Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Hinacle ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags.
2. Close Letterbox pls.
3. I see 'normal-sliderslide.wav,normal-sliderslide2.wav' already fail,change other pls.

[Insane]

1. 00:26:853 (2) - Add new combo and Remove 00:26:510 (1).

[Easy]

1. 01:22:567 - You are forgot add red line to here.

That's all ~ Nice mapset and moe song ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

Tarantino wrote:

I really like this map. You did a great job here~

I just came to say that your offset is a bit wrong, and it annoyed me a bit while playing haha.
I think the offset should be 617 or 618, -7 or -8ms from your current offset.






And a little typo you might want to fix

wmfchris wrote:

- N:C1 whistle is same as the N deafult whistle...why do you put an excess file there?
- It's odd that the hard is called "fumis" while easy is called easy but the same mapper mapped them. Use [fumis' hard] and [fumis' easy].

[Hard]
00:14:682 (2) - stack on the beginning of (1) instead of the ending like coming (3,4)?
00:26:339 (8) - [Nazi] left 1 grid lv4 for proper spacing
00:46:910 (2) - (136,184) for correct spacing, I don't see the reason to make this one farther
01:02:853 (4) - place this in the middle of (3,5) (e.g. 296,80) otherwise the jump of (3,4,5) looks a bit odd

[Taiko]
00:12:367 - the duplet sounds odd here and it didn't appear elsewhere in the song so better remove it

sounds nice, but get it SP+12 first............

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[General]

1. Pls fix 'Title,TitleUnicode,Artist,ArtistUnicode' to same.
2. Double note stack on same point in hard diff(Shift+Ctrl+A check pls).

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ Looks all fine now ~

Let's go again :3

Andrea wrote:

~fumis' easy~

Rename it to "fumis' Easy".

~fumis' hard~

Rename it to "fumis' Hard".

00:52:739 (1,1,1) - I don't think this new combo spam is really necessary.

~Insane~

01:08:853 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really dislike how this stream sounds.

Andrea wrote:

Much better :3

Ranked~