JoJo wrote:

Hi meimei-chan again :>
OK~ Don't kudosu this since I have already get 2 from last post.

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. Reset your timing section according to this image.↓
   [attachment=1:523a7]{Y9_512FSK@5[3SC4TE4VIH.jpg[/attachment:523a7]Select 4/4 common and add another timing section on 00:30:843 (4/4) to fix the downbeat for all diffs. Offset has no change so do not need resnapping.
2. Volume setting is too low. Sometimes players determine whether they have caught the notes on beat by hitsound so.
3. By the way add a mute sliderslide hitsound since this song is quiet but ruined by noisy sliderslide.
4. I don't know why you have set fountain effect on 00:44:829, not really fit the music.
5. Add storyboard of mapper's ID for different parts. Just suggestion.

[Collab]

1. 00:06:813 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
2. 00:13:360 (4) - New combo I guess.
3. 00:29:444 (1,2) - Switch new combo.
4. 00:38:185 (1,4) - ^ For map reading and downbeat. Then remove new combo on 00:40:283 (1).

[Normal]

1. 0.8x spacing looks not good for gameplay. All notes are end to end. (Just comment.)
2. 00:04:969 (5,1) - Switch new combo.
3. 00:07:766 (4,1) - I prefer switching new combo here. Then looks you have to fix the spacing between them.
4. 00:16:507 (1,2) - Little spacing issue I guess.

[Easy]

1. Same to Normal. 1.0x DS is much better than 0.8.
2. 00:24:497 (0) - Delete useless timing section.
3. 00:32:241 (2,3) - Fix the spacing here (Try move slider 3 some grids left).
4. 00:33:640 (3,4) - Try to avoid overlap.
5. 00:37:137 (1,2) - ^ Same, looks not good, try something like this↓
   
   SPOILER

   [attachment=0:523a7]$2A$9G)68DBL00`}O~VX{AP.jpg[/attachment:523a7]

That's it~ Good luck and I'm looking forward to your 1st ranked map! Go go go~

Cilvery wrote:

Hi~ <request from my queue>

[Easy]
00:06:367 - add whistle

00:11:262 - ^

00:36:437 - ^

00:37:137 - remove whistle

00:37:836 - add whistle

[Normal]
00:09:514 - add whistle

[Collab]
00:10:913 - add finish or whistle

00:11:262 - ^

00:11:612 - ^

00:11:962 - add whistle

00:13:011 - ^
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good luck~

Ayu wrote:

From my modding queue~

[Easy]

You use a lot of basic patterns, nothing wrong with that. Although you should work on your small sliders.
00:02:172 (1) - Maybe make sliders like this more like; http://puu.sh/BxdA Fix
00:03:570 (2) - For this, copy paste (1) and Ctrl+J & Ctrl+R Okay

furthermore nothing wrong with this difficulty. lol thx anyway =w=''

[Normal]

I advice to don't make overlaps like 00:07:766 (5,6). Use a bigger spacing so they don't overlap.
The song has a BPM of 85 only, so there's nothing wrong with using a distance spacing of 1.2x for Normal. Actually i don't really quite understand what is overlap means \o/ =A='' I tried my best though @w@"

00:04:969 (1) - Not sure if this is supposed to be an arc, but 2 anchors should be enough. what?
00:04:969 (1,2) - You could also make it like this: http://puu.sh/Bxgn (2 anchors instead of 3 on (1) and I lowered the anchor from (2))
00:16:158 (6) - This slider doesn't feels right to me. It's fine to me though XD
00:26:297 (6) - This slider is pretty ugly. Try to just make a normal slider with a bow. Okay
00:27:346 - 00:37:486 - A bit too much straight, if you ask me. Try to make it more smooth. Okay
00:40:633 (5) - Slider end overlaps (3) Fix
00:42:381 (2,2) - You shouldn't use red-anchors at a song like this. The song is way too slow paced for these kind of sliders. Okay
00:49:724 (4) - Ugly slider. The anchors aren't placed in a good way and the red anchor at the slider end is totally unnecessary Fix

[Collab]

00:08:815 (3,4) - Just make a single slider out of this; http://puu.sh/BxjW http://puu.sh/BxjZ Fix
00:30:144 (2,3) - ^ Fix
00:32:591 (6) - Like I mentioned before, This song is too slow paced for sliders like this. Okay
00:40:283 (6,7) - Put a note on 00:40:283 and make a slider from 00:40:633 to 00:41:332 Okay
00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Use less spacing and try to make it more pretty; http://puu.sh/BxlB Fix

Suggestion; Make a Storyboard with the names for collab, so everyone can see who mapped which part. Okay

[Overall]

The beatmap needs work before it's worth a bubble. Try to work on your sliders. Here's a nice thread about sliders: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Good luck with your beatmap Thank you :3

kurohana wrote:

m4m :3

General

I'm not sure about kiai times... but this is up to you :3 It's okay to me

Normal

00:03:220 (2) - maybe like this? Fix
00:16:158 (6) - new combo Fix

and use soft-sliderslide, it will sound much better :3

good luck :3 Thank you

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello Shana-chan~! >w< Modding from in-game request~

• [General]

1. Reduce all your hitsound's volume by 5% to 10%? They're too loud too fit the bgm imo
2. Maybe you should remove the kiai fountain placed on 00:44:829. I kinda don't like it, but it's up to you.
3. Turn your sliderslide's sound into silent, they're making weird sounds that don't fit the music :<
   
   [Easy]
4. 00:42:032 (1) - Move this 1 grid downward so it would be blanketed nicely by 00:38:535 (4).
5. 00:49:724 (3) - Turn it into this, to blanket the previous slider's end nicely :3
   
   [Normal]
6. 00:18:255 (4) - Turn it into this. If you did, fix the spacing of the next circles.
7. 00:22:102 (1) - Move this tick 3 grids to the left and 1 grid downwards.
   
   [Collab]
   clear~

[color=#FF4000]Sorry about the nazi stuff, but it will help on aesthetics :3
Nice map so star~ Good luck Shana-chan >w<

smallboat wrote:

hello thank mod my map ^^

this time I mod your map

i can speak little english,sorry ><


easy

00:23:500 (3) - add note? add

normal
00:22:102 (1) - +hitsound? add

collab
00:49:549 (8) - add note ? no..
00:51:472 (4) - note + whistle sound no..

your song is good

newtoniorock8 wrote:

hi ~ #modreqs ~ Hi Thanks for mod ^^''

SPOILER

uhmm . pls use this one for the sliderslide >.< soft-sliderslide

Thanks ! Added !
Easy
00:08:815 (4) - / 00:20:353 (3) - add whistle ~ >.< fix ~
Normal
00:04:969 / 00:46:227 (3) - add finish ~ fix ~
00:20:703 (5) - remove this slider then add a hitobject here 00:21:053 >.< ermm no?
00:51:472 (2) - remove this ~ fix ~
Collab
00:12:661 (2) - / 00:43:430 (1) - / 00:44:130 (5) - / 00:48:675 (5) - add whistle ~ fix all ~

SPOILER

thats all >.< Goodluck ~ Nice Collab :33 Thank you >///<!!

Lanturn wrote:

Hello from " https://osu.ppy.sh/p/mod "

The roulette has chosen YOUR MAP to be my next mod! *Background Cheering and Applause!*

[General]
Tags:
Add: Disability Girls | As its the English name of the game, and it says right in your little picture on your beatmap listing

Lead-in Time: I don't believe you really need lead-in time for this song as the first note hits more than 2 seconds later. If you want though, you can make your lead-in time 828, so the first note will hit exactly 3 seconds after the song loads. (If you want 4 seconds, use 1828)

Sounds: Why not use a silent slider-slide? I personally think it fits with this song: http://puu.sh/2HHgJ.wav |

[Easy]
00:32:241 (2,3,4) - There is a little bit of a gap between each of these notes.
00:42:032 (1) - A bit loud for the volume you lowered before this. Maybe lower it by 10-20 and use what you have currently for the next notes?


[Normal]
Raise the settings up a bit. There is quite a gap between this difficulty and the collab. HP Drain / OD could easily go up by 1 more

Also I think the Distance between these notes is a bit too small.. 1.0 would have been better

Volume: No volume should go below 15-20% unless its the end of a spinner or slider. I would highly suggest raising the overall volume of this song by at least 5-10%

00:22:102 (1) - This slider doesn't seem needed.. delete it?
00:30:144 (2) - Volume at the end of this slider seems a bit too quiet, Raise it by 10%

[Collab]
Wa.... there's a video to this? Why isn't this on your Easy/Normal Difficulties?!?!? Add them!
00:04:269 (1,2) - Why not just combine these two into one slider? It would honestly play better, also check the volume and such like I suggested before
00:06:717 (6) - Volume here as well doesn't really need a decrease. Seems pointless
00:09:689 (4) - this piano note hits an 1/8th earlier. I realize you don't want to use 1/8ths, but this 1/4 is just hitting air at this point.. remove?
00:24:374 (3) - again. This note hits air.....
00:32:241 (5,6) - these would be better as two 1/2 sliders instead of a slider + circle to match the piano.
The rest of the song feels a bit overmapped, but I won't dig into it anymore. I'll leave it up to you to decide what or what not to remove.
00:50:773 (3,4) - A bit too much for a simple song. If you want to use the 1/4 here, then at least flip the slider to end near the 1/4 note.


Sorry for the short mod, good luck!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   Four Leaf Studios Fix

[Easy]

1. 00:28:745 (5,6) - blanket correctly Err what? can you explain it to me?
2. 00:30:843 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:32:241 (2,3) - avoid overlap Fix
4. 00:33:640 (3,4) - blanket correctly
5. 00:38:535 (4) - suggetion
   
6. 00:46:227 (6,1) - avoid overlap Fix

[Normal]

1. 00:08:465 (6,2,3) - avoid overlap Fix
2. 00:18:955 (1,2,3) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
3. 00:25:948 (5,6) - not stack is better for good flow Fix
   
4. 00:44:829 (1,2) - I prefer to combine into 1 slider
5. 00:47:626 (1,2) - not good flow Fix

[Collab]

1. 00:02:172 (1,2,3,4) - conform DS
2. 00:34:689~00:38:185- you can blanket more correctly. how about this? Fix
   
   SPOILER

   270,87,34689,2,0,B|322:66|363:103,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   306,159,35388,2,0,B|252:173|241:228,1,100,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   321,237,36088,6,0,B|350:284|405:278,1,100,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   391,199,36787,2,0,B|422:153|394:104,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   328,150,37486,2,0,B|282:118|233:146,1,100,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   279,212,38185,1,0,0:0:0:0:

3. 00:42:381 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - make more symmetric (and I suggest to increase DS) Nothing wrong here
4. 00:47:976 (2,3,4) - curve more for good flow
   
   SPOILER

   

good relax map <3
~Good Luck~

xLoupGarou wrote:

I'll give a a star instead . . . btw the map is fine to me

cmn_891127 wrote:

[Hitsound]

1. Use 0-byte .wav file to blank your soft-sliderslide.wav, and change all timing line to sampleset soft-1
   blank hitsound link: http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav Thank you~ done ~

[Timing line]

1. Normal - 00:23:500 - useless, remove done ~
2. Normal - 00:32:678 - unsnapped umm.. sorry i didnt understand notes are snap and there's no timing here..
3. Normal - 00:44:130 - useless, and you don't have custom sampleset (unless you use the blank slider) done ~

[Slider tail]

1. Normal - 00:45:178 (2) - you double click the ending point, remove one done remove it
2. Collab - 00:08:815 (3) - ^ done remove it
3. Collab - 00:30:144 (2) - ^ done remove it
4. Easy - 00:46:227 (6) - ^ done remove it
5. Easy - 00:44:130 (4) - ^ done remove it

[Metadata]

• Now Japanese can be used in Metadata

1. Source: かたわ少女 okay~

If you don't like the hitsound of slider tick, just use tick rate 1. If you change this one, then don't forget to double check the useless timing line. ohh i think i like how mine are now ^^ thank you

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