This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年3月11日 at 10:19:59

Artist: nano.RIPE
Title: Hana no Iro
Source: Hanasaku Iroha
BPM: 180.02
Filesize: 7244kb
Play Time: 03:52
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.74 stars, 212 notes)
2. Hard (4.83 stars, 485 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 695 notes)
4. Normal (2.65 stars, 239 notes)

Download: nano.RIPE - Hana no Iro
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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・:*:・ハ ナ ノ イ ロ ・:*:・ READY for MOD

☆;:*:;☆;:*:;☆“ Detail ”☆;:*:;☆;:*:;☆

Easy : Finished
Normal : Finished
Hard : Finished
Insane : Finished
Lyric : Finished


MOD 1 : Odaril ( Timing Help )
MOD 2 : Byakugan249
MOD 3 : CherryCherry
MOD 4 : goodbye
MOD 5 : Leorda
MOD 6 : frost-b-spec
MOD 7 : kanpakyin

Full Submitted date : 2012/1/22

มาดาวก่อนเลย

がんばれ～

alright lets see wat we got. oh yea i found this on #modreqs. please tell me why u ignored any of my suggestions. i want to improve my modding if u do so.

General:
no problems here

Easy:
00:11:512(4) - add a finish?
00:49:174(2,3,4,5) - replace these for a slider?
01:13:838(1,1) - i dont think beginners will be able to recover for this. i suggest that u delete the circle
01:32:169(1) - try This instead?
02:33:496(1,2) - same as 00:49:174 so that itd make a slider to circle pattern
02:49:161(1) - same as 01:32:169 but a bit different
02:52:494(2) - flip it like This?
03:03:493(1) - replace this for a slider that ends at 03:04:492 or 03:04:826
03:19:491(5) - idk how u make that slider tick a hitsound but the 2nd tick isnt making a hitsound. change the 2nd tick from soft to normal
03:42:821(1) - same as 01:32:169
IMO theres too many spinners for this diff. there's a few opportunities where u can replace the spinner for notes

Normal:
18 spinners O_O ok lets see wat i can find
00:37:509(4) - how about making a curved slider kind of like This. that way itd make an easier path for players
00:52:840(1) - remove the spinner and add slider at 00:53:307 and end it till 00:54:174
01:02:173(1) - try This instead?
01:12:159(3) - Ctrl+J for an easier path?
01:14:171(1) - This?
02:09:832(1) - ^
02:49:744(1) - ^
03:03:493(1) - ^ or add circles at the white ticks? either will work IMO
03:13:825(1) - ^
03:42:821(1) - ^

Hard:
03:35:489(1) - Try This?
03:42:821(1) - ^

Insane:
00:32:843(7,1) - spacing

this is the best i can do. Star and GL S i R i R u-sama...i mean God of Storyboards

thank a lot for your MOD !!
I'll fix it when i back home.

ps.I added only Lyric on this time XD
I dont have power to make sb for full ver, haha

EDIT

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright lets see wat we got. oh yea i found this on #modreqs. please tell me why u ignored any of my suggestions. i want to improve my modding if u do so.

General:
no problems here

Easy:
00:11:512(4) - add a finish? Fixed
00:49:174(2,3,4,5) - replace these for a slider?
01:13:838(1,1) - i dont think beginners will be able to recover for this. i suggest that u delete the circle Fixed
01:32:169(1) - try This instead?
02:33:496(1,2) - same as 00:49:174 so that itd make a slider to circle pattern
02:49:161(1) - same as 01:32:169 but a bit different
02:52:494(2) - flip it like This?
03:03:493(1) - replace this for a slider that ends at 03:04:492 or 03:04:826
03:19:491(5) - idk how u make that slider tick a hitsound but the 2nd tick isnt making a hitsound. change the 2nd tick from soft to normalhttp://puu.sh/ehy4
03:42:821(1) - same as 01:32:169
IMO theres too many spinners for this diff. there's a few opportunities where u can replace the spinner for notes

Normal:
18 spinners O_O ok lets see wat i can find
00:37:509(4) - how about making a curved slider kind of like This. that way itd make an easier path for players Fixed
00:52:840(1) - remove the spinner and add slider at 00:53:307 and end it till 00:54:174 Fixed
01:02:173(1) - try This instead?
01:12:159(3) - Ctrl+J for an easier path?
01:14:171(1) - This?
02:09:832(1) - ^ Fixed
02:49:744(1) - ^
03:03:493(1) - ^ or add circles at the white ticks? either will work IMO
03:13:825(1) - ^
03:42:821(1) - ^

Hard:
03:35:489(1) - Try This?
03:42:821(1) - ^

Insane:
00:32:843(7,1) - spacing changed a bit

いろは！あたしも見てたから大好き
自分で作れなかったから期待してます♪
ぼく初心者視点なので・・・・・　それでよければ参考程度に・・・・ＭＯＤしてみますた。

【EASY】
02:48:994　早くきてびっくりしたぷぅ(´･ω｀･)スピン苦手子ちゃんな私なのでか・・・・・？イージーだと思ってのんびりしてた。

【NORMAL】
02:47:828　note 追加ですぐ前と同じ音ｏｒリズムになるから叩きやすい気がしましたー

【ＨＡＲＤ】
01:23:504　こっからブレイクまでめっちゃ好きです！

ヾ(ﾟωﾟ)ﾉ゛･:*:･ﾟ★,｡･:*:･ﾟ☆ ありがとニャ！

ばか誕生日じゃないよ！

[general]
any tags?(bakaru toka

[Insane]
00:53:590 (4,5) - nazi spacing
01:04:172 (9,10) - ^
01:15:255 (8,9) - ^
01:49:667 (5) - add clap for jump?.?
02:11:498 (3) - make a straight line with 1&2?
03:11:492 (6) - finish at begin
03:22:157 (3) - ^
03:26:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I guess you can make it jumper this part...
03:32:823 (6) - finish at begin

[Hard]
00:43:341 (8) - spacing?
00:53:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this song's bpm is 180...maybe this stream is hard to play. how about change to slider repeat?


:<you can add more finish...

やっぱり一番かわいいのってみんちだと思うんですよね

Suzully wrote:

やっぱり一番かわいいのってみんちだと思うんですよね

おはなが良いの♡

goodbye wrote:

ばか誕生日じゃないよ！

[general]
any tags?(bakaru toka

[Insane]
00:53:590 (4,5) - nazi spacing fixed
01:04:172 (9,10) - ^ fixed
01:15:255 (8,9) - ^ fixed
01:49:667 (5) - add clap for jump?.? fixed
02:11:498 (3) - make a straight line with 1&2?
03:11:492 (6) - finish at begin fixed
03:22:157 (3) - ^ fixed
03:26:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I guess you can make it jumper this part...
03:32:823 (6) - finish at begin fixed

[Hard]
00:43:341 (8) - spacing? fixed
00:53:174 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this song's bpm is 180...maybe this stream is hard to play. how about change to slider repeat? fixed


:<you can add more finish...

謝謝～～～～～ eve

give ruru's 鬼畜nice map my already less star >w</

thanks for testing a lot of time ~

bakaru ganbatte

KanaRin wrote:

bakaru ganbatte

謝謝！！！　（´・∀・`）

譜面制作応援0.0/

ほびろんろんろん！　

がんばってください！

ほびろん～～～～～～～

Nyuwon Sewu~ (say "Mongo", it's Indonesian language)

General
* No tags? Are you sure?


Easy
* Slider velocity multiplier 0.65x is kinda too slow for beginners, and it's makes confusing for them. Consider to remove it?

00:48:841 (1) - Add finish here, like 00:38:175 (1)
01:55:500 (1) - ^
02:51:494 (1) - Too soon from spinner, you have to delete it or change it. Otherwise, beginners can't reach this after spin the spinner
02:55:160 (1) - Why new combo?
03:45:155 (1) - Same issue as 02:51:494 (1)
03:51:820 (3) - You using short slider with many repeating slider. This makes confusing for beginners about when the slider is end


Normal
* AR 6 is too high for normal diff, AR -1 please

00:08:845 (1) - Inconsistent spacing, spacing too large
00:18:178 (3) - New combo for stanza?
00:46:174 (4) - ^
01:18:171 (4) - ^
01:59:166 (4,5) - Move to X:436 and Y:292 for better flow? (Nazi)
03:52:154 (7) - You using short slider with many repeating slider. This makes confusing for beginners about when the slider is end


Hard
00:20:177 (3) - This slider is overlapped by spinner-osu.png (look this using default skin), and it's hidden
00:39:342 (4) - Reverse this slider for better flow?
01:03:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think the streams would be appropriate for hard diff. Streams is just for Insane diff only. So, consider to change the pattern please
02:09:499 (3) - If you using too much repeating slider, this one could be too repetitive. I suggest you to split this slider into two slider
02:45:828 (3,4,5,6) - 1/1 click and then 1/4 clicks in one stacks could be confusing for players because of approach circle
03:09:159 (1,2,3,4) - Looks playable, but the jumps is kinda suprising


Insane
01:20:671 (5,1) - These jumps are too suprising, since you have a high AR
03:12:991 (2,1) - ^


GaYiRu~

Leorda wrote:

Nyuwon Sewu~ (say "Mongo", it's Indonesian language)

General
* No tags? Are you sure? cuz i can't see TAG in ranked map too and i can't find word for tag lol


Easy
* Slider velocity multiplier 0.65x is kinda too slow for beginners, and it's makes confusing for them. Consider to remove it?

00:48:841 (1) - Add finish here, like 00:38:175 (1) fixed
01:55:500 (1) - ^ fixed
02:51:494 (1) - Too soon from spinner, you have to delete it or change it. Otherwise, beginners can't reach this after spin the spinner fixed
02:55:160 (1) - Why new combo? fixed
03:45:155 (1) - Same issue as 02:51:494 (1) fixed
03:51:820 (3) - You using short slider with many repeating slider. This makes confusing for beginners about when the slider is end fixed


Normal
* AR 6 is too high for normal diff, AR -1 please fixed

00:08:845 (1) - Inconsistent spacing, spacing too large fixed
00:18:178 (3) - New combo for stanza? fixed
00:46:174 (4) - ^ fixed
01:18:171 (4) - ^ fixed
01:59:166 (4,5) - Move to X:436 and Y:292 for better flow? (Nazi) fixed
03:52:154 (7) - You using short slider with many repeating slider. This makes confusing for beginners about when the slider is end


Hard
00:20:177 (3) - This slider is overlapped by spinner-osu.png (look this using default skin), and it's hidden fixed
00:39:342 (4) - Reverse this slider for better flow?
01:03:506 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I don't think the streams would be appropriate for hard diff. Streams is just for Insane diff only. So, consider to change the pattern please but it's not hard for this diff
02:09:499 (3) - If you using too much repeating slider, this one could be too repetitive. I suggest you to split this slider into two slider
02:45:828 (3,4,5,6) - 1/1 click and then 1/4 clicks in one stacks could be confusing for players because of approach circle fixed
03:09:159 (1,2,3,4) - Looks playable, but the jumps is kinda suprising fixed


Insane
01:20:671 (5,1) - These jumps are too suprising, since you have a high AR
03:12:991 (2,1) - ^


GaYiRu~

thanks

from twitter

m4mしてもらおうと見に来たけど作るのうまいから言う事あまりないんだよ...orz

[Hard]
2.07.832(3) - delete last waypoint
(他の場所もいくつかこんな所がありますがわざとですか？)

[Normal]
2.00.833(5) - spacing

流石でした

frost-b-spec wrote:

from twitter

m4mしてもらおうと見に来たけど作るのうまいから言う事あまりないんだよ...orz

[Hard]
2.07.832(3) - delete last waypoint
(他の場所もいくつかこんな所がありますがわざとですか？)

[Normal]
2.00.833(5) - spacing

流石でした

あざーっす

明日modしかえしますね　（´・∀・`）

三重のプロマッパー

三　重　万　歳　！！　(☉౪ ⊙)

緒花かわいい

heyhisiriruiwanttomaketaikodiffcanimake

Mapper 31 wrote:

heyhisiriruiwanttomaketaikodiffcanimake

already Recheck request shimashita desu x_x

As promised:

[General]

1. Every .wav file must be at least 100ms long to prevent issues with soundcards. If you want a silent/blank hitsound, then you must use a 0-byte .wav file. This is from the "Current Ranking Rules and Guidelines"
2. All difficulty: The last spinner is too long.I rather shorten that to a half of now.
3. Please unify the tick rate in all difficulty.

[Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:41:842 (2) - (design) Probably make this slider move curve and smooth like this?I think this is more beautiful.
      
      Suggestion

      
   2. 01:50:167 (1) - I find the rhythm is weird on the reverse of the slider because no vocal and drum sound to support it.I know it's quite hard to solve it owing to the arrangement.However please try to fix it as you can.
   3. 02:09:165 (1) - Probably shorten this slider to 1/1 beat but also end at 02:10:498 - ? Just going to fit the strong drum sounds here.
   4. 02:11:665 (x) - Consider to the vocal,I think this spinner should starts from 02:11:832 - and end it at02:16:831 - .
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:52:174 (3) - Add a finish and a whistle at the beginning of the slider to fit the music.
   2. 02:48:494 (4) - I think a whistle is much appropriate then finish here.
   3. 02:52:494 (2) - hum,I would add a finish here and then add a whistle at the reverse of the slider.

[Normal]

1. Issue/unrankable stuff
   (Something bad in gameplay or unrankable staff,you should take a look on it.)
   
   1. 00:07:845 (2,3,4,5) - (Bad gameplay) wat...I found a inconsistent spacing here.Please fix this.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 02:42:828 (6) - I would add a new combo here and then remove the new combo at 02:43:495 (1) - .
   2. 03:03:327 (x) - I think here shouldn't be a spinner because the vocal still singing here, so using notes or spinner here is more appropriate then spinner.
   3. 03:07:493 (4) - I would add a new combo here because this chain of combo is much longer then others.
   4. 03:23:824 (x) - Same as 03:03:327
   5. 03:30:156 (5) - Same as 03:07:493
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:19:511 (2) - You can add a whistle here.
   2. 02:43:495 (1) - And here.Add a S2-whistle at the beginning of the slider and then back to S1 section at 02:43:661 - .
   3. 02:46:161 (5) - ^Same as this.
   4. 02:48:494 (4) - Probably add a whistle here?
   5. 03:41:822 (1) - ^Same

[Hard]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:30:176 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some design modding here:I would make this pattern a symmetry.The pattern is quite ugly now.I believe that it would be much better if you consider it.
      
      Suggestion

      
   2. 01:16:338 (2) - I would unstack this and then move this nearby the slider.
   3. 01:51:834 (1) - Add a new combo here to fit with the lyric and music and also shorten the combo length.
   4. 02:44:161 (3,4) - I feel extremely weird with the rhythm here.Actually,I don't agree with this rhythm.Well, just leave this to you.
   5. 02:58:160 (4) - I would add a new combo here to make the jump more clear to read.
   6. 03:00:827 (5) - ^ Same.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:21:011 (5) - Probably add a S1-whistle here to fit the music.
   2. 00:29:843 (1) - I think you are missing a clap sound here because there obvious is a drum sound.

[Insane]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. I don't understand why this needs AR9.Be honest, AR8 is really cool for this map and most of the calm part are looking very rough with AR9.
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:22:010 (1,2) - Probably move this to the centre of the y-axis?
   2. 01:33:503 (9) - Add a new combo here to fit with the drum sounds.
   3. 03:17:158 (5) - (design) I would make this slider to curve and more smooth.There is a example and you can follow this:
      
      Suggestion

      
   4. 03:34:656 (3) - I think you can add a jump here to make it more fun because I can heard a very strong accent here which is suitable for a jump.
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:42:841 (4) - Would you remove the clap sound at the end of the slider?

That it!

謝謝 （´・∀・`）Fixed and Full submited for change sounds

General

Fixed



EASY

00:41:842 (2) Fixed
02:09:165 (1) Fixed
02:11:665 (x) Fixed

00:52:174 (3) Fixed
02:48:494 (4) original sounds is similar with Finish sounds o..o
02:52:494 (2) Fixed



NORMAL

00:07:845 Fixed my mistake XD
02:42:828 (6) ---
03:03:493 (1) just changed pattern
03:07:493 (4) Fixed
03:23:824 (1) ---
03:30:156 (5) Fixed and changed pattern

02:43:495 (1) Fixed
02:46:161 (5) Fixed
02:48:494 (4) changed to finish sound. Cuz original sounds is look similar with Finish
03:41:822 (1) changed to finish sound. Cuz original sounds is look similar with Finish



HARD

00:30:176 Fixed
01:16:338 (2) Fixed
01:51:834 (1) Fixed
02:44:161 (3,4) Fixed
02:58:160 (4) Fixed
03:00:827 (5) Fixed

00:21:011 (5) Fixed
00:29:843 (1) Fixed



Insane

I still use AR9 for this diff.
I don't like to use AR7~8 with High BPM and AR9 is fit with this BPM for me

00:22:010 (1,2) Fixed Mistake XD
01:33:503 (9) Fixed
03:17:158 (5) Fixed
03:34:656 (3) Fixed

00:42:841 (4) Fixed

Rechecking.

[Easy]

1. 00:19:677 (x) - I think you are missing a finish sound here?
2. 03:16:158 (1) - I think this slider is quite ugly.I rather change it to a normal pattern or just make it more beautiful.
3. 03:26:323 (x) - wat? I think the hitsounds pattern sounds wrong here.It doesn't fit the music and very weird for me.
4. 03:28:490 (4) - ^Same.

[Normal]

1. 01:39:169 (1) - How about adding a whistle here to fit the music?
2. 02:48:494 (4) - ^Same.
3. 03:41:822 (1) - ^

[Hard]

1. 00:42:841 (7,8,1) - Inconsistent spacing.Do you make this on purpose? Plese fix it if not.You might need to adjust the spacing after change.

[Insane]

1. 01:33:669 (1) - Add a whistle at the reverse of the slider?
2. 03:43:821 (13) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider.
3. 03:52:987 (x) - Please remove this spinner like you did in other diffficulty owing to the unification with other difficulties.

謝謝 for 再Check

kanpakyin wrote:

Rechecking.

[Easy]

1. 00:19:677 (x) - I think you are missing a finish sound here? Fixed
2. 03:16:158 (1) - I think this slider is quite ugly.I rather change it to a normal pattern or just make it more beautiful. Fixed
3. 03:26:323 (x) - wat? I think the hitsounds pattern sounds wrong here.It doesn't fit the music and very weird for me. Oh yes. I forgot to change pattern of hitsounds after changed Tick Rate Fixed
4. 03:28:490 (4) - ^Same.

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 01:39:169 (1) - How about adding a whistle here to fit the music? Fixed
2. 02:48:494 (4) - ^Same.using custom finish sound. look same with original
3. 03:41:822 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]

1. 00:42:841 (7,8,1) - Inconsistent spacing.Do you make this on purpose? Plese fix it if not.You might need to adjust the spacing after change. Fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:33:669 (1) - Add a whistle at the reverse of the slider? Fixed
2. 03:43:821 (13) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider. Fixed
3. 03:52:987 (x) - Please remove this spinner like you did in other diffficulty owing to the unification with other difficulties. Fixed