1. Black Cherry Ita's Easy (1.11 stars, 93 notes)
2. Hard (4.6 stars, 271 notes)
3. Insane (4.8 stars, 583 notes)
4. Normal (4.18 stars, 241 notes)

LunarSakuya wrote:

Er...source should be Touhou xD

no kds plz

f-INVERSE wrote:

[Normal]
01:12:337 (6,7) - is a little glaring. Try and change the combos?
Otherwise, quite fine, other than a lil boring since all the same combos.

[Hard]
Try not to use normal hitcircle size. Use Lv4. That's the basis for most hard/insane maps.

[Insane]
Ditto.
01:51:305 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part... I FAILED because of this, because the 300 things are way too big. Don't use a custom skin, unless it fits. I prefer my own skin ;_;. But then I figured out the pattern.
02:36:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ditto, but it looks kind of messy this time. On purpose?
Otherwise it's fine. It feels easy though. Maybe from playing too much Ascension to Heaven/Nuclear Fusion while my connection is off.

[General]
Don't use custom skin that doesn't fit ;_; Keine does not have bioweapons D:
Try not to use normal size(Lv5) hitcircles. Insane ones like ascension to heaven use lv4 hitcircles.
Hitsounds need more variety. Use whistles and claps sparingly. Don't just use soft one.

P.S. you just made my day with a Keine song. and metal too. Maybe I'll relook at this map once you have finished.

Kyshiro wrote:

f-INVERSE wrote:

[Normal]
01:12:337 (6,7) - is a little glaring. Try and change the combos?
Otherwise, quite fine, other than a lil boring since all the same combos.

[Hard]
Try not to use normal hitcircle size. Use Lv4. That's the basis for most hard/insane maps.

[Insane]
Ditto.
01:51:305 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part... I FAILED because of this, because the 300 things are way too big. Don't use a custom skin, unless it fits. I prefer my own skin ;_;. But then I figured out the pattern.
02:36:472 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ditto, but it looks kind of messy this time. On purpose?
Otherwise it's fine. It feels easy though. Maybe from playing too much Ascension to Heaven/Nuclear Fusion while my connection is off.

[General]
Don't use custom skin that doesn't fit ;_; Keine does not have bioweapons D:
Try not to use normal size(Lv5) hitcircles. Insane ones like ascension to heaven use lv4 hitcircles.
Hitsounds need more variety. Use whistles and claps sparingly. Don't just use soft one.

P.S. you just made my day with a Keine song. and metal too. Maybe I'll relook at this map once you have finished.

Thanks for your mod.
This is one of my first maps, indeed it needs improvement. I'll consider making a better skin, first attempt ever lol. Might just remove it.
Also, about 5 min before you posted this I felt the same about the insane, already started working on a harder one, a secondary insane.

I also still need an easy diff. If you feel like mapping you could make it as guest diff? :3

Thanks again, will do the stuff today.

~Kyshiro

Kyshiro wrote:

f-INVERSE wrote:

Thanks for your mod.
This is one of my first maps, indeed it needs improvement. I'll consider making a better skin, first attempt ever lol. Might just remove it.
Also, about 5 min before you posted this I felt the same about the insane, already started working on a harder one, a secondary insane.

I also still need an easy diff. If you feel like mapping you could make it as guest diff? :3

Thanks again, will do the stuff today.

~Kyshiro

I have my deathstreams to do on my own map, maybe I'll do, maybe I won't.
If you want this ranked, DON'T make any changes to your insane. It's fine as it is.
If you don't, MAKE DEATHSTREAMS

LOL making the secondary insane more streamish yeah, just hope it'll stay below the 15m max score or something similar.
Won't change my current one

another neenja edit: what about the Keine background ._.? And I'll take a look at the deathstream maps :3

f-INVERSE wrote:

LOL making the secondary insane more streamish yeah, just hope it'll stay below the 15m max score or something similar.
Won't change my current one

another neenja edit: what about the Keine background ._.? And I'll take a look at the deathstream maps :3

Ah.. I hope you find the background nice. http://www.mediafire.com/?7725fvqf8riv194
Anyway... even if you pass the 15m max score you can still get it approved.
There was a map with 91m and it was approved. I think it was a Wind God Girl from Demetori.. D:

Kyshiro wrote:

I know I know, but I'm actually trying to go for a ranked map D:
And thanks for the pic I'll consider using it :3

f-INVERSE wrote:

Kyshiro wrote:

I know I know, but I'm actually trying to go for a ranked map D:
And thanks for the pic I'll consider using it :3

Then the insane you made is okay. YOU DON'T need to make a secondary one.
BTW free star for you. You just moved 3000++ places.

f-INVERSE wrote:

That map isn't so easy to deathstream.
If you want deathstream, go pay a visit to BMS OF FIGHTERS 2011(or any other year).
Most of their songs are deathstream-able. I hereby give to you the no.4 song(without ace score) in that year.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ie4O9l-dwQ

Kyshiro wrote:

f-INVERSE wrote:

That map isn't so easy to deathstream.
If you want deathstream, go pay a visit to BMS OF FIGHTERS 2011(or any other year).
Most of their songs are deathstream-able. I hereby give to you the no.4 song(without ace score) in that year.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0ie4O9l-dwQ

Okay, a song like that will be next to map, seems to be pretty awesome.

f-INVERSE wrote:

One thing to note though, DON'T put the BGA in the map. It has nude.
I'll be the first to mod your map D:
PM me for bgm and offset.

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

can i make the easy diff?~

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

done ^_^ sorry for the delay, im suck at hitsounds ><

• Change Audio lead-in 2007 to 2000 in all your diff.(via txt editor)

• You need an Easy diff. The current normal is over 3 stars.

• OFFSET should be 656 (thanks to MAT Faust who checking your timing. )

• sets your Stack Leniency to default. 10 is really high.

• volume 100% is kinda noisy. try 80% or something lower.

• Useless inherited point 00:07:624

• before I modding I found you using soft-hitclap too many times.that makes your map sounds really weird. you should try some more different hitsounds.

00:17:337 (6) -  
01:54:004 (5) - 

00:23:291 (3) - 
00:33:624 (3) - 
00:39:291 (3) - 
01:33:291 (5) - 

00:17:791 (8) - 
00:28:624 (3) - 
00:33:958 (4) - 
00:39:291 (3) - 

Suggestion
make your slider looks better. here is some example
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another example on hard
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and something in Normal
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S h i a wrote:

Hi mod request via my queue

[overall]

• Change Audio lead-in 2007 to 2000 in all your diff.(via txt editor)

• You need an Easy diff. The current normal is over 3 stars.

• OFFSET should be 656 (thanks to MAT Faust who checking your timing. )

• sets your Stack Leniency to default. 10 is really high.

[Normal]

• volume 100% is kinda noisy. try 80% or something lower.

• Useless inherited point 00:07:624

• before I modding I found you using soft-hitclap too many times.that makes your map sounds really weird. you should try some more different hitsounds.

remove these Break times

00:17:337 (6) -  
01:54:004 (5) - 

00:41:337 (2) - change this spinner into slider.

you should set a distance spacing when mapping easy diffs like Normal

[Hard]
remove these Break times

00:23:291 (3) - 
00:33:624 (3) - 
00:39:291 (3) - 
01:33:291 (5) - 

you really needs more work on your map

[Insane]
remove these Break times

00:17:791 (8) - 
00:28:624 (3) - 
00:33:958 (4) - 
00:39:291 (3) - 

Suggestion
make your slider looks better. here is some example
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after

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another example on hard
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after

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and something in Normal
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after

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still needs more work, good luck.
and sorry about my English skills.
seems that you are new mapper so I would like to help if you have any question. feel free to PM