DECO*27 feat. Topi - Love Distance Long Affair

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vivicat

kyuten wrote:

突然发现了一点...

[Storyboard]
SB/9.png 27.png 46.png
boku写成[仆]没问题么...应该是[僕]这个的样子..?
不懂日语压力山大....感谢! >A<
Colin Hou
偶尔路过, 如果歌词是百度知道之类地方搞到的.. 最好检查下是否还有自动简化这种事情发生
Topic Starter
vivicat

Colin Hou wrote:

偶尔路过, 如果歌词是百度知道之类地方搞到的.. 最好检查下是否还有自动简化这种事情发生
thx
cmn_891127
16:00 <cmn_891127> : 分数竟然没超?
16:02 <Blove> : 再多一个note就超了:D
16:02 <cmn_891127> : 噗……
16:05 <cmn_891127> : 02:04:881 (5) -
16:05 <cmn_891127> : 1100km
16:05 <Blove> : 嗯
16:06 <cmn_891127> : 我也说不好怎么改,总之这一团……好怨念
16:09 <Blove> : 嗯 我把这里改掉
16:10 <cmn_891127> : 要不要把难度名都提升一下
16:10 <Blove> : normal hard么
16:10 <cmn_891127> : 嗯
16:10 <Blove> : k
16:11 <cmn_891127> : 01:33:488 (6,7,8) -
16:11 <cmn_891127> : 这个是故意摆歪的么
16:12 <Blove> : 这里不是我做的。。
16:12 <Blove> : 我修修
16:14 <Blove> : k
16:14 <Blove> : 改完了
16:14 <cmn_891127> : normal
16:14 <cmn_891127> : 00:25:560 (1) -
16:15 <cmn_891127> : 有点胖
16:15 <Blove> : 胖loooool
16:15 <Blove> : k 改了
16:15 <cmn_891127> : ……
16:16 <cmn_891127> : 其实我想说肿的
16:16 <Blove> : 笑死
16:17 <cmn_891127> : 02:17:845 (2) - 我觉得错开比较好
16:17 <Blove> : k
16:18 <cmn_891127> : 02:56:417 (1) - 这个音效有问题
16:19 <Blove> : 这里就这样的
16:19 <cmn_891127> : 嗯
16:19 <Blove> : 你看最后一个难度
Faust
So, I've heard some details about this and I've decided to give this a good look.
Having only 2 combo colors is fine, I suppose. I don't think you'd consider adding another one if I suggested in any case.
Nice choice of song.

S h i a's Normal:

Tickrate 2.0 seems to work pretty well here.

- 00:27:274 (2) - Here's a harmless suggestion, still not really perfect. But if you increased the grid-size to make adjustments it could be.


- 01:08:417 (1) - Think 60% volume for the ending is a bit too loud. Normal volume would work better.

- 01:14:417 (2) - If you'd like to, try this out:

- 01:20:417 (1) - Haha, this is just cute.

- 01:25:559 (3) - Noticed the one before this too, if this is meant to be a heart-pulse then you've done a good job. :)

- 01:54:702 (1,2,3) - Just some aesthetic suggestion here. A little unevenness.


- 01:58:131 (1,2) - Looks nicer this way:

- 02:00:060 (3) - To complete it.

- 03:10:131 (3) - Why not move it up so that it's one singular curve?

- 03:30:702 (2) - Pull the 2nd sliderpoint from the start 1 grid down. Which would mean the 3rd slider point in the slider.

- 04:14:202 (3) - 4 grids left.

- 04:19:988 (1,2) - Looks better for a closure:

Hard:

I see you've intended to have the star rating down to a nicely rounded 4 in the menu.
But I'll suggest you up the AR by 1 anyway.
It doesn't cause it to lose the rating, and I honestly think it would be for the better if you did.

See, the issue is that the settings resemble the Normal pretty much in every aspect.
The good thing is that the way this whole thing is, it's reasonable and plays fine as it is.

Overall, engaging difficulty that manages to keep up with the song. No really identifiable style or patterning here, but it just solidly rides with the track itself, going through the motions very earnestly. And I think that is appealing for this kind of thing.

Harmless overlapping here and there. It's cool.

- 00:55:988 (4) - 1 grid up, perhaps?

- 00:56:363 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.

- 01:21:274 (4) - Seems a little weird. Why not duplicate the previous slider and just rotate it to the same angle as this one?

- 01:23:845 (1) - Might as well stack it on the previous note's fade-off

- 01:30:702 (1) - Rather you not cover a portion of the note.

- 01:34:131 (1,2) - Could be symmetrical, if anything else. You can copy the slider from - 01:34:988 (2) - and then flip it horizontally for (1)

- 02:23:845 (1) - 1 grid right?

- 02:52:131 (2) - 2 grids right.

- 03:38:417 (2) - Kinda spoilish. Seeing as it's actually paired with the next slider. Here's a quick fix:


- 03:54:274 (3) - 1 grid down.

- 03:58:988 (1) - ^

- 04:10:131 (1) - ^ Better not to obscure to this extent.

- 04:26:631 (3) - Looks odd. Try this?

1100km:

1100 combo !

Some very marginal things here, mainly. I had little to no trouble playing through this haha. The rhythm of the map matches the pace of the song quite well, I don't think there's any section you overdid.

One thing I really admire is the "hardness" of the mapping structure, blending smooth curves and linear shaping for certain parts of the song to accentuate the strong and soft moments. It's a really nice touch. :oops:

Just left to pointing out some minor things like slider-shapes, it'd be cool if you did them.
Hopefully, it doesn't end up annoying you too much.

- 00:15:274 (1) - Well, this looks a lot better, yes?

- 00:18:702 (1) - If you liked my little suggestion above, feel free to copy-paste it here as well.

- 00:22:131 (1) - Could look more wholesome, here.

- 00:57:274 (4) - Could try this out.

- 01:00:274 (2,3) - Doesn't seem too bad, and intentional at that. I guess this clears chances for strained readability due to overlaps.

- 01:07:131 (2) - No particular reason or aesthetic appeal for this overlap imo. Maybe it's for the feel of "closeness" ?

- 02:03:274 (1,2) - These seem to be a consistent trait throughout. I think they're fine like that, and even more if you spread them intentionally.

- 02:06:702 (1) - 1 grid left, so it becomes perfectly aligned/centralized.

- 02:42:702 (1) - Normally, one would be careful about such alignments, but I guess it passes nicely since I can see the sliderpath and end.

- 03:04:345 (2) - Now, I could barely see this coming due to kiai and a little bit of the previous hitcombo. Might ruin the arrangement a little, but I'd like to stress that this is a potential issue. Might want to do something about this, yes?

That's about it.
S h i a
[1100km]
00:15:274 (1) - 把slider拉好看点~ 00:18:702 (1) the same
01:20:417 (1,2) - 1,2 位置对调
02:32:202 (4) - 尾巴左上翘好看些
04:04:774 (4) - 与04:04:988 (1) - 间隙做好看点

No kds.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
S h i a's Normal

you should to unmark the "Enable Countdown"

01:08:417 (1) - remove finish hitsound at the end of slider
01:10:131 (1) - add finish hitsound at the beginning of slider

01:14:417 (1) -It will be better if you make symmetrical with rotating around Y-axis (shape of the last slider)

like



01:20:417 (1) - antepenultimate waypoint - x:296 y:240

02:47:845~02:57:274 - there is a lack of hitsounds in this section
It depends on you,but i'd like to add a finish hitsound at 02:47:845 (s:default)

03:01:560 (1) - finish
03:20:417 (4) - add finish in the beginning

04:23:845 - soft hitsound?

hard

countdown 去掉

01:08:631 (1) - spinner 往前延伸4分1?更紧凑一些 这样

01:10:131 (1 ) - finish
03:25:560 - 和后面那个slider 形状上对称 觉得好些更

1100km

countdown 去掉
01:10:131 (1 ) - finish

fine
LKs
mod req via in-game pm
happy lover’s day viviblove

General

Error

  1. Remove countdown from all diffs


Suggestion

  1. "1100km" should be "1100KM"
  2. shia, s_h_i_a, s h i a, which should be written into Tags?


S h i a's Normal

Tick rate 1 works better imo

00:43:131 (2) - 1 grid left
01:08:417 (1) - curve中间的那个白点往下一格
01:20:417 (1) - 这心形太平了 稍微逆时针转一点
01:25:559 (3) - 这不像心电图了 slider太短太粗
02:57:917 (1) - make this start at 02:58:131 (1) -
03:45:274 (2) - 意义不明 太着急了不得已先下着了?

Hard

this plays bad with AR5, +1~3 imo

04:01:560 (1,2,3,4) - 形状 其实复制粘贴转九十度就好了

1100km


00:15:274 (1) - slider shape
00:15:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nono 虽然这是你的设计 但..第一368不在一条直线上 第二太窝的慌
00:18:702 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 瞎了 好吧就这样吧
00:23:417 (3,4,5) - 也不在直线上 开更小的格子校对
01:35:845 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 你设计的颜色就两个 不足以支撑使用NC效果 不如http://puu.sh/gSpv
02:53:631 (2) - 2个beginning一个note不在一条线上 略悲剧

good luck
S h i a

LKs wrote:

shia, s_h_i_a, s h i a, which should be written into Tags?
"shia s_h_i_a" tag were used in all my map/guest diff ;)

Fixed almost every thing. thanks for all you guys. :)
Topic Starter
vivicat
All fixed,thx all. :)
Faust
Since we got everything working in the past few hours, and I think that this is ready to go...

Have your bubble. :oops:
Topic Starter
vivicat

Faust wrote:

Since we got everything working in the past few hours, and I think that this is ready to go...

Have your bubble. :oops:
thx!! <3 ;)
Garven
Sorry, sorry. It's not technically late for me yet. q:

[General]
Set video offset to 137 on all difficulties.

[Normal]
01:08:417 (1) - The normal ticks on this stick out really bad. Switch to the soft sound set and lower the volume a bit so it doesn't stick out so much.
01:11:845 (3) - Arrange like this so it looks more even.
01:25:559 (3) - ^
03:11:631 (1) - Start this at 03:11:845 -
03:20:417 (4) - Really lop-sided. See if you can do a smoother curve like this:
03:41:845 (3,1) - This overlap is pretty bad. Think you can rearrange things so you don't have to resort to that?
03:43:560 (1,1) - Doesn't flow very well to me. I kind of want to move to the top-center to go with the curve of the heart slider.
03:47:845 (2) - But if you don't change that, please ctrl+r this.
04:21:702 - Maybe add a note here and start the spinner at 04:22:131 - ?

[Hard]
01:36:702 (1) - Remove new combo
03:13:560 (1) - Repeat arrow is covered by the hitburst from 03:12:702 (3) -
03:30:702 (1) - Remove finish
04:21:060 (2) - Remove finish

[1100KM]
Wow that score spread. q:
02:32:202 (4) - Clap sounds weird on the end of this. I'd remove it.
02:59:845 (1) - Odd that you have this one silenced, but not 01:08:631 (1) -
03:54:702 (1) - Finish doesn't fit here imo
Topic Starter
vivicat

Garven wrote:

Sorry, sorry. It's not technically late for me yet. q:

[General]
Set video offset to 137 on all difficulties.

[Normal]
01:08:417 (1) - The normal ticks on this stick out really bad. Switch to the soft sound set and lower the volume a bit so it doesn't stick out so much.
01:11:845 (3) - Arrange like this so it looks more even.
01:25:559 (3) - ^
03:11:631 (1) - Start this at 03:11:845 -
03:20:417 (4) - Really lop-sided. See if you can do a smoother curve like this:
03:41:845 (3,1) - This overlap is pretty bad. Think you can rearrange things so you don't have to resort to that?
03:43:560 (1,1) - Doesn't flow very well to me. I kind of want to move to the top-center to go with the curve of the heart slider.
03:47:845 (2) - But if you don't change that, please ctrl+r this.
04:21:702 - Maybe add a note here and start the spinner at 04:22:131 - ?

[Hard]
01:36:702 (1) - Remove new combo
03:13:560 (1) - Repeat arrow is covered by the hitburst from 03:12:702 (3) -
03:30:702 (1) - Remove finish
04:21:060 (2) - Remove finish

[1100KM]
Wow that score spread. q:
02:32:202 (4) - Clap sounds weird on the end of this. I'd remove it.
02:59:845 (1) - Odd that you have this one silenced, but not 01:08:631 (1) -
03:54:702 (1) - Finish doesn't fit here imo
All fixed,thx!! :)
Garven
Did a little more IRC modding touching up some hit sounds, and other small fixes. A small flow problem in 1100KM. Uhhh I think that's it.

Unfortunately, since there was the hidden repeat, I can only rebubble, sorry.

Although a little late, happy v-day vivi~
Breeze
Red : Unrankable/error staff, you should fix
Blue : Important things, you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions, fix it only if you want

General

  1.                      HP Drain Rate      Overall difficulty
    S h i a's Normal 4 4
    Hard 3 4
    There's something wrong, you know it

SB

  1. 还是老问题, 你歌词SB里的日文一直都是中文字符...但是日文字符有些跟中文不太一样
    1. 9.png : 仆 → 僕
    2. 36.png : 愿 → 願
    3. 46.png : 仆 → 僕

1100KM

  1. 02:53:631 (2,3) - Spacing... Hmm, played well, but don't looked well...just sayin, nothing much wrong

One of my best friend break up with his girlfriend just because they live long distance after graduate from university, I've never tired long distance love, idk how it feels. It must be a hard life, I think, anyway, to those who are in long distance love, insist what you believe, happiness would finally come to you :P

fix these and call me back for a rank
baby blue
<3
Topic Starter
vivicat

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff, you should fix
Blue : Important things, you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions, fix it only if you want

General

  1.                      HP Drain Rate      Overall difficulty
    S h i a's Normal 4 4
    Hard 3 4
    There's something wrong, you know it

SB

  1. 还是老问题, 你歌词SB里的日文一直都是中文字符...但是日文字符有些跟中文不太一样
    1. 9.png : 仆 → 僕
    2. 36.png : 愿 → 願
    3. 46.png : 仆 → 僕

1100KM

  1. 02:53:631 (2,3) - Spacing... Hmm, played well, but don't looked well...just sayin, nothing much wrong

One of my best friend break up with his girlfriend just because they live long distance after graduate from university, I've never tired long distance love, idk how it feels. It must be a hard life, I think, anyway, to those who are in long distance love, insist what you believe, happiness would finally come to you :P

fix these and call me back for a rank
thank you breeze,all fixed :oops:
Breeze
Here we go
kanpakyin
恭喜了...
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