-Sekai- wrote:

[MiLu]

1. 00:02:565 (X) - add a note~　no
2. 00:16:859 (6) - NC~ fixed
3. 00:20:212 (6) - 1 grip up~ no
4. 00:31:683 (6,7) - how about like this? no
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:40:683 (7) - 1 grip up and 3 left~ no
6. 01:04:683 (5) - 2 grip to the right~ no
7. 01:23:036 (9) - 2 grip down~ fixed

1. You should at least add the the level of difficulty after their name for the Guest Diff. Only the creator name for the difficulty is not a good idea
2. Try to decrease the size of the video. The current size is more than 10mb, it's ok but it may be too big for a mere 1:40 video

1. 00:01:153 (1,2) - Unstack this. A sudden stacked note is a little difficult for newbie which don't know the rhythm of the song
2. 00:12:094 - The 10% volume is way too low and it didn't give any feedback which is not good. At least use 50% or 60% so there's some hitsound from the spinner end

1. 00:12:094 - Same as the above diff

1. To be frank, the occasionally 1.3x Distance Snap is quite disturbing. It make the overall spacing of the object inconsistent and not neat, because the spacing is too small to be a jump and too big as a spacing error. I suggest to either make the mini jump even bigger or remove the mini jump or use 1.3 as your normal spacing
2. 00:18:447 (1) - Add finish at the start of the slider. It's clearly heard in the music so you better add it
3. 00:24:094 (1) - ^
4. 01:22:330 (7) - There are many other like this, where the hitburst covered almost half of the slider making it hard to see the slider body, but this one is the worst. You should reposition this slider

1. 00:02:389 (3) - Considering this part of the song is not very intense it's better to remove the jump
2. 00:24:094 (1) - This anti-jump is destroying the flow from the previous jump. Even as a trap it plays not very good
3. 00:48:800 (3) - I hear the stress in the vocal but because of the distance is too big, the jump is a bit too sudden. I suggest around 1.6 or 1.8 and also add the jump not only for 3 but also for 00:48:977 (4,5,6,1) it'll flow better than giving the jump for 1 note only
4. 01:07:153 (3) - ^ This is more straining then the previous one because not only the jump is bigger, the direction it goes is against the direction of the jump (jump to the above just to get back down). My suggestion is to make all the object in this part into jump, it'll be more dramatic and give a good build up for the kiai time. Of course all of this is up to you
   
   My Suggestion

   
5. 01:18:447 (3) - ^
6. 01:24:094 (7,8,9,1) - This is one of the good jump, the jumps are balanced and it follow the vocal greatly \:D/

Sallad4ever wrote:

[General]

1. You should at least add the the level of difficulty after their name for the Guest Diff. Only the creator name for the difficulty is not a good idea

お任せします

[swish]

1. 00:01:153 (1,2) - Unstack this. A sudden stacked note is a little difficult for newbie which don't know the rhythm of the song ok.
2. 00:12:094 - The 10% volume is way too low and it didn't give any feedback which is not good. At least use 50% or 60% so there's some hitsound from the spinner end 00:12:094 - (T) deleted,and add a clap at the spinner :3

Sallad4ever wrote:

ok then

[General]

1. You should at least add the the level of difficulty after their name for the Guest Diff. Only the creator name for the difficulty is not a good ideasorry... but i dont like such difficulty name. (Although i often use it...) also, isn't it very familiar? i think no need to change them
2. Try to decrease the size of the video. The current size is more than 10mb, it's ok but it may be too big for a mere 1:40 video ok i will change later~

[Normal]

1. 00:12:094 - Same as the above diff deleted timing point then add clap to the spinner~

[Insane]

1. 00:02:389 (3) - Considering this part of the song is not very intense it's better to remove the jump ok~
2. 00:24:094 (1) - This anti-jump is destroying the flow from the previous jump. Even as a trap it plays not very good ^
3. 00:48:800 (3) - I hear the stress in the vocal but because of the distance is too big, the jump is a bit too sudden. I suggest around 1.6 or 1.8 and also add the jump not only for 3 but also for 00:48:977 (4,5,6,1) it'll flow better than giving the jump for 1 note only yeah, sounds good. changed pattern~
4. 01:07:153 (3) - ^ This is more straining then the previous one because not only the jump is bigger, the direction it goes is against the direction of the jump (jump to the above just to get back down). My suggestion is to make all the object in this part into jump, it'll be more dramatic and give a good build up for the kiai time. Of course all of this is up to you hmm, I see your point. in fact flow is not good... but somehow i like this pattern. that's why, sorry but keep it now ><
   
   My Suggestion

   
5. 01:18:447 (3) - ^ ^
6. 01:24:094 (7,8,9,1) - This is one of the good jump, the jumps are balanced and it follow the vocal greatly \:D/ thanks ><!

Nice map, you should try using more soft whistle not only on the beginning but on the later parts too
hmm, too lazy.. but added some extra whistle :3
がんばれ~

Sallad4ever wrote:

[MiLu]

1. To be frank, the occasionally 1.3x Distance Snap is quite disturbing. It make the overall spacing of the object inconsistent and not neat, because the spacing is too small to be a jump and too big as a spacing error. I suggest to either make the mini jump even bigger or remove the mini jump or use 1.3 as your normal spacing okay , fixed
2. 00:18:447 (1) - Add finish at the start of the slider. It's clearly heard in the music so you better add it fixed
3. 00:24:094 (1) - ^ fixed
4. 01:22:330 (7) - There are many other like this, where the hitburst covered almost half of the slider making it hard to see the slider body, but this one is the worst. You should reposition this slider fixed~

Ryafuka wrote:

[swish]
00:01:153 (1,2) - こういったstackがいくつか見られたのですが、もしかしたら「初心者には難しい」と指摘されるかもしれません。自分は肯定派なのですが・・。
前のmodで00:01:153 (1,2) - ここはすでに直したんですが、他のはいまのところそのままにしておきます
00:09:800 (1,1) - スピン後の間隔が離れすぎているのでもう少し間隔を狭めたほうが良いと思います。　ok~
01:05:389 - noteを追加してclap？ 01:05:742 (2) - このスライダーを01:05:389 -にもってきてリピートさせて頭と終わりにclap入れました

Ryafuka wrote:

hi Melophobia <3　hi ♥ Ryafuka ♥
from my modding queue.
全部ていあんです

[Normal]
00:50:918 (1) - NC削除、00:52:330 (3) - NC追加、00:53:742 (1) - NC削除、00:55:153 (8) - NC追加、00:56:565 (1) - NC削除、00:57:271 (2) - NC追加　　長くなったけどこんなのどうでしょ？　このへん明らかにNCの付け方変だったので＋αで修正しときました！

[Insane] all fixed
00:18:006 (5,6,7,1) - このほうが綺麗かもです。http://puu.sh/gQ08
00:42:447 (6) - NCを追加？
00:45:271 (1,2) - NCをチェンジ？

good diff

Ryafuka wrote:

[MiLu]
00:01:153 - noteを追加？　no
00:02:565 - ^ no
00:35:036 (5) - 特に大きいジャンプでもないので、spacing一緒のほうがいいかもです。わぁ直せてなかった；；
00:36:447 (1) - NCを削除？　fixed
00:39:624 (3) - 始端にfinishを追加？ adddd
00:44:565 (1) - clapを追加？ no~
00:52:330 (3) - 始端にfinishを追加？ addddddddd
00:54:447 (9) - NCを追加？ adddd!
01:20:212 - ここに音がある気がするのでnoteを追加してclapを追加？ nooo

hoLysoup wrote:

めろ～
everything is suggestions :>
無視していい～

[メロフォビア] wwwww
00:00:977 (1,2) - this is just my opinion: change to this rhythm? http://puu.sh/hhzr follows the voice better~ no changed because i think a finish should be at 00:01:506 - ;_;
00:12:271 (1) - use clap instead of finish? ok!!
01:03:094 (1) - remove NC? I don't think you need to NC this jump changed~
01:14:830 (x) - I feel like there should be a beat here... but maybe it's just me www ww ok!
01:21:271 (5) - move to the right a bit to make spacing the same between (5,6,7)? ok! looks better><
Very nice~


終了!
star!

hoLysoup wrote:

[MiLu]
01:00:095 (1,2,3,4) - I think these 4 are hard to read because it's hidden http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245494
Maybe make this slider 00:59:212 (5) curve up. like: http://puu.sh/hlTQ
00:37:330 (5,1) - move (1) further away from (5)? because spacing looks a bit strange http://puu.sh/hlVH
01:21:800 (6) - NC~
01:22:330 (7) - This slider body is hidden behind the slider 01:21:447 (5) :<
Very nice too~

Yasora-chan wrote:

MiLu
00:26:565 (8) make this note same spacing with before? Since this note in the same timeline and combo with (1-7)?　no change
00:34:330 (2) add clap for following drum sound add
00:40:859 (8) I think add whistle in slider's beginning isn't bad too no
00:43:859 (1) add finish in slider's beginning? no
00:56:389 (4,5,1) I feel this is make confused for read imo. because (1) is stacked by (4) slider's reverse and after that go to (5). that more easy too read by players if change the direction of slider's reverse to right imo. oh, because my english is bad to explain that, here I give the picture lol okay changed
01:21:447 (5) add new combo? no
01:23:389 (1) add finish in slider's beginning? fixed

Yasora-chan wrote:

swish
01:20:389 (1) I don't think this slider is easy to read by beginner. Since the vocal is beginning in before white tick. Maybe, they will click it when vocal in the white tick is begin. Consider to start this slider in 01:20:212
ok. change like this

Garven wrote:

[swish]
00:12:624 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for an Easy. hmm.. spinner end to 00:11:389...

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by Kana, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

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[Kana's Taiko Oni]

Hitsounds can be reduced a bit as they cover the music imo ~

Suggested patterns

Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:09:800 ( 10 ) - Add finish ?

Well, I can mod more, but those suggestions will be too minor. So I'll just leave it for now ~

The map is nicely-mapped ~

I like the use of hitsounds, and the finishes before kiai ~

Good job

Rating : 9.5/10 ( Hitsounds +1, patterns +0.5, Good use of finishes +0.5 )

Star and good luck ~

No need to kds this ~

wmfchris wrote:

-> The BG is quite large (1MB), so it'll be nice if you compress it a bit, but that's no big deal. fixed

[Insane]
00:08:918 - try to make it gradually louder on 00:08:918 - and 00:09:800 - to fit vocal's emotional change? ok, fixed and do it Normal diff as well.
00:21:800 (3) - In this combo the accents comes every 1.5 beat (X x x X x x X---) so the pervious sounding logic may not work. Remove whistle at the end may sounds better sure, also changed clap at the beginning of 00:22:330 (5) to a finish.

[Normal]
00:24:094 ~ 00:46:330 - imo claps in this sections are too loud(especially when you compare with [insane]), you may want to make it bit softer fixed

That's it. Fix them and we will make it bubbled again~

wmfchris wrote:

[MiLu]
00:12:094 (7) - maybe you will want a NC here to make the stacking clearer? You've NC similar position at 00:23:389 (1) - , so you may want to do the same thing as well.
00:28:330 (4) - NC since this is a new sentence?
01:07:683 (4) - clap at the ending
01:19:859 (8) - similarly NC here?

wmfchris wrote:

[Taiko]
00:09:094 - better move 1/2 eariler. This retains the notes density, but you may want to add one at 00:09:447 - as well. It's fine now imo.
00:34:683 (156) - sounds kinda odd to me, vocal should be 3/4 I don't really get what you mean but anyway, I added a note and it seems fine now, Fixed
also, 00:24:094 ~ 00:46:330 - still sounds a bit loud to me. Try like N 60%... Fixed
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