Tainaka Sachi - Unmeibito

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L_P
hehehe you favourite your map ahhh

Hard
timing : slider tick rate +1
why you added the first break...plz map it, last part of break could use spinner
maybe start a slider at 00:29:280 (x) - and end at next red tick?(this follow vocal)

00:41:280 (6) - try dont make it touches the slider
00:46:530 (9) - cancel finish? this sounded a bit random
00:50:030 (10) - tail finish delete also..
00:54:780 (3) - make a finish at last head (high pitched vocal) and cancel next finish
01:10:030 (2) - this note should add a finish, then you can hear the finish is once a beat
01:10:530 (4) - stack at slider 6? then you can treat the next note as antijump
01:17:530 (2) - both head finish?
01:45:280 (4) - tail finish, if you think that is too loud, you can adjust the volume a bit
01:47:530 (x) - you missed an important beat here, there is a FINISH!
01:49:030 (4) - head finish with lower volume
02:07:030 (4) - first head cancel finish?
02:36:780 (6) - NC plz..?
i do think if you end at the spinner's end would be better...now is a bit too long?

overall : you need a 3.5 + - diff. to make better diff. spread
make some pattern for your notes....pentagon / triangle / repeating triangle etc......

good luck...me leave a star here

sorry for the short mod...i would make a long long mod if i wanna suggest some rhythm or arrangement... however, seeing this is going to be bubbled... well.
Topic Starter
Asgard

L_P wrote:

hehehe you favourite your map ahhh

Hard
timing : slider tick rate +1
why you added the first break...plz map it, last part of break could use spinner
maybe start a slider at 00:29:280 (x) - and end at next red tick?(this follow vocal)
well actually i tried add note but i can't do that because if i add note and slider in their. some strange. :(

00:41:280 (6) - try dont make it touches the slider
00:46:530 (9) - cancel finish? this sounded a bit random
00:50:030 (10) - tail finish delete also..
00:54:780 (3) - make a finish at last head (high pitched vocal) and cancel next finish
01:10:030 (2) - this note should add a finish, then you can hear the finish is once a beat
01:10:530 (4) - stack at slider 6? then you can treat the next note as antijump well...actually i accept another thing but i want my pattern..
actually i don't like anti jump because confuse.. :(

01:17:530 (2) - both head finish?
01:45:280 (4) - tail finish, if you think that is too loud, you can adjust the volume a bit
01:47:530 (x) - you missed an important beat here, there is a FINISH!
01:49:030 (4) - head finish with lower volume
02:07:030 (4) - first head cancel finish?
02:36:780 (6) - NC plz..?
i do think if you end at the spinner's end would be better...now is a bit too long?

overall : you need a 3.5 + - diff. to make better diff. spread
make some pattern for your notes....pentagon / triangle / repeating triangle etc......

good luck...me leave a star here

sorry for the short mod...i would make a long long mod if i wanna suggest some rhythm or arrangement... however, seeing this is going to be bubbled... well.
thx~ :P
LKs
hello, req taken from star stream's line.

have been started by 111, you're pretty good BAT catcher.

General

errors

  1. I guess creator's words should be for ranking? I'm poor at eng ehe.
  2. Slient slidertick&sliderslide is not allowed.
  3. This song was firstly used in entertainment program 「メロjpでいこう!」on Apr 4,2009. the album is released on August 26, 2009, so you may add "mero jp de ikou!" to Source?


Fate


00:52:530 (3,5) - ugly sliders, just sayin' you can set them like this http://puu.sh/dSvx
01:10:530 (4) - remove finish at the end of the slider and add clap
01:58:530 (3) - ^
02:50:530 (4) - sounds bad

seems you're addicted to this "pa pa" clap ehe

Destiny

00:47:030 (2) - remove clap at the end of the slider
00:48:030 (5) - clap
00:50:780 (11) - clap
00:51:280 (2) - no clap
01:33:280 (4) - no clap
01:34:280 clap
01:37:280 no clap
Topic Starter
Asgard

LKs wrote:

hello, req taken from star stream's line.

have been started by 111, you're pretty good BAT catcher.
actually today i reply kiddo-kun's queue and he will mod my map! :P
General

errors

  1. I guess creator's words should be for ranking? I'm poor at eng ehe. (^^)l
  2. Slient slidertick&sliderslide is not allowed.um.. delete that file
  3. This song was firstly used in entertainment program 「メロjpでいこう!」on Apr 4,2009. the album is released on August 26, 2009, so you may add "mero jp de ikou!" to Source?
actually i don't know this song used entertainment program's ending theme Lol

Fate


00:52:530 (3,5) - ugly sliders, just sayin' you can set them like this http://puu.sh/dSvxfixed
01:10:530 (4) - remove finish at the end of the slider and add clap fixed
01:58:530 (3) - ^fixed
02:50:530 (4) - sounds bad fixed

seems you're addicted to this "pa pa" clap ehe yes.. maybe :P

Destiny

00:47:030 (2) - remove clap at the end of the slider fixed
00:48:030 (5) - clap fixed
00:50:780 (11) - clap fixed
00:51:280 (2) - no clap fixed
01:33:280 (4) - no clap fixed
01:34:280 clap fixed
01:37:280 no clap fixed
Mikkuri
mod request via your friends in game pm :D

[General]

  • http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224620 what this? I fail to updated, It's seem corrupt D:
    offset a bit early for me. try 543 (+13) and don't forget to resnap notes & green lines :)
    delete .osb file
    remove letterbox during break
    03:25:530- I think end of map here, delete all notes & green lines after this time

[Fate]


  • 00:12:043 (2) - error spacing, try to move at slider tail D:
    00:14:043 (4) - ^
    03:23:280 (1) - add finish here

[Destiny]


  • Slider tick rate 1
    03:23:530 (1) - add finish here
    03:25:655 (1) - delete spinner?


others are fine (I think lol)
go go rank ><
Andrea
Check Mickey's mod and I guess this map it's fine for a bubble!
Topic Starter
Asgard

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

mod request via your friends in game pm :D

[General]

  • http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/224620 what this? I fail to updated, It's seem corrupt D: maybe that's your problem :P
    offset a bit early for me. try 543 (+13) and don't forget to resnap notes & green lines :)i think 530 is fine
    delete .osb file ??..
    remove letterbox during break
    03:25:530- I think end of map here, delete all notes & green lines after this time well..

[Fate]


  • 00:12:043 (2) - error spacing, try to move at slider tail D: well..
    00:14:043 (4) - ^ well..
    03:23:280 (1) - add finish here sorry i want this pattern

[Destiny]


  • Slider tick rate 1 sorry i want this pattern
    03:23:530 (1) - add finish here sorry i want this pattern
    03:25:655 (1) - delete spinner? sorry i want this pattern


others are fine (I think lol)
go go rank ><
sorry :P
Kiddo-Kun
Hi.

I think your map is really good and ready to be bubbled. Here are some suggestions. Take 'em or not - Catch me in-game after checking and I'll bubble~

Fate:

• 00:58:030 (5) - I would get rid of this note (it feels weird to hit) and instead make (4) repeat.
• 02:43:530 (1,2,3) - I would do something other than a stack.This would do
• 03:37:530 (4) - Add a new combo to this note.
• 03:39:530 (1) - Remove this new combo.

Destiny:

• 01:51:905 (2) - I would remove this note. It seems pretty overwhelming.
• 03:41:530 (1) - Un-silence the end of this note. It does not feel very good to play.

No real need for an overall statement because this map is pretty sweet. Destiny especially.
I think this is ready for ranking.
No point in a star either.

Edit: Bubbled

Good luck~
Miya
wow. Just 2 page and it's bubbled o.o
Your such a pro asgard xD
Congratz~

And please rank this osuplayer111. It's a good map :)
Star Stream
Great! bubbled within 1 week ;D
Let's Go to 'Ranked'! :D
Andrea
Let's reach 7 days from submission at least before touching this :P
Kiddo-Kun
After player changed tick-rate...

Re-Bubbled
Topic Starter
Asgard
lol...
orz
but now everything is fine!
Kiddo-Kun
Timing was fixed
osb. was deleted
Check with AIBAT (twice)
Made sure everything was great.
If this get popped, I will cry
RE BUBBLED
Topic Starter
Asgard

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Timing was fixed
osb. was deleted
Check with AIBAT (twice)
Made sure everything was great.
If this get popped, I will cry
RE BUBBLED
now i don't submit never!
Miya
wow, osuplayer said wait until 1 week.
So tommorow this map will be ranked. Great job asgard xD
Andrea
Everything seems on order, time to go!

Ranked~
No_Gu
=A=....only a week to get ranked..fast
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
呵呵
Topic Starter
Asgard

osuplayer111 wrote:

Everything seems on order, time to go!

Ranked~
OMG
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