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Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai

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DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 08, 2012 at 1:28:11 PM

Artist: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai
Title: Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~
Source: Suku Suku Pon!
Tags: [CSGA]Ar3sgice Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai
BPM: 137.55
Filesize: 3958kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ar3sgice's Hard (4.75 stars, 444 notes)
  2. Easy (1.38 stars, 163 notes)
  3. Normal (3.02 stars, 250 notes)
Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This song is from the late 90s from a Japanese TV station from Nayoga called, TV Tokai.

TV Tokai is one of Fuji TV/FNN affiate from Nagoya, Aichi; Mie, and Gufu areas.

Read and translate this, it'll explain everything. http://ja.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%AE%AE% ... 3%E5%AD%90

Sung by one of TV Tokai's former staff and current staff.

I need any background that can fit this song.

Easy: Me
Normal: Me
Hard: [CSGA]Ar3sgice
Last edited by DerekMcD , edited 29 times in total.
athiota33
547 posts
Joined January 2011
athiota33
[General]

SPOILER
I think volume 70% is too loud
Your offset seems wrong.

[Easy]

SPOILER
00:08:008 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:17:158 (5) - Add whistle? to make it consistent
00:24:975 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:28:503 (1) - Lengthen until 00:29:812,it more fit
00:31:993 (1) - Lengthen until 00:33:302
00:56:647 (1) - Lengthen until 00:57:737
00:56:647 (1) - Move to 00:56:428 and add note at 00:57:737
01:27:845 (6) - NC
01:55:770 (4) - ^
02:27:405 (1) - Move to 02:27:187 and add note at 02:28:496
02:44:640 (5) - NC
The other part not finished yet,so i'll not mod it

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:12:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider end
00:14:322 (1) - Move to 00:14:540
00:14:976 (2) - Move to 00:15:194 and unsnapped slider end
00:17:158 (5) - Add whistle instead of finish? too make it consistent
00:22:394 (3) - Make this note into a slider and end it at 00:22:830
00:22:830 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:49:447 (6) - NC
00:52:938 (10) - ^
01:17:809 (2) - I don't really like this slider form
01:20:863 (5) - NC?
01:27:845 (6) - ^
02:02:752 (6) - ^
02:06:242 (7) - ^
02:13:224 (6) - ^
02:16:715 (12) - ^

That's all~ Good luck!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

kokoroanime wrote:

I need a Hard guest diff from you. Let me know if you like the song. If not, you can just mod it.

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43418

Thank you.
sure~ ^^

I think the timing needs some checking though :D
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

athiota33 wrote:

[General]

SPOILER
I think volume 70% is too loud
Your offset seems wrong.

[Easy]

SPOILER
00:08:008 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:17:158 (5) - Add whistle? to make it consistent
00:24:975 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:28:503 (1) - Lengthen until 00:29:812,it more fit
00:31:993 (1) - Lengthen until 00:33:302
00:56:647 (1) - Lengthen until 00:57:737
00:56:647 (1) - Move to 00:56:428 and add note at 00:57:737
01:27:845 (6) - NC
01:55:770 (4) - ^
02:27:405 (1) - Move to 02:27:187 and add note at 02:28:496
02:44:640 (5) - NC
The other part not finished yet,so i'll not mod it

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:12:795 (4) - Unsnapped slider end
00:14:322 (1) - Move to 00:14:540
00:14:976 (2) - Move to 00:15:194 and unsnapped slider end
00:17:158 (5) - Add whistle instead of finish? too make it consistent
00:22:394 (3) - Make this note into a slider and end it at 00:22:830
00:22:830 - Unsnapped inherited timing point
00:49:447 (6) - NC
00:52:938 (10) - ^
01:17:809 (2) - I don't really like this slider form
01:20:863 (5) - NC?
01:27:845 (6) - ^
02:02:752 (6) - ^
02:06:242 (7) - ^
02:13:224 (6) - ^
02:16:715 (12) - ^

That's all~ Good luck!
All of them are done and thank ya.
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
I can't DL the audio for this map...full-sub please..
btw If you want to do m4m.mod this map→ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42413
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

No_Gu wrote:

I can't DL the audio for this map...full-sub please..
btw If you want to do m4m.mod this map→ http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42413
It's done, re-download it.

It's too late, I already modded the other one. I'll keep your beatmap in case you want to mod this. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36764
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue. do for m4m
no source for this?
1st kiai should start at 00:07:528 .
2nd kiai sould start at 01:17:347.
3rd kiai sould start at 02:41:128
[easy]
00:34:147 (3) - move whistle to 4?
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - move clap from 2 to the end of 1
01:03:601 (1) - follow vocal here feel a little off. also fix the shape..do you like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227679
337,288,63601,6,0,B|313:340|257:348|197:340|173:288,1,200
02:02:729 (4) - a little close to 3 .use grid 4 to fix it
02:30:874 (1) - end at 02:31:965?
02:49:856 (3,4,5) - whistle
03:07:311 (4) - clap at the end?
I think you miss much clap in this diff.I don't know whether you think clap is noisy or you really don't know where to add..

[normal]
00:24:547 (7) - 1 grid left to follow 5
00:41:565 (5) - not stack well with 3's end
00:48:547 (5) - NC for speed down
01:11:238 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:165 (1) - clap in the end
02:49:856 (3,4,5) - whistle
03:09:056 (6) - NC

btw I think this offset is a little off.
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue. do for m4m
no source for this?
1st kiai should start at 00:07:528 .
2nd kiai sould start at 01:17:347.
3rd kiai sould start at 02:41:128
[easy]
00:34:147 (3) - move whistle to 4?
00:35:456 (1,2,1,2) - move clap from 2 to the end of 1
01:03:601 (1) - follow vocal here feel a little off. also fix the shape..do you like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/227679
337,288,63601,6,0,B|313:340|257:348|197:340|173:288,1,200
02:02:729 (4) - a little close to 3 .use grid 4 to fix it
02:30:874 (1) - end at 02:31:965?
02:49:856 (3,4,5) - whistle
03:07:311 (4) - clap at the end?
I think you miss much clap in this diff.I don't know whether you think clap is noisy or you really don't know where to add..

[normal]
00:24:547 (7) - 1 grid left to follow 5
00:41:565 (5) - not stack well with 3's end
00:48:547 (5) - NC for speed down
01:11:238 (2,3) - spacing
02:27:165 (1) - clap in the end
02:49:856 (3,4,5) - whistle
03:09:056 (6) - NC

btw I think this offset is a little off.
All done. Thank you. I kinda messed up the offset...
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
yay~ :)

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let`s Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let`s Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

yay~ :)
Added, please be patient... I have to deal with my other beatmap first...
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
Hey there! Sorry for late response~

[General]
Obviously, the Timing is totally off.
So here's the right one:
BPM: 137,55
Offset: 7558
don't forget to resnap all notes and all inherited timing sections.
The beatmap needs a background image. Please find one!

[Let's Try! Easy!]
HP-1. The current setting is too high for an easy.
00:07:965 (2) - finish on start. It fits the song great
00:33:710 (2,4) - move them down a bit. It's ugly to see underlapped circles.
00:49:419 (1) - this slider has a random follow point. I think you added it by mistake. please remove it http://puu.sh/eYgL
01:03:601 (1) - it's hard for a newbie player to read this. move it 1/2 earlier, on the downbeat! That makes it readable
01:05:128 (2,3) - unreadable. why not try like this:
01:07:092 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. That would make it readable
01:08:619 (2,3) - make them a slider
01:17:347 (1) - too early after a spinner. You should end that spinner 1/1 earlier. That would make it more easy for the player to read the notes.
01:48:765 (1) - delete the spinner. does not fit at all. and the next note(slider) is so early after that spinner
02:02:729 (4) - add a New Combo here, to split that long combo pattern :D
02:28:910 (3,4) - unreadable. try like this
02:30:656 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. That would make it readable
02:32:401 (2,3) - make them a slider
02:37:638 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier. like in the other kiai start
02:51:601 (6) - add a New Combo here, to split that long combo pattern :D
02:58:583 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier. like in the other kiai start

[Let's try! Normal]
OD+1. The current settings are like in easy lol
00:48:546 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is unrankable. D: I think you should let the default SV and make it longer.
00:56:618 (1) - It doesn't fit at all, and it's kinda unreadable. move it 1/2
01:11:237 (3,4) - distance error. Fix it please :p
01:13:855 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier.
01:26:073 (3,4,5) - add whistles. It fits great there
01:31:309 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner, and to map that part. it doesn't fit at all D:
01:48:764 (1) - delete this spinner too. I don't get the usage of it.
02:37:637 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier.
02:55:091 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner, and to map that part. it doesn't fit at all D:

The beatmap turns out pretty good. Though it needs a lot of fixes.
Good luck with it!
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
SPOILER

Tony wrote:

Hey there! Sorry for late response~

[General]
Obviously, the Timing is totally off.
So here's the right one:
BPM: 137,55
Offset: 7558
don't forget to resnap all notes and all inherited timing sections.
The beatmap needs a background image. Please find one!

[Let's Try! Easy!]
HP-1. The current setting is too high for an easy.
00:07:965 (2) - finish on start. It fits the song great
00:33:710 (2,4) - move them down a bit. It's ugly to see underlapped circles.
00:49:419 (1) - this slider has a random follow point. I think you added it by mistake. please remove it http://puu.sh/eYgL
01:03:601 (1) - it's hard for a newbie player to read this. move it 1/2 earlier, on the downbeat! That makes it readable
01:05:128 (2,3) - unreadable. why not try like this:
01:07:092 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. That would make it readable
01:08:619 (2,3) - make them a slider
01:17:347 (1) - too early after a spinner. You should end that spinner 1/1 earlier. That would make it more easy for the player to read the notes.
01:48:765 (1) - delete the spinner. does not fit at all. and the next note(slider) is so early after that spinner
02:02:729 (4) - add a New Combo here, to split that long combo pattern :D
02:28:910 (3,4) - unreadable. try like this
02:30:656 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier. That would make it readable
02:32:401 (2,3) - make them a slider
02:37:638 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier. like in the other kiai start
02:51:601 (6) - add a New Combo here, to split that long combo pattern :D
02:58:583 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier. like in the other kiai start

[Let's try! Normal]
OD+1. The current settings are like in easy lol
00:48:546 (1) - I'm pretty sure this is unrankable. D: I think you should let the default SV and make it longer.
00:56:618 (1) - It doesn't fit at all, and it's kinda unreadable. move it 1/2
01:11:237 (3,4) - distance error. Fix it please :p
01:13:855 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier.
01:26:073 (3,4,5) - add whistles. It fits great there
01:31:309 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner, and to map that part. it doesn't fit at all D:
01:48:764 (1) - delete this spinner too. I don't get the usage of it.
02:37:637 (1) - end this spinner 1/1 earlier.
02:55:091 (1) - I suggest to remove this spinner, and to map that part. it doesn't fit at all D:

The beatmap turns out pretty good. Though it needs a lot of fixes.
Good luck with it!

All of them are done.
Thank you.
Last edited by DerekMcD , edited 3 times in total.
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka
Hi ~ A request from Mod Queue ~ M4M . :)

[General]
I would like you to add [CSGA]Ar3sgice's diff as fast as you can. o.o" or no one will mod his diff. (lol) =w=''

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:23:261(3) = 1 grid to right ?
00:24:133(4) = your current place x288,y192 . change to x280,y176.
01:54:646(3) = move it to 01:54:864 ?
02:55:933(4) = 1 grid down?
03:09:455(2) = slider end till 03:10:327 ?
03:18:615(4) = your current place x288,192 . change to x272,y208.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:18:899(3) = x368,y32.
00:20:644(6) = x104,y336.
02:55:060(7) = NC

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
Change the name to "Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]" not "Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let`s Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let`s Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]"
00:17:590(1) = remove note.


That's all... @w@'' gomen nasai...
Can't mod well because my laptop is so damn lagg!! =w=''
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
SPOILER

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~ A request from Mod Queue ~ M4M . :)

[General]
I would like you to add [CSGA]Ar3sgice's diff as fast as you can. o.o" or no one will mod his diff. (lol) =w='' Don't worry, I'll warn these people to download it... But I told everyone that I will...

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:23:261(3) = 1 grid to right ?
00:24:133(4) = your current place x288,y192 . change to x280,y176.
01:54:646(3) = move it to 01:54:864 ?
02:55:933(4) = 1 grid down?
03:09:455(2) = slider end till 03:10:327 ?
03:18:615(4) = your current place x288,192 . change to x272,y208.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:18:899(3) = x368,y32.
00:20:644(6) = x104,y336.
02:55:060(7) = NC

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
Change the name to "Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]" not "Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let`s Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let`s Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]"
00:17:590(1) = remove note.


That's all... @w@'' gomen nasai...
Can't mod well because my laptop is so damn lagg!! =w=''

Thank you.
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Takos
Hi~ >w</
Mod request from my queue
PM me if you have any questions.
All Suggestions

Overall
  • You MUST have a background image.
    Don't forget to full submit
    I think you should use consistent Kiai times, it starts at different offsets for some of the diffs
Easy
  • 00:31:113 (3) - Remove Finish and add whistle?
    01:26:074 (3,4,5) - Add whistle?
    01:54:864 (3) - ^
    01:58:354 (4) - ^
    ]02:08:822 (4) - ^
    02:12:312 (4) - ^
    02:49:826 (3,4,5) - ^
Normal
  • AR+2?
    00:31:113 (4) - Remove Finish and add whistle?
    00:34:166 (3) - ^
    00:45:071 (5) - ^
    01:02:519 (6) - This slider plays better if it ends on a white tick
    01:06:881 (6) - Add NC
    01:07:099 (1) - Remove NC
    01:17:350 (1) - Add Finish?
    01:34:799 (1) - ^
    ]02:08:822 (5) - Remove Finish and add whistle?
    02:12:312 (5) - ^
    03:05:529 (4) - NC
    03:15:998 (1) - Add Finish?
Hard
  • 00:14:537 (1,2,3) - I think you can make this more symmetrical
    00:54:668 (5,6,7,8) - These notes aren't in a straight line
    01:17:350 (2) - Add Finish?
    01:34:799 (3) - Remove Finish?
    02:05:551 (7) - Delete this note and add note at 02:05:551 (7) - ?
    02:41:102 (2) - Add Finish?
    03:19:488 (1) - Add Finish at end?
old songs ftw
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</
Mod request from my queue
PM me if you have any questions.
All Suggestions

Overall
  • You MUST have a background image. I am working on it, still. Unless they'll help me how to crop a BG picture into 4:3...
    Don't forget to full submit
    I think you should use consistent Kiai times, it starts at different offsets for some of the diffs
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Takos wrote:

Hi~ >w</ Hi :)

Hard
  • 00:14:537 (1,2,3) - I think you can make this more symmetrical ok
    00:54:668 (5,6,7,8) - These notes aren't in a straight line fix
    01:17:350 (2) - Add Finish? fix
    01:34:799 (3) - Remove Finish? fix
    02:05:551 (7) - Delete this note and add note at 02:05:551 (7) - ? I don't get it... = = i think this rhythm is fine
    02:41:102 (2) - Add Finish? fix
    03:19:488 (1) - Add Finish at end? fix
old songs ftw
Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Mod request from my queue
is it really techno? D:


General
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:538, ends on 03:19:488 (Normal)
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:102, ends on 03:21:233 (Easy)
^ UNRANKABLE

Easy
00:11:047 (1) - not good for beginners
00:28:495 (1) - http://puu.sh/i0or looks better for me
00:31:985 (1) - ^
02:06:205 (1) - slider is ugly! reshape. ( http://puu.sh/i0qd looks better )
02:09:695 (1) - ^
02:16:674 (4) - not sure, that this shape is good for beginners
02:44:591 (1) - not good for beginners
03:05:529 (1) - ^

Normal
00:19:771 (4) - new combo
00:23:261 (4) - ^
00:37:219 (4) - http://puu.sh/i0sk looks better
v00:52:923 (1,2) - wtf? ugly sliders! reshape!
00:59:902 (1) - looks bad for me
01:33:054 (4) - new combo
01:53:992 (4) - not good
03:12:508 (6) - new combo

Hard
00:22:170 - circle here
03:14:253 (7) - x376 y 320
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
not bad
good luck
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
SPOILER

-Bakari- wrote:

Mod request from my queue
is it really techno? D:


General
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:538, ends on 03:19:488 (Normal)
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:102, ends on 03:21:233 (Easy)
^ UNRANKABLE

Easy
00:11:047 (1) - not good for beginners
00:28:495 (1) - http://puu.sh/i0or looks better for me
00:31:985 (1) - ^
02:06:205 (1) - slider is ugly! reshape. ( http://puu.sh/i0qd looks better )
02:09:695 (1) - ^
02:16:674 (4) - not sure, that this shape is good for beginners
02:44:591 (1) - not good for beginners
03:05:529 (1) - ^

Normal
00:19:771 (4) - new combo
00:23:261 (4) - ^
00:37:219 (4) - http://puu.sh/i0sk looks better
v00:52:923 (1,2) - wtf? ugly sliders! reshape!
00:59:902 (1) - looks bad for me
01:33:054 (4) - new combo
01:53:992 (4) - not good
03:12:508 (6) - new combo

Hard
00:22:170 - circle here
03:14:253 (7) - x376 y 320
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
not bad
good luck

2 kudosu? Lucky!!! But thanks for the mod, it's helpful. Few of them ignored until I'll think of what I'm gonna do.

Thank you.
AstroniX_old
30 posts
Joined June 2011
AstroniX_old
hi~~here is my mod ^^

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:14:973 (2) - Make this slider end at 00:15:845
01:12:116 (2) - Too far from spinner,it is hard for the beginer to catch it
02:35:867 (2) - ^
02:57:677 (6) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

02:35:431 (2) - Add clap only at end
02:35:867 (3) - remove this note,add a slider and end at 02:36:303 with clap

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:11:920 (3) - Make this slider end at 00:12:128
00:45:507 (1) - I think this slider should end at 00:45:725 is well
01:34:908 (1) - Add a spinner and end at 1:36:543 is well
02:45:464 (4) - This slider may be a little long,short it and add a note at:2:46:118(see pic)

02:49:826 (5) - new combo

that's all.a nice map,good luck!
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

AstroniX wrote:

hi~~here is my mod ^^

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:14:973 (2) - Make this slider end at 00:15:845
01:12:116 (2) - Too far from spinner,it is hard for the beginer to catch it But how was that? Explain...
02:35:867 (2) - ^ ^
02:57:677 (6) - ^ ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

02:35:431 (2) - Add clap only at end
02:35:867 (3) - remove this note,add a slider and end at 02:36:303 with clap

that's all.a nice map,good luck!
Thank you.
Kryptogram
600 posts
Joined December 2010
Kryptogram
Hi There ! Here is my M4M >w< !

General:

- I Think that start a KIA time before the offset its a bad idea :S http://puu.sh/ikcQ

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:12:792 (4) - Make this spinner ends here 00:13:664 (x) And remove note like this http://puu.sh/ibTk
00:39:400 (2) - Make it more curve http://puu.sh/ibTS
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
01:24:766 (2) - ^
01:35:671 (x) - I think its unnescesary start the break here just add it before the spinner end http://puu.sh/ibUY
02:26:271 (5) - Add clap at the end
02:28:452 (2) - Add clap
02:31:941 (2) - ^
02:48:517 (2) - Add finish at the begin
03:02:476 (2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:42:454 (1) - Add finish at the begin
00:59:902 (1) - Follow this partner http://puu.sh/ik0d Instead of many repeats
01:17:350 (1) - Remove finish
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:23:872 (2) - Remove note for beter spread
02:24:308 (4) - ^
02:37:176 (5) - Add clap
02:41:538 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:48:517 (2) - ^
03:02:476 (2) - ^
03:09:455 (2) - ^
03:15:998 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner end here ? 03:21:233 (x)

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:07:558 (1) - Add clap at the end
00:14:537 (1) - ^
00:21:080 (4) - Add clap at the begin
00:41:145 (2) - Add clap at the begin remove clap in the end
02:36:412 (3) - Remove note ? and 02:36:303 (2) move it to ther place
02:45:464 (4) - Make a 1/1 slider and follow this partner ? http://puu.sh/ikaI

Be creative whit your sliders and good mapset ! Hope it was helpful

Good Luck ! And Star !
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi There ! Here is my M4M >w< !

General:

- I Think that start a KIA time before the offset its a bad idea :S http://puu.sh/ikcQ

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:12:792 (4) - Make this spinner ends here 00:13:664 (x) And remove note like this http://puu.sh/ibTk
00:39:400 (2) - Make it more curve http://puu.sh/ibTS
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
01:24:766 (2) - ^
01:35:671 (x) - I think its unnescesary start the break here just add it before the spinner end http://puu.sh/ibUY
02:26:271 (5) - Add clap at the end
02:28:452 (2) - Add clap
02:31:941 (2) - ^
02:48:517 (2) - Add finish at the begin
03:02:476 (2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:42:454 (1) - Add finish at the begin
00:59:902 (1) - Follow this partner http://puu.sh/ik0d Instead of many repeats
01:17:350 (1) - Remove finish
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:23:872 (2) - Remove note for beter spread
02:24:308 (4) - ^
02:37:176 (5) - Add clap
02:41:538 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:48:517 (2) - ^
03:02:476 (2) - ^
03:09:455 (2) - ^
03:15:998 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner end here ? 03:21:233 (x)

Good Luck ! And Star !
Thank you so much. All of them are fixed and I'll do the General part later as I can.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
sorry that i don't have much time.. = =

-Bakari- wrote:

Hard
00:22:170 - circle here sry don't wanna add circle in my diff
03:14:253 (7) - x376 y 320 ..?
h clap

AstroniX wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:11:920 (3) - Make this slider end at 00:12:128 0v0 naww
00:45:507 (1) - I think this slider should end at 00:45:725 is well no.. listen to the song..
01:34:908 (1) - Add a spinner and end at 1:36:543 is well uhh spinner is good but I don't like 2 spinners in a row
02:45:464 (4) - This slider may be a little long,short it and add a note at:2:46:118(see pic) fixed in another way 0.0
02:49:826 (5) - new combo sure..

that's all.a nice map,good luck!

[Te][Amo] wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:07:558 (1) - Add clap at the end ?? there is one
00:14:537 (1) - ^ ^
00:21:080 (4) - Add clap at the begin finish is better i think
00:41:145 (2) - Add clap at the begin remove clap in the end added
02:36:412 (3) - Remove note ? and 02:36:303 (2) move it to ther place
02:45:464 (4) - Make a 1/1 slider and follow this partner ? http://puu.sh/ikaI wwwww
ok~

Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Hi,sorry for the delay D:

[Let's Try! Easy!]


  1. 00:19:771 (2) - Flip Horizontally?
  2. 02:55:060 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe place these note to do a pattern like this?
    SPOILER
  3. 03:14:253 (2) - Flip horizontally?

[Let's Try! Normal!]


  1. 00:14:973 (2) - Move the last waypoint 1 grid left
  2. 00:17:154 (5) - 2 grids down
  3. 00:47:688 (3) - You should put this here:
    SPOILER
  4. 01:17:787 (2) - Move the last waypoint 1 grid left
  5. You should map this diff until 03:21:233 - ,like the other diffs.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]


  1. 00:42:018 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 00:42:454 (3) - Add NC
  3. 00:43:326 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 01:22:367 (6) - 1 grid down
  5. 02:46:554 (1) - Remove the clap at the end of the slider
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

-kevincela- wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]


  1. 00:42:018 (1) - Remove NC ok
  2. 00:42:454 (3) - Add NC
  3. 00:43:326 (1) - Remove NC
  4. 01:22:367 (6) - 1 grid down it follows the music...
  5. 02:46:554 (1) - Remove the clap at the end of the slider no...
[/notice]
Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
JauiPlaY
Hi
Some suggestions:

[General]
No source?

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:09:302 (3,4) - Hard to read for an easy, change them into a slider.
00:42:454 (1) - Add finish to the beginning?
01:01:647 (4) - New combo.
01:19:095 (3,4) - Hard to read for an easy, change them into a slider.
01:31:309 (1) - Finish.
02:42:846 (3,4) - Hard to read for an easy, change them into a slider.
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point.
03:03:784 (3,4) - Hard to read for an easy, change them into a slider.
03:19:488 (1) - Finish.

[Let's Try! Normal!]
AR+1
00:11:047 (1) - Finish.
02:28:888 (5) - ^
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point.
01:01:647 (5) - New combo.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:45:507 (1) - Sounds weird for me.
00:48:997 (1) - ^
01:28:037 (2) - Remove this one.
01:29:782 (2) - ^
01:34:799 (3) - How about to set a spinner here?
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point.

That's all.
Btw is there any relationship between the background and the song?
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
from IRC request

[general]


  • Settings
  1. unify kiai time ~ (Normal)

[Let's Try! Easy!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
mapping
  1. 00:07:557 (1,2) - 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
    photo
  2. 00:14:537 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:40:709 (3) - awkward slider~
  4. 01:17:350 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
  5. 01:24:330 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:52:247 (1) - awkward slider~
  7. 02:41:102 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
  8. 02:48:081 (1,2) - ^
  9. 03:02:040 (1,2) - ^
  10. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:54:668 (2,1) -
  2. 02:06:205 (1,2) -
mapping
  1. 00:18:026 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing~[nazi]
  2. 00:25:006 (1) - end at 00:25:006 (1) - ? I think you can set it on downbeat~
  3. 00:41:581 (5,1) - awkward pattern~Don't overlaps slider or note in Normal plz >"<
  4. 00:52:050 (4,1) - ^
  5. 00:52:923 (1,2) - stack slider head(1) and slider tail [nazi]
  6. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
    photo
  7. 01:24:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    photo
  8. 02:41:538 (2) - not regular pattern~ you can let it much better and same suggest 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) -
  9. 02:48:517 (2) - ^
  10. 03:02:040 (1,2) - rhythm issue~
    photo
  11. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 01:19:749 (3,1) -
    mapping
  2. none~

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
good luck~
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

spboxer3 wrote:

from IRC request

[general]


  • Settings
  1. unify kiai time ~ (Normal)

[Let's Try! Easy!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
mapping
  1. 00:07:557 (1,2) - 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
    photo
  2. 00:14:537 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:40:709 (3) - awkward slider~ Fixed!
  4. 01:17:350 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
  5. 01:24:330 (1,2) - ^
  6. 01:52:247 (1) - awkward slider~ Fixed!
  7. 02:41:102 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
  8. 02:48:081 (1,2) - ^
  9. 03:02:040 (1,2) - ^
  10. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    03:02:040 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:54:668 (2,1) - Fixed!
  2. 02:06:205 (1,2) - Fixed!
mapping
  1. 00:18:026 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing~[nazi]
  2. 00:25:006 (1) - end at 00:25:006 (1) - ? I think you can set it on downbeat~
  3. 00:41:581 (5,1) - awkward pattern~Don't overlaps slider or note in Normal plz >"< Fixed!
  4. 00:52:050 (4,1) - ^
  5. 00:52:923 (1,2) - stack slider head(1) and slider tail [nazi]
  6. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
    photo
  7. 01:24:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
    photo
  8. 02:41:538 (2) - not regular pattern~ you can let it much better and same suggest 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) -
  9. 02:48:517 (2) - ^
  10. 03:02:040 (1,2) - rhythm issue~
    photo
  11. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^
red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
good luck~
Thank you so much for modding and you got good suggestions. But I ignored some of it because it follows the beat.

We'll see.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hello

General
* Inconsistent Kiai time http://puu.sh/j0NX


Let's Try! Easy!
00:52:923 (4) - New combo?
01:24:766 (2) - Make curve like 01:10:371 (1)
02:16:674 (4) - New combo?


Let's Try! Normal!
03:02:040 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I think these part needs more clap hitsound


Others are fine to me
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Leorda wrote:

Hello

General
* Inconsistent Kiai time http://puu.sh/j0NX Ah... Fixed. Thank you so much for showing me this.


Let's Try! Easy!
00:52:923 (4) - New combo? Added.
01:24:766 (2) - Make curve like 01:10:371 (1) Fixed.
02:16:674 (4) - New combo? Added.


Let's Try! Normal!
03:02:040 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I think these part needs more clap hitsound Added.


Others are fine to me
Thank you for modding this. You must be the first MAT who mods this. Come back for a recheck if you want to.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:45:507 (1) - Sounds weird for me. it's fine for me... it is in the music
00:48:997 (1) - ^
01:28:037 (2) - Remove this one. o.o no
01:29:782 (2) - ^
01:34:799 (3) - How about to set a spinner here?
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point. don't see timing point maybe already fixed o.o

sp3 wrote:

Overlaps~

01:19:749 (3,1) - www there is no way around... so i'd keep this
www
BurNing
29 posts
Joined May 2010
BurNing
1.Source is empty.I don't know why.
2.Add 1or2 new colours.

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:14:101 - add a circle
00:10:611 - add a circle
00:52:923 (1) - i think use 2 slider instead will be better
02:16:674 (1) - ^
02:37:612 (1) - the spinner is asynchronous with vocal,i think add 2 circle go with "go go" and the spinner can be a little short
02:58:550 (1) - ^
Easy is all.Not bad.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:13:446 (5) - delete this circle
01:05:137 (3,4,5,1,2) - cover is a lot
01:19:095 (3) - like this:http://puu.sh/j6yN
01:23:239 (5) - delete this circle
01:24:330 (1) - use a circle instead
02:14:711 (4) - delete this circle
02:28:234 (3) - delete this circle
02:30:633 (8,1) - too closed,change like this:http://puu.sh/j6CW
02:46:990 (5) - delete this circle
03:07:928 - delete this circle
Normal is all.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:13:882 (3) - not comfortable
01:09:935 (1,2) - too closed
This diff,on the whole, it wasn't bad.
---------------------------------------
All of this ,sorry for my poor english...

M4M：http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45775
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
[Overall]

tag is [CSGA]Ar3sgice, not [csga]ar3sgice or [CSGA]aR3sGICE.
It's better to have 1 more break.


[Easy]

00:07:994 (2) - move to 00:08:212 and shorten 1/2 beat. or ↓
00:09:302 (3) - lengthen 1/2 beat.
00:14:973 (2) - same as 00:07:994 (2)
01:17:787 (2,3) - ^
02:32:378 (3) - nazi - curve it to fit 02:31:941 (2)
02:41:538 (2,3) - same as 00:07:994 (2)
03:02:476 (2,3) - ^


[Normal]

00:09:302 (3) - nazi - curve it to fit end of 00:07:994 (2)?
00:43:326 (2) - better if stack with/depart from 00:41:581 (5)
01:03:392 (x) - add a note
01:17:787 (2,3,4) - see [Easy].
01:59:226 (1) - better if stack with/depart from 01:57:481 (4)
02:27:143 (1) - 1/2 beat later, and add a note at 02:27:143 (x)
02:41:538 (2,3,4) - see [Easy].


[Hard]

01:04:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - Skip here.
01:10:698 (3) - It's not suitable for the rhythm.
01:18:005 (3) - better if not lay on 01:18:659 (1)
01:55:300 (1) - nazi - 1 grid upside.
02:00:862 (1) - not suitable for the rhythm.
03:10:764 (1,2,3) - It's too close. (or antijump)
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD

Kannatsuki wrote:

1.Source is empty.I don't know why. It don't have a source because it was from one of Nagoya, Aich'si/Gifu's/Mie's TV stations
2.Add 1or2 new colours. These tree colors are from the logo of the TV station in Nagoya. http://www.tokai-tv.com/ Check out.

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:14:101 - add a circle No thanks...
00:10:611 - add a circle ^
00:52:923 (1) - i think use 2 slider instead will be better Nice one, but we'll see.
02:16:674 (1) - ^ ^
02:37:612 (1) - the spinner is asynchronous with vocal,i think add 2 circle go with "go go" and the spinner can be a little short We'll see.
02:58:550 (1) - ^ ^
Easy is all.Not bad.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:13:446 (5) - delete this circle No thanks...
01:05:137 (3,4,5,1,2) - cover is a lot We'll see.
01:19:095 (3) - like this:http://puu.sh/j6yN Not gonna fit.
01:23:239 (5) - delete this circle We'll see.
01:24:330 (1) - use a circle instead ^
02:14:711 (4) - delete this circle No thanks...
02:28:234 (3) - delete this circle ^
02:30:633 (8,1) - too closed,change like this:http://puu.sh/j6CW We'll see.
02:46:990 (5) - delete this circle No thanks...
03:07:928 - delete this circle ^
Normal is all.

M4M：http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45775
Thank you, I'll mod it later.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice

Kannatsuki wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:13:882 (3) - not comfortable i think it's ok
01:09:935 (1,2) - too closed ???

popner wrote:

[Hard]

01:04:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - Skip here. what do you mean..? jump is ok
01:10:698 (3) - It's not suitable for the rhythm. ..??
01:18:005 (3) - better if not lay on 01:18:659 (1) this one is fine I think
01:55:300 (1) - nazi - 1 grid upside. changed some spacing = =
02:00:862 (1) - not suitable for the rhythm. ..??
03:10:764 (1,2,3) - It's too close. (or antijump) anti-jump i think
Download: Momoko Miyazawa & Yumiko Imai - Let's Try! Go! Go! (kokoroanime) [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!].osu
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
DerekMcD
SPOILER

popner wrote:

[Overall]

tag is [CSGA]Ar3sgice, not [csga]ar3sgice or [CSGA]aR3sGICE.
It's better to have 1 more break.


[Easy]

00:07:994 (2) - move to 00:08:212 and shorten 1/2 beat. or ↓
00:09:302 (3) - lengthen 1/2 beat.
00:14:973 (2) - same as 00:07:994 (2)
01:17:787 (2,3) - ^
02:32:378 (3) - nazi - curve it to fit 02:31:941 (2)
02:41:538 (2,3) - same as 00:07:994 (2)
03:02:476 (2,3) - ^


[Normal]

00:09:302 (3) - nazi - curve it to fit end of 00:07:994 (2)?
00:43:326 (2) - better if stack with/depart from 00:41:581 (5)
01:03:392 (x) - add a note
01:17:787 (2,3,4) - see [Easy].
01:59:226 (1) - better if stack with/depart from 01:57:481 (4)
02:27:143 (1) - 1/2 beat later, and add a note at 02:27:143 (x)
02:41:538 (2,3,4) - see [Easy].

Thank you for modding. I skipped some of them because it's follows the music to me.
winber1
4,520 posts
Joined February 2010
winber1
Ar3sgice's

00:12:574 - this note needs to be mapped imo to follow vocals better.
00:13:882 (3) - works better if you removed repeat and added a note at 00:14:319. It's easier to read and feels more correct.
00:41:145 (2,3,4) - switch notes around http://puu.sh/jS4Q
01:10:371 (2,3) - it doesn't fit very well imo. Better to use red ticks.
02:34:559 (4) - like my first suggestion. if you mapped the middle note it would sound better imo.
02:43:283 (6) - some reason i just hate the sound of this emptiness. if you are going to use a blue tick in the previous slider, then in my opinion this truly calls for something like this http://puu.sh/jS6p
03:06:838 (4) - something similar to above?


Normal

00:16:282 (3) - i would add a new combo to emphasize the music
00:25:006 (1) - much better to end the spinner at 00:27:623 - imo
01:19:095 (3,4) - turn this into a slider
01:26:074 (3) - new combo?
02:49:826 (3) - ^
03:05:093 - i'd add a note
03:10:764 (3) - new combo?

Easy

00:16:282 (3) - new combo like normal?
01:26:074 (3) - ^... and etc..
02:02:716 (1,2) - spacing seems just a tad too big.

sorry for taking so long. been kinda busy, and lazy as well. Not much to suggest.
hope this helps a bit~~
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