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Sonar Pocket - Never Give Up!

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Topic Starter
hillaryzx
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, 9 February, 2012 at 8:47:11 PM

Artist: Sonar Pocket
Title: Never Give Up!
Source: Digimon Xros Wars
Tags: cross heart blue flare bagura army twilight loader j4yj4ys3z
BPM: 142
Filesize: 4129kb
Play Time: 03:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Blue Flare (2.02 stars, 209 notes)
  2. j4y's Army (4.54 stars, 451 notes)
  3. Xros Heart (4.56 stars, 418 notes)
Download: Sonar Pocket - Never Give Up!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd Beatmap
1st Opening song from Digimon Xros Wars(Full Ver.)
Enjoy!

-Blue Flare - 100%
-Xros Heart - 100%
-j4y's Army diff. added.
BrokenArrow
Bpm : 142
Offset : 1350

Don't forget to resnap all your notes :)
Topic Starter
hillaryzx
Ok! :)
ibavnoci
Here are some suggestions for you.

Xros Heart:
00:36:103 - replace this triplet with a slider
00:37:476 - same here
00:45:716 - what exactly do you follow with this spinner? It should be placed here: 00:46:350 - 00:48:357 if you want to have it.
00:57:335 - 00:58:814 you miised a perfect place for stream here, but the way it is done now is also fine
01:04:096 - make this slider last until: 01:04:941
02:22:687 - starting theese sliders on the same spot doesn't feel right.
02:37:687 - this note is should be here: 02:37:476

Nice map so far. Keep up the good work.
j4yj4ys3z
General

There are timing points where it's not really needed.
? are suggestions.
Remove "Note: Done..."
You must have one difficulty under 3 stars. I'm saying this because the time you finish Blue Flare it'll probably be over 3 stars. If you want I can make an easy difficulty for you.
If there are any mistakes forgive me I'm really tired >.<.

Both Difficulties

00:01:350- Make this Soft in audio.
00:01:455- Remove timing point.
00:08:004-00:08:216- Why do you need a kiai time here?

Blue Flare

00:41:913- New combo
00:43:180- Remove new combo
00:52:899- Remove new combo
00:57:969- New combo
01:00:504- Remove new combo
01:01:561- New combo
01:02:828- Remove new combo
01:03:885- New note
01:11:701- New combo
01:12:758- Remove new combo
01:15:293- New combo
01:16:561- Remove new combo
01:19:096- New combo.

Xros Heart

00:00:082-00:01:350- Add a spinner?
00:04:730 (7)- New combo
00:06:526(10)- Remove slider 10 and make it a spinner instead at 00:06:420-00:08:110 (Use finish)
00:08:220(1)- Remove
00:20:997-00:23:955- How about something like this?

00:29:026-00:29:342- Do what you did at 00:30:716.
00:34:307(3)- Move this to 00:34:202
00:34:413(x)- Add a note.
00:34:519- Move the spinner to here and let it end at 00:35:575
00:35:997(1)- Move the slider here.
00:36:420(2)- Move note 2 here and remove slider
00:48:251- End spinner here.
00:50:997- Move note 3 to here.
00:51:420- Add a note here
00:51:842- New combo
01:48:251- ^
02:22:687- ^
Topic Starter
hillaryzx
Done in making Blue Flare diff.
j4yj4ys3z
K finished. I didn't know what to name it so I'll leave it up to you :3

Download: Sonar Pocket - Never Give Up! (hillaryzx) [j4y].osu
Topic Starter
hillaryzx
done adding.
want moves on to pending...
Asgard

  • [General]
  1. bg.jpg is 1365x768 is not good
    maximum resolution is 1024x768
  2. uncheck letterbox during breaks http://puu.sh/g1FM
  3. KIAI time is different make same
  4. where is normal??? easy insane insane?? Xros Heart look like insane and i4y's Army same :(

    KIAI
    1th KIAI time start : 00:57:969 end : 01:26:490
    2th KIAI time start : 02:08:955 end : 02:37:476
    3th KIAI time start : 03:24:166 end : 03:59:026


    [Xros Heart]
  5. 00:04:307 (7) - NC
  6. 00:23:638 - add note
  7. 00:24:378 (3) - NC
  8. 00:27:335 (1) - remove NC
  9. 00:28:392 (2) - NC
  10. 00:38:955 (10) - NC
  11. 00:40:011 (1) - remove NC
  12. 01:44:871 (3) - overlap :(
  13. 01:49:730 (1) - remove spinner i think this is not good... used note and slider
  14. 02:43:392 (1) - remove NC
  15. 03:35:786 (3) - distance
  16. 03:54:166 (4) - NC
  17. 03:57:547 (6) - ^
  18. i think you need more work :(

    [j4y's Army]
  19. omg... AR 8... i recommended AR 6
  20. 00:03:040 (4) - not symmetry with (1)
  21. 00:43:603 (7) - NC
  22. 02:14:448 (6) - NC
  23. 03:25:434 (3) - not symmetry with (1)
  24. 03:27:124 (7) - same reason
  25. i think you need more work :(

    [blue Flare]
  26. Make whole song :(
i can't mod anymore :(
Wafu
[-General-]

1365x768 background, it's unrankable - Crop it on 1024x768.
Kiai haves diffirent end at all difficulties... fix it.
Offset can be just 82.

[-Xros Heart-]

Why is everything linear? Do something with it.
Topic Starter
hillaryzx
Thanks for the advice...=A=

try to fix all...
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