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ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size)

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[Shalon]
Vicho
finally done, sorry for the delay Dx
hope you like it ^^''

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Vicho's Hard].osu
wule
req from queue

[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
fine

[Insane]
fine

[Kenezz's Easy]
fine

[Nymph's Normal]
fine

[Vicho's Hard]
fine

epic map,good luck :)
Nymph
General:
nothing found.


Kenezz Easy:
Issues
00:08:011 (1) - seems useless section, maybe delete it

Hitsound
00:17:908 (1) - the finish here seems pretty loud for me, maybe consider make the volumn lower a little bit?
00:27:805 (1) - are you sure here is SC1 finish? SC2 is much better for me, SC1 really means nothing imo.
01:04:918 (3) - clap on the arrow feels pretty weird..


Vicho's Hard:
Issue
I just personal think AR7 is better.

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:14:042 (4,5,6) - this jump this really huge and sudden... I suggest to reduce the spacing a little bit.

Hitsound
00:55:021 (1,2,3) - I don't quite understand why you make the volumn here 25 lower... sounds really werid for me...


Insane:
Hitsound
00:38:939 (1) - 为什么这有soft whistle 满突然 而且就一个 听起来略诡异
00:48:217 (3) - 同
00:49:300 (2) - 同(我的意见是要加就都加好?就加零碎几个不知道你的理由是啥。。

没了
[Shalon]
makos_old
I just really hope this map gets ranked. Great stuff, and IMO way better than the kanpakyin's one. If I had some kd I'd star it. :(
hillaryzx
Hi, as requested, I shall mod this map with very best.... 8-)

General

- consider include 'Vicho' in the tags.

Kenezz's Easy

00:43:887 - end the slider at 44:351
00:46:980 - end this slider at 47:444
00:53:475 - add a circle here?

Vicho's Hard

Man, having a hard time to find what is wrong with this diff.
In the end, the map win.... ( nice.. )

Insane

00:35:228(1) - remove the finish because feels weird...

For me, this map far too good.....
Now, I shall take my leave...
Shana Aisaka
I wanna help a little too ~ :D

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
Nothing to said~

[Kenezz's Easy]
01:14:815(4) = spacing~

[Nymph's Normal]
Approach Rate - 1
00:56:877(3) = I think this place should put finish. :3 (S:C2)

[Vicho's Hard]
00:56:877(6) = put finish?

[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
01:07:393 = put Kiai Time here ? Like all the diff. :3 :arrow: http://puu.sh/gfHR

wow... great map as ever!! XD
Ganbatte!!! >w<"
_Azunime
star :3
arien666
And something would be done by something :3

Seems okay ;___;
Shana Aisaka

arien666 wrote:

And something would be done by something :3

Seems okay ;___;
Wow.. So fast Bubble? XD
blissfulyoshi
Kenezz's Easy:
so many things hit the hp bar T_T

Combo mod:
00:48:217 (4) - It fits the music and your pattern of having a new combo every 4 large white ticks if you add the new combo here instead of 00:50:073 (1) because of the huge change in tone starting at 00:47:599 (I think 00:46:362 (1) and that combo can stand as a separate combo if you want it to)

Nymph's Normal:
Style/Aesthetics: (I think I am in a slider nazi mood right now or something....)
00:20:382 (1,3) - this overlap is slightly annoying me, could you please rearrange this pattern a bit
00:42:650 (1) - this slider looks a little weird with the curve not curving around 4 (it seems like were aiming to blanket 4 for a bit and then move outward)
00:45:125 (1,2) - Make these curve out further to make them fit each other's shape better like so:
01:17:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - It felt a little boring to go around such a large arc, hitting notes at a constant speed low speed (works better on higher diffs xD). Could you try making this a shape or app some variety in another way.

Combo mod:
00:32:753 (3), 00:33:991 (1), and 00:35:228 (3) - Remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to both 3s to follow your pattern of a new combo every 2 large white ticks

Vicho's Hard:
AR seems a little low, +1?

Style/Aesthetics:
01:14:042 (4,5,6) - This jump was a little surprising in size and location (didn't hear anything in the music to suggest it)

[Shalon]'s Taiko: fine

Insane:
Style/Aesthetics:
01:04:145 (3,4) - this overlap doesn't look that great, so I advise you rearrange this pattern

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Decent map overall, just a few minor things need to be fixed up, and I guess I'll decide what to do form there.... Contact when you are done with whatever changes you want made.
Kenezz
Nymph
fixed all except 01:17:599 ... actually I kinda of like that pattern so.

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Nymph's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
wcx19911123

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Vicho's Hard:
AR seems a little low, +1? fixed

Style/Aesthetics:
01:14:042 (4,5,6) - This jump was a little surprising in size and location (didn't hear anything in the music to suggest it) fixed

Insane:
Style/Aesthetics:
01:04:145 (3,4) - this overlap doesn't look that great, so I advise you rearrange this uh , I think this is fine
thanks for modding
and all diffs updated :3
blissfulyoshi
Since it was only small changes, lets rank this.
SeeU_old
congrats ~ 0_o
Yasora
congrats~ owo
Hinacle
ClariS!!

Congratz~></
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks bliss >w<
thanks you all
Gomo Psivarh
gz :)

妮姆芙你那串circle坑死我了 :o 真难打啊
Melophobia
gratz~~
Nymph

Gomo Psivarh wrote:

gz :)

妮姆芙你那串circle坑死我了 :o 真难打啊
哈哈哈哈哈果然害死你了目标达成=3=
Suimya
gratz~ >w<
- Rche -
gratz.
Akemi_Homura
Congrats~~!\ >w</
No_Gu
2
Dino99
恭喜~ :>
Snow Note
Congratz :D
Yuji Tokaji
Congratz' :3
Kawayi Rika
wow 欧尼酱 又RANK 恭喜~
Kenezz
Gratz!! >w<
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