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  • GUIDELINES

  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
  1. There are 2 .osb files. Please delete them. Don't forget to Full Submit.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY
  1. Seems fine.
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  1. 00:34:582 (5) - Move two grids down.

  2. 02:16:654 (1,2) - Awkward sliders. I suggest a simple curve will do.
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  1. Inconsistent Kiai Time. 1st Kiai should start at 00:07:974.

  2. And btw, I don't know if this is just me, but Kiai Time is already happening even when the song hasn't started yet. D: See this: Click!
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  1. The mapset was okay but I'm just a lil worried about the bug in Kiai. But hope this gets ranked soon. Good luck!
  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~

  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
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posted

Philippines wrote:

  • GUIDELINES

  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
  1. There are 2 .osb files. Please delete them. Don't forget to Full Submit.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY
  1. Seems fine.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL
  1. 00:34:582 (5) - Move two grids down. Done.

  2. 02:16:654 (1,2) - Awkward sliders. I suggest a simple curve will do. Changed.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXXCOMMENT
  1. The mapset was okay but I'm just a lil worried about the bug in Kiai. But hope this gets ranked soon. Good luck!
  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~

  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
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hi.
mod4mod.

[General]

• delete .osb file and do full submit.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:082, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Easy!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Normal!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468


[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:11:027 (1) - put on the middle?
00:21:496 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this?
00:33:710 (2,3,4) - maybe this?
00:56:392 (1,2) - maybe this?
01:27:799 (1,2) - maybe this?
01:59:206 (1,2,3) - put on the middle?
02:28:868 (3) - maybe this?

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:07:974 (2,3) - put on the middle?
01:59:206 (1) - moved from a (4)
02:29:740 (2) - 1 grid right
03:05:073 (4) - x:184 y:208

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!]

fine for me.

good luck.
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[Ryuu] wrote:

hi.
mod4mod.

[General]

• delete .osb file and do full submit. Done, but I always doing this, and we'll see how this happen got klai.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:082, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Easy!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Normal!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468


[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:11:027 (1) - put on the middle? Done.
00:21:496 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this? Fixed.
00:33:710 (2,3,4) - maybe this? Makes sense, fixed.
00:56:392 (1,2) - maybe this? Fixed.
01:27:799 (1,2) - maybe this? Fixed.
01:59:206 (1,2,3) - put on the middle? Fixed.
02:28:868 (3) - maybe this? Fixed.

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:07:974 (2,3) - put on the middle? Done.
01:59:206 (1) - moved from a (4) Fixed.
02:29:740 (2) - 1 grid right Fixed.
03:05:073 (4) - x:184 y:208 Done.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!]

fine for me.

good luck.
posted
General
  1. Should remove "Let's Try!" from the difficulty name.
  2. 01:36:523 (4) - move the start of break here


Normal
  1. 01:59:206 (1) - move away
  2. 02:30:831 (1) - add clap to end


Hard
  1. 00:13:862 (3) - add clap to end of slider?
  2. 00:57:701 (5) - Ctrl + R and move the midpoint like this?
  3. 01:11:223 (5,6,7,4) - Replace them like 01:10:351 (2,3,4) ?
  4. 01:18:639 (1) - overlapped by hitburst http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302551
  5. 02:26:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream sounds weird, should remove 3 or 4.
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Apricot wrote:

General
  1. Should remove "Let's Try!" from the difficulty name. Done.
  2. 01:36:523 (4) - move the start of break here Forgot about that... Done.


Normal
  1. 01:59:206 (1) - move away Oh... Done...
  2. 02:30:831 (1) - add clap to end Done...
posted
Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[general]

  1. osb. can be removed~

[Easy]

  1. 01:52:227 (1) - the last point 4 grid down and 1 grid right ?
  2. 01:55:716 (1) - I think let 4th point become red point and 13 grid up
  3. 01:59:206 (1) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left
  4. 02:42:826 (3) - the last point 1 grid left ?
  5. 03:10:744 (3) - NC

[Normal]

  1. 00:31:965 (1) - the last point 1 grid down ?
  2. 01:07:079 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid left
  3. 01:08:606 (4) - 2nd point 2 grid left
  4. 02:48:497 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid right , 4th point 1 grid up , last point 3 grid up and 1 grid right
  5. 03:00:275 (5) - 2nd point 2 grid down and 3 grid left , 3rd point 1 grid down , 6th point 1 grid right, last point 3 grid up

[Ar3sgice's Hard]

  1. 00:13:862 (3) - clap at end ?
  2. 00:44:179 (5) - last point 1 grid up ?
  3. 02:38:901 (1) - remove NC?
  4. 02:46:534 (1) - I think there can change ~ i feel strange a bit
  5. 02:57:657 (1) - remove NC?


good song
and sorry to my poor English
posted

Apricot wrote:

Hard
  1. 00:13:862 (3) - add clap to end of slider? ok
  2. 00:57:701 (5) - Ctrl + R and move the midpoint like this? don't like
  3. 01:11:223 (5,6,7,4) - Replace them like 01:10:351 (2,3,4) ? what do you mean ._.
  4. 01:18:639 (1) - overlapped by hitburst http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302551 ok
  5. 02:26:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream sounds weird, should remove 3 or 4. ok
thanks :D

no fix for other 2 mods

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ (Koro McAlpine) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!].osu
posted
Harro~
You requested in my queue~


[General]
- .osb file is not in use to delete it.

[Easy]
00:11:900 (2) - New combo.
01:21:692 (2) - ^
02:45:444 (2) - ^
03:06:382 (2) - ^

[Normal]
00:11:900 (2) - New combo.
01:21:690 (2) - ^
01:34:997 - Spinner here and end it at 01:36:523 or 01:36:960 ?
02:45:442 (2) - ^
03:06:380 (2) - ^


[Ar3sgice's Hard]
- HP Drain Rate +1
00:11:900 (3) - New combo?
01:21:692 (4) - ^
01:34:997 - Spinner here and end it at 01:36:523 or 01:36:960 ?
02:03:350 (2,3,4,5) - This can look better? ><
02:45:444 (4) - New combo?
03:06:382 (3) - ^


Nicely mapped^^
Good luck~
posted

l1106188 wrote:

Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[general]

  1. osb. can be removed~

[Easy]

  1. 01:52:227 (1) - the last point 4 grid down and 1 grid right ? Done.
  2. 01:55:716 (1) - I think let 4th point become red point and 13 grid up That looks fine...
  3. 01:59:206 (1) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left No.
  4. 02:42:826 (3) - the last point 1 grid left ? done.
  5. 03:10:744 (3) - NC Looks okay.

[Normal]

  1. 00:31:965 (1) - the last point 1 grid down ? It looks just fine.
  2. 01:07:079 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid left Done.
  3. 01:08:606 (4) - 2nd point 2 grid left Okay...
  4. 02:48:497 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid right , 4th point 1 grid up , last point 3 grid up and 1 grid right Fixed/
  5. 03:00:275 (5) - 2nd point 2 grid down and 3 grid left , 3rd point 1 grid down , 6th point 1 grid right, last point 3 grid up Fixed


good song
and sorry to my poor English
posted
Easy

00:11:027 - Swap a slider(end at 00:11:245) for this circle
02:11:420 - Move the circle to x:176 y:272
02:41:518 - 3rd kiai time start at here


Normal

01:12:968 - Remove clap
01:35:215 - Add break time
01:55:280 - Clap
01:58:770 - ^
02:41:518 - 3rd kiai time start at here
03:02:456 - Remove clap.
03:09:435 - Remove clap or finish.

Ar3sgice's Hard

OD:6

00:07:974 (2) - 用finish替代clap,并且把音量调整到40%,这样开始kiai time 感觉会更好些
00:23:241 (1) - 这个finish去掉
00:24:986 (3) 和 00:25:313(1) - 这两个皆加上finish 感觉更好(只在前者加个也不错)~
00:28:039 (6) - 这里的连续两个finish 感觉有些拖拉(原始finish音效的原因造成),去掉这个,只单独前面一个finish效果会更不错
00:30:220 (2) 这个属于可加可不加的finish,觉得加了后 效果一般
00:31:093 (6) - 这一段finish有些多,就会感觉到有些闷,而且这里觉得不适合加这个finish
01:17:330 (2) - 开始的finish 移到 结束处,结束处的clap可以去掉
01:34:779~01:36:523 -..或者加个spinner?直接break也不错, 不过break没加到这里...
03:01:583 (2) - 把这个finish去掉,在后面slider开始处加finish

Other looks fine to me

Good luck!
posted

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Ar3sgice's Hard

OD:6

00:07:974 (2) - 用finish替代clap,并且把音量调整到40%,这样开始kiai time 感觉会更好些
00:23:241 (1) - 这个finish去掉
00:24:986 (3) 和 00:25:313(1) - 这两个皆加上finish 感觉更好(只在前者加个也不错)~
00:28:039 (6) - 这里的连续两个finish 感觉有些拖拉(原始finish音效的原因造成),去掉这个,只单独前面一个finish效果会更不错
00:30:220 (2) 这个属于可加可不加的finish,觉得加了后 效果一般
00:31:093 (6) - 这一段finish有些多,就会感觉到有些闷,而且这里觉得不适合加这个finish
01:17:330 (2) - 开始的finish 移到 结束处,结束处的clap可以去掉
01:34:779~01:36:523 -..或者加个spinner?直接break也不错, 不过break没加到这里...
03:01:583 (2) - 把这个finish去掉,在后面slider开始处加finish

Other looks fine to me

只看了这个难度...不过

deserve a star
I'll kudos you with when Ar3sgice fixes the diff. And that goes to xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx too.
posted
orz... sorry, I really don't have much time...

fixed some finishes on 12T's, no fix on crystal's.

01:34:779 - 懒得改了, spin好奇怪可能前面也要改, 算了

edit: maybe for now I don't have some enough time for mapping, you can fix my diff for modding o.o

After ~19 days maybe I can have more time.

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ (Koro McAlpine) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!].osu
posted

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

no fix on crystal's.
^This
posted
Hello! My m4m

General

  1. Add Suku Suku Pon! to the source? I'm not sure, but this is the title of TV program where this song played :O
  2. I'm not good at chosing colors, but yours are too dark and 'heavy' for your bg (especially green one).
    Try this, please:
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 0,135,234
    Combo2 : 102,226,27
    Combo3 : 255,21,39
    Combo4 : 249,199,66


Easy

  1. 00:08:410 (T) - remove this sections with tick-clap as you should better put claps on every second beat. So, then put clap on the end of this slider. It's better, isn't it?
  2. 00:09:282 (3) - remove clap from the beginning, also you can add a reverse to better rhythm:

    Don't forget to put clap on the end of the (3)
  3. 00:11:027 (4) - such sliders (called 'kick sliders' or 1/2 sliders) are bad for the easiest diffs as noobs could fail it, so change it to a circle. Oh, and put new combo here, because combo which are longer than (3) or (4) are bad for Easy :<
  4. 01:10:351 (1) - change the clap to the finish?
  5. 01:17:767 (2) - clap to the end
  6. 01:19:075 (3) - and remove from here
  7. 01:20:820 (1) - again, change this kick slider to a simple circle
  8. 01:34:997 - start break here? I don't like how it begins later D: or add a spinner here to 01:36:523 -
  9. 01:59:206 (1) - (nazi) not symmetrical, to make it: move the last followpoint 2 grids up and 1 left
  10. 02:06:185 (1) - finish to the beginning?
  11. 02:34:102 (1) - ^
  12. 02:44:571 (1) - change the kick-slider :<
  13. 03:03:764 (3) - remove clap from the beginning
  14. 03:05:509 (1) - kick slideeer :<

    I like your end, but why not to map it till the end? :O


Normal

HP. AR, OD +1?

  1. 00:07:974 (2) - again, claps. Remove timing section with custom tick and add clap to the end
  2. 00:14:953 (2) - not symmetrical :<
  3. 01:34:997 - again, move break or add spinner
  4. 02:20:144 (1) - finish?
  5. 02:30:613 (4) - put nc here as in 02:27:123 (1) -


Ar3sgice's Hard

  1. 00:16:262 (1,2,3) - maybe put whistles? :O I like how they sound
  2. 01:16:022 (1,2) - ^
  3. 01:34:888 - as in other diffs, maybe start break here or add a spinner till 01:36:523 -
  4. 02:39:773 (1,2) - go! go! whistles? :3
  5. 02:41:518 - start kiai here as in other diffs
  6. 02:49:806 (1,2,3) - go! go! go!
  7. 03:10:744 (1,2,3) - ^


I really like this map. Good luck with it *^*
posted
Allright, so I tried downloading this, and it won't download for me! D:.

I'm assuming it's a client-side issue for me, but sadly, I won't be able to mod this! Sorry ;~;.

If you've re-uploaded it, you can PM me to try again :>
posted

CDFA wrote:

Allright, so I tried downloading this, and it won't download for me! D:.

I'm assuming it's a client-side issue for me, but sadly, I won't be able to mod this! Sorry ;~;.

If you've re-uploaded it, you can PM me to try again :>
I am having the same problem.

If you want a mod from me Resubmit and PM me.

Thanks!
posted
Antone check this beatmap works to you.
posted
In-Game Request. Here's what I've found:

General
-> Nothing found.

Easy
-> Some of your hitsounds are not consistent.
01:10:351 (1) - Add clap on slider tick. Remove clap on slider end.
01:12:096 (2) - Add clap on slider tick. Remove clap on start and end of slider.
01:17:767 (2) - Add clap on slider tick.
01:20:384 (4) - Add clap.
02:09:675 (1) - Add clap on reverse arrow.
03:07:254 (4) - Add clap on slider tick.

Normal
00:11:027 (1) - This 1/2 slider sounds stange. Make it a 1/2 reverse slider. Don't forget to add the hitsounds again.
00:18:443 (2) - Add clap
00:20:187 (2) - ^
00:28:475 (1) - Add clap on reverse arrow?
00:31:965 (1) - ^
00:35:455 (1) - Add clap in end of slider?
00:36:763 (3) - Add clap
00:37:199 (4) - Add clap in end of slider?
00:38:072 (5) - ^
00:39:380 (2) - Add Clap
00:39:817 (3) - Add clap in end of slider?
00:40:689 (4) - ^
00:41:561 (5) - ^
01:17:767 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider. Also, try to make the slider symmetical if you can.
01:19:075 (3) - Add clap on slider tick?
01:27:799 (1) - Add clap in slider tick?
01:29:544 (2) - ^
01:20:820 (1) - Same as 00:11:027 (1).
02:27:341 (2) - Remove clap on end of slider.
02:30:177 (3) - Add clap.
02:30:831 (2) - ^
02:33:666 (3) - Add clap.
02:41:518 (2) - Add clap on end of slider?
02:44:571 (1) - Same as Same as 00:11:027 (1) and 01:20:820 (1).
02:48:497 (2) - Same as 02:41:518 (2).
02:56:785 (1) - Remove clap.
03:05:073 (4) - Add clap.
03:05:509 (1) - Same as 02:44:571 (1).

03:22:303 - Random bookmark. Remove it.

Hard
-> I'll skip hard difficulty for now.

Good map overall. Good Luck with your map.
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