This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月27日 at 0:13:03

Artist: Shimotsuki Haruka
Title: a little more (Short Ver.)
Source: Strawberry Nauts
Tags: milu swish HOOKSOFT hentai eroge game visual novel kanarin
BPM: 170
Filesize: 13977kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:

1. Insane (5 stars, 365 notes)
2. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 531 notes)
3. MiLu (4.95 stars, 256 notes)
4. Normal (3.63 stars, 119 notes)
5. swish (2.02 stars, 83 notes)

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.)
Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Feb 18, 2012 changed the video
Easy by swish
Hard by MiLu
Taiko by KanaRin

っしゃ！
１げっとだぞ！おら！
っしゃあ！！！！！！お！！！ら！！！！！！
来た！！来る！！！来た来たぁああ！！！！！！！！

修正

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [swish].osu

> swish

updated.

OD 8

> ♥ cRyo ♥ ww

loool, maybe i will reduce OD because the current star rating is 4.9 so that Insane will be listed below in game.

anyway, thanks for your star ></ ww

a~~~~~~

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [MiLu].osu

こんにちわ!
以下はすべて提案です

[Swish]
00:09:447 (2)　　　　Change finish?
00:17:036 (2)　　　　Add whistle
01:17:742 (3)　　　　Change finish

[Normal]
00:55:859 (5)　　　　remove finish
01:19:859 (1)　　　　clapこんなかんじはどうですか01:28:153 (3)　　　　Add clap or finish
01:28:506 (4)　　　　Add finish
01:28:683 (4)　　　　Remove clap

[Miru]
00:10:683 (3)　　　　Ctrl + R
00:11:389 (5)　　　　^
00:36:447 (2)~(3)　(1)と(2)がジャンプで繋がってるように感じるので、こんな感じの配置はどうでしょうか
[Insane]
00:06:800 (x)　　　　ボーカルないけど流れ的にWhistle付きのNoteほしい気がします
00:29:124 (5)　　　　Add clap
01:08:036 (4)　　　　clap＋finish
01:08:212 (5)　　　　^
01:08:565 (1)　　　　finish
01:28:506 (6)~　　　こんなかんじはどうでしょうか　配置はてきとうに置いてますhttp://puu.sh/guGy

ぜんぶ神譜面・・・
ほとんどhitsoundですごめんなさい!
らんくど期待してます!

terametis wrote:

[Swish]
00:09:447 (2)　　　　Change finish? ok~
00:17:036 (2)　　　　Add whistle ^
01:17:742 (3)　　　　Change finish ^

ありがとうー

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [swish].osu

terametis wrote:

こんにちわ!　こんにちわ
以下はすべて提案です

[Normal]
00:55:859 (5)　　　　remove finish たぶん大丈夫
01:19:859 (1)　　　　clapこんなかんじはどうですか

SPOILER

いいかんじ
01:28:153 (3)　　　　Add clap or finish fixed
01:28:506 (4)　　　　Add finish fixed
01:28:683 (4)　　　　Remove clap fixed



[Insane]
00:06:800 (x)　　　　ボーカルないけど流れ的にWhistle付きのNoteほしい気がします かえましたありがとう
00:29:124 (5)　　　　Add clap　いれました
01:08:036 (4)　　　　clap＋finish ん～煩い気がするからnoで ><
01:08:212 (5)　　　　^ ^
01:08:565 (1)　　　　finish ^
01:28:506 (6)~　　　こんなかんじはどうでしょうか　配置はてきとうに置いてますhttp://puu.sh/guGy

SPOILER

01:28:506 (6)　　　　add finish
01:28:859 (1)　　　　add finish
01:29:918 (1)　　　　add clap
01:30:094 (7)　　　　remove clap
01:30:271 (7)　　　　add clap
01:30:624 (3)　　　　add clap
01:31:065 (x)　　　　add note
01:31:151 (7)　　　　add clap
01:31:330 (8)　　　　change clap
01:31:683 (1)　　　　clap + finish

参考にしてちょっとだけかえました＞＜

mod and star ありがとー！

terametis wrote:

[Miru]
00:10:683 (3)　　　　Ctrl + R　fixed~
00:11:389 (5)　　　　^ fixed
00:36:447 (2)~(3)　(1)と(2)がジャンプで繋がってるように感じるので、こんな感じの配置はどうでしょうか　参考にしてちょっと広くしたのとNC入れました

SPOILER

thx~

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [MiLu].osu

hi~banana here from my queue

general
Tags: milu swish HOOKSOFT hentai eroge game visual novel swish milu

insane
00:22:153 (4) - this circle is not stack well with 00:21:624 (2), use stack leniency 8 can avoid this
01:05:918 (4) - maybe stack with 01:06:094 (5)?

milu
01:00:094 (1,3) - whistle for consistency?

normal&swish are all fine to me

nice map

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
When I start to play the map it showed like this:
I am not sure what the reason but I guess your video have a wrong scale for the length and the width, it seems your video is for super wide screen...#_# try to make it 16:9 ... or something else? .. I guess

and, your mp3 is only 1min 37seconds, but the video is over 2 minutes, I am not sure why, but it didn't feel good, any chance to find a mp3 that fit the video?

Soft whistle fit this song pretty much imo, maybe try to add some during the kiai of somewhere? anyway hitsound is a personal style thing, only claps are okey too.

And the last, YAO KUSUNOKI is really cute...


Swish:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:09:800 (1) - Actually I think this spinner stops at a not very comfortable time, why not let it stops at 00:12:094? vocal ends here and drum starts here, so I think it is a better place to stop the spinner.


Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:09:800 (1) - same as Swish diff. and I think it is better to silence the end of the spinner like Swish diff, cuz the sound at the end of the spinner seems a little odd.
00:21:271 (1) - and I suggest to stop this spinner at 00:23:389, of course yours is okey too, but comparing the two guitar sound of the music here, the first sound is stronger so I think it would fit more if the spinner stops there.
01:10:683 (4,5) - not quite comfortable about the sliders here...although I know they are trying to follow the vocal, just didn't give me a very good feeling about them. Maybe try like this?

Hitsound
00:51:624 (2) - Different with 00:57:271 (2), I think it is a little early to use 2 claps at here, so I think it is better to remove the clap on the head of the slider, cuz 01:02:918 (2) - you didn't use double claps at here too O.O


MiLu:
Beatmap design/suggestion
I think your distance is not very consistent, sometimes you were using 1.0, but sometimes change to 1.3, I am not quite understand your reason of doing that, so let me just give some examples:
00:21:271 (1,2,3,4) - I think you are following the guitar here, but I didn't feel the guitar sounds stronger or something else after 2, so I didn't quite understand why 1 2 is 1.0 spacing but 2 3 4 changed to 1.3 spacing.
00:30:800 (3,4,5,6) - and here, music is quite normal here, so I didn't get why it is 1.3 spacing instead of 1.0.
Anyway I didn't quite understand the way you map those spacing, So I think I am not gonna to nazi of that^^; sorry.

00:38:036 (6) - a little hidden by the comboburst of 4.


Insane:
Hitsound
maybe make kiai volumn a little louder?


So much for now I think. good luck!

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue. hi!

General:
When I start to play the map it showed like this:

SPOILER

[attachment=1:c313f]screenshot048.jpg[/attachment:c313f]

I am not sure what the reason but I guess your video have a wrong scale for the length and the width, it seems your video is for super wide screen...#_# try to make it 16:9 ... or something else? .. I guess
hmm, i dont know why but the current resolution is 800x450 (16:9) maybe its fine.

and, your mp3 is only 1min 37seconds, but the video is over 2 minutes, I am not sure why, but it didn't feel good, any chance to find a mp3 that fit the video?
will change mp3 later.

Soft whistle fit this song pretty much imo, maybe try to add some during the kiai of somewhere? anyway hitsound is a personal style thing, only claps are okey too.
im lazy x_x

And the last, YAO KUSUNOKI is really cute... yep ><


Swish: not capital letter ><
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:09:800 (1) - Actually I think this spinner stops at a not very comfortable time, why not let it stops at 00:12:094? vocal ends here and drum starts here, so I think it is a better place to stop the spinner.


Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:09:800 (1) - same as Swish diff. and I think it is better to silence the end of the spinner like Swish diff, cuz the sound at the end of the spinner seems a little odd. i think both are fine =w= so leave it to swish
00:21:271 (1) - and I suggest to stop this spinner at 00:23:389, of course yours is okey too, but comparing the two guitar sound of the music here, the first sound is stronger so I think it would fit more if the spinner stops there. ok~
01:10:683 (4,5) - not quite comfortable about the sliders here...although I know they are trying to follow the vocal, just didn't give me a very good feeling about them. Maybe try like this? yeah, changed

SPOILER

[attachment=0:c313f]1.jpg[/attachment:c313f]

Hitsound
00:51:624 (2) - Different with 00:57:271 (2), I think it is a little early to use 2 claps at here, so I think it is better to remove the clap on the head of the slider, cuz 01:02:918 (2) - you didn't use double claps at here too O.O hmm, you're right. removed


MiLu:
Beatmap design/suggestion
I think your distance is not very consistent, sometimes you were using 1.0, but sometimes change to 1.3, I am not quite understand your reason of doing that, so let me just give some examples:
00:21:271 (1,2,3,4) - I think you are following the guitar here, but I didn't feel the guitar sounds stronger or something else after 2, so I didn't quite understand why 1 2 is 1.0 spacing but 2 3 4 changed to 1.3 spacing.
00:30:800 (3,4,5,6) - and here, music is quite normal here, so I didn't get why it is 1.3 spacing instead of 1.0.
Anyway I didn't quite understand the way you map those spacing, So I think I am not gonna to nazi of that^^; sorry.

00:38:036 (6) - a little hidden by the comboburst of 4.


Insane:
Hitsound
maybe make kiai volumn a little louder? increased by 10%~


So much for now I think. good luck!

Nymph, thank you for modding~

> Banana
thanks for star and modding~

Banana wrote:

milu
01:00:094 (1,3) - whistle for consistency? ok~

Nymph wrote:

MiLu:
I think your distance is not very consistent, sometimes you were using 1.0, but sometimes change to 1.3, I am not quite understand your reason of doing that, so let me just give some examples:
00:21:271 (1,2,3,4) - I think you are following the guitar here, but I didn't feel the guitar sounds stronger or something else after 2, so I didn't quite understand why 1 2 is 1.0 spacing but 2 3 4 changed to 1.3 spacing.
00:30:800 (3,4,5,6) - and here, music is quite normal here, so I didn't get why it is 1.3 spacing instead of 1.0.
Anyway I didn't quite understand the way you map those spacing, So I think I am not gonna to nazi of that^^; sorry.

hmm....maybe almost fixed T_T

00:38:036 (6) - a little hidden by the comboburst of 4. sry no changed

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [MiLu].osu

Banana wrote:

general
Tags: milu swish HOOKSOFT hentai eroge game visual novel swish milu

deleted

Nymph wrote:

Swish:
00:09:800 (1) - Actually I think this spinner stops at a not very comfortable time, why not let it stops at 00:12:094? vocal ends here and drum starts here, so I think it is a better place to stop the spinner. ok,fixed

thanks for modding

pending移し忘れ？

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [swish].osu

忘れてた･･･だと・・・？

hey req~ from My queue~:3






Nice map, Star and good luck :3

> -Sekai-

thanks mod and star><

fixed some stuff~

-Sekai- wrote:

[MiLu]

1. 00:02:565 (X) - add a note~　no
2. 00:16:859 (6) - NC~ fixed
3. 00:20:212 (6) - 1 grip up~ no
4. 00:31:683 (6,7) - how about like this? no
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:40:683 (7) - 1 grip up and 3 left~ no
6. 01:04:683 (5) - 2 grip to the right~ no
7. 01:23:036 (9) - 2 grip down~ fixed

thx sekai~ :3

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [MiLu].osu

ok then

[General]

1. You should at least add the the level of difficulty after their name for the Guest Diff. Only the creator name for the difficulty is not a good idea
2. Try to decrease the size of the video. The current size is more than 10mb, it's ok but it may be too big for a mere 1:40 video

[swish]

1. 00:01:153 (1,2) - Unstack this. A sudden stacked note is a little difficult for newbie which don't know the rhythm of the song
2. 00:12:094 - The 10% volume is way too low and it didn't give any feedback which is not good. At least use 50% or 60% so there's some hitsound from the spinner end

[Normal]

1. 00:12:094 - Same as the above diff

[MiLu]

1. To be frank, the occasionally 1.3x Distance Snap is quite disturbing. It make the overall spacing of the object inconsistent and not neat, because the spacing is too small to be a jump and too big as a spacing error. I suggest to either make the mini jump even bigger or remove the mini jump or use 1.3 as your normal spacing
2. 00:18:447 (1) - Add finish at the start of the slider. It's clearly heard in the music so you better add it
3. 00:24:094 (1) - ^
4. 01:22:330 (7) - There are many other like this, where the hitburst covered almost half of the slider making it hard to see the slider body, but this one is the worst. You should reposition this slider

[Insane]

1. 00:02:389 (3) - Considering this part of the song is not very intense it's better to remove the jump
2. 00:24:094 (1) - This anti-jump is destroying the flow from the previous jump. Even as a trap it plays not very good
3. 00:48:800 (3) - I hear the stress in the vocal but because of the distance is too big, the jump is a bit too sudden. I suggest around 1.6 or 1.8 and also add the jump not only for 3 but also for 00:48:977 (4,5,6,1) it'll flow better than giving the jump for 1 note only
4. 01:07:153 (3) - ^ This is more straining then the previous one because not only the jump is bigger, the direction it goes is against the direction of the jump (jump to the above just to get back down). My suggestion is to make all the object in this part into jump, it'll be more dramatic and give a good build up for the kiai time. Of course all of this is up to you
   
   My Suggestion

   
5. 01:18:447 (3) - ^
6. 01:24:094 (7,8,9,1) - This is one of the good jump, the jumps are balanced and it follow the vocal greatly \:D/

Nice map, you should try using more soft whistle not only on the beginning but on the later parts too
がんばれ~

Sallad4ever wrote:

[General]

1. You should at least add the the level of difficulty after their name for the Guest Diff. Only the creator name for the difficulty is not a good idea

お任せします

[swish]

1. 00:01:153 (1,2) - Unstack this. A sudden stacked note is a little difficult for newbie which don't know the rhythm of the song ok.
2. 00:12:094 - The 10% volume is way too low and it didn't give any feedback which is not good. At least use 50% or 60% so there's some hitsound from the spinner end 00:12:094 - (T) deleted,and add a clap at the spinner :3

thanks for modding~

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [swish].osu

Sallad4ever wrote:

ok then

[General]

1. You should at least add the the level of difficulty after their name for the Guest Diff. Only the creator name for the difficulty is not a good ideasorry... but i dont like such difficulty name. (Although i often use it...) also, isn't it very familiar? i think no need to change them
2. Try to decrease the size of the video. The current size is more than 10mb, it's ok but it may be too big for a mere 1:40 video ok i will change later~

[Normal]

1. 00:12:094 - Same as the above diff deleted timing point then add clap to the spinner~

[Insane]

1. 00:02:389 (3) - Considering this part of the song is not very intense it's better to remove the jump ok~
2. 00:24:094 (1) - This anti-jump is destroying the flow from the previous jump. Even as a trap it plays not very good ^
3. 00:48:800 (3) - I hear the stress in the vocal but because of the distance is too big, the jump is a bit too sudden. I suggest around 1.6 or 1.8 and also add the jump not only for 3 but also for 00:48:977 (4,5,6,1) it'll flow better than giving the jump for 1 note only yeah, sounds good. changed pattern~
4. 01:07:153 (3) - ^ This is more straining then the previous one because not only the jump is bigger, the direction it goes is against the direction of the jump (jump to the above just to get back down). My suggestion is to make all the object in this part into jump, it'll be more dramatic and give a good build up for the kiai time. Of course all of this is up to you hmm, I see your point. in fact flow is not good... but somehow i like this pattern. that's why, sorry but keep it now ><
   
   My Suggestion

   
5. 01:18:447 (3) - ^ ^
6. 01:24:094 (7,8,9,1) - This is one of the good jump, the jumps are balanced and it follow the vocal greatly \:D/ thanks ><!

Nice map, you should try using more soft whistle not only on the beginning but on the later parts too
hmm, too lazy.. but added some extra whistle :3
がんばれ~

thanks a lot, sallad~

Sallad4ever wrote:

[MiLu]

1. To be frank, the occasionally 1.3x Distance Snap is quite disturbing. It make the overall spacing of the object inconsistent and not neat, because the spacing is too small to be a jump and too big as a spacing error. I suggest to either make the mini jump even bigger or remove the mini jump or use 1.3 as your normal spacing okay , fixed
2. 00:18:447 (1) - Add finish at the start of the slider. It's clearly heard in the music so you better add it fixed
3. 00:24:094 (1) - ^ fixed
4. 01:22:330 (7) - There are many other like this, where the hitburst covered almost half of the slider making it hard to see the slider body, but this one is the worst. You should reposition this slider fixed~

thank you~

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [MiLu].osu

hi Melophobia <3
from my modding queue.
全部ていあんです


[swish]
00:01:153 (1,2) - こういったstackがいくつか見られたのですが、もしかしたら「初心者には難しい」と指摘されるかもしれません。自分は肯定派なのですが・・。
00:09:800 (1,1) - スピン後の間隔が離れすぎているのでもう少し間隔を狭めたほうが良いと思います。
01:05:389 - noteを追加してclap？


[Normal]
00:50:918 (1) - NC削除、00:52:330 (3) - NC追加、00:53:742 (1) - NC削除、00:55:153 (8) - NC追加、00:56:565 (1) - NC削除、00:57:271 (2) - NC追加　　長くなったけどこんなのどうでしょ？


[MiLu]
00:01:153 - noteを追加？
00:02:565 - ^
00:35:036 (5) - 特に大きいジャンプでもないので、spacing一緒のほうがいいかもです。
00:36:447 (1) - NCを削除？
00:39:624 (3) - 始端にfinishを追加？
00:44:565 (1) - clapを追加？
00:52:330 (3) - 始端にfinishを追加？
00:54:447 (9) - NCを追加？
01:20:212 - ここに音がある気がするのでnoteを追加してclapを追加？


[Insane]
00:18:006 (5,6,7,1) - このほうが綺麗かもです。http://puu.sh/gQ08
00:42:447 (6) - NCを追加？
00:45:271 (1,2) - NCをチェンジ？

good diff

Ryafuka wrote:

[swish]
00:01:153 (1,2) - こういったstackがいくつか見られたのですが、もしかしたら「初心者には難しい」と指摘されるかもしれません。自分は肯定派なのですが・・。
前のmodで00:01:153 (1,2) - ここはすでに直したんですが、他のはいまのところそのままにしておきます
00:09:800 (1,1) - スピン後の間隔が離れすぎているのでもう少し間隔を狭めたほうが良いと思います。　ok~
01:05:389 - noteを追加してclap？ 01:05:742 (2) - このスライダーを01:05:389 -にもってきてリピートさせて頭と終わりにclap入れました

thanks for modding~

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - a little more (Short Ver.) (Melophobia) [swish].osu

Ryafuka wrote:

hi Melophobia <3　hi ♥ Ryafuka ♥
from my modding queue.
全部ていあんです

[Normal]
00:50:918 (1) - NC削除、00:52:330 (3) - NC追加、00:53:742 (1) - NC削除、00:55:153 (8) - NC追加、00:56:565 (1) - NC削除、00:57:271 (2) - NC追加　　長くなったけどこんなのどうでしょ？　このへん明らかにNCの付け方変だったので＋αで修正しときました！

[Insane] all fixed
00:18:006 (5,6,7,1) - このほうが綺麗かもです。http://puu.sh/gQ08
00:42:447 (6) - NCを追加？
00:45:271 (1,2) - NCをチェンジ？

good diff

thanks for modding~~