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TicClick
Easy
  1. 00:12:309 (1,3) - shouldn't here be whistles? If yes, remove it from note between these sliders
  2. 00:22:675 (3) - not really symmetrical
  3. 00:29:767 (1) - whistle to the second repeat?
  4. 01:16:139 (3) - place it in center?
  5. 01:25:959 (1) - I would use finish here
  6. 01:27:869 (3,4) - I don't know, it might be confusing for Easy because of red ticks
Verdi's Normal
  1. What if you make all the finishes a little bit more quiet?
  2. 00:41:224 (4) - add finish to the beginning?
  3. 00:51:453 (1) - what if you make a little blanket here? Something like this
  4. 01:25:959 (1,2,3) - I wanna improve this construction, but I don't have any idea how to do it
  5. 01:33:597 (4) - add finish to the beginning?
  6. 01:51:055 (2) - remove whistle from slider's body
Hard
  1. 00:16:810 (3) - I like how 5 note streams sound if you put a whistle here (to the 2nd note)
  2. 01:04:137 (1) - unsymmetrical a bit. And I would remove this whistle
  3. 01:11:366 (2,4) - I'm sorry, but these notes don't exist in music, so stream doesn't fit
  4. Although you may add them there: 01:17:912 and 01:18:185
  5. 01:25:959 (1) - I would like to add finish here (1st repeat)
  6. 01:35:097 (3) - move it 1/2 forward (next blue tick), fits more
  7. 01:40:007 — add note?
Though I only like 2D Mario, both map and music are good.
Tony
Hi moody, after a long time, I'm not lazy anymore :O

[General]
moe moe yellow yoshi bg :3
reduce hitsound volume by 5-10%. The clap is seems too loud. (anyways, I don't think clap fits the song. better finish imo, but anyways...)
I'm not gonna complain about your sliders, though I'm gonna point some out ( you know I'm obsessed of them being perfect )

[Easy]
00:28:131 (4) - hmm
01:39:053 (1) - ^ though it looks pretty good
01:52:146 (1) - add whistle? It sounds good


[Verdi's Normal]
Tick Rate 2 looks ugly because of these kind of sliders 00:51:453 (1) -
I suggest Tick Rate 1 here.
01:52:282 (1) - add whistle? It sounds good
I like the way you used those finishes and whistles. Sliders are awesoooome. <3

[Hard]
00:32:222 (3,4) - keep the 2.0x distance
01:56:510 (1) - add whistle? It sounds good

sooooooooooo, do something with your long sliders pleaseeee D:
good luck Moody :3
Starr~
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG
Thanks guys :)

Fixed some things
theMikeAG
~Hard~
00:11:764 (1,3) - Add clap to front ends.
00:13:946 (1,2) - Remove clap from 2 add it to 1.
00:15:037 (3,4) - ^^
00:16:947 (4) - Whistle.
00:23:221 (6) - Whistle on front.
And really for the rest, just make sure they have consistent clap patterns.

~Verdi's Normal~
00:45:588 (4,1) - This overlap hurts my eyes, please fix it!

~Easy~
Eh, it's Easy.

Sorry for the crappy mod, I'm rusty.
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

theMikeAG wrote:

~Hard~
00:11:764 (1,3) - Add clap to front ends.
00:13:946 (1,2) - Remove clap from 2 add it to 1.
00:15:037 (3,4) - ^^
00:16:947 (4) - Whistle.
00:23:221 (6) - Whistle on front.
And really for the rest, just make sure they have consistent clap patterns.

~Verdi's Normal~
00:45:588 (4,1) - This overlap hurts my eyes, please fix it!

~Easy~
Eh, it's Easy.

Sorry for the crappy mod, I'm rusty.
Thanks for mod ^^
Verdisphena

TicClick wrote:

Verdi's Normal
  1. What if you make all the finishes a little bit more quiet? No
  2. 00:41:224 (4) - add finish to the beginning? ^
  3. 00:51:453 (1) - what if you make a little blanket here? Something like this ^
  4. 01:25:959 (1,2,3) - I wanna improve this construction, but I don't have any idea how to do it I didn't find nothing wrong with this
  5. 01:33:597 (4) - add finish to the beginning? no
  6. 01:51:055 (2) - remove whistle from slider's body no

@Tony, no to all, same for theMikeAG
Low
[General]
Good.

[Easy]
Good.

[Verdi's Normal]
00:24:857 - This slider touches the health bar. Lower it or change the slider - your choice. ;)

[Hard]
00:55:408 - Perhaps a finish here?

What a wonderful map. Have a star. :D
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

Jacob wrote:

[General]
Good.

[Easy]
Good.

[Verdi's Normal]
00:24:857 - This slider touches the health bar. Lower it or change the slider - your choice. ;)

[Hard]
00:55:408 - Perhaps a finish here?

What a wonderful map. Have a star. :D
Thanks for mod ^^
winber1
Hard

00:21:038 (2) - man, it just bothers me a bit that you aren't following the melody here :/. Instead of trying to be symmetric you could just map to the music. Or if you want it to be symmetric, you're going to have to make some weird jumps, like http://puu.sh/eaRJ and http://puu.sh/eaRO. or something like that.
01:13:548 - similar to above, i just would really like a note here :( http://puu.sh/eaSF just another option.

Normal

00:39:042 (2,3,4) - i'd rather rotate combo 2 and 3 a bit so that combo 1,2, and 3 make a trinagle shape. http://puu.sh/eaUy http://puu.sh/eaUD just a few pictures to show you what i mean
00:53:635 (3,4) - i'd just like it a little better if these two were one slider, just to match the sliders in 01:43:826. it also just makes things easier to read for beginners imo. just a suggestion tho.
00:55:817 (1,2) - ^
00:58:000 (4,5) - ^

Easy

00:49:134 (4) - new combo fits better imo.
01:45:599 (3,4) - weird spacing.

not really much to say, all i have are suggestion. looks pretty good, good luck~
Sync
Hard
00:07:399 (1) - For the sake of consistency, add a clap here
00:23:221 (6) - I'd suggest getting rid of one of those repeats and adding a slider here that lasts until 00:24:312. Delete the overlapping note. Also, you did the same thing here (00:19:402) and here (00:28:131). Again, for the sake of consistency (and it follows the music better)
00:51:453 (3) - Replace this with a slider that lasts until the next red tick. Delete any overlapping notes. (follows the music better, etc)
00:52:135 (4,5) - Would rather see these two hitnotes be one slider, but I will leave it up to you; mostly because it might not be difficult enough.
00:53:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The same applies for this section. (see: above)
01:08:365 (9,10) - This is more of a suggestion, but since the music is transitioning into the chorus why don't make a triplet here? (8, 9, 10) I think it only justifies the transition and makes it a little more exciting.
01:22:277 (4,5,6) - feels so empty my heart hurts... Add three notes here (starting after 3. you get it)
01:23:504 (10) - Add a note plz :<
01:42:053 (4) - ^ :<

Verdi's Normal
-- AR +1
00:51:317 (1) - I don't suggest starting a slider on an offbeat tick, so move this back 1 tick and extend it's length by 1 tick
00:53:499 (3) - Move back 1 tick
00:55:681 (1) - ^
00:57:863 (4) - ^
01:43:826 (1) - Same procedure
01:46:008 (1) - ^
01:48:191 (1) - ^

Easy
00:12:309 (1) - Add a soft-whistle at the start and ends of this slider
00:13:946 (2) - Remove whistle
00:14:492 (3) - Add a soft-whistle at the start and ends of this sldier

Good luck
DarkDunskin
Hi modding by your request~

Easy:
[*] 00:09:582 (3,4) - Move (3) on the centre line and (4) one grid to the right to make it perectly symmetrical.
[*] 00:14:492 (3) - This Slider is not symmetrical, copy/paste 00:12:309 (1) - and press ctrl + h/j to fix it~
[*] 00:20:493 (1) - Disable grid snap and move this note to y:195 to get it symmetrical with 00:18:311 (3).
[*] 00:22:675 (3) - Not symmetrical, fix it with this:
149,95,22675,2,0,B|164:28|256:8|348:28|368:104,1,270,2|0
[*] 00:33:586 (1) - Move that slider to x:181/y:237

Verdi's Normal:
[*] 00:13:946 (1) - Curve this slider a bit more so that (2) fits better in it.
[*] 00:24:857 (1) - Sliderend is crossing the HP-Bar, move it down please.
[*] 00:45:588 (4) - Slider start ^

Never played a Standard diff from Verdi, its quite nice~

Hard:
[*] 00:17:219 (6) - Add whistle.
[*] 00:30:313 (6) - ^
[*] 00:31:677 (1) - Move it to y:275 to get (1,2,3) in line.
[*] 01:09:593 (5) - Add whistle.
[*] 01:24:868 (3) - Move it to y:216 to get it line with (2)

So these are my suggestions, hope they can be of some use for you~
Katsuri

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi modding by your request~

Easy:
  1. 00:09:582 (3,4) - Move (3) on the centre line and (4) one grid to the right to make it perectly symmetrical.
  2. 00:14:492 (3) - This Slider is not symmetrical, copy/paste 00:12:309 (1) - and press ctrl + h/j to fix it~
  3. 00:20:493 (1) - Disable grid snap and move this note to y:195 to get it symmetrical with 00:18:311 (3).
  4. 00:22:675 (3) - Not symmetrical, fix it with this:
    149,95,22675,2,0,B|164:28|256:8|348:28|368:104,1,270,2|0
  5. 00:33:586 (1) - Move that slider to x:181/y:237
Verdi's Normal:
  1. 00:13:946 (1) - Curve this slider a bit more so that (2) fits better in it.
  2. 00:24:857 (1) - Sliderend is crossing the HP-Bar, move it down please.
  3. 00:45:588 (4) - Slider start ^
Never played a Standard diff from Verdi, its quite nice~

Hard:
  1. 00:17:219 (6) - Add whistle.
  2. 00:30:313 (6) - ^
  3. 00:31:677 (1) - Move it to y:275 to get (1,2,3) in line.
  4. 01:09:593 (5) - Add whistle.
  5. 01:24:868 (3) - Move it to y:216 to get it line with (2)
So these are my suggestions, hope they can be of some use for you~
Just add the list and /list :)
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG
Thanks guys

Some Fixed's
Verdisphena
Lucy-Kaede
Modding as per in-game request~

General
BPM: 109.98

Change it to 110 imo ._.


Easy
00:48:862 (4) - Add a note here?

Verdi's Normal
00:08:763 (3,4) - Its not really a jump I guess.. but could consider having these notes in chronological order. (2-3-4, instead of 2-4-3)
00:53:635 (3) - Move to 00:53:772, and fix distance snap?
Or this?

Hard
00:14:355 (2) - Add a note?



..well It appears I am horrible at modding quiet songs, without having to nazi mod.
Ofc, all the above is only suggestions, and if nothings is helpful, dont even think about hitting the kds button.

Sorry for finding nothing <_<
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

Lucy-Kaede wrote:

Modding as per in-game request~

General
BPM: 109.98

Change it to 110 imo ._. Checked with aleks,so nope,sorry


Easy
00:48:862 (4) - Add a note here? Nope

Verdi's Normal
00:08:763 (3,4) - Its not really a jump I guess.. but could consider having these notes in chronological order. (2-3-4, instead of 2-4-3)
00:53:635 (3) - Move to 00:53:772, and fix distance snap?
Or this?

Hard
00:14:355 (2) - Add a note? Nope



..well It appears I am horrible at modding quiet songs, without having to nazi mod.
Ofc, all the above is only suggestions, and if nothings is helpful, dont even think about hitting the kds button.

Sorry for finding nothing <_<
Thanks for mod
Verdisphena
rank this ( ゚Д゚)
mancuso_JM_
Estoy aburrido asi que decidi hacerte un mod :P

General:
- Nada para destacar aqui

Easy:
- El Approach Rate se siente algo lento, creo que deberias agregarle +2, ademas juega bien con la velocidad de Slider
01:10:547 (3,4): Estas Notas estan muy separadas, con respecto al Spacing que venias llevando. Intenta arreglar esto con el distance Snap
01:28:960 (5): Me parece que este Slider debe ser de 1/1. Para esto, te sugiero que muevas este Slider 1/2 hacia atras (Tick Blanco, 01:28:687) y que luego termine en 01:29:233
01:35:324 (5): Con este Slider te sugiero lo mismo que arriba, entonces movelo 1/2 atras (Tick Blanco, 01:33:051), y que termine en 01:33:597

Verdi's Normal:
00:18:311 (3): El doble Whistle (Con el previo (2)) no me suena mucho, me gusta mas como suena si eliminas el whistle al comienzo del Slider
00:27:039 (3): (^)

Hard:
00:18:583 (1): Suena bien con un Whistle al comienzo del Slider
00:21:584 (5): Agregale un Whistle a esta Nota
01:37:689 (3): Whistle al comienzo del Slider
01:43:417 (1): Este Slider sonaria mejor si lo acortas 1/4, con el reverse va a terminar en un Tick Rojo y luego agregar una nota en el Tick Blanco que sobra. Algo asi seria:
01:45:599 (1): (^)
01:47:781 (1): (^)
01:50:509 (2): En este caso, al tener 2 Sliders, te sugiero que muevas este 1/4 hacia atras y que luego termine en 01:50:782, Seria algo asi:
01:56:101 (x): Quizas puedas agregar una nota aqui

Bueno eso es todo. Muy buen map en General
Asi que Star y Buena Suerte con el rank ;)
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Estoy aburrido asi que decidi hacerte un mod :P

General:
- Nada para destacar aqui

Easy:
- El Approach Rate se siente algo lento, creo que deberias agregarle +2, ademas juega bien con la velocidad de Slider
01:10:547 (3,4): Estas Notas estan muy separadas, con respecto al Spacing que venias llevando. Intenta arreglar esto con el distance Snap
01:28:960 (5): Me parece que este Slider debe ser de 1/1. Para esto, te sugiero que muevas este Slider 1/2 hacia atras (Tick Blanco, 01:28:687) y que luego termine en 01:29:233
01:35:324 (5): Con este Slider te sugiero lo mismo que arriba, entonces movelo 1/2 atras (Tick Blanco, 01:33:051), y que termine en 01:33:597

Verdi's Normal:
00:18:311 (3): El doble Whistle (Con el previo (2)) no me suena mucho, me gusta mas como suena si eliminas el whistle al comienzo del Slider
00:27:039 (3): (^)

Hard:
00:18:583 (1): Suena bien con un Whistle al comienzo del Slider
00:21:584 (5): Agregale un Whistle a esta Nota
01:37:689 (3): Whistle al comienzo del Slider
01:43:417 (1): Este Slider sonaria mejor si lo acortas 1/4, con el reverse va a terminar en un Tick Rojo y luego agregar una nota en el Tick Blanco que sobra. Algo asi seria:
01:45:599 (1): (^)
01:47:781 (1): (^)
01:50:509 (2): En este caso, al tener 2 Sliders, te sugiero que muevas este 1/4 hacia atras y que luego termine en 01:50:782, Seria algo asi:
01:56:101 (x): Quizas puedas agregar una nota aqui

Bueno eso es todo. Muy buen map en General
Asi que Star y Buena Suerte con el rank ;)
Thanks for mod,i change some suggestions

Waiting from Verdi diff ^^
Verdisphena
No changes ~~
lovhin456
Hello!

Song's Info:
- I'm sure I have heard this song in Super Mario Galaxy too I mean smg1 lol so yeah maybe that's the source ? or it should be in tags ...

General:
- Fine

Easy:
- OD +1
- 01:21:049 (3,1) >> I know this might mess up your pattern but if possible please unstack these because novice players might find stacks hard to play.
- 01:41:780 >> I really think you should add a note here, it feels kinda empty without it and also the rhythm seems much better with it

Verdi's Normal:
- 00:18:311 (3,4) >> Sounds weird and off. Try moving (3) to 00:18:583 and shorten it by 2 ticks then add a note at 00:19:402
- 00:53:635 >> New combo ?
- 00:58:000 >> ^
- 01:12:866 >> Replace whistle with finish
- 01:21:595 >> ^
- 01:49:964 (1,2) >> Make the formation like this http://puu.sh/hAx0 instead ?
- Uh, the use of blue ticks is correct but I wonder if it is easy enough for normal players to well, play

Hard:
- 00:09:309 >> Is it me or this note sounds more accurate when snapped to 1/6 ? http://puu.sh/hAzn Uh, I can't say this goes for many notes but I think for some yes
- 00:11:764 >> Could you curve this more right now it's seem a little lazy lol I don't know if you understand what I mean by that
- 00:25:539 >> Move (3) here, the stream sounds better here instead of where it is now
- 00:37:361 >> ^
- 01:08:092 >> Add a note ?
- 01:39:189 >> Delete this note because this stream doesn't sound very well and doesn't fit imo
- 01:43:417 >> Shorten the slider by a tick that way it fits the music much better then fill the space left as you like
- 01:45:599 >> ^
- 01:47:781 >> ^

* Overall pretty good maps
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

lovhin456 wrote:

Hello!

Song's Info:
- I'm sure I have heard this song in Super Mario Galaxy too I mean smg1 lol so yeah maybe that's the source ? or it should be in tags ...

General:
- Fine

Easy:
- OD +1
- 01:21:049 (3,1) >> I know this might mess up your pattern but if possible please unstack these because novice players might find stacks hard to play.
- 01:41:780 >> I really think you should add a note here, it feels kinda empty without it and also the rhythm seems much better with it

Verdi's Normal:
- 00:18:311 (3,4) >> Sounds weird and off. Try moving (3) to 00:18:583 and shorten it by 2 ticks then add a note at 00:19:402
- 00:53:635 >> New combo ?
- 00:58:000 >> ^
- 01:12:866 >> Replace whistle with finish
- 01:21:595 >> ^
- 01:49:964 (1,2) >> Make the formation like this http://puu.sh/hAx0 instead ?
- Uh, the use of blue ticks is correct but I wonder if it is easy enough for normal players to well, play

Hard:
- 00:09:309 >> Is it me or this note sounds more accurate when snapped to 1/6 ? http://puu.sh/hAzn Uh, I can't say this goes for many notes but I think for some yes
- 00:11:764 >> Could you curve this more right now it's seem a little lazy lol I don't know if you understand what I mean by that
- 00:25:539 >> Move (3) here, the stream sounds better here instead of where it is now
- 00:37:361 >> ^
- 01:08:092 >> Add a note ?
- 01:39:189 >> Delete this note because this stream doesn't sound very well and doesn't fit imo
- 01:43:417 >> Shorten the slider by a tick that way it fits the music much better then fill the space left as you like
- 01:45:599 >> ^
- 01:47:781 >> ^

* Overall pretty good maps
Thanks for mod

EDIT: Fixed
Low
quick check here

[Verdi's Normal]

00:24:857 - Touches the HP bar, and this kind of slider only looks good when horizontal :|

[Hard]

00:44:496 - NC please, this is currently inconsistent with the combo changes in the beginning of the song

no kudosu
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

Jacob wrote:

quick check here

[Verdi's Normal]

00:24:857 - Touches the HP bar, and this kind of slider only looks good when horizontal :|

[Hard]

00:44:496 - NC please, this is currently inconsistent with the combo changes in the beginning of the song

no kudosu
Thanks Jacob

Fixed ^^
lovhin456
Looks fine
Bubbled
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

lovhin456 wrote:

Looks fine
Bubbled
Thanks lovhin ^^
Verdisphena
BUMP
ziin
meh don't pop it over this. fix it if you want when the bat checks it. Bumps don't really help rank maps IMO.

[hard]
00:34:404 (5,6,7,8,9) - reverse this. No seriously why did you do it this way?
01:00:727 (3) - overmap
01:13:821 - overmap
01:16:276 (5) - overmap
01:49:690 (5,1) - spacing
etc with the overmaps.

[verdi]
00:29:222 (1) - There are so few overlaps that it doesn't seem right to be overlapping like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/284705
00:54:317 (3) - the slider end is outside of the grid
Teddiursa_old
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

Teddiursa wrote:

Woot. ♥

<3
IceBeam
hi!

maybe remove claps from easy and hard? they honestly don't fit at all :(

[Easy]
00:07:399 (1) - finish is way too loud here,I don't think it fits well :\
00:49:134 (1) - looks a bit out of place here..you could use a reverse-slider instead,like this:
01:12:866 (1) - spacing
01:27:869 (3) - I was expecting this note at 01:27:596 honestly..I don't think such hard rhytm is acceptable in the easiest diff,I'd also make a slider to make it easier to hit:
01:31:142 (2,3,4,5) - same,I wouldn't follow that bg music,but tried to focus on the main rhytm

[Verdi's Normal]
00:18:583 (3,4,5) - moving (5) a little farther would be better
otherwise nice,though I got a little confused with blue ticks,I'd rather used 1/1 rhytm

I'm fine with Hard,though I don't think any jumps would fit this music ;) I remember your "Don't Stop" map - there're really few maps like this nowadays,and I wish you mapped all your maps in that style,so I was a little dissapointed to see jumps here,but it's up to you~
Topic Starter
MoodyRPG

IceBeam wrote:

hi!

maybe remove claps from easy and hard? they honestly don't fit at all :( ok fixed

[Easy]
00:07:399 (1) - finish is way too loud here,I don't think it fits well :\ fixed
00:49:134 (1) - looks a bit out of place here..you could use a reverse-slider instead,like this:
done
01:12:866 (1) - spacing done
01:27:869 (3) - I was expecting this note at 01:27:596 honestly..I don't think such hard rhytm is acceptable in the easiest diff,I'd also make a slider to make it easier to hit:
i change the pattern so
01:31:142 (2,3,4,5) - same,I wouldn't follow that bg music,but tried to focus on the main rhytm same ^

[Verdi's Normal]
00:18:583 (3,4,5) - moving (5) a little farther would be better
otherwise nice,though I got a little confused with blue ticks,I'd rather used 1/1 rhytm

I'm fine with Hard,though I don't think any jumps would fit this music ;) I remember your "Don't Stop" map - there're really few maps like this nowadays,and I wish you mapped all your maps in that style,so I was a little dissapointed to see jumps here,but it's up to you~
Thanks IceBeam ^^

Waiting for Verdi diff :)
Verdisphena
IceBeam
alright,time to rank!
AIR315
Congratz~
HeatKai
congrats :)
Teddiursa_old
Yay! Congratulation Moody! :D
Tony
BIMZ <3 Congrats Moody. :3
Dino99
Gratz~~~~~~~
mancuso_JM_
Hasta que finalmente esto se rankeo :P
Felicitaciones Moody
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