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ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size)

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wcx19911123
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wcx19911123
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年2月19日 at 21:19:08

Artist: ClariS
Title: Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size)
Source: Nisemonogatari
Tags: Kenezz Nymph Vicho-kun [Shalon] Senjogahara Hitagi Hachikuji Mayoi Kanbaru Suruga Sengoku Nadeko Hanekawa Tsubasa Oshino Shinobu Araragi Karen Araragi Tsukihi Saito Chiwa Kato Emiri Sawashiro Miyuki Hanazawa Kana Horie Yui Sakamoto Maaya Kitamura Eri Iguchi Yuka VOFAN Aniplex SHAFT ED ending ryo supercell
BPM: 194
Filesize: 12666kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. [Shalon]'s Taiko (4.83 stars, 436 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 313 notes)
  3. Kenezz's Easy (1.74 stars, 79 notes)
  4. Nymph's Normal (4.31 stars, 146 notes)
  5. Vicho's Hard (4.8 stars, 211 notes)
Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size)
Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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anime「偽物語」ED

Easy - Kenezz
Normal - Nymph
Hard - Vicho-kun
Taiko - [Shalon]

and you can find OP3 here : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45720
Last edited by wcx19911123 , edited 11 times in total.
suzutsukikanade
653 posts
Joined July 2011
suzutsukikanade
First post? O.o
Nice mapset, Good Luck with map.
Kenezz
osu! Alumni
1,136 posts
Joined September 2009
Kenezz
Hey
Diff and BG~

SPOILER

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (Kenezz) [Kenezz's Easy].osu
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
0.0
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
[Shalon]
DONE :D
TaikoBG : http://image.fileslink.com/717fcad099b80d3/BG.png

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
.

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Nymph's Normal].osu
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
NI HAO

Kenezz's Easy
* This diff is really needs more hitsound

00:57:496 (1) - This slider is kinda almost offscreen
01:02:444 (1) - ^


Nymph's Normal
* Why don't use the slidertick as clap hitsound for this diff?
* AR +1?

00:33:681 (x) - Add note here?
00:44:815 (x) - ^
01:14:042 (3) - Forgot to put whistle at head slider?


Insane
00:57:496 ~ end - This part seems lacks of bass (whistle) hitsound, add them?
01:09:867 (2) - Forgot to put whistle at head slider?


mod4mod? Shall we? lol
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
Move the map to pending after you finish this map.
That's all.Don't forget my kud.(slap






SPOILER
request by QQ
remove ED from tags.It doesn't work

[Nymph]
我也要给妮姆芙4.5星的normal
00:08:630 (2,3) - 间距和前面一样
00:12:650 (4) - 虽然follow音乐但还是略吵
00:26:259 (2,3,4,5,6) - 不弄点花样?
00:42:650 (1) - this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/225808
160,340,42650,6,0,B|136:296|160:248|160:248|144:188,1,150,2|2
01:04:609空着好像还是不太顺耳=A=

[Insane]
00:07:702 (4) - 开头whistle
custom hitsound音量略挫。。这难度note多所以听到的基本都是预设的hitnormal=A=
☆
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka
Ganbatte wang-kun!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >w<"
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
wcx19911123
updated
waiting Vicho-kun now :3
-Nanase-
41 posts
Joined February 2011
-Nanase-
好图啊:D
希望伪物语的歌早点rank
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
00:26:800 (95,96,97,98,99,100) - I think these notes should be snapped on 1/3 not 1/4 ;_;
00:33:913 (127,128) - ^
00:35:460 (133,134,135,136,137,138) - ^



Nothing to blame else ;___;
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
[Shalon]
DONE

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
finally done, sorry for the delay Dx
hope you like it ^^''

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Vicho's Hard].osu
wule
150 posts
Joined April 2011
wule
req from queue

[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
fine

[Insane]
fine

[Kenezz's Easy]
fine

[Nymph's Normal]
fine

[Vicho's Hard]
fine

epic map,good luck :)
Nymph
osu! Alumni
3,243 posts
Joined December 2010
Nymph
General:
nothing found.


Kenezz Easy:
Issues
00:08:011 (1) - seems useless section, maybe delete it

Hitsound
00:17:908 (1) - the finish here seems pretty loud for me, maybe consider make the volumn lower a little bit?
00:27:805 (1) - are you sure here is SC1 finish? SC2 is much better for me, SC1 really means nothing imo.
01:04:918 (3) - clap on the arrow feels pretty weird..


Vicho's Hard:
Issue
I just personal think AR7 is better.

Beatmap design/suggestion
01:14:042 (4,5,6) - this jump this really huge and sudden... I suggest to reduce the spacing a little bit.

Hitsound
00:55:021 (1,2,3) - I don't quite understand why you make the volumn here 25 lower... sounds really werid for me...


Insane:
Hitsound
00:38:939 (1) - 为什么这有soft whistle 满突然 而且就一个 听起来略诡异
00:48:217 (3) - 同
00:49:300 (2) - 同（我的意见是要加就都加好？就加零碎几个不知道你的理由是啥。。

没了
[Shalon]
686 posts
Joined April 2010
[Shalon]
fixed some parts

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [[Shalon]'s Taiko].osu
makos_old
6 posts
Joined September 2010
makos_old
I just really hope this map gets ranked. Great stuff, and IMO way better than the kanpakyin's one. If I had some kd I'd star it. :(
hillaryzx
363 posts
Joined October 2010
hillaryzx
Hi, as requested, I shall mod this map with very best.... 8-)

General

- consider include 'Vicho' in the tags.

Kenezz's Easy

00:43:887 - end the slider at 44:351
00:46:980 - end this slider at 47:444
00:53:475 - add a circle here?

Vicho's Hard

Man, having a hard time to find what is wrong with this diff.
In the end, the map win.... ( nice.. )

Insane

00:35:228(1) - remove the finish because feels weird...

For me, this map far too good.....
Now, I shall take my leave...
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka
I wanna help a little too ~ :D

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
Nothing to said~

[Kenezz's Easy]
01:14:815(4) = spacing~

[Nymph's Normal]
Approach Rate - 1
00:56:877(3) = I think this place should put finish. :3 (S:C2)

[Vicho's Hard]
00:56:877(6) = put finish?

[[Shalon]'s Taiko]
01:07:393 = put Kiai Time here ? Like all the diff. :3 :arrow: http://puu.sh/gfHR

wow... great map as ever!! XD
Ganbatte!!! >w<"
_Azunime
8 posts
Joined July 2011
_Azunime
star :3
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
And something would be done by something :3

Seems okay ;___;
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka

arien666 wrote:

And something would be done by something :3

Seems okay ;___;
Wow.. So fast Bubble? XD
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Kenezz's Easy:
so many things hit the hp bar T_T

Combo mod:
00:48:217 (4) - It fits the music and your pattern of having a new combo every 4 large white ticks if you add the new combo here instead of 00:50:073 (1) because of the huge change in tone starting at 00:47:599 (I think 00:46:362 (1) and that combo can stand as a separate combo if you want it to)

Nymph's Normal:
Style/Aesthetics: (I think I am in a slider nazi mood right now or something....)
00:20:382 (1,3) - this overlap is slightly annoying me, could you please rearrange this pattern a bit
00:42:650 (1) - this slider looks a little weird with the curve not curving around 4 (it seems like were aiming to blanket 4 for a bit and then move outward)
00:45:125 (1,2) - Make these curve out further to make them fit each other's shape better like so:
SPOILER
01:17:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - It felt a little boring to go around such a large arc, hitting notes at a constant speed low speed (works better on higher diffs xD). Could you try making this a shape or app some variety in another way.

Combo mod:
00:32:753 (3), 00:33:991 (1), and 00:35:228 (3) - Remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to both 3s to follow your pattern of a new combo every 2 large white ticks

Vicho's Hard:
AR seems a little low, +1?

Style/Aesthetics:
01:14:042 (4,5,6) - This jump was a little surprising in size and location (didn't hear anything in the music to suggest it)

[Shalon]'s Taiko: fine

Insane:
Style/Aesthetics:
01:04:145 (3,4) - this overlap doesn't look that great, so I advise you rearrange this pattern

========================
Decent map overall, just a few minor things need to be fixed up, and I guess I'll decide what to do form there.... Contact when you are done with whatever changes you want made.
Kenezz
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Kenezz
Okay, Thanks~

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Kenezz's Easy].osu
Nymph
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Joined December 2010
Nymph
fixed all except 01:17:599 ... actually I kinda of like that pattern so.

Download: ClariS - Naisho no Hanashi (TV Size) (wcx19911123) [Nymph's Normal].osu
wcx19911123
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Vicho's Hard:
AR seems a little low, +1? fixed

Style/Aesthetics:
01:14:042 (4,5,6) - This jump was a little surprising in size and location (didn't hear anything in the music to suggest it) fixed

Insane:
Style/Aesthetics:
01:04:145 (3,4) - this overlap doesn't look that great, so I advise you rearrange this uh , I think this is fine
thanks for modding
and all diffs updated :3
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
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blissfulyoshi
Since it was only small changes, lets rank this.
SeeU_old
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Joined May 2011
SeeU_old
congrats ~ 0_o
Yasora
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Joined May 2010
Yasora
congrats~ owo
Hinacle
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Joined July 2010
Hinacle
ClariS!!

Congratz~></
wcx19911123
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Topic Starter
wcx19911123
thanks bliss >w<
thanks you all
Gomo Psivarh
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Gomo Psivarh
gz :)

妮姆芙你那串circle坑死我了 :o 真难打啊
Melophobia
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Melophobia
gratz~~
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