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*yawn*
[general]
-20 offset. It's so late it's like pulling teeth.

[easy]
01:55:736 (1) - watch your spacing on these. when you're really close to the next note, it's easy to tell the difference between 0.8x and 0.76x
02:06:205 (1) - this doesn't fit. use 1/1 or 2/1 here
02:09:695 (1) - ^
02:16:674 (1) - can you put a little bit more effort into your sliders? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289735
02:21:472 (2) - spacing. Consider not using grid snap.

[normal]
00:31:985 (1) - this overlaps (3) when it doesn't need to
01:12:116 (4) - with just the tiniest bit of effort, you can really make your sliders better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289740
01:32:617 - this is normal, you can put a note here
03:05:529 (1,1) - make your new combos consistent with how you did it before.

[ar3sgice]
00:12:356 (4) - shorten 1/2, add a circle with new combo where the end of (4) was.
00:51:178 (3,5) - you can make it so that the circles don't overlap the slider tracks.
01:10:371 (2) - (3) can be a slider, but this one really shouldn't be.
01:12:116 (1) - the end of this is off of the grid, which I consider unrankable.

star because it's about time you get something ranked.
posted

ziin wrote:

*yawn*
[general]
-20 offset. It's so late it's like pulling teeth. I'll get to it as I can.

[easy]
01:55:736 (1) - watch your spacing on these. when you're really close to the next note, it's easy to tell the difference between 0.8x and 0.76x Fixed.
02:06:205 (1) - this doesn't fit. use 1/1 or 2/1 here Fixed.
02:09:695 (1) - ^ ^
02:16:674 (1) - can you put a little bit more effort into your sliders? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289735 Fixed.
02:21:472 (2) - spacing. Consider not using grid snap. Fixed.

[normal]
00:31:985 (1) - this overlaps (3) when it doesn't need to Fixed!
01:12:116 (4) - with just the tiniest bit of effort, you can really make your sliders better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289740 Fixed, but in a way I wanted because it fits perfect for that.
01:32:617 - this is normal, you can put a note here You're right, added.
03:05:529 (1,1) - make your new combos consistent with how you did it before. Fixed!!

star because it's about time you get something ranked. And get something bubbled first.
posted
You changed your name orz..

Fixed first 3 in Mythol's and the unrankable stuff in ziin's mod

02:18:399 (1) - i like this style.

Also you may want to change the map's title shorter, it doesn't load if you download as .osz with the full name.

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ (Koro McAlpine) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!].osu
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From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
Kiai times not consistent across all difficulties.

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:07:538 (1) - Remove clap
00:07:974 - Why do you start the Kiai time here as opposed to 00:07:538?
00:09:719 - missing custom clap
00:09:282 (3) - Remove clap on tail
00:52:903 (1) - I fixed the slider to make it more symmetrical
32,256,52903,6,0,B|56:216|136:184|192:184|304:224|320:264|304:312|256:344|208:312|192:264|208:224|320:184|376:184|456:216|480:256,1,600
01:17:330 (1) - try x:114 y:219. You don't want notes in the middle after a spinner at this AR. Fix all other instances in this diff.
02:16:654 (1) - Use the slider I gave you.

[Let's Try! Normal!]
00:07:538 (1,2) - Remove claps, add clap to 00:07:974 (2) - head.
00:29:784 (2) - Stack isn't very intuitive. Consider replacing.
01:17:330 (1) - try x:88 y:200. You don't want notes in the middle after a spinner at this AR. Fix all other instances in this diff.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgrice's Hard!]

02:04:440 (1) - From here on, the difficulty has jumped up an entire level. Either remap the part before this to maintain difficulty level (more notes on blue ticks), or remove most of the notes on the blue ticks after this point.

Good luck :3
posted

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
Kiai times not consistent across all difficulties.

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:07:538 (1) - Remove clap Done.
00:07:974 - Why do you start the Kiai time here as opposed to 00:07:538? [b]Well, thought it could be unrankable...[b]
00:09:719 - missing custom clap Resolved.
00:09:282 (3) - Remove clap on tail Done.
00:52:903 (1) - I fixed the slider to make it more symmetrical
32,256,52903,6,0,B|56:216|136:184|192:184|304:224|320:264|304:312|256:344|208:312|192:264|208:224|320:184|376:184|456:216|480:256,1,600
Thank you and resolved.
01:17:330 (1) - try x:114 y:219. You don't want notes in the middle after a spinner at this AR. Fix all other instances in this diff. Done.
02:16:654 (1) - Use the slider I gave you. Done.

[Let's Try! Normal!]
00:07:538 (1,2) - Remove claps, add clap to 00:07:974 (2) - head. Resolved, but it looks okay...
00:29:784 (2) - Stack isn't very intuitive. Consider replacing. Fixed.
01:17:330 (1) - try x:88 y:200. You don't want notes in the middle after a spinner at this AR. Fix all other instances in this diff. Done.

Good luck :3
posted

those wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgrice's Hard!]

02:04:440 (1) - From here on, the difficulty has jumped up an entire level. Either remap the part before this to maintain difficulty level (more notes on blue ticks), or remove most of the notes on the blue ticks after this point.

Good luck :3
I think that's ok, when I play a map, I need some time to warm-up, so I think it's better that beginning of map is easier.

stream in 130+ bpm is ok for a Hard, I guess :D

Thanks for modding :3
posted
  • GUIDELINES

  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
  1. There are 2 .osb files. Please delete them. Don't forget to Full Submit.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY
  1. Seems fine.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL
  1. 00:34:582 (5) - Move two grids down.

  2. 02:16:654 (1,2) - Awkward sliders. I suggest a simple curve will do.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXXHARD
  1. Inconsistent Kiai Time. 1st Kiai should start at 00:07:974.

  2. And btw, I don't know if this is just me, but Kiai Time is already happening even when the song hasn't started yet. D: See this: Click!
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXXCOMMENT
  1. The mapset was okay but I'm just a lil worried about the bug in Kiai. But hope this gets ranked soon. Good luck!
  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~

  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
posted
posted

Philippines wrote:

  • GUIDELINES

  1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
  2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL
  1. There are 2 .osb files. Please delete them. Don't forget to Full Submit.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY
  1. Seems fine.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL
  1. 00:34:582 (5) - Move two grids down. Done.

  2. 02:16:654 (1,2) - Awkward sliders. I suggest a simple curve will do. Changed.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXXCOMMENT
  1. The mapset was okay but I'm just a lil worried about the bug in Kiai. But hope this gets ranked soon. Good luck!
  • END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~

  1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
  2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
  3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS
posted
hi.
mod4mod.

[General]

• delete .osb file and do full submit.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:082, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Easy!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Normal!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468


[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:11:027 (1) - put on the middle?
00:21:496 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this?
00:33:710 (2,3,4) - maybe this?
00:56:392 (1,2) - maybe this?
01:27:799 (1,2) - maybe this?
01:59:206 (1,2,3) - put on the middle?
02:28:868 (3) - maybe this?

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:07:974 (2,3) - put on the middle?
01:59:206 (1) - moved from a (4)
02:29:740 (2) - 1 grid right
03:05:073 (4) - x:184 y:208

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!]

fine for me.

good luck.
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[Ryuu] wrote:

hi.
mod4mod.

[General]

• delete .osb file and do full submit. Done, but I always doing this, and we'll see how this happen got klai.
Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:082, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Easy!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Normal!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468


[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:11:027 (1) - put on the middle? Done.
00:21:496 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this? Fixed.
00:33:710 (2,3,4) - maybe this? Makes sense, fixed.
00:56:392 (1,2) - maybe this? Fixed.
01:27:799 (1,2) - maybe this? Fixed.
01:59:206 (1,2,3) - put on the middle? Fixed.
02:28:868 (3) - maybe this? Fixed.

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:07:974 (2,3) - put on the middle? Done.
01:59:206 (1) - moved from a (4) Fixed.
02:29:740 (2) - 1 grid right Fixed.
03:05:073 (4) - x:184 y:208 Done.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!]

fine for me.

good luck.
posted
General
  1. Should remove "Let's Try!" from the difficulty name.
  2. 01:36:523 (4) - move the start of break here


Normal
  1. 01:59:206 (1) - move away
  2. 02:30:831 (1) - add clap to end


Hard
  1. 00:13:862 (3) - add clap to end of slider?
  2. 00:57:701 (5) - Ctrl + R and move the midpoint like this?
  3. 01:11:223 (5,6,7,4) - Replace them like 01:10:351 (2,3,4) ?
  4. 01:18:639 (1) - overlapped by hitburst http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302551
  5. 02:26:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream sounds weird, should remove 3 or 4.
posted

Apricot wrote:

General
  1. Should remove "Let's Try!" from the difficulty name. Done.
  2. 01:36:523 (4) - move the start of break here Forgot about that... Done.


Normal
  1. 01:59:206 (1) - move away Oh... Done...
  2. 02:30:831 (1) - add clap to end Done...
posted
Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[general]

  1. osb. can be removed~

[Easy]

  1. 01:52:227 (1) - the last point 4 grid down and 1 grid right ?
  2. 01:55:716 (1) - I think let 4th point become red point and 13 grid up
  3. 01:59:206 (1) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left
  4. 02:42:826 (3) - the last point 1 grid left ?
  5. 03:10:744 (3) - NC

[Normal]

  1. 00:31:965 (1) - the last point 1 grid down ?
  2. 01:07:079 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid left
  3. 01:08:606 (4) - 2nd point 2 grid left
  4. 02:48:497 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid right , 4th point 1 grid up , last point 3 grid up and 1 grid right
  5. 03:00:275 (5) - 2nd point 2 grid down and 3 grid left , 3rd point 1 grid down , 6th point 1 grid right, last point 3 grid up

[Ar3sgice's Hard]

  1. 00:13:862 (3) - clap at end ?
  2. 00:44:179 (5) - last point 1 grid up ?
  3. 02:38:901 (1) - remove NC?
  4. 02:46:534 (1) - I think there can change ~ i feel strange a bit
  5. 02:57:657 (1) - remove NC?


good song
and sorry to my poor English
posted

Apricot wrote:

Hard
  1. 00:13:862 (3) - add clap to end of slider? ok
  2. 00:57:701 (5) - Ctrl + R and move the midpoint like this? don't like
  3. 01:11:223 (5,6,7,4) - Replace them like 01:10:351 (2,3,4) ? what do you mean ._.
  4. 01:18:639 (1) - overlapped by hitburst http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302551 ok
  5. 02:26:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream sounds weird, should remove 3 or 4. ok
thanks :D

no fix for other 2 mods

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ (Koro McAlpine) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!].osu
posted
Harro~
You requested in my queue~


[General]
- .osb file is not in use to delete it.

[Easy]
00:11:900 (2) - New combo.
01:21:692 (2) - ^
02:45:444 (2) - ^
03:06:382 (2) - ^

[Normal]
00:11:900 (2) - New combo.
01:21:690 (2) - ^
01:34:997 - Spinner here and end it at 01:36:523 or 01:36:960 ?
02:45:442 (2) - ^
03:06:380 (2) - ^


[Ar3sgice's Hard]
- HP Drain Rate +1
00:11:900 (3) - New combo?
01:21:692 (4) - ^
01:34:997 - Spinner here and end it at 01:36:523 or 01:36:960 ?
02:03:350 (2,3,4,5) - This can look better? ><
02:45:444 (4) - New combo?
03:06:382 (3) - ^


Nicely mapped^^
Good luck~
posted

l1106188 wrote:

Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[general]

  1. osb. can be removed~

[Easy]

  1. 01:52:227 (1) - the last point 4 grid down and 1 grid right ? Done.
  2. 01:55:716 (1) - I think let 4th point become red point and 13 grid up That looks fine...
  3. 01:59:206 (1) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left No.
  4. 02:42:826 (3) - the last point 1 grid left ? done.
  5. 03:10:744 (3) - NC Looks okay.

[Normal]

  1. 00:31:965 (1) - the last point 1 grid down ? It looks just fine.
  2. 01:07:079 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid left Done.
  3. 01:08:606 (4) - 2nd point 2 grid left Okay...
  4. 02:48:497 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid right , 4th point 1 grid up , last point 3 grid up and 1 grid right Fixed/
  5. 03:00:275 (5) - 2nd point 2 grid down and 3 grid left , 3rd point 1 grid down , 6th point 1 grid right, last point 3 grid up Fixed


good song
and sorry to my poor English
posted
Easy

00:11:027 - Swap a slider(end at 00:11:245) for this circle
02:11:420 - Move the circle to x:176 y:272
02:41:518 - 3rd kiai time start at here


Normal

01:12:968 - Remove clap
01:35:215 - Add break time
01:55:280 - Clap
01:58:770 - ^
02:41:518 - 3rd kiai time start at here
03:02:456 - Remove clap.
03:09:435 - Remove clap or finish.

Ar3sgice's Hard

OD:6

00:07:974 (2) - 用finish替代clap,并且把音量调整到40%,这样开始kiai time 感觉会更好些
00:23:241 (1) - 这个finish去掉
00:24:986 (3) 和 00:25:313(1) - 这两个皆加上finish 感觉更好(只在前者加个也不错)~
00:28:039 (6) - 这里的连续两个finish 感觉有些拖拉(原始finish音效的原因造成),去掉这个,只单独前面一个finish效果会更不错
00:30:220 (2) 这个属于可加可不加的finish,觉得加了后 效果一般
00:31:093 (6) - 这一段finish有些多,就会感觉到有些闷,而且这里觉得不适合加这个finish
01:17:330 (2) - 开始的finish 移到 结束处,结束处的clap可以去掉
01:34:779~01:36:523 -..或者加个spinner?直接break也不错, 不过break没加到这里...
03:01:583 (2) - 把这个finish去掉,在后面slider开始处加finish

Other looks fine to me

Good luck!
posted

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Ar3sgice's Hard

OD:6

00:07:974 (2) - 用finish替代clap,并且把音量调整到40%,这样开始kiai time 感觉会更好些
00:23:241 (1) - 这个finish去掉
00:24:986 (3) 和 00:25:313(1) - 这两个皆加上finish 感觉更好(只在前者加个也不错)~
00:28:039 (6) - 这里的连续两个finish 感觉有些拖拉(原始finish音效的原因造成),去掉这个,只单独前面一个finish效果会更不错
00:30:220 (2) 这个属于可加可不加的finish,觉得加了后 效果一般
00:31:093 (6) - 这一段finish有些多,就会感觉到有些闷,而且这里觉得不适合加这个finish
01:17:330 (2) - 开始的finish 移到 结束处,结束处的clap可以去掉
01:34:779~01:36:523 -..或者加个spinner?直接break也不错, 不过break没加到这里...
03:01:583 (2) - 把这个finish去掉,在后面slider开始处加finish

Other looks fine to me

只看了这个难度...不过

deserve a star
I'll kudos you with when Ar3sgice fixes the diff. And that goes to xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx too.
posted
orz... sorry, I really don't have much time...

fixed some finishes on 12T's, no fix on crystal's.

01:34:779 - 懒得改了, spin好奇怪可能前面也要改, 算了

edit: maybe for now I don't have some enough time for mapping, you can fix my diff for modding o.o

After ~19 days maybe I can have more time.

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ (Koro McAlpine) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!].osu
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