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Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Nyquill
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
mancuso_JM_
If you want I can make a Normal diff
Xakyrie
I think there's someone already making it, they're just deciding whether or not they have the allotted time to do so.
Suimya
ok Taiko BG's is done

Shana is so moe moe >A<!


EDIT: fixed those two BGs ;wwww;
dont laugh at me again ;wwwwwwwwwww;

EDIT 2: be sure to turn off the video on both taiko diffs :3



Xakyrie

-Sekai- wrote:

ok Taiko BG's is done

Shana is so moe moe >A<!


EDIT: fixed those two BGs ;wwww;
dont laugh at me again ;wwwwwwwwwww;

EDIT 2: be sure to turn off the video on both taiko diffs :3
OMFG POEUTEIHTFI:SLJOOW{

SEKAI I FUCKING LOVE YOU THIS IS AWESOME >////<
Pereira006

xcherry wrote:

-Sekai- wrote:

ok Taiko BG's is done

Shana is so moe moe >A<!

I fail this because i looking this girl you little pervet o.o
go nyquill go
/me hidden
Makar
Xakyrie
you take so fucking long >.>

anyways, organized things better and fixed random spam and shit. here you go.
YTYuyu
for now im gonna star this. when normal is done let me know.
YTYuyu
alright let's see what i can find. mod requested by Makar. :D

General:
The BG's dimensions are at 921x767. resize it to either 1024x768 or 800x600 to be rankable.
uhh why is the preview time at -1?
I don't see any new combo colors. perhaps red to match Shana's hair? and green and white for the clothing?
Get rid of the period on (TV size). i don't see a reason why it's there.

Makar's Easy:
00:07:274(3,4) - it'd sound a lot better and consistent if you can add a soft clap at the repeat arrow for (3) and a soft clap at (4)
00:38:972(2) - make this look the same as (1). it looks a lot nicer during gameplay IMO
01:21:425(1) - this is way too far to the middle. beginners might not be able to reach this after the spinner is complete. so put it to or near the middle to make it easier for beginners.

Haruka's Normal:
00:07:274 - is there a reason why a green line is here?
00:17:463(6) - IMO this slider can look a lot nicer and smoother.
00:23:406(7) - a NC here because it follows instrumental.
00:28:783(3,4) - NC here because of vocals. and a spacing error between (3,4)
00:32:463(7) - same as 00:23:406

JBsparta's Normal:
Alright time for a re-check on this.
00:48:029 - add a 1/1 slider to follow vocals.
00:59:066(4) - *nazi* rotate the end to the point that it gets stacked on (2) at 01:00:835
01:07:274(1) - can you move this down because it's touching the Hp bar? this might cause a distraction for other players.

Hard:
00:07:274(9) - a NC here because it follows the drums.
00:27:793(7) - same as above because it's following instrumental.
00:42:368(7) - ^ because of vocals.
00:57:217(7) - ^
01:00:481(7) - ^
01:20:859(11) - ^ because it's following the guitar.

Insane:
00:22:840(5) - NC here like at 00:20:576
00:28:783(5) - ^ because it's following vocals. (1-4) is following instrumental.
00:37:840(7) - ^ because of vocals.
00:42:368(9) - ^
00:44:774(4) - ^ because (4-7) is following that long pause in vocals.
00:46:614(8) - same as 00:37:840
00:51:142(9) - ^ because it's following "naii"
00:58:217(6) - ^ because of vocals.
01:29:774(11) - delete this note because it doesn't look like it's following anything at all.

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Topic Starter
Nyquill

Byakugan249 wrote:

Insane:
01:29:774(11) - delete this note because it doesn't look like it's following anything at all. drums

this is the best i can do. GL :D
Did everything else, yeah there was some massive derp in the comboing process when I did this.

Thanks for the mod \o/
SpartanHornetz

Byakugan249 wrote:

JBsparta's Normal:
Alright time for a re-check on this.
00:48:029 - add a 1/1 slider to follow vocals.
00:59:066(4) - *nazi* rotate the end to the point that it gets stacked on (2) at 01:00:835
01:07:274(1) - can you move this down because it's touching the Hp bar? this might cause a distraction for other players.
Got it all down. Thanks for the mod man. o/

Download: Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size) (Nyquill) [JBsparta's Normal].osu
Makar

Byakugan249 wrote:

Makar's Easy:
00:07:274(3,4) - it'd sound a lot better and consistent if you can add a soft clap at the repeat arrow for (3) and a soft clap at (4) Ignoring because the custom claps here follow the drums that start in this section.
00:38:972(2) - make this look the same as (1). it looks a lot nicer during gameplay IMO Ignoring because this blankets (2) from the previous combo.
01:21:425(1) - this is way too far to the middle. beginners might not be able to reach this after the spinner is complete. so put it to or near the middle to make it easier for beginners. Changed a little bit but remember that its bad to have notes in the middle after a spinner. =w=
Download: Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size) (Nyquill) [Makar's Easy].osu
Haruka_old

Byakugan249 wrote:

alright let's see what i can find. mod requested by Makar. :D thanks Mark! :D

Haruka's Normal:
00:07:274 - is there a reason why a green line is here? I inherited all timing points; don't hurt me! >x<
00:17:463(6) - IMO this slider can look a lot nicer and smoother. Slider-sama helped me fix this; much smoother now! Dx
00:23:406(7) - a NC here because it follows instrumental. done.
00:28:783(3,4) - NC here because of vocals. and a spacing error between (3,4) how did I miss that? :o fixed~
00:32:463(7) - same as 00:23:406 done.

this is the best i can do. GL :D thanks for looking at my diff! :oops:
arien666
[Haruka's Normal]
00:05:576 (2) - Shape seems little sharp'd so why don't you make it more smooth :3?
00:27:934 (1,3) - Swap new combo?

[Insane]
00:09:397 (1) - Start from 00:09:538 ?
01:11:519 (4) - Seems little hidden so why don't you use alternative way :3?

[Extra]
00:09:397 (1) - Start from 00:09:538 ?

[Cherry's Taiko]
00:13:359 (2) - don?
00:19:373 (1) - Just kat ;_;?
00:26:519 (3) - Change into circles :3?
01:29:632 (1) - Delete finish?



Err... Taiko seems little hard ;_;
orz orz orz
Topic Starter
Nyquill

arien666 wrote:

[Insane]
01:11:519 (4) - Seems little hidden so why don't you use alternative way :3? blargh, mapped in the slider.

Err... Taiko seems little hard ;_; CHERRY YOU KAT GUY
orz orz orz
Did your other suggestions for insane and extra.
YTYuyu
alright this is for JB. me and Makar did an IRC mod for your diff. no kds for me.

IRC mod
10:55 <Byakugan249> : alright you said justin's diff has been remapped right?
10:56 <Makar8000> : sorta yeah
10:56 <Makar8000> : new circle size
10:56 <Makar8000> : new slider velocity
10:56 <Makar8000> : new spacing
10:56 <Makar8000> : etc
11:00 <Byakugan249> : are you sure that the SV changed?
11:01 <Makar8000> : yeah
11:01 <Byakugan249> : because it's at 1.00
11:01 <Makar8000> : yeah
11:01 <Makar8000> : it used to be
11:01 <Makar8000> : 0.7
11:01 <Makar8000> : which is lower than the normal
11:01 <Makar8000> : lol
11:01 <Makar8000> : so he changed it, fixed spacing and stuff
11:01 <Byakugan249> : ahh when i mod hard diffs usually i expect the SV to be at least 1.50
11:01 <Makar8000> : well
11:01 <Makar8000> : this is
11:02 <Makar8000> : really high BPM
11:02 <Makar8000> : so
11:02 <Makar8000> : it should be fine at 1.0
11:02 <Makar8000> : imo
11:02 <Byakugan249> : alright i agree
11:02 <Makar8000> : anyways
11:02 <Makar8000> : its mainly note placements im worried about
11:02 <Byakugan249> : oh?
11:02 <Makar8000> : I dont think he changed hitsounds or new combos or anything so no point in modding that again :P
11:03 <Byakugan249> : 00:09:538 - (1,2,3) - this should be a spinner to follow the guitar
11:04 <Makar8000> : it follows the symbol taps too
11:04 <Makar8000> : btw
11:04 <Makar8000> : you know you can just
11:04 <Makar8000> : copy notes
11:04 <Byakugan249> : ik that but idk how
11:04 <Makar8000> : if you select 00:09:538 (1,2,3) - and copy (CTRL+C or just do it in the edit menu)
11:05 <Makar8000> : then paste in here or on the forum
11:05 <Makar8000> : it will paste as "00:09:538 (1,2,3) - "
11:05 <Byakugan249> : ohh ok
11:05 <Makar8000> : saves a lot of time
11:05 <Makar8000> : lol
11:06 <Byakugan249> : viewtopic.php?p=1339554#p1339554 i can't believe i typed all this without
11:06 <Byakugan249> : doing that :O
11:06 <Makar8000> : lol
11:06 <Makar8000> : that sucks xD
11:06 <Makar8000> : must of took you a long time
11:06 <Makar8000> : =w=
11:06 <Byakugan249> : almost 2 hours
11:07 <Byakugan249> : i was expecting a short mod from myself because that's rin's map
11:07 <Makar8000> : yeah
11:09 <Byakugan249> : 00:41:095 (4) - this looks a lot better if it's stacked IMO
11:10 <Makar8000> : I think the timing would be hard to predict if it was stacked but
11:10 <Makar8000> : it works both ways I guess
11:12 <Byakugan249> : 01:02:746 (1) - this spinner should end at 01:04:302 because of vocals
11:13 <Makar8000> : if he does that
11:13 <Makar8000> : then he should also make a soft timing point at the end of the spinnner
11:13 <Makar8000> : as it is now, it ends where the drum hits lol
11:13 <Byakugan249> : well it's up to him since it's his diff
11:14 <Makar8000> : yeah
11:15 <Byakugan249> : 01:22:557 (3) - this should be a 1/1 slider to follow the guitar
11:15 <Makar8000> : agree'd
11:15 <Byakugan249> : 01:24:821 (4) - here too
11:16 <Makar8000> : yupyup
11:16 <Byakugan249> : 01:27:085 (4) - and here
11:16 <Makar8000> : mhm
11:16 <Byakugan249> : that's all i guess
11:16 <Makar8000> : post in thread so justin can see~
Makar
"?" or "imo" at the end just means its a suggestion, my grammar isn't that bad D:

[General]

  1. Your taiko oni in the OP isn't fixed to the new title
  2. The Light Blue combo color is a bit weird even when playing with video, it's very bright orz. I think you should use colors to match the bg, or get a bg that matches the colors :v.
  3. Oh you noob you didn't remove the audio from the video >.>
  4. Video dimensions are messed... Just take Andreas video.
  5. The mp3 ends suddenly (the hitsounds last longer than the mp3 does) so maybe you should take that from Andrea's map too.

[Haruka's Normal]


  • Recheck I guess~ Mostly hitsounds. Good first map :3
  1. 00:23:972 (3) - Clap?
  2. 00:24:255 (4) - Clap at the end?
  3. 00:33:312 (4) - Remove clap at the repeat, add one at the end?
  4. 00:34:444 (5) - Only put a clap at the end?
  5. 00:37:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is really cool =w= but its a sudden change in difficulty that ends in the next combo. If you want to fix, my suggestion would be to shorten 00:38:406 (3) to end on the white tick, then remove 00:38:265 (2). Oh and imo the whistles should be removed but we already discussed that in PM orz.
  6. 00:38:406 (3) - If you do shorten this, add a clap at the end?
  7. 00:39:821 (6) - Remove clap?
  8. 00:40:104 (7) - Clap at the end?
  9. 00:42:368 (3) - Finish at start, maybe remove whistle?
  10. 00:43:925 (5) - Remove whistle?
  11. 01:02:746 (1) - Clap maybe?
  12. 01:08:406 (3) - Clap at the end?
  13. 01:29:349 (7) - Clap at the end?

[JBsparta's Hard]

  1. 00:07:274 (1) - Make this a 1/2 repeat slider, with claps on the start and end.
  2. 00:16:897 (4) - Make this a 1/2 repeat slider, with claps on the start and end.
  3. 00:19:161 (1) - Change to a 1/2 slider that doesn't repeat, clap on start and end.
  4. 00:19:444 (2) - Change to a 1/2 slider that doesn't repeat, clap on start and end.
  5. 00:19:727 - This section is really empty, try adding some notes? No suggestions though sorry. x:
  6. 00:30:481 (4,5) - Change to a 1/2 repeat slider that repeats, with a clap on the end.
  7. 00:51:991 (4) - Change to a 1/2 repeat slider that repeats, with a clap on the end.
  8. 00:53:972 - Add a note.
  9. 00:54:255 (1,2) - Change to a 1/2 repeat slider that repeats, with a clap on the end.
  10. 00:58:783 (3,4) - Change to a 1/2 repeat slider that repeats, with a clap on the end. Also, add a circle.
  11. 00:59:632 (5) - Change to a circle with a clap.
  12. 00:59:915 - Make this a repeating 1/2 slider with a clap on the end; you will have to delete 01:00:198 (1).
  13. 01:00:481 - Add a note.
  14. 01:15:765 (4) - Change to a 1/2 repeat slider that repeats, with a clap on the end.
  15. 01:22:557 (3) - Change to a 1/1 slider.
  16. 01:24:821 (4) - Change to a 1/1 slider.
  17. 01:27:085 (4) - Change to a 1/1 slider.

[Cherry's Taiko]

  1. Besides having a bunch of katsu and katsu patterns that don't really fit (honestly this seems like more than ono or climbb now) and some parts that seem overmapped, this taiko is moe~ *calls for mitten*

[Insane]

  1. 00:23:406 (3,4,5) - (nazi) These are not parallel lolol.
  2. 01:06:708 (5) - Maybe make this a stream since this is an insane now?
  3. 01:11:802 (6) - New combo? I'd suggest something about the previous combo too but I'm not sure what you could do there. =w=
  4. 01:20:151 (7) - New combo?

[Extra]

  1. Nothing to point out here. :3
Topic Starter
Nyquill

Makar8000 wrote:

"?" or "imo" at the end just means its a suggestion, my grammar isn't that bad D:

[General]

  1. Your taiko oni in the OP isn't fixed to the new title
  2. The Light Blue combo color is a bit weird even when playing with video, it's very bright orz. I think you should use colors to match the bg, or get a bg that matches the colors :v.
  3. Oh you noob you didn't remove the audio from the video >.>
  4. Video dimensions are messed... Just take Andreas video.
  5. The mp3 is ends suddenly (the hitsounds last longer than the mp3 does) so maybe you should take that from Andrea's map too.

[Insane]

  1. 00:23:406 (3,4,5) - (nazi) These are not parallel lolol. your face is not parallel lolol.
  2. 01:06:708 (5) - Maybe make this a stream since this is an insane now? even at this diffuculty a stream of this length is HOLYSHITWTFHAX
  3. 01:11:802 (6) - New combo? I'd suggest something about the previous combo too but I'm not sure what you could do there. =w= aw, yeah massive derp with the combos here.
  4. 01:20:151 (7) - New combo?kk
Will fix the folder related shit later.
Mythol
Randomly modding this o.o

General
Change combo color 2, it's the same color as her hair.

Easy
00:57:085 (2) - Maybe this? http://puu.sh/hGra
01:09:538 (1) - Spacing (You stuck with x1.0 spacing for similar situations, stay consistent imo)

Normal
00:08:406 (3) - NC
00:11:236 (1) - Clap?
00:38:406 (3) - http://puu.sh/hGtq Old one doesn't fit, and is too hard.
01:01:472 (5) - Stack on top of 4 and make it blanket 3. http://puu.sh/hGv0
01:02:746 (1) - Finish.
01:13:359 (3) - http://puu.sh/hGw7 Sounds better.
01:23:265 (4) - Remove whistle. Add clap on 01:23:123 instead.
01:24:821 (7) - Fix blanket.

Hard
00:01:048 (3) - Add clap.
00:02:746 (1,2,3,4) - Remove claps on 2 + 4.
00:19:727 (3) - http://puu.sh/hGyy Sounds better. Don't forget to add the finish.
00:33:312 (1,2) - Add claps on the repeats?
00:37:840 (1,2) - ^
00:42:368 (3,4) - ^
00:48:029 (1) - Move to 00:48:170. http://puu.sh/hGB2
01:02:746 (1) - Finish?
01:16:331 (1) - Finish at the end.
01:21:425 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle? http://puu.sh/hGCT
01:23:123 (1) - Spacing if you used ^.
01:29:632 (4) - y: 136.

Can't mod taiko~

Insane
00:00:765 (3,4,5,6) - Stick to curved or straight sliders...
00:02:463 (7) - Remove repeat, and add a note 00:02:746. http://puu.sh/hGEN
00:10:529 - Move timing point to 00:10:953.
00:15:198 (1,2,3) - Blanket them? http://puu.sh/hGGk Also move them up for http://puu.sh/hGH6
00:21:991 (7) - Stack on 8.
00:59:066 (3,4) - Ctrl + r.
01:03:595 (3,4) - Stack them on top of 01:02:180 (6,7)?
01:16:472 (1) - Finish?
01:21:142 (3,4,5,6) - Same as first mod.
01:22:840 (7) - Same as 2nd.

Extra
00:41:802 (6) - NC?
00:46:614 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this perfect ._.
00:53:831 (10) - NC here instead.
01:16:472 (1) - Finish.

Cool map \o/
SpartanHornetz

Makar8000 wrote:

[JBsparta's Hard]

  1. 00:19:727 - This section is really empty, try adding some notes? No suggestions though sorry. x:
  2. 00:58:783 (3,4) - Change to a 1/2 repeat slider that repeats, with a clap on the end. Also, add a circle.
  3. 00:59:632 (5) - Change to a circle with a clap.
  4. 00:59:915 - Make this a repeating 1/2 slider with a clap on the end; you will have to delete 01:00:198 (1).
Got the rest down except these 4. Couldn't find anything to match that empty part, and I changed the other 3 to something else to match the vocals. Thanks for the mod btw o/
Makar

Mythol wrote:

Easy
00:57:085 (2) - Maybe this? http://puu.sh/hGra This blanket is fine =w=
01:09:538 (1) - Spacing (You stuck with x1.0 spacing for similar situations, stay consistent imo) I purposely used this spacing on my 1/1 (except on the "slow" section of the song) in order to keep notes from overlapping. The kick slider is there to tell the player that the timing of the next note is 1/1, so I'm leaving this as it is for now :3
Thanks~
SpartanHornetz

Mythol wrote:

Hard

00:19:727 (3) - http://puu.sh/hGyy Sounds better. Don't forget to add the finish.

01:02:746 (1) - Finish?
Got all your mods down cept these two. I have something else to fit that and that finish doesn't seem right for that note. Thanks for the mod o/
SpartanHornetz
Haruka_old

arien666 wrote:

[Haruka's Normal]
00:05:576 (2) - Shape seems little sharp'd so why don't you make it more smooth :3? it's intended to have that shape. D: sorry!
00:27:934 (1,3) - Swap new combo? it was originally like that before first mod. >< thank you!

Makar8000 wrote:

[Haruka's Normal]


  • Recheck I guess~ Mostly hitsounds. Good first map :3 thank you! ;w;
  1. 00:23:972 (3) - Clap? my bad! I missed that! OTL
  2. 00:24:255 (4) - Clap at the end? there is a clap at the end. OTL
  3. 00:33:312 (4) - Remove clap at the repeat, add one at the end? sounds much better! -w-
  4. 00:34:444 (5) - Only put a clap at the end? ^
  5. 00:37:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is really cool =w= but its a sudden change in difficulty that ends in the next combo. If you want to fix, my suggestion would be to shorten 00:38:406 (3) to end on the white tick, then remove 00:38:265 (2). done and done! -w- Oh and imo the whistles should be removed but we already discussed that in PM orz. okay okay I removed the whistles. OTL
  6. 00:38:406 (3) - If you do shorten this, add a clap at the end? okie~
  7. 00:39:821 (6) - Remove clap? gonna keep it. -w-
  8. 00:40:104 (7) - Clap at the end? there is a clap at the end. OTL
  9. 00:42:368 (3) - Finish at start, maybe remove whistle? done and done.
  10. 00:43:925 (5) - Remove whistle? fine. :c
  11. 01:02:746 (1) - Clap maybe? whoops, forgot to add that! D: done.
  12. 01:08:406 (3) - Clap at the end? ^
  13. 01:29:349 (7) - Clap at the end? ^

Mythol wrote:

Randomly modding this o.o saw that coming lol

Normal
00:08:406 (3) - NC it's fine.
00:11:236 (1) - Clap? nope; it doesn't follow the pattern and there's no accent there.
00:38:406 (3) - http://puu.sh/hGtq Old one doesn't fit, and is too hard. already changed.
01:01:472 (5) - Stack on top of 4 and make it blanket 3. http://puu.sh/hGv0 yeah no.
01:02:746 (1) - Finish. I was told to also add a clap, so I've done both cause it sounds better.
01:13:359 (3) - http://puu.sh/hGw7 Sounds better. that sounds terrible.
01:23:265 (4) - Remove whistle. Add clap on 01:23:123 instead. there is a clap there, and I'm keeping the whistle on the red tick.
01:24:821 (7) - Fix blanket. done.

Cool map \o/ \o/
Pereira006


hello~~

IMO -> my opinion

General

Kiai Times are Inconsistency http://puu.sh/hID2

Some suggestions
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Makar's Easy

Stop making playboy slider :/ I always touch you sliders
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Haruka's Normal

AR -1 is better imo

00:01:614 (3) - grid 1 up to make symentric with 00:01:048 (2) ?
00:03:878 (6,7,1) - not better triangle try perfect triangle like this http://puu.sh/hIO4 ?
00:05:576 (2) - I can see my owm is ugly slider "cicle" because this http://puu.sh/hIOz just ugly try better slider "cicle" like this http://puu.sh/hIPT IMO if you fix this you need really change at 00:03:878 (6,7,1) and fix spacing at 00:08:406 (3,4,5,6) this just my IMO
01:01:331 (4,5) - will most better if stack it
01:04:727 (1,2,3,4,5) - grid 1 right to make center

stuff cool
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JBsparta's Hard

00:48:029 (1) - bug new combo you have put manually new combo
00:57:085 (1) - remove new combo look better

look good
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Insane

00:24:255 (1,2) - not perfect stack with 00:25:670 (1) - end slider
01:02:463 (7) - the start slider is not perfect stack with 01:03:736 (4)

/me cry pro mapper stuff aswome
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Extra

Stop makking fun diff playboy :( stuff aswome
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that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will explain better

good luck and bye bye
Haruka_old

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~ hello~ :oops:
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Haruka's Normal

AR -1 is better imo looks good. :3

00:01:614 (3) - grid 1 up to make symentric with 00:01:048 (2) ? whoops, forgot to align when I resnapped. OTL
00:03:878 (6,7,1) - not better triangle try perfect triangle like this http://puu.sh/hIO4 ? looks better, thank you~
00:05:576 (2) - I can see my owm is ugly slider "cicle" because this http://puu.sh/hIOz just ugly try better slider "cicle" like this http://puu.sh/hIPT IMO if you fix this you need really change at 00:03:878 (6,7,1) and fix spacing at 00:08:406 (3,4,5,6) this just my IMO I still like the shape of this slider; I might change it if another person finds it weird.
01:01:331 (4,5) - will most better if stack it done.
01:04:727 (1,2,3,4,5) - grid 1 right to make center yay, center!

stuff cool you is cool 8-)
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that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will explain better

good luck and bye bye thanks for the mod! :D
spboxer3
from #modreqs!!

[general]


  • Settings
  1. you need close the video's audio!
  2. kiai use same time [suggest]

[Makar's Easy]



  • mapping
  1. 01:18:595 (1,1) - too far spacing for center. Because it's Easy diff is for new player... It's really Hard to play for new player!

[Haruka's Normal]



  • mapping
  1. 00:11:236 (1) - too far spacing for center. Because it's Normal diff also for new player... It's really Hard to play for new player!
  2. 00:26:519 (9) - 9 combo it's too many combo in Normal! I suggest you can add NC at 00:25:670 (6) -
  3. 00:55:953 (1,1) - same as 00:11:236 (1) -
  4. 01:18:595 (1,1) - ^

[JBsparta's Hard]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:46:897 -
mapping
  1. 00:48:029 (1) - bug! you need add new combo at this way

[Insane]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:05:305 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:05:717 (4,6) -
  2. 01:26:094 (4,6) -
mapping
  1. 00:24:255 (1,2,1) - not full cover now~ can you let them stack?
  2. 01:02:463 (7,2) - stack?^ ((if you change this. maybe you need change 01:02:463 (7,4) - too

[Extra]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:05:293 -
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)
  1. 00:43:500 (4,6) -
mapping
  1. none~
    awesome map set:P

[Cherry's Taiko]


  • Settings
  1. remove vidoe code in Taiko dif plz!!

mapping
  1. none
red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
Topic Starter
Nyquill
The video stuff and audio stuff I fixed in a full submit right before you modded, thanks for looking anyways xD
>>Edit: Did all your suggestions.
Makar

spboxer3 wrote:

[Makar's Easy]



  • mapping
  1. 01:18:595 (1,1) - too far spacing for center. Because it's Easy diff is for new player... It's really Hard to play for new player! Ill fix =w=
Thanks~
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Nyquill ~ :)

Mod time for Makar8000 PM - In game ~


Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'opening' in tags.
  2. Remove video audio pls.
  3. PreviewTime should setting to 49635.
  4. Read in time : 1500(2000 it's too long).

[Extra]


  1. 00:21:333 (2,3) - Ctrl+R will be fun with me.
  2. 00:58:125 - Add finish.

[Insane]


  1. Why setting low HP in this diff? This is Insane diff.
    So HP+2 or 3 pls.
  2. 00:25:012 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
  3. 01:29:682 - Should add a note to here,vocal end to here.

[JBsparta's Hard]


  1. 00:02:654 (4) - Add new combo.
  2. 00:07:182 (6) - ^
  3. 00:48:078 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
  4. 00:56:993 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
  5. 01:00:106 (7) - Add new combo.
  6. 01:12:842 (2,3) - Try like this rhythm will be better.

[Haruka's Normal]


  1. 00:25:012 (5) - Add new combo,long combo hard for beginner.
  2. 00:30:106 (5) - ^
  3. 00:26:427 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
  4. 01:13:408 (3) - Try like this rhythm will be better.
  5. 01:28:691 (5) - Add new combo.

[Makar's Easy]


  1. 00:07:748 - Change Default clap pls.

That's all ~ Nice song and mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

Good luck ~
;)
SpartanHornetz

spboxer3 wrote:

[JBsparta's Hard]


  • Settings
  1. unused green line:
    00:46:897 -
mapping
  1. 00:48:029 (1) - bug! you need add new combo at this way

Thanks for the mod o/

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[JBsparta's Hard]


  1. 00:02:654 (4) - Add new combo.
  2. 00:07:182 (6) - ^
  3. 00:48:078 (1) - This is unrankable bug,Add new combo to here.
  4. 00:56:993 (1) - Remove too short new combo.
  5. 01:00:106 (7) - Add new combo.
  6. 01:12:842 (2,3) - Try like this rhythm will be better.
Thank you for the mod aswell o/

Download: Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size) (Nyquill) [JBsparta's Hard].osu
Makar
Did everything in spboxer and Rika's mod~

Download: Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size) (Nyquill) [Makar's Easy].osu
Haruka_old

spboxer3 wrote:

[Haruka's Normal]



  • mapping
  1. 00:11:236 (1) - too far spacing for center. Because it's Normal diff also for new player... It's really Hard to play for new player! made it easier to play for new player! :)
  2. 00:26:519 (9) - 9 combo it's too many combo in Normal! I suggest you can add NC at 00:25:670 (6) - done. -w-
  3. 00:55:953 (1,1) - same as 00:11:236 (1) - done.
  4. 01:18:595 (1,1) - ^ done.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Haruka's Normal]


  1. 00:25:012 (5) - Add new combo,long combo hard for beginner. done from sp3's mod.
  2. 00:30:106 (5) - ^ done.
  3. 00:26:427 (1) - Remove too short new combo. ugh, that was an error when changing new combos from last mod. OTLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL that wasn't suppose to be like that.
  4. 01:13:408 (3) - Try like this rhythm will be better. *sigh* it was like this before but someone complained about following the vocals too much; I'm going to revert back to this, so thanks for the suggestion.
  5. 01:28:691 (5) - Add new combo. done.
MMzz
Taiko Mod:

00:07:465 (5) - clap
00:15:814 (1,1) - reverse these so it's goes blue red
00:16:522 (2) - clap
00:16:946 - add normal note
00:22:606 - ^ fill in that weird pause
00:26:144 (2) - remove clap
00:26:427 (3) - short burst sliders are bad! D: You should add notes instead.
00:32:229 - add normal note
00:36:333 (2,3,4) - make these three claps?
00:44:540 (1) - maybe make this a slider? Would fit better, but a spinner is ok.
00:54:446 (2) - clap
00:56:852 - add a normal finisher here, then delete 00:56:993 (1) so it flows.
00:59:682 (2) - remove clap
01:01:380 (2) - add finisher
01:02:654 (1) - ^
01:02:937 (2) - clap
01:03:361 - add normal note
01:05:484 (3) - why does this have whistle and clap on it? xD remove the whistle, although this would fit better as a normal finisher.
01:29:682 - add a clap, there is a beat there :3

You should stick to mapping the drums more than the lyrics, although lyric mapping works in rare cases.
Xakyrie
sorry this took so long!

arien666 wrote:

[Cherry's Taiko]
00:13:359 (2) - don? done~
00:19:373 (1) - Just kat ;_;? sure :3
00:26:519 (3) - Change into circles :3? done done!
01:29:632 (1) - Delete finish? o_ob



Err... Taiko seems little hard ;_; orz I'm sorry ;w;
orz orz orz

Nyquill wrote:

arien666 wrote:

Err... Taiko seems little hard ;_; CHERRY YOU KAT GUY *is a kat guy*

MMzz wrote:

Taiko Mod:

00:07:465 (5) - clap done.
00:15:814 (1,1) - reverse these so it's goes blue red done.
00:16:522 (2) - clap yup.
00:16:946 - add normal note okay o:
00:22:606 - ^ fill in that weird pause filled.
00:26:144 (2) - remove clap done!
00:26:427 (3) - short burst sliders are bad! D: You should add notes instead. oops, fixed >v<
00:32:229 - add normal note alrighty c:
00:36:333 (2,3,4) - make these three claps? (2) and (4) are now claps, I had made (3) a don.
00:44:540 (1) - maybe make this a slider? Would fit better, but a spinner is ok. sure, fixed~
00:54:446 (2) - clap sure thing.
00:56:852 - add a normal finisher here, then delete 00:56:993 (1) so it flows. wow great idea, thanks!
00:59:682 (2) - remove clap I believe there's none there... o.o
01:01:380 (2) - add finisher done o:
01:02:654 (1) - ^ sounds strange, no thanks.
01:02:937 (2) - clap sounds better this way.
01:03:361 - add normal note fixed this around a bit.
01:05:484 (3) - why does this have whistle and clap on it? xD remove the whistle, although this would fit better as a normal finisher. did this.
01:29:682 - add a clap, there is a beat there :3 orz how did I miss this @_@

You should stick to mapping the drums more than the lyrics, although lyric mapping works in rare cases. OTL
Sync
General
-- Make the kiai times consistent in all difficulties by ending the Normal's kiai time at 01:20:767 like the rest of the difficulties. It doesn't make much sense why it ends on that off-beat in the first place.

Extra
Well-constructed map, it plays great.
00:37:688 (x) -- Unsnapped inherited timing section (you might as well fix this)

Insane
00:28:125 (4) - I'm not sure if a repeat slider is what you want to do here; my main qualms against this slider is that of three reasons: first off, having the same slider that starts in one section and ends in the next section of a piece of music just doesn't play very well. Secondly, having a slider's end-point lie on a heavier beat than it's start-point is generally bad practice and should be avoided in most cases (however, it can and does work some of the time.. just not in this case). Finally, it messes up this map's combo placement. I would remove the repeat and add a hit circle at 00:28:691. You should also add a new combo.

00:33:219 (5) - Add a new combo here because the vocals have gotten louder and more dramatic... and it is a downbeat.

00:40:012 (1,2) - This section doesn't flow very well. Yes, it follows the vocals nicely, but I think adding a hit circle here would more effectively follow the music as a whole.

01:19:493 (6,1) - This pause, for the lack of a better term, is awkward. This is more of a light suggestion, but if you want a great way to transition out of this kiai time then I would make the hit circle at 01:19:493 into a 1-beat slider (which would accompany the vocals fantastically) and add a hit circle at 01:19:918. If you do follow this suggestion (you should!), add a new combo at the newly created hit circle that is right after the 1-beat slider you just added. Timeline Reference (it starts at 01:18:502).

01:23:031 (8,1) - Switch the combos around here. The reason you should have a new combo starting at 01:23:031 (8) instead of the hit circle after it is because of that heavy beat in the background. Also, it's on a downbeat and you did the same thing at 01:25:295 and 01:27:559.

JBSparta's Hard
00:28:691 (1,2) - Gah, so awkward. It doesn't follow the music well and it disturbed me while playing. You should definitely switch this around -- place the slider on the downbeat where (1) is and move (1) to 00:29:682. I think this follows the music a lot better so you should definitely try this out.

00:30:956 (1) - If you followed the suggestion above, shorten this slider by two ticks and add a hit circle at 00:31:946.

00:49:069 (4) - Start the new combo here and remove the one at 00:49:635. Combos are based off the music, not the patterns. It'd make a lot more sense to see a new combo at the start of a kiai anyways. While we're on this note, I'd like to point out that the pause between this hit circle and the next slider is unnecessary. You should make the hit circle into a 1-beat slider for more movement.

Haruka's Normal
Would you like an IRC mod? There is a lot I'd need to explain and honestly I don't want to take up a whole page blabbering about something that could be explained in 5 minutes. (PM me if you do) If you don't want to, then here are some unrankable things:
01:18:595 (1) - Unsnapped spinner

Makar's Easy


Fucking awesome mapset
Topic Starter
Nyquill

Sync wrote:

Insane
00:28:125 (4) - I'm not sure if a repeat slider is what you want to do here; my main qualms against this slider is that of three reasons: first off, having the same slider that starts in one section and ends in the next section of a piece of music just doesn't play very well. Secondly, having a slider's end-point lie on a heavier beat than it's start-point is generally bad practice and should be avoided in most cases (however, it can and does work some of the time.. just not in this case). Finally, it messes up this map's combo placement. I would remove the repeat and add a hit circle at 00:28:691. You should also add a new combo. yeah I agree with turning this into a kick slider. I'll figure out how to do it by tommorow.


Fucking awesome mapset Mark's easy be carrying o_ob
SpartanHornetz

Sync wrote:

JBSparta's Hard
00:28:691 (1,2) - Gah, so awkward. It doesn't follow the music well and it disturbed me while playing. You should definitely switch this around -- place the slider on the downbeat where (1) is and move (1) to 00:29:682. I think this follows the music a lot better so you should definitely try this out.

00:30:956 (1) - If you followed the suggestion above, shorten this slider by two ticks and add a hit circle at 00:31:946.

00:49:069 (4) - Start the new combo here and remove the one at 00:49:635. Combos are based off the music, not the patterns. It'd make a lot more sense to see a new combo at the start of a kiai anyways. While we're on this note, I'd like to point out that the pause between this hit circle and the next slider is unnecessary. You should make the hit circle into a 1-beat slider for more movement

Got all these down. For your third suggestion, I just added another circle in the space. Other than that, thanks for the mod. o/

Download: Kawada Mami - Serment (TV Size) (Nyquill) [JBsparta's Hard].osu
Xakyrie

Nyquill wrote:

Sync wrote:

Fucking awesome mapset Mark's easy be carrying o_ob
oh my God LOL

NOT AGAIN

DON'T LET IT HAPPEN MAN
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