00:00

Random mod from #modreqs~

[Extra]
00:34:589 (2,1) - Stack (1)'s tail properly?
00:37:803 (4,2) - 1 grid down
00:40:252 (4,5) - 1 grid right
00:56:170 (5) - 1 grid down
01:05:201 (2,5) - stack the tails properly
01:09:640 (4) - 2 grids right
01:27:854 (4,1) - Swap NC's? looks better if the first stacked is NC'ed imo.
01:30:303 (3,1) - as above
02:16:987 (4) - 2 grids right
02:27:854 (5,10) - Stack properly
02:41:630 (1) - why NC?
02:50:813 (10,1) - Stack (1)'s tail properly
03:01:068 (4,2) - 2 grids down
03:05:813 (3,7) - stack (7)'s tail properly
03:53:568 (6,7,1) - NC on (6) instead
03:55:864 (6,3) - stack (3)'a tail properly
04:11:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why isn't (5) stacked?
04:33:517 (7) - NC?

[Lucid]
00:30:915 (2,3) - I know it's close but at least use 1,0x spacing here
00:42:854 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - looks way better if you used 1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2 instead
00:55:405 (2,3) - closer please?
01:07:191 (1,2) - as above
01:29:232 (1,2) - ^ but these parts doesn't sound like doubles to me (sounds like a regular 1/2 beat)
01:36:579 (7,2) - Stack properly?
01:43:926 (1,2) - Here's a real double beat, why didn't you stack them like this instead?

[Regou]
00:56:936 (3,1) - stack properly?
01:09:487 (4,1) - Swap NC? looks better on a stack
01:24:946 (1,2,3) - This part could be tricky, why not 0,75x instead?
01:38:722 (4,1) - Stack properly
01:55:099 (1) - This part looks lazy lol
02:07:191 (6,1) - Swap NC?
02:15:609 (5,1) - ^
02:16:987 (5,1) - ^
02:24:334 (4,1) - ^
02:32:905 (5,6,1) - NC on (5) instead

[Normal]
Soft sliderticks would fit better than silenced ones
01:14:232 (4) - Why did you silence the beginning of the slider?
01:49:589 (1,1,2,1,1) - This looks lazy too

02:50:813 (4,2) - stack properly?

[Yuki]
You're constantly using muted slider ticks which isn't really allowed. As I mentioned before, soft would fit better than muted ones.
01:25:559 (1,1) - Wouldn't sliders like this look better?

SPOILER

01:50:202 (1,1,1) - Why these lazy looking parts? could be filled with nice shaped sliders or so~
02:19:284 (6,1) - swap NC's
02:21:733 (4,1) - ^
02:23:263 (1) - remove NC
02:23:263 (1) - swap NC's
02:29:080 (4,1) - ^
02:31:529 (3,1) - ^
02:46:223 (3,1) - ^
02:48:671 (4,1) - ^

The mapset was already nice so yeah

Good luck~~

Tenshi-nyan

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Topic Starter

Tenshi-nyan 2017-06-07T10:25:25+00:00

To think I made this 5 years ago.
I'm back (semi-active?) and I'm gonna try to get this map finished and maybe even ranked.
It might take a while, though.

Regou

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Regou 2017-06-07T16:38:26+00:00

unbelievable it's back to pending :OOOOOOOOOO

DarkDunskin

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DarkDunskin 2017-06-28T18:51:34+00:00

Wtf it means I've get back to work then too ^^"
Nevermind, good to see you haven't forgotten about this.

Komeiji Yuki

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Komeiji Yuki 2017-12-02T17:20:00+00:00

komeiji yuki is still here

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